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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。OurgrouphadstoppedtoremoveourbootsbeforeasmallstreamcrossingafteramorningofexploringtheseasidefoothillsofCanada’sTorngatMountainsNationalParkinNewfoundlandandLabrador.Ilookedupandthereitwas,about150yardsaway,staringatus:apolarbear.Ourguideshadwarnedusaboutthedangersofpolarbearcountry,butIthoughtI’dbeluckyifIsawoneinthewild.I’veseenplentyofblackbears,butneveranythingthisbig.Thisguywasabruiser.Wegatheredtogetherandbeganshoutingatthebear,butwhenthatdidn’tfrightenit,ourguide,Rich,shotaflare（照明彈）.Thebearescapedtoaledge,andwecrossedthestreamintocamp.Itstayedthereaswecookedandateourdinner.Whenbedtimerolledaround,Iglancedup.Thebearhadn’tmoved.Istartedcyclingthroughalltheworst-casescenariosthatcouldhap-pen,butItriedtoremembereverythingwe’dpreparedtokeepussafe.Ourguideshadputupanelectricfencemeanttofrightenbearsawayfromourtents.Itranoffacoupleofbatterieslikeyouwouldputinaflashlight.Theoutfittersaidifwetouchedit,theshockwouldblowusoutofourhikingboots.Icrawledintomytentandtriedtogetsomerest.Ilayawake,tremblingwithanxiety,buteventually,sleepgotthebestofme.Afewhourslater,Isteppedoutofmytenttogotothebathroom,andthebearwasgone.Ifeltrelieved.Thesoundsofrainandsnowmademebacktosleep.Around2:30a.m.,movementout.sidewokeme.Ihadbeensleepingonmybackandlookeduptoseeashadowtoweringovermytent.Irecognizedtheshapeimmediately;twobigbearlegs,Obviously,theelectricfencedidn’twork.Iscreamed,andtriedtotakeflight.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Then,Iheardaswoosh—Richhadaboutoffaflare._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________讀后續(xù)寫參考范文文章大意這篇文章講述了作者在加拿大紐芬蘭與拉布拉多的托恩蓋特山國家公園海邊丘陵探險(xiǎn)時(shí)的一次驚險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。在一次小溪穿越時(shí)，他們意外地遇到了一只野生北極熊。盡管團(tuán)隊(duì)采取了喊叫和發(fā)射照明彈等措施試圖嚇走熊，但熊并未離開。晚上，盡管他們搭建了電網(wǎng)保護(hù)帳篷區(qū)，作者仍然感到非常害怕。在半夜，熊接近了作者的帳篷，使得作者驚慌失措。幸運(yùn)的是，導(dǎo)游Rich及時(shí)發(fā)射了照明彈，再次嚇退了熊。這次經(jīng)歷讓作者深刻體會(huì)到了野外探險(xiǎn)的危險(xiǎn)性和自然力量的強(qiáng)大，同時(shí)也凸顯了在野外生存時(shí)準(zhǔn)備和應(yīng)對措施的重要性。在原文中，有幾處伏筆為續(xù)寫部分提供了基礎(chǔ)：1.遇到北極熊的意外：文章開頭提到在探險(xiǎn)時(shí)意外地遇到了一只北極熊，這為續(xù)寫中作者對熊的持續(xù)關(guān)注和恐懼埋下了伏筆。2.導(dǎo)游的警告和應(yīng)對措施：導(dǎo)游之前對北極熊危險(xiǎn)的警告，以及他們采取的應(yīng)對措施（如喊叫、發(fā)射照明彈），為續(xù)寫中再次使用這些措施提供了背景。3.電網(wǎng)的設(shè)置：提到了為了保護(hù)帳篷區(qū)而設(shè)置的電網(wǎng)，這為續(xù)寫中電網(wǎng)失效和熊接近帳篷的情節(jié)埋下了伏筆。4.作者的恐懼和焦慮：作者表達(dá)了對北極熊的恐懼和對最壞情況的擔(dān)憂，這為續(xù)寫中作者半夜醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)熊靠近帳篷時(shí)的恐慌反應(yīng)提供了動(dòng)機(jī)。在續(xù)寫部分，這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng)：1.電網(wǎng)失效：續(xù)寫中提到電網(wǎng)并未能嚇退北極熊，這直接回應(yīng)了原文中提到的電網(wǎng)設(shè)置。2.照明彈的使用：續(xù)寫中再次提到了照明彈的使用，這是對原文中導(dǎo)游使用照明彈嚇退熊的情節(jié)的延續(xù)。3.作者的恐慌和逃生嘗試：續(xù)寫中作者半夜醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)熊靠近帳篷時(shí)的恐慌和嘗試逃跑，直接回應(yīng)了原文中作者的恐懼和焦慮。4.導(dǎo)游的及時(shí)救援：續(xù)寫中導(dǎo)游Rich及時(shí)發(fā)射照明彈救援，這回應(yīng)了原文中導(dǎo)游在遇到熊時(shí)的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和保護(hù)作用。