Unit 1 單元話題滿分范文必背-2023-2024學(xué)年八年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)

PAGE2PAGE1Unit1Friends單元話題滿分范文必背一、材料作文1．（2022秋·江蘇連云港·八年級(jí)?？茧A段練習(xí)）根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，以“MyGoodFriend”為題寫一篇短文，介紹你的朋友John。姓名John學(xué)校No.2MiddleSchool年級(jí)8外貌圓臉，由于太多的家庭作業(yè)而戴眼鏡，高且強(qiáng)壯，臉上總帶著微笑性格及具體事例樂(lè)于助人，他經(jīng)?！?；風(fēng)趣，經(jīng)?！?；誠(chéng)實(shí)，并能保守秘密；善良，從不說(shuō)任何人的壞話。學(xué)校生活美國(guó)的男女混合學(xué)校；學(xué)校每天8點(diǎn)開(kāi)始，3點(diǎn)結(jié)束。最喜歡的學(xué)科：地理、歷史，并且可以選擇科目學(xué)習(xí)，覺(jué)得學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)非常有趣。課后參加各種各樣的課外活動(dòng)和俱樂(lè)部……可以……未來(lái)計(jì)劃……（至少一點(diǎn)）要求：1.要求完整，省略號(hào)部分自行發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校；3.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；注意書寫。MyGoodFriend________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyGoodFriendJohnisoneofmybestfriends.He’sstudyingatNo.2MiddleSchool.HeisinGrade8.Hehasasquareface.Hewearsglassesbecauseoftoomuchhomework.Heistallandstrongwithasmileonhisface.Heisreadytohelpothers.Heoftenhelpshisclassmatesintrouble.Heisalsofunnyandoftentellsusjokes.No.2MiddleSchoolisacoeducationalschoolinAmerica.Theclassstartsat8a.m.andendsat3p.m.everyday.Hisfavoritesubjectsaregeographyandhistory,becausetheycanhelphimbetterunderstandtheworld.Theschoolallowsthestudentstochoosesubjectstolearn.Hethinkslearningforeignlanguagesisveryinteresting.Theschoolhasallkindsofafter-schoolactivitiesandclubs,suchasbasketballclub,artclubandsoon.OnedayhewantstovisitChina.Ifpossible,healsowantstogotothemoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)表格中的信息，介紹你的朋友John，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹John的基本個(gè)人信息，外貌，性格及具體事例；第二步，介紹他的學(xué)校生活以及未來(lái)的計(jì)劃。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bereadyto愿意做某事②coeducational男女混合的③allkindsof各種各樣的④suchas原因[高分句型]①Hisfavoritesubjectsaregeographyandhistory,becausetheycanhelphimbetterunderstandtheworld.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Hethinkslearningforeignlanguagesisveryinteresting.（think后是省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句；動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)）2．（2022秋·江蘇蘇州·八年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）友誼是冬天里的一杯熱茶，是夏天里的一縷清風(fēng)，是秋天里的一句問(wèn)候。友誼是焦渴時(shí)的甘泉，是黑暗中的明燈，是快樂(lè)時(shí)的分享，是憂傷時(shí)的撫慰。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開(kāi)展以“Friendship”為題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，介紹一下你最好的朋友是誰(shuí)，他/她性格如何，談?wù)勀愫团笥阎g發(fā)生的一件令你難忘的事，以及你從中學(xué)到了什么。要求：1.文章語(yǔ)言正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，書寫工整;2.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息;3.詞數(shù)100詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4.不得抄襲試卷中的內(nèi)容。FriendshipFriendshipisimportanttoeveryone._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：FriendshipFriendshipisimportanttoeveryone.Tonyismybestfriend.Heisverykindandhelpful.OnedayIwantedtocopyhismathhomework,buttomysurprise,hedidn’tagree.Hesaid,“It’swrongtocopyothers’homework.Ifyouhavedifficulties,Icanhelpyou.”Hiswordsmademefeelwarm.Fromthenonhehelpedmewithmymatheveryday.Withhishelp,Imadegreatprogressinmath.Tonymademerealizethatgoodfriendsshouldhelpeachotherintherightway.