2021年云南省麗江市大學英語6級大學英語六級模擬考試(含答案)

2021年云南省麗江市大學英語6級大學英

語六級模擬考試（含答案）

學校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteaneye-

witnessaccountofatrafficaccident.Youshouldwriteatleast120words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.假設(shè)你在某日某時某地目擊了一起車禍，就此寫一份見證書。見證書

須包括以下幾點

1.車禍發(fā)生的時間及地點

2.你所見到的車禍情況

3.你對車禍原因的分析

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledMyViewonOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.網(wǎng)上購物漸漸成為一種時尚，越來越多的大學生選擇網(wǎng)上購物

2.分析大學生網(wǎng)上購物的原因

3.我對此現(xiàn)象的看法

MyViewonOnlineShopping

3.1.目前社會上存在著迷信文憑的現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對此的觀點

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

ChangesinFamilyExpenses.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbasedon

thechartandoutlinegivenbelow.

1.請對圖表所給出的信息進行描述

2.請對描述的內(nèi)容做出原因分析

3.請針對此圖表得出合理的結(jié)論并對未來進行預(yù)測

StatisticsofFamilyExpensesinChina

198519952005

Item

Food&Clothing67%46%20%

Recreation3%7%15%

Education6%13%22%

HeathCare6%10%16%

others18%24%35%

ChangesinFamilyExpenses

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledTheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet.Ybushouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.隨著社會和經(jīng)濟發(fā)展網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個人必不可少的獲取信息的工具

2.但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黃色網(wǎng)

站、虛假新聞、網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等

3.我們應(yīng)采取措施制止這些，并建立一個健康的網(wǎng)絡(luò)環(huán)境

TheImportanceofCreatingaHealthyInternet

6.Directions:forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicwhichweighsmore:SchoolBrandorMajor?You

shouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline

givenbelowinChinese:

1.人們普遍認為能否上一所名牌大學對一個的將來非常關(guān)鍵

2.但是，也有相當一部分人認為選擇一個適合自己的專業(yè)才是最重要的

3.你對此的看法是什么？為什么？

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritearesume.You

shouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

假設(shè)你是李明一名應(yīng)屆畢業(yè)生，在報紙上看到一則招聘廣告，你想要到

登廣告的公司供職，請給該公司寫一封求職信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)簡要介紹自己的

情況以及自己的經(jīng)歷等。

8.1.很多大學生從未對父母的養(yǎng)育之恩道過謝

2.請詳細說明其中的原因

3.你的算法

Say"Thanks”toParents

9.Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthe

topic“RechoiceofProfessions—ASocialProblem”.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenin

Chinesebelow.

1.下崗人員(laid-offpersonnel)面臨一個嚴肅的問題：再就業(yè)。

2.下崗人員要改變就業(yè)觀念，樹立堅強信心，重新就業(yè)。

3.人們要關(guān)心、幫助下崗人員，克服困難，爭取勝利，

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononStudyingAbroad.Yourcompositionmustbebasedonthe

outlinegivenbelowinChinese.Yourpartofwritingshouldbenolessthan

150words.Remembertowriteneatlyandyouwillberewardedforthat.

1.有些人認為學生應(yīng)該呆在自己的國家學習；

2.有些人認為學生應(yīng)該到美國學習；

3.我的觀點。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

Sensitiveteethmayindicateaseriousproblemthatmayneedpromptcareby

adentist.

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12.

Thelowconfidencelevelofconsumersandproducersisoneofthegeneral

factorsofarecession.

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13.ABookThatChangedOurThinking

一ByKarlKrahnke

TheBook

Americain1962wasstillemergingfromthecomfortabledecadeofthe1950s,

atimeinwhichlifegenerallyseemedgoodandmanytechnologicaladvances

oftheprevioustwentyorthirtyyearspromisedahappier,healthier,andsafer

future.Butcloudswereonthehorizon,andmanyofthequestionsanddoubts

thatwouldcharacterizