英語人教PEP版八年級(jí)（上冊(cè)）Unit7+Writing

Unit7Willpeoplehaverobots?WritingLearningaims:1.能夠正確使用“will＋do”描述未來的生活，內(nèi)容包括居住環(huán)境、職業(yè)情況、出行方式、日常飲食、業(yè)余愛好等;2.對(duì)未來生活產(chǎn)生正向的情感和憧憬。Lead-inWhatwillthelifebelikeinthefuture?BrainstormingjobstransportationplacetolivethingstohaveFreetimeactivitiesIwillbea/an…Iwillgotoworkby…Iwilllivein…Iwillkeepa/an…Because...Iwill…with...Self-study

3aReadJill’sanswertothequestion.Fillintheblankswiththewordsinthebox.

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jobfreetimeactivitieshousefamilyMylifein20years…WritingTask2Findthestructureofthisarticleandgoodsentencesineachparagraph.

Mylifein20yearsLifeinthefutureisquitedifferentfromnow.In20years,IthinkI’llbeanewspaperreporter.I’llliveinShanghai,becauseIthinkIwillmeetlotsofinterestingpeople,soI’llhavemorefriends.Iwillhavefewerpets,though,because

I’llhavelessfreetime.Andmyapartmentwillbenogoodforpetsbecauseit’llbetoosmall.SoI’llprobablyjustkeepabird.Duringtheweek,I’llwearsmartclothes.Ontheweekend,I’lllooklesssmartbutI’llbemorecomfortable.Inthefuture,peoplewillworkmoresothey’llprobablyhavefewervacations,butIthinkIwilltakeaholidayinHongKongwhenpossible.OnedayI’llevengotoAustralia.

Mylifewillbebetterandbetter.Forthis,Ishouldstudyhard.Mylifein20years

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Iwillbea/an…(why)I’llkeep/have….…(why)I’llgo/play…everyday/onceaweek/……(why)I’llwork/live…oneday....(why)

I’llgotoworkby...ending:bodybeginningMylifewillbebetterandbetterinthefuture.Lifewillbe...in20years…freetimeactivityWhatwillyourlifebelikein20years?Youcanaddmoreitems.

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jobI’mgoodatwritingstories,soIwillbeawriterin20years.Because….isaninterestingwork.Iwanttoworkwith/meet…,soIwillworkin…h(huán)omeTherewillbemorepeopleinthefuture,soIwillliveinanapartmentinthecountryside/…transpotationIwillflytomyofficebecauseIwillhavemyownaircraft(飛行器)…petPetsareourgoodfriends.Iwillkeepacutecat/dog…freetimeactivitiesManypeoplewanttotakeatripto…It’sabeautifulplace.Iwillgoto…同桌互批小組推選老師點(diǎn)評(píng)Evaluation10min分?jǐn)?shù)檔：1.13-15分，全部要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)強(qiáng)，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范工整，只有2處因使用較高級(jí)表達(dá)所致的錯(cuò)誤2.10-12分，大部分要點(diǎn)，語句較流暢，少量語法錯(cuò)誤，可讀性較好3.7-9分，大部分要點(diǎn)，語句通順，有一些語法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤，整體達(dá)到寫作目的4.4-6分，只有少量?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)表達(dá)正確，語句不通順，語言有較多錯(cuò)誤5.1-3分，基本或完全沒寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，只寫出少數(shù)單詞、詞組或短語；錯(cuò)誤較多，不知所云6.0分，與題目無關(guān)，無法辨認(rèn)批改要求：1.先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定所屬檔次，然后根據(jù)該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分2.詞數(shù)少，扣1分，書寫太差，涂改過多，格式、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤太多，以至于影響閱卷的，降低一個(gè)檔次給分3.句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)、動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)用法錯(cuò)誤的每項(xiàng)各扣1分，不重復(fù)扣分；單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫滿4個(gè)扣1分，不重復(fù)扣分Isitagoodcomposition?Groupwork:自己將來會(huì)是什么樣子作文題目：Whatwillhappeninthefuture?作文

Intenyears,IthinkIwillbeateacher.I’llteachmiddleschoolstudents.IwanttobeaChineseteacher,becauseIlikeChinese.Iwillbefriendlyandfunny.Iwillbemystudents’friend.I’llopenuptheireyestooutsideworldandbeingagoodinfluenceintheirlives.Asformylife,I’llliveinanapartmentwithmybestfriendsormyparents.Ilikedogsverymuch.But,Idon’thaveadognow,becauseourapartmentistoosmall.So,I’llhavealovelydogatthattime.