Unit10ConnectionsWritingWorkshop課件高中英語(yǔ)北師大版選擇性

Unit10Writingworkshop

LearningObjectives01020304

Toreadandtalkaboutanewsreport

TounderstandthestructureofanewsreportToidentifythewritingskillsusedinthenewsreport.TowriteanewsreportaboutaschoolorcommunityeventHowtowriteanewsreport?Whatisanewsreport?Anewsreportsisaboutsomethingthatishappeningnoworthatjustrecentlyhappened.Currentissues,events,crimes,andinvestigationsaregoodsubjectsfornewsreports.TipsonWritingaNewsReportWhenwritinganewsreport,it'simportanttoconcentrateonfourelements:facts,context,impact,andemotion.Howyoucombinethesefourelementswilldeterminethesuccessofyournewsstory.Thefactsanswerthe5WsandH:who,what,where,when,why,andhow.It’simportanttomakesurethefactsareaccurateandreasonablycomplete.Ifyouhavetowriteareportbeforeyougetallthefacts,thensaysointhereport.Contextprovidesthecircumstancessurroundingthefactsofthenewsstory.FactsContextImpactkeepsreadersintunebeyondtheheadlineandthelead,oropeningsentence.Whataretheramificationsorpotentialconsequencesofthisnewsstory?Howwillthisseriesofeventsaffectmeandmylovedones?ImpactEvokingemotionisthemagicofnewsreporting.Writersmustwalkthefinelinebetweencold,hardfactsandatugonemotionalheartstrings.Butwemustletthereadersdecideforthemselves.Forexample,theAmericanPressInstitutepointsoutwemustnotdictatetheaudience'sfeelingsbywriting,“Inashocking,newdevelopment…”Rather,weshouldletthemchoosetobeshockedontheirown.EmotionPairWork.Youaregoingtowriteanewsreportonaschoolorcommunityevent.Discusswithyourpartner.11.Whateventwouldyouliketowriteabout?2.Whataspectsareyougoingtoinclude?3.Howisanewsreportnormallyorganised?2Readthenewsreport.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.1.Whateventisthereportabout?2.Whenandwheredidtheeventhappen?3.Whoattendedtheevent?4.Whatdidtheydo?

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”5.Whatdidtheeventbringtothecommunity?ReadandlocateBriefintroductionabouttheevent.Peopleattendingtheeventandtheactsduringtheevent.Thebenefitsoftheeventtothepeople.Para.1Para.4Para.2&33Thenewsreporthasfourparagraphs.Labeleachparagraphwithafunction.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”1.Lead3.Body2.Body4.Round-upUnderlinetheusefulsentencesforanewsreport.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.

Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”Circlealltheexpressionsthatconveythefactthattheeventwasasuccess.4

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.

Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”Whatelsecanyoufindout?5Write2-3sentencesabouttheeventyouaregoingtoreport.UsetheSentenceBuildertohelpyou.AdverbsofDegreehighlyThefestivalwashighlysuccessful…ratherTheperformerswererathergood…mainlyPeopleattendingtheeventweremainlyfamilies.particularlyTheactsappealingtochildrenwereparticularpopular.SentenceBuilderAdverbsofdegreemakesomethingwereportstrongorweakandshowwhatwefeelaboutsomething.Nowwrite2-3sentencesabouttheeventyouaregoingtoreport.①

Eventually,allthecontestantssparednoefforttofinishtherace.②

Moreimportantly,wecometoknowitisourresponsibilitytochallengeourselvestoavarietyofhardships.

假定你是李華，上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.參加人員；2.跑步路線(xiàn)：從校門(mén)口到南山腳下；3.活動(dòng)反響。

注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。Writingtask6Outlining.

CompletetheoutlineofyournewsreportbasedonActivity3.Reviewthestructureofanewsreport;Copythestructureinyournotebooks;Writesomenotesonwhateachparagraphwillcontain.體裁話(huà)題時(shí)態(tài)人稱(chēng)文章架構(gòu)核心要點(diǎn)記敘文；關(guān)于越野賽跑的報(bào)道一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；第一、第三人稱(chēng)首段：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和內(nèi)容中段：活動(dòng)的過(guò)程尾段：對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)1.上周日舉辦5公里越野賽跑活動(dòng)2.跑步路線(xiàn)：從校門(mén)口到南山腳下3.活動(dòng)認(rèn)識(shí)：強(qiáng)身健體、挑戰(zhàn)自己Outline7Drafting.

UseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfistdraft.

WritingaNewsReportIt’simportantto:haveanattractivetitleandabrieflead;includethewho,when,where,what,whyandhowoftheevent;useformalandclearlanguage.WritingHelp8Editing.Edityourreportinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.Beforeyournewsreportwouldbepublished,you’dhavetoeditittomakesureyourfactsareclearandyoursentencesarecomplete.Exchangeyourwritingwithyourpartnerandoffersuggestionstoimprovedrafts.Afterediting,writerswillmakechangestodraftsandeitherrewriteorprintacleancopyofthework.Prepareafinaldraftofyourworktosubmit.EditingSheetDoesthereporthaveacleartitleandabrieflead?Doesthe