Unit 5 Lets celebrate!-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學(xué)年七年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）

第頁Unit5Let’scelebrate!單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度喜愛的節(jié)日運(yùn)用特殊疑問句來介紹自己最喜愛的節(jié)日本單元圍繞“運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)奶厥庖蓡柧鋪斫榻B自己最喜愛的節(jié)日”這一話題展開教學(xué)活動(dòng)，同學(xué)們應(yīng)多學(xué)習(xí)中外著名的節(jié)日，了解節(jié)日相應(yīng)的風(fēng)俗、特色活動(dòng)、歷史由來等等。關(guān)于中外節(jié)日習(xí)俗的英語小短文，一般分為四部分：1.簡(jiǎn)介：節(jié)日的名稱、慶祝的時(shí)間、慶祝的人；2.慶?；顒?dòng);3.結(jié)尾祝福;4.你對(duì)節(jié)日的看法。（以思維導(dǎo)圖的形式呈現(xiàn)）【詞匯積累】shoppingn.購(gòu)物2.moneyn.錢3.carryvt.拿,提,搬4.giftn.禮物5.maybeadv.也許,可能6.collectvt.收集,搜集7.costvt.值(多少錢),需付費(fèi)8.cheapadj.便宜的9.lastdet.最近的;上10.matchvt.&vi.與……相配11.prettyadj.漂亮的,俊俏的12.pocketn.口袋13.papern.紙14.T-shirtn.T恤衫,短袖汗衫15.pooradj.貧窮的;可16.enoughdet.&pron.足夠(的)【句型積累】1.I’dliketogoshopping,butIdon’thaveanymoney.我想要去購(gòu)物,但是我沒有錢。2.IwanttobuySimonapresent.我想要給西蒙買一份禮物。3.Howmuchdotheycost?它們多少錢?4.They'retwoyuaneach.它們每個(gè)兩元。5.Theymatchherpinkcoat!它們和她的粉紅色外套很相配!6.I'lltakethen.我就買它們吧。7.Here’syourchange.這是找你的零錢。8.Howdoyouuseyourpocketmoney?你如何使用你的零花錢?9.CanItrythemon?我可以試穿一下嗎?10.There'sanewmalldownthestreet.沿著街道有一個(gè)新的購(gòu)物中心。11.Here'smywallet.這是我的錢包。12.CanIhelpyou?/WhatcanIdoforyou?您要買什么?13.That'senough.那夠了?！境Ｓ脤懽骶湫汀浚孩佟璱sanimportantholidayin/for……②Itisin/on...;Itis...,but....③Thereis/are...onTV④We/Theyliketo⑤…h(huán)avelotsoffun⑥...oftenplaywith⑦…usuallycomesin....⑧…onthatday……根據(jù)以下提示，幫助桑迪給湯姆回一封電子郵件。詞數(shù)70左右。提示：1.明天是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的(traditional)中秋節(jié);2.中秋節(jié)通常在九月或十月；3.那天，家庭成員都趕回家吃團(tuán)圓飯；4.人們還吃一種特殊的食物———月餅，人們邊吃月餅邊賞月；孩子們玩燈籠，他們玩得很開心。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearTom,TomorrowistheMid-AutumnFestival.It'satraditionalfestivalinChina.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutit.TheMid-AutumnFestivalusuallycomesinSeptemberorOctober.Allthefamilymemberscomebackhomeonthatday.Wealwayshaveabigdinnertogether.Afterdinner,weusuallyenjoythefullmooninthegarden.Wealsoeataspecialkindoffood—mooncakes.Childrenoftenplaywithlanterns.Theyallhavelotsoffun.Lotsoflove,Sandy一、詞匯。A.根據(jù)句意及首字母或中文提示完成單詞。1.Theweekendiscoming.MyfamilyaregoingonhinTongli.2.Therearemanytallbuildingsontheosideoftheroad.3.Youmusthave(特殊的)shoesforskating.4.Theboyisreadytoanswertheteachers'(問題)atanytime.5.Wewanttoinvitesomeforeignfriendsto(慶祝)the100thbirthdayofourschool.B.用所給單詞的適當(dāng)形式填空。6.Lastyear,Itooklotsof(photo)whenIwasinHongKong.7.Ialwaysgetalotofnice(present)onmybirthday.8.—Thanksfor(give)ussomecandyasatreat.—You’rewelcome.9.Therearedifferent(kind)ofbooksinthelibrary.10.Iwanttoknow(much)aboutyourfamily.二、單項(xiàng)選擇。()1.—Whatisyourfavourite?——TheSpringFestival.A.foodB.sportC.subjectD.festival()2.Kateisnotatschool.SheisholidayinLondon.A.atB.onC.inD.for()3.—WhenisHalloween?——.A.OnOctober1B.OnDecember25C.OnOctober31D.OnAugust15()4.ItisforyoutoreadEnglishinthemorningifyouwanttolearnitwell.A.differentB.importantC.specialD.difficult()5.—doeshelikewinterbest?—Becausehecangoskating.A.WhyB.WhatC.WhichD.How()6.——doyougoswimminginsummer?——Twiceaweek.A.WhyB.WhattimeC.WhichD.Howoften()7.TheChinesefireworkstowelcomethenewyear.A.wakeupB.talkofC.turnoffD.letoff()8.IwanttoadragonattheDragonBoatFestival.A.dressatB.dressinasC.dressupD.dressupas()9.—HappyHalloween!—A.HappyNewYear!B.Thesametoyou.C.Thankyou.D.Don'tsaythat.()10.Peopleeatsweetdumplingsforgoodluckat/on.A.ChristmasB.theMid-AutumnFestivalC.theLanternFestivalD.Halloween三、句型轉(zhuǎn)換。