情節(jié)推動課件高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習

——以2023年新高考Ⅰ卷讀后續(xù)寫為例Continuationwriting

---Howtoplotandexpand1.extractthethemefromthegiveninformation;2.predictareasonableendingforthestory;3.expandtheplotswiththeshiftoftimeandplace;4.developtheplotswiththeaidofemotion-inducedactions.LearningobjectivesAfterthisperiodofclass,youwillbeableto:WhatcanIsay利用已知，直擊主題ExplorethegiveninformationCharacters(Main)

Plot(3parts)Givemeyourkeywordsforeachpart1.I(amiddleschoolstudent)2.mysocialstudiesteacherTwocharacters(main)Thepossibleproblemsandsolutions.aforcedtaskacreativeideaafinishedwritingthe________newstheawardpresentationgoodornotgood利用已知，直擊主題---雙句勾線aforcedtaskacreativeideaafinishedwriting文本溯源雙句勾線thegoodnewstheawardpresentation

直擊主題themePossibleendingsSublimation(升華）利用已知，直擊主題theme

supportingdetailsdiligence/hardworkPara.4But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling...IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Yours再看雙句，續(xù)寫有序Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.再看雙句，續(xù)寫有序---時間推移（Timeline）gotthenewsattendedtheawardpresentation

StagesFeelingsActionsBeforeHowdidIfeelafterIgotthenewsthatIwon?WhatdidIdo?During

HowdidIfeelwhenIattendedtheceremony?WhatdidIdo?After

HowdidIfeelwhenIsharedthenewswithmyteacher?WhatdidI(myteacher)do?再看雙句，續(xù)寫有序---細化語境（micro-plot)theawardpresentationtheawardpresentationtheawardpresentation時時“心動”，處處留情GroupworkEachgroupforonemicro-plotGroup1:WhenIgotthenewsthatIwonthefirstprizeGroup2:WhenIattendedtheawardpresentationGroup3:WhenIsharedthegoodnewswithmyteacheremotionsactionshappynervousgratefulMicro-plotfeelings----actionsWhenIgotthenewsthatIwonthefirstprizeHearingthatIwonthefirstprize,Isprangtomyfeet

withexcitement,feelingontopoftheworld.

NeverhadIexpectedthatcouldhappen.“Allmyeffortspaidoff”Ithoughttomyself.feelings--actionsWhenIattendedtheawardpresentationMyheartbeatingwildlyandpalmssweating,Ibowedtotheexcitedcrowdwithabigsmile..AllthedayswhenIpractisedwritingcamebacktome.Aftermyspeech,thewholehallthunderedwithapplause.Micro-plotMicro-plotfeelings--actionsA

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heart,Icouldn’twaittosharethegoodnewswithmyteacher“ButforyourhelpIwouldn’thavegottheprize”.HearingwhatIsaid,shepattedmeontheshoulder,smiling“Youdeserveit.”WhenIsharedthegoodnewswithmyteacherAfewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.HearingthatIwonthefirstprize,Isprangtomyfeet

withexcitement,feelingontopoftheworld.

NeverhadIexpectedthatcouldhappen.“Allmyeffortspaidoff”Ithoughttomyself.Myheartbeatingwildlyandpalmssweating,Iwasaskedtosharemyexpierencewithmyschoolmates.AllthedayswhenIpractisedwritingcamebacktome.Aftermyspeech,thewholehallthunderedwithapplause.？Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.A

sense

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gratitude

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heart,Icouldn’twaittosharethegoodnewswithmyteacher“ButforyourhelpIwouldn’thavegottheprize”.HearingwhatIsaid,shepattedmeontheshoulder,smiling“Youdeserveit.”？athome/intheclassroomattheawardceremonyinmyteacher’soffice再看雙句，續(xù)寫有序---空間轉(zhuǎn)換（Place)Transitionalsentence1:ThencamethebigdaywhenIwasinvitedtotheawardceremony.Transitionalsentence2:Whensittingbackinmyseat,Ididn’t

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socialstudiesteacheraround,soIdecidedtovisitmyteacherlaterthatday.利用已知，直達主題Read雙句勾線文本溯源Think細化語境時空推進時時“心動”，處處有情再看雙句，續(xù)寫有序Writesummary---以馬為夢，動由心生

主題呈現(xiàn)動詞作骨情緒化肉Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

HearingthatIwonthefirstprize,Isprangtomyfeetwithexcitement,feelingontopoftheworld.NeverhadIexpectedthatcouldhappen.“Allmyeffortspaidoff”Ithoughttomyself.ThencamethebigdaywhenIwasinvitedtotheawardceremony.Myheartbeatingwildlyandpalmssweating,Ibowedtotheexcitedcrowdwithabigsmile.AllthedayswhenIpractisedwritingcamebacktome.Aftermyspeech,thewholehallthunderedwithapplause.Whensittingbackinmyseat,Ididn’t

spot

my

socialstudiesteacheraround,soIdecidedtovisitmyteacherlaterthatday.Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.A

sense

of

gratitude

welled

up

in

the

bottom

of

my

heart,Icouldn’twaittosharethegoodnewswithmyteacher“ButforyourhelpIwouldn’thavegottheprize”.HearingwhatIsaid,shepattedmeontheshoulder,smiling“Youdeserveit.”The

power

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huge

difference

to

a

person

who

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teacher

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