Unit7寫(xiě)作人教版英語(yǔ)七年級(jí)上冊(cè)

2024人教七上英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作Unit7HappyBirthday單元話題分析【課標(biāo)話題】人與自我豐富，充實(shí)，積極向上的生活本單元以“慶祝生日”為話題，要求學(xué)生寫(xiě)一篇短文，向他人介紹自己如何慶祝生日。寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中學(xué)生需要掌握生日的正確表達(dá)方式，同時(shí)也要掌握有關(guān)生日活動(dòng)的短語(yǔ)，句式等。【寫(xiě)作題目】每個(gè)人每年有一個(gè)生日，它是慶祝母親給予我們出生的日子，不同的人有不同的慶祝方式。你是怎么慶祝自己的生日的？請(qǐng)以“Mybirthday”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：

1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名和地名；

2）語(yǔ)言通順，表達(dá)正確；

3）詞數(shù)：70詞左右。

參考詞匯：celebrate,makeawish,blowout_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________寫(xiě)作思路【審題】審主題、審體裁：主題為介紹如何為自己慶祝生日；體裁為說(shuō)明文；審人稱(chēng)、審時(shí)態(tài)：通常以第一人稱(chēng)為主，若以他人視角寫(xiě)作，則用對(duì)應(yīng)的第三人稱(chēng)；時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主；（本題以第一人稱(chēng)為主）審要點(diǎn)：本期要求寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹自己如何慶祝生日，根據(jù)題目要求，首先要說(shuō)明自己的生日是什么時(shí)候；其次，自己慶祝生日的方式；最后，詳細(xì)介紹慶祝生日的過(guò)程，并描述自己的感受?！緦?xiě)作過(guò)程】開(kāi)頭部分：引入主題，介紹自己生日的具體日期以及慶祝生日的方式主體部分：詳細(xì)介紹自己慶祝生日的過(guò)程，比如，安排了哪些有意義的活動(dòng)。最后，談?wù)勛约簩?duì)生日的感受。結(jié)尾部分：點(diǎn)明主題，表達(dá)自己對(duì)生日的感受Ialwayshaveagoodtimeonmybirthday.Howdoyoucelebrateyourbirthday?【實(shí)用表達(dá)】介紹出生日期Mybirthdayison13thMay(具體日期).介紹如何慶祝生日Iusuallyhaveabirthdaywithmytocelebrate.Iinvitemytomybirthdaypartytocelebrate.Onmybirthday,Iofteneatbirthdaynoodleswitheggs.Longnoodlesmeanalonglife.MyfamilyandItakeaphototogethertorememberthatday.Wesingthe“HappyBirthday”songtogether,andthenmakeawishandblowoutthecandles.Weenjoythecakeandopenthebirthdaygifts.Mymomalwayspreparesabigdinnerforus.Myfatheroftenbuysabigchocolatebirthdaycakeforme.Aftereatingthebirthdaycake,Iusuallyplaygameswithmyfriendsandfamily.Myfathermarksmyheightonthedooreveryyear.介紹感受Wealwayshaveagoodtimeonthatday.Ioftenhavefun/enjoymyselfonmybirthday.Ialwaysspendameaningbirthdaywithmyfamilyandfriends.Ilookforwardtothenextbirthday.Ilovetocelebratemybirthdayinthisway.【詞匯儲(chǔ)備】介紹慶祝方式haveabirthdayparty舉辦一個(gè)生日派對(duì) eatbirthdaynoodles吃長(zhǎng)壽面takephotos拍照 makeabirthdaycake做生日蛋糕makeawish許愿 blowoutthecandles吹蠟燭singthe“HappyBirthday”song唱生日快樂(lè)歌 enjoythecake吃蛋糕openthebirthdaygifts拆生日禮物 dosomethingdifferent 介紹感受haveagoodtime/havefun/enjoyoneself玩得開(kāi)心meaningful有意義的lookforwardto期待【小試牛刀】我的生日在5月13日。Mybirthdayison.我通常會(huì)舉辦一個(gè)生日派對(duì)來(lái)慶祝。Iusuallytocelebrate.我會(huì)邀請(qǐng)我的好朋友們來(lái)參加我的生日派對(duì)。Itomybirthdayparty.我的媽媽總是會(huì)為我們準(zhǔn)備豐盛的飯菜。Mymomalwaysforus.我的爸爸會(huì)提前買(mǎi)一個(gè)大大的巧克力蛋糕。Myfatherinadvance.我們先一起唱生日快樂(lè)歌，然后許愿，吹蠟燭。Wefirst,andthenand.接下來(lái)，我們會(huì)一起享受美味的蛋糕并且拆生日禮物。Afterthat,weand.除此之外，我們還會(huì)做一些不一樣的事情。Besides,wealsodo.比如，我的爸爸每年都會(huì)在門(mén)上標(biāo)記我的身高。Forexample,myfatheronthedooreveryyear.我總是會(huì)度過(guò)一個(gè)快樂(lè)且有意義的生日。Ialwaysspendaandbirthday.【答案解析】Mybirthdayison13thMay.Iusuallyhaveabirthdaypartytocelebrate.Iinvitemygoodfriendstomybirthdayparty.Mymomalwayspreparesabigdinnerforus.Myfatherbuysabigchocolatecakeinadvance.Wesingthe“HappyBirthday”songtogether,andthenmakeawishandblowoutthecandles.Afterthat,weenjoythecakeandopenthebirthdaygifts.Besides,wealsodosomethingdifferent.Forexample,myfathermarksmyheightonthedooreveryyear.Ialwaysspendahappyandmeaningfulbirthday.寫(xiě)作范例每個(gè)人每年有一個(gè)生日，它是慶祝母親給予我們出生的日子，不同的人有不同的慶祝方式。你是怎么慶祝自己的生日的？請(qǐng)以“Mybirthday”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：