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要在文中介紹最好朋友的性格、你與他/她之間發(fā)生的事情及你從這件事中學(xué)到了什么。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹這個(gè)朋友的性格及自己與朋友之間發(fā)生的難忘的事情；第二步，介紹自己從這件難忘的事情中學(xué)到了什么。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wanttodosth.想要做某事②toone’ssurprise令某人驚訝的是③fromthenon從那時(shí)起[高分句型]①OnedayIwantedtocopyhismathhomework,buttomysurprise,hedidn’tagree.（but連接表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的并列句）②Ifyouhavedifficulties,Icanhelpyou.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）③Tonymademerealizethatgoodfriendsshouldhelpeachotherintherightway.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）3．（2021秋·江蘇揚(yáng)州·八年級(jí)?？计谥校┰诰旁路莸陌闹藿涣魃顒?dòng)中，你認(rèn)識(shí)了來(lái)自O(shè)fficerSecondarySchool的Alice同學(xué)。請(qǐng)以“MyAustralianfriend”為題，根據(jù)所給信息，介紹一下你的新朋友Alice.Appearance高而苗條，大而明亮的眼睛，長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的直發(fā)，很可愛(ài)；Pesonality誠(chéng)實(shí)，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，從不說(shuō)別人壞話；Schoollife所有科目中最喜歡法語(yǔ)，堅(jiān)持用法語(yǔ)記錄日常生活；Hobbies對(duì)DIY感興趣，上周給我做了一張生日卡片；Futureplan長(zhǎng)大想成為一名……，因?yàn)椤?列舉一至兩個(gè)原因)。要求：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右（標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。2.文章應(yīng)包含所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。MyAustralianfriendAliceismyAustralianfriend.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyAustralianfriendAliceismyAustralianfriend.Sheistallandslim.Shehasbigbrighteyesandlongstraighthair.Sheisverycute.Sheishonestandshehasagoodsenseofhumor.Shecankeepsecretsforothers.Sheneversaysbadwordsaboutothers.Amongallthesubjects,shelikesFrenchbest.ShekeepswritingherdailylifeinFrench.SheisinterestedinDIY.Shemadeabirthdaycardformelastweek.Shewantstobeateacherwhenshegrowsup.Sheiskind,helpfulandpatient.Shelikesworkingwithchildren.ThatisallaboutAliceandwouldyouliketomakefriendswithher?【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，屬于材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文時(shí)態(tài)用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求包含所有提示內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，從外貌、性格、學(xué)校生活以及愛(ài)好闡述好朋友；第二步，闡述好朋友的未來(lái)規(guī)劃；第三步，總結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①agoodsenseofhumor幽默感②saysbadwordsaboutsb說(shuō)某人壞話③workwithchildren和孩子一起[高分句型]①Amongallthesubjects,shelikesFrenchbest.（最高級(jí)句型）②Shewantstobeateacherwhenshegrowsup.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）4．（2021秋·江蘇宿遷·八年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）在每個(gè)人的一生中，朋友占據(jù)著非常重要的位置。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，以Mybestfriend為題，寫一篇90詞左右的文章。姓名、年齡Anna；13歲外貌又高又瘦；長(zhǎng)發(fā)；微笑的眼睛興趣愛(ài)好在午餐時(shí)間聽(tīng)音樂(lè)；擅長(zhǎng)打排球；對(duì)DIY著迷，經(jīng)常旅行，參觀許多名勝，了解更多的文化。性格樂(lè)于助人，經(jīng)常給公交車上有需要的人讓座……富有幽默感，經(jīng)常講有趣的笑話……理想長(zhǎng)大成為一名出色的……Mybestfriend______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MybestfriendMybestfriendisAnna.Annais13yearsold.Sheisatallandslimgirl.Shehaslonghairandalwayswearssmilesonherface.Shelikeslisteningtomusicatlunchtime.SheiscrazyaboutDIY,soshealwaysdecoratethingsbyherself.Shelikestravelling.Shehasbeentomanyplacesandknowmuchculture.Sheisverykind.Onthebus,sheoftengivesherseattopeopleinneed.Shehasagoodsenseofhumour.Sheoftentellsfunnyjokestomakeushappy.Youwillneverfeelboredwhenyouarewithher.Sheisgoodatplayingvolleyball.Shewantstobeafamousplayerwhenshegrowsup.Thisismybestfriend.Ilikeherverymuch.