通過這些伏筆和回應(yīng)，文章構(gòu)建了一個(gè)關(guān)于野外探險(xiǎn)中遇到野生動(dòng)物的緊張故事，強(qiáng)調(diào)了準(zhǔn)備和應(yīng)對措施的重要性，以及在面對危險(xiǎn)時(shí)團(tuán)隊(duì)合作和冷靜應(yīng)對的價(jià)值。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段續(xù)寫綱要：-描述作者半夜醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)北極熊靠近帳篷的恐慌情景。-敘述作者試圖逃離帳篷的混亂行為和心理活動(dòng)。-描述其他團(tuán)隊(duì)成員的反應(yīng)和集體行動(dòng)。-強(qiáng)調(diào)導(dǎo)游Rich發(fā)射照明彈的及時(shí)性和其對團(tuán)隊(duì)安全的重要性。第二段續(xù)寫綱要：-講述照明彈發(fā)射后北極熊的反應(yīng)和熊與人之間的緊張對峙。-描述團(tuán)隊(duì)成員在Rich的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下如何保持冷靜并采取進(jìn)一步的安全措施。-反思整個(gè)事件對作者的心理影響和對野外生存挑戰(zhàn)的新認(rèn)識。-總結(jié)作者對自然力量的敬畏和未來探險(xiǎn)活動(dòng)中準(zhǔn)備與應(yīng)對措施的重視。Onepossibleversion:Iscreamed,andtriedtotakeflight.Buttherewasnowayoutandtheextremeterrormademerootedtotheground.Thecreaturecrasheddownontopofmeandstartedclawingatmethroughthefabric.Icoveredmyheadwithmyhandsasitsmassiveteethreachedformyface.NextthingIknew,myheadwasinitsjaws.Thebearstartedrunning,draggingmyhelplessbodyawayfromourcampsite.I.couldfeelthebonescrackingwherethebearwasbitingmyneck.Myfeargavewaytodesperation.Then,IheardaswooshRichhadshotoffaflare.Thebeardroppedmeandwithdrewabout50yardsaway.Itriedtogetup,butIwastoobrokentomove.Andthedangerwasn’tgone:thebearwasinchingcloser.Richshotanotherflare,andthistime,itwasscaredaway.Mytrip-matescarriedmebacktocampandgavemesimpletreatment.Icouldhearsomeonetryingtocallforhelponasatellitephoneandahelicopterwasontheway.Despitethepain,reliefwashedoverme.Iwasaliveandthat’swhatmatteredmost.Whatathrillingexperience!下水文1Iscreamed,andtriedtotakeflight.Inapanic,Iscrambledtomyfeet,fumblingwiththetent'szipperinadesperatebidtoescape.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIenvisionedthebear'smassivepawsswipingdownatanymoment.Thesuddenrealizationthatoursafetymeasureshadfailedsentasurgeofadrenalinethroughmybody,fuelingmyfranticeffortstobreakfreefromtheconfinesofthetent.AsIfinallyburstoutintotheopen,Icouldseetheothersinthecampwerealsoawake,theirfacesamirrorofmyownterror.Then,Iheardaswoosh—Richhadjustshotoffaflare.Thenightskywasmomentarilyilluminated,castinganeerielightonthescene.Theflare'sbrightlightseemedtomomentarilydisorientthebear,buyinguspreciousseconds.Rich'squickthinkingandcalmunderpressurewereastarkcontrasttothechaosandfearthathadgrippedtherestofus.Asthebearretreated,takingcautiousstepsbacktowardstheshadows,weallletoutacollectivesighofrelief.Itwasastarkreminderoftherawpowerofnatureandtheimportanceofbeingpreparedwhenventuringintothewilderness.Therestofthenightwasspentinastateofheightenedvigilance,withnoneofusdaringtoletourguardsdownuntilthefirstlightofdawnchasedawaythedarkness.下水文2Iscreamed,andtriedtotakeflight.TheinitialshockgavewaytoasurgeofadrenalineasIgrappledwiththetent'sentrance,myhandsshakinguncontrollably.Thebear'sloomingpresencejustoutsidemytentwasaterrifyingrealityIhadnotpreparedmyselffor.AsIfinallymanagedtounzipthetentandstumbleout,Iwasgreetedbythesightoftherestofmygroup,theirfacesetchedwithasimilarblendoffearanddetermination.Weinstinctivelyhuddledclosertogether,oureyesfixedontheenormoussilhouettethatwasthepolarbear.Then,Iheardaswoosh—Richhadjustshotoffaflare.Thesuddenburstoflig