1.HongKonghasmanyfestivalsfromdifferentcountries.(改為一般疑問句)HongKongmanyfestivalsfromdifferentcountries?2.Myfatherandmymothergivememanypresentsonmybirthday.(對(duì)畫線部分提問)youmanypresentsonyourbirthday?3.PeoplecelebrateChristmasinmanyways.(對(duì)畫線部分提問)peoplecelebrateChristmas?4.Thegirloverthereunderthetreeismycousin.(對(duì)畫線部分提問)yourcousin?Helookslikeaghostinthecostumes.(同義句轉(zhuǎn)換)Heasaghost.答案一、A.1.holiday2.other3.special4.questions5.celebrateB.6.photos7.presents8.giving9.kinds10.more二、1.D根據(jù)答句可推知上句詢問的是節(jié)日。2.B表示“度假”用固定短語onholiday。3.C萬圣節(jié)前夕是在10月31日。4.B句意：如果你想學(xué)好英語，那么對(duì)你來說在早上讀英語是重要的。5.A由答句中的Because可知,問句用Why提問。6.D句意：“你夏天多久去游一次泳?”“一周兩次。”why為什么;whattime幾點(diǎn);which哪一個(gè);howoften多久一次。根據(jù)答句可知是對(duì)頻率進(jìn)行提問。7.D句意：中國(guó)人燃放煙花來迎接新的一年。letofffireworks燃放煙花。8.D句意：在端午節(jié)我想裝扮成一條龍。dressup打扮;dressupas裝扮成,打扮成。9.B回答節(jié)日祝福語用“HappyHalloween!”或“Thesametoyou.”。10.C根據(jù)句中“吃元宵”可知是“元宵節(jié)”。三、1.Does;have2.Whogives3.Howdo4.Whichgirlis5.dressesup（一）一、電子郵件1．你的外國(guó)筆友Jack發(fā)郵件給你，想了解你家今年會(huì)如何度過春節(jié)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示和春節(jié)期間家里部分活動(dòng)的日程，用英文給他回信。要點(diǎn)提示：1.簡(jiǎn)單介紹春節(jié)（時(shí)間、你對(duì)這個(gè)節(jié)日的感受……）2.介紹你和家人在什么時(shí)候做什么事情（原因、想法……）3.……January19th20th21st22nd23rd24th打掃房屋買菜、購(gòu)物吃團(tuán)年飯、看春晚得壓歲錢（春節(jié)）去舅舅家和表兄妹一起玩和好朋友聚會(huì)要求：1．詞數(shù)：80—120字，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。參考詞匯：cleanthehouse（打掃房間）,goshopping（購(gòu)物）,SpringFestivalGala（春晚）,luckymoney（壓歲錢）DearJack,ThanksforyourlastletterandyouaskmeaboutSpringFestivalandwhatmyfamilydothosedays.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Alice【參考范文】DearJack,ThanksforyourlastletterandyouaskmeaboutSpringFestivalandwhatmyfamilydothosedays.TheChineseSpringFestivalisusuallyinJanuaryorFebruaryofeachyear.WhentheSpringFestivalisaroundthecorner,wearefilledwithexcitement.Thisyear’sSpringFestivalisonJanuary22nd.Myscheduleisveryfull.OnJanuary19th,ourwholefamilywillcleanthehousetogethertosweepawaybadluck.Onthe20th,mymotherandIwillgoshopping,mainlytobuyvegetablesandpreparefortheChineseNewYear’sfeast.Onthe21st,whichisNewYear’sEve,wewillhaveareuniondinnerandwillwatchtheSpringFestivalGalatogetherintheevening.Thatdaywillbehappyandwarm.Onthe22nd,whichisthedayoftheSpringFestival,wewillvisiteachotherandsay“happynewyear”.Icangetalotofluckymoney.Onthe23rd,Iwillgotomyuncle’shousetoplaywithmycousins.Onthe24th,Iwillgotoagatheringwithmygoodfriends.Wewillchatwitheachotherhappily.SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalinChina.IhopeyouhavethechancetoexperiencethisfestivalinChina.Yours,Alice[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般將來時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹春節(jié)的時(shí)間和節(jié)日氛圍；第二步，根據(jù)提示介紹你與家人的春節(jié)安排，并表達(dá)活動(dòng)原因和自己的感受；第三步，總結(jié)收尾，總體說明春節(jié)的意義。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①aroundthecorner即將到來②befilledwith充滿③sweepaway掃走④reuniondinner團(tuán)圓飯[高分句型]①Onthe21st,whichisNewYear’sEve,wewillhaveareuniondinnerandwillwatchtheSpringFestivalGalatogetherintheevening.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）②SpringFestivalisthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalinChina.（最高級(jí)的應(yīng)用）（二）假設(shè)你是LiPing，以下是你美國(guó)筆友Tom發(fā)給你的郵件。請(qǐng)閱讀郵件后回復(fù)。Hi!LiPing,Howareyou?IhearitwasDragonBoatFestivalafewdaysago.HowdidyouandyourfamilyspendtheDragonBoatFestivalthisyear?Whatdidyoudo?Whatdidyoueat?Didyouhaveagreattime?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,Tom要求：1.詞數(shù)70詞左右?？