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作主題已給出，寫作時(shí)注意根據(jù)表格中的要點(diǎn)提示展開(kāi)描述，圍繞主題可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題；第二步，具體介紹Anna的年齡、外貌、興趣愛(ài)好、性格和理想；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)情感。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①becrazyabout對(duì)……著迷②hasbeento去過(guò)③begoodat擅長(zhǎng)[高分句型]①Sheoftentellsfunnyjokestomakeushappy.（不定式表示目的）②Youwillneverfeelboredwhenyouarewithher.（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）5．（2021秋·江蘇淮安·八年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）請(qǐng)以“Mybestfriend”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下你的好朋友李雷。Looks大眼睛，短而黑的頭發(fā)……Personality幽默，樂(lè)于助人……Schoollife所有科目中最喜歡法語(yǔ)……Atravelexperience喜歡旅游，參加了去世界公園的旅行……ADIYhobby對(duì)DIY很著迷……注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名等信息。MybestfriendIhaveabestfriendnamedLiLei.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthim._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MybestfriendIhaveabestfriendnamedLiLei.I’dliketotellyousomethingabouthim.Hehasshortblackhairwithbigeyes.Heisthetallestboyinmyclass.Heisveryhumorous,andalwayshelpsothersinneed.Heoftenoffersseatsonthebus.Ofallsubjects,helikesFrenchbest,becausehethinksitisveryinteresting.Hehadagreattimeatschool.Helikestravellingverymuch.Lastmonth,hetookatriptoWorldPark.Hesawmanyfamousmodelsaroundtheworldandenjoyedwonderfulshows.HeiscrazyaboutDIY,andtakesaDIYcourse.Hehaslearnedmoreaboutit.Doyouliketomakefriendswithhim?【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文寫作，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中“我最好的朋友”的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。題干已給出；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“外貌、個(gè)性、學(xué)校生活、旅游經(jīng)歷、愛(ài)好”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹李雷的具體情況；第三步，以“詢問(wèn)想不想和他交朋友”結(jié)尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wouldliketodo想要做某事②tellsb.aboutsth.告訴某人關(guān)于某事③like...best最喜歡④becrazyabout狂熱愛(ài)好……⑤makefriendswith和……交朋友[高分句型]①Heisthetallestboyinmyclass.(形容詞最高級(jí)句型)②Ofallsubjects,helikesFrenchbest,becausehethinksitisveryinteresting.(副詞最高級(jí)；because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)6．（2021秋·江蘇揚(yáng)州·八年級(jí)統(tǒng)考期中）《青少年》雜志正舉辦以“Mybestfriend”為題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，假如你是Millie，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)，用英語(yǔ)為該雜志寫一篇短文，介紹你的好友Sandy。基本情況一所混合學(xué)校的八年級(jí)學(xué)生。優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)1.彬彬有禮，……(舉例)2.樂(lè)于助人，……(舉例)興趣愛(ài)好1.喜歡旅游，……(舉例)2.享受生活，對(duì)DIY很著迷，……(舉例)個(gè)人愿望成為愛(ài)熊貓俱樂(lè)部（PandaLoverClub）的一員，因?yàn)椤ㄗ詳M兩點(diǎn)原因）注意：1.表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯；2.詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名。MybestfriendSandyisoneofmybestfriends.Sheis______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Sandyisoneofmybestfriends.SheisaGrade8studentinamixedschool.Sheispoliteandsayshellotootherswhenshemeetswithpeople.Sheishelpfultoo,andsheiswillingtohelpothersatanytime.Shelikestravellingandoftenvisitsmanyplacesofinterest.Also,sheenjoyseverydaylifeandiscrazyaboutDIY.Forexample,sheputupabrighterlightinherbedroom.ShewantstobeamemberofPandaLoverClub.Shethinkspandasarelovelyandtheyareourfriends.Butunluckily,therearefewerandfewerpandasintheworld.Soshethinksit’simportanttotakeactiontoprotectthem.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中對(duì)好友Sandy的介紹。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹好友Sandy的基本情況以及優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，并舉例說(shuō)明；第二步，具體闡述好友Sandy的興趣愛(ài)好，并舉例說(shuō)明；第三步，表達(dá)“成為愛(ài)熊貓俱樂(lè)部的一員”的個(gè)人愿望，說(shuō)出兩點(diǎn)原因。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①sayshellotoothers向其他人問(wèn)好②bewillingtohelpothers樂(lè)于助人③becrazyabout對(duì)……著迷④takeactiontoprotectthem采取行動(dòng)保護(hù)它們[高分句型]①Sandyisoneofmybestfriends.（oneof+名詞復(fù)數(shù)）②Soshethinksit’simportanttotakeactiontoprotectthem.（it’s+形容詞+to+動(dòng)詞原形）③Sheispoliteandsayshellotootherswhenshemeetswithpeople.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）7．（2022秋·江蘇徐州·八年級(jí)?？茧A段練習(xí)）根據(jù)表格提示，以“MyBestFriend”為題，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)：90詞左右。NameJackFace方形Eyes大、明亮的、微笑的Nose大Hair黑色、短發(fā)Generalappearance英俊、整潔、愛(ài)好體育和音樂(lè)Personality友好、樂(lè)于助人Abilities努力的Hobbies打籃球Futureplans成為一名醫(yī)生幫助需要的人們Mybestfriend__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MybestfriendTodayIamgladtointroducemybestfriendJacktoyou.I’msureyouwilllikehim,too.Jackhasbigbrightsmilingeyes,abignoseandsquareface.Hishairisblackandshort.Heishandsomeandtidy.Asforhobbies,helikesplayingsportsandlisteningtomusic.Whenhehastime,heoftenplaysbasketball.Heisveryfriendlyandhelpful.WhenIamintrouble,Ialwaysaskhimforhelp.Heisalwayshard-workingtowardshisdream.Hewantstobeadoctorwhenhegrowsup.Hehopeshecanhelpmorepeopleinneed.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，介紹“我”最好的朋友；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”，人稱以第三人稱為主，特別要注意主謂一致；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的提示要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接點(diǎn)名主題，我要向你們介紹我最好的朋友Jack，引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，從外貌、性格、愛(ài)好等方面來(lái)介紹朋友。第三步，書寫總結(jié)。最后描述他的理想，結(jié)束全文。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begladtodosth.高興地做某事②introduce…to…向……介紹……③likedoingsth.喜歡做某事④asfor至于，關(guān)于⑤growup長(zhǎng)大⑥introuble處于困境[高分句型]①Hehopeshecanhelpmorepeopleinneed.（賓語(yǔ)從句）②Hewantstobeadoctorwhenhegrowsup.（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）③Asforhobbies,helikesplayingsportsandlisteningtomusic.（動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）8．（2021秋·江蘇揚(yáng)州·八年級(jí)?？计谥校┣嗌倌觌s志社邀請(qǐng)你參加每年度的中學(xué)生寫作競(jìng)賽，請(qǐng)以“MyAmericanfriend—Suzy”為題，根據(jù)所給信息完成下面的小短文。Looks明亮大眼睛，……。Personality幽默，……；樂(lè)于助人，……。SchoolWork所有科目中最喜歡……，因?yàn)橛X(jué)得……。Atravelexperience國(guó)慶假期(NationalDayHolidays)期間，和父母去北京，參觀一些名勝古跡，了解許多中國(guó)文化。Hobby1）DIY。上周，她和我一起裝飾我的臥室，……。我們合作得很愉快。2）運(yùn)動(dòng)，因?yàn)椤?。要求?、表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2、必須包括表格中所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3、詞數(shù)：100左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；4、不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。