1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名和地名；

2）語(yǔ)言通順，表達(dá)正確；

3）詞數(shù)：70詞左右。

參考詞匯：celebrate,makeawish,blowout_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【優(yōu)秀范文】MyBirthdayMybirthdayison13thMay.Iusuallyhaveabirthdaypartytocelebrate.Iinviteallmygoodfriendstomybirthday.Theyalwaysbringmewonderfulbirthdaygiftstogivemeabigsurprise.Mymompreparesabigdinnerandmyfatherbuysabigchocolatebirthdaygiftformeinadvance.Whenweallsitaroundthetable,thepartybegins.Wesing“HappyBirthday”songtogether,andthenImakeawishandblowoutthecandles.Afterthat,weenjoythecakeandopenallthebirthdaygifts.Besides,wealsodosomethingdifferent.Forexample,myfathermarksmyheightonthedooreveryyear.Ialwaysspendahappyandmeaningfulbirthdaybothmyfamilyandfriends.Howdoyoucelebrateyourbirthday?【亮點(diǎn)詞匯】invitesb.tosp.邀請(qǐng)某人去某處bringsb.sth.給某人帶來(lái)某物givesb.abigsurprise給某人一個(gè)大大的驚喜prepare準(zhǔn)備buysth.forsb.為某人買(mǎi)某物inadvance提前makeawish許愿blowoutthecandles吹蠟燭markone’sheighton在某處標(biāo)記某人的身高【高分句型】Theyalwaysbringmewonderfulbirthdaygiftstogivemeabigsurprise.他們總是給我?guī)?lái)很棒的禮物，就是為了給我一個(gè)大大的驚喜。Whenweallsitaroundthetable,thepartybegins.當(dāng)我們圍著桌子坐好的時(shí)候，派對(duì)就開(kāi)始了。Besides,wealsodosomethingdifferent.Forexample,myfathermarksmyheightonthedooreveryyear.除此之外，我們還會(huì)做一些與眾不同的事情。比如，我的爸爸每年都會(huì)在門(mén)上標(biāo)記我的身高。Ialwaysspendahappyandmeaningfulbirthdaybothmyfamilyandfriends.我總是能和我的家人，朋友度過(guò)一個(gè)開(kāi)心且有意義的生日。寫(xiě)作練習(xí)假如你是Mary，下周日是你爸爸的生日，你和媽媽商量決定一起給他過(guò)生日，你想征詢(xún)?cè)谟?guó)長(zhǎng)大的表妹Amy的建議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示寫(xiě)一封郵件，介紹一下你和媽媽的想法，并請(qǐng)她給你提一些建議。要求：1．郵件內(nèi)容需包括表格提示內(nèi)容，也可增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

2．語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)意要通順、連貫；

3．詞數(shù)不少于80；郵件的格式和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。為爸爸慶祝生日的計(jì)劃時(shí)間活動(dòng)安排周日上午全家一起去公園拍照中午全家一起去飯店吃飯下午媽媽陪爸爸看電影，“我”去超市購(gòu)物晚上舉行生日派對(duì)，“我”要送爸爸鮮花DearAmy,Howiseverythinggoing?NextSundayismydad’sbirthday.MomandIhavesomeideastosharewithyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________注意審時(shí)態(tài)請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的文章。今天我玩得很愉快。今天是爺爺?shù)纳?，我們?nèi)胰敔敿覟樗麘c祝生日。媽媽做了許多好吃的，我們買(mǎi)了一個(gè)大蛋糕。我們舉行了一個(gè)大型家庭聚會(huì)。我們送給爺爺一些禮物，并說(shuō)：“祝您生日快樂(lè)。”下午我們?nèi)ス珗@劃船。我們玩得很開(kāi)心，爺爺過(guò)了一個(gè)愉快的生日。

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