蛇m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或姓名。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：DearTom,Gladtoreceiveyourmail.IhadarelaxingandhappyDragonBoatFestival.WehadthreedaysoffandIdecidedtostayathometohaveagoodrest.Ididn’tgoouttowatchtheboatrace.MygrandparentsmadeZongzisandsentthemtous.Dadcookedthem.Theyweremoredeliciousthantheonesinsupermarkets.Mymummadespecialsmallbagsfordadandmeduringthefestival.Ilovethesmellandweariteveryday.It’sreallyrelaxingtotakeourtimetohavegoodmealsandtalkathome.LookatthepicturesIsentyou.YouwillunderstandhowhappyIwasduringthefestival.LiPing[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，仔細(xì)閱讀湯姆的郵件內(nèi)容；第二步，根據(jù)湯姆的郵件內(nèi)容進(jìn)行逐一回復(fù)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveagoodrest好好休息②sendsth.tosb.把某物寄給某人③duringthefestival在節(jié)日期間[高分句型]①WehadthreedaysoffandIdecidedtostayathometohaveagoodrest.（and連接的并列句）②Theyweremoredeliciousthantheonesinsupermarkets.（含有than的比較級(jí)句子）③It’sreallyrelaxingtotakeourtimetohavegoodmealsandtalkathome.（it作形式主語）④YouwillunderstandhowhappyIwasduringthefestival.（how引導(dǎo)賓語從句）（三）請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作。假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)筆友湯姆的媽媽的生日快要到了，他不知道要買什么禮物給媽媽，希望你能給他一些建議。請(qǐng)你給他回封電子郵件，說一下你的想法。內(nèi)容包括：(1)你給湯姆的建議(至少兩點(diǎn))；(2)你的看法。作文要求：(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名、地名和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。(2)語句連貫，詞數(shù)70左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearTom,Everythinggoeswell.Thankyou!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________love.Say“HappyBirthday”toyourmotherforme!Andbestwishesforyouall!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearTom,Everythinggoeswell.Thankyou!Foryourproblem,Ihavesomeideas.First,youcanaskyourmotherwhatshelikesbest.Ifthethingisn’texpensive,youcanbuyitforherasapresent.Next,youcandosomethinghelpfulforyourmother,suchasmakingacakeforher.Thenyoucanmakeacardorwritealettertohertoshowyourlove.Ithinkmothersallwillbehappynomatterwhatgiftstheyget.Theydon’tcareaboutthepresentsbutourlove.Say“HappyBirthday”toyourmotherforme!Andbestwishesforyouall!Yours,LiHua[總體分析]題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表達(dá)感謝，引出話題；第二步，關(guān)于“給媽媽買生日禮物”的話題，具體闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表示祝愿。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①suchas例如②nomatter不管怎樣③careabout在乎[高分句型]①Ifthethingisn’texpensive,youcanbuyitforherasapresent.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）②Ithinkmothersallwillbehappynomatterwhatgiftstheyget.（nomatterwhat引導(dǎo)的狀語從句）（四）在不同的國(guó)家，人們互相問候的方式不同。握手是流行的問候方式之一。在美國(guó)、英國(guó)，人們初次見面會(huì)握手，但家人和親密朋友之間的問候方式是擁抱或吻面頰。在日本，人們初次見面的問候方式是互相鞠躬。在印度，人們通常把手合在一起并且點(diǎn)頭。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)上面的文字材料，以“Differentcountries,differentgreetingways”為題寫一篇70詞左右的短文。Differentcountries,differentgreetingways____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Differentcountries,differentgreetingwaysPeopleindifferentcountriesgreeteachotherindifferentways.First,inAmericaandBritain,peopleoftenshakehandswhentheymeetforthefirsttimebutclosefriendsandfamilymembersoftenhugorkissthecheek.Second,inJapan,peopleusuallybowtogreeteachother.Third,inIndia,peopleputtheirhandstogetherandnodtheirheadswhentheymeet.Itisimportanttoremember:WheninRome,doastheRomansdo![總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明主題，介紹不同的國(guó)家互相問候方式不同；第二步，具體闡述不同國(guó)家的問候方式；第三步，最后書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①eachother互相②thefirsttime第一次[高分句型]①Third,inIndia,peopleputtheirhandstogetherandnodtheirheadswhentheymeet.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②WheninRome,doastheRomansdo!（諺語的使用）（五）假設(shè)你是李明，打算向校英語報(bào)專欄“MyHoliday”投稿。請(qǐng)從以下兩個(gè)話題中選擇一個(gè)，寫一篇英語短文。話題一：介紹你的假期活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)劯惺?。話題二：介紹你的假期活動(dòng)安排，并說明理由。注意：（1）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名：（3）詞數(shù)60—80。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyHolidayMynameisLiMing.NowIwouldliketointroducemyholidayexperience.Lastholiday,Iwenttoabeachwithmyfamily.Itwasanexcellentholiday.Iwenttherebytrainandmytraintripwasrelaxing.Thebeachwasverybeautiful.Itwashotandrainythosedays.Ididn’tliketheweather.Luckily,peoplewereveryfriendlyandthefoodwasdelicious.Ihopetogothereagain.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，選擇一個(gè)話題；第二步，介紹你的假期活動(dòng)；第三步，表達(dá)對(duì)于這個(gè)假期的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wouldliketodo想要做②bytrain坐火車③hopetodo希望做[高分句型]Iwenttherebytrainandmytraintripwasrelaxing.（and連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)）（一）2023年6月18日是父親節(jié)。假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)那你用英文在學(xué)校的英語角給同學(xué)們聊一聊你和家人們一起是如何度過這個(gè)特殊的一天的。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.父親的職業(yè)，外貌特征；2.送父親什么樣的禮物；3.你和家人們一起做了什么；4.可適當(dāng)自由發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)。注意：1.文中不能透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.詞數(shù)80左右；3.內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。參考詞匯：present禮物Dearschoolmates,I’mLiHuafromClassEight.Nicetomeetyouall!Afewdaysago,itwasFather’sDay.I’dliketotellyouhowIspentthisspecialday._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wouldyouliketoshareuswithyourspecialday?【答案】例文Dearschoolmates,I’mLiHuafromClassEight.Nicetomeetyouall!Afewdaysago,itwasFather’sDay.I’dliketotellyouhowIspentthisspecialday.Myfatherisadoctor.He’stallandofmediumheightwithapairofglasses.Inthemorning,Iboughthimashirtasapresent.Hefeltverysurprisedandhappy.Intheafternoon,myfamilywenttorowtheboatintheEastLake.Weenjoyedourselves.Andthenwewenttothecinemaandsawafilm.Intheevening,Ihelpedmymomcookdinnerandwemadebeefdumplings.Theyaremyfather’sfavorite.Afterdinner,myfathertoldmehisstorywhenhewasachild.Whatagreatdaywehad!Wouldyouliketoshareuswithyourspecialday?[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題干提示信息，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開篇點(diǎn)出寫作主題：如何度過父親節(jié)這個(gè)特殊的一天的。第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。具體的介紹父親的職業(yè)，外貌特征及給父親買的禮物和和家人一起做了什么；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。希望了解對(duì)方是如何慶祝父親節(jié)的。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①enjoyoneself玩得開心②cookdinner做晚飯[高分句型]Afterdinner,myfathertoldmehisstorywhenhewasachild.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)（二）寫一次難忘的周末或假期請(qǐng)你寫出一次難忘的周末或假期。文章內(nèi)容要包括：假期活動(dòng)，難忘的原因，感受。(可以選用下面的提示)weekendvacationactivities(活動(dòng))dohomework,watchTV,playsportsvisitauntinNewYork,gotothebeachreasons(原因)busy,tiredbutkindoffuninteresting,relaxingandexcitingfeelings(感受)wanttohavemoreinterestingweekendsgreatvacation_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Lastweek,Iwentonvacation.Ihadfun.First,IvisitedmyauntinNewYork.Thenwewenttothebeach.Ilikedthebeach,becauseitwasinteresting,relaxingandexciting.Iwasveryhappy.Ithinkitisagreatvacation.Ilikethisvacation.Ihopethenextvacationwillcomesoon.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，