MyAmericanfriend—SuzySuzyismyAmericanfriend.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyAmericanfriend—SuzySuzyismyAmericanfriend.Sheisabeautifulgirl.Shehasbrighteyesandhereyesareblue.Sheistallandthinwithbrownhairandaroundface.Sheishumorousandshelikessmilingateveryone.Also,sheisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Sowealllikeher.Ofallthesubjects,herfavoriteoneisChinesebecauseshethinksChineseisabeautifulandspeciallanguage.ShelikesChinaverymuch.DuringNationalDayHolidays,shetookatriptoBeijingwithherparents.TheyvisitedmanyplacesofinterestthereandlearnedaboutChineseculturealot.ShelikesDIY,too.Lastweek,Idecoratedmybedroomwithher.Theworkwashardbuthappy.Wediditwelltogether.Doingsportsisalsoherhobbybecauseshethinksdoingsportscankeepherhealthyandactive.WhatawonderfulfriendSuzyis!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山點(diǎn)明要介紹一個(gè)美國(guó)朋友；第二步，具體介紹自己的朋友的各方面信息，包括外貌、性格、喜歡的科目及原因、一次旅行經(jīng)歷及朋友的愛(ài)好；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bereadytodo準(zhǔn)備做某事②takeatrip旅行③placesofinterest名勝古跡④learnabout了解[高分句型]①Sheistallandthinwithbrownhairandaroundface.（介詞with表附帶）②herfavoriteoneisChinesebecauseshethinksChineseisabeautifulandspeciallanguage.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）二、電子郵件9．（2022秋·江蘇宿遷·八年級(jí)南師附中宿遷分校?？计谀┘僭O(shè)你是Daniel，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter想要在中國(guó)結(jié)交更多的朋友。你通過(guò)電子郵件，把你最好的朋友Simon介紹給他。Simon情況見(jiàn)下表：姓名Simon外貌圓臉，戴著一副眼鏡，臉上總帶笑容。個(gè)性樂(lè)于助人，外向大方，……(自由發(fā)揮一句)喜歡的季節(jié)及理由1.冬季2.理由(1)喜歡被雪覆蓋的大地；(2)可以打雪仗、堆雪人，……(自由發(fā)揮一句)經(jīng)歷一天夜里睡覺(jué)的時(shí)候，感到一陣輕微的震動(dòng)，然后聽(tīng)到雷一般的巨響，人們都跑向四面八方躲避。大樓都倒塌了，自己被困五個(gè)小時(shí)，他很緊張但是他告訴自己要冷靜。幸運(yùn)的是，他最后被救了。他真是一個(gè)勇敢的男孩。要求：1.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下連貫；2.必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：90詞左右(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。DearPeter,Howareyou?I’mwritingtointroducemybestfriendSimontoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyoucanbecomeafriendofhis.MaybehecanshowyouaroundourcityattheSpringFestival.Bestwishes!YoursDaniel【答案】例文DearPeter,Howareyou?I’mwritingtointroducemybestfriendSimontoyou.Heisa15-year-oldboy.Hehasaroundfaceandwearsglasses.Helikessmilingverymuch.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothersandoftenhelpspeopleinneed.Heissooutgoingthatyoucanmakefriendswithhimeasily.Heisalsohumorousandfunny.Helikeswinterbestbecausehelikesthelandcoveredwithsnow.Inwinter,hecanhavesnowballfightsandmakesnowmen.Andthereisaniceandsnowfestival.Hecanseethebeautifulicelanterns.Inaddition,hisfavoritefestival—SpringFestivalisinwinter.Heoncehadaspecialexperience.Onenightanearthquakehappenedwhilehewassleeping.Therewasaslightshaking,thenaloudnoiselikethunder.Manybuildingsfelldown.Peoplewererunninginalldirections.Hewasfinallysavedafterbeingtrappedforfivehours.Ihopeyoucanbecomeafriendofhis.MaybehecanshowyouaroundourcityattheSpringFestival.Bestwishes!YoursDaniel【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，包括Simon的外貌和個(gè)性，喜歡的季節(jié)和理由，個(gè)人的經(jīng)歷。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹Simon的外貌和個(gè)性；第二步，介紹他喜歡的季節(jié)和理由；第三步，最后是敘述他的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①15-year-old15歲的②bereadytodo準(zhǔn)備好做③Inaddition此外[高分句型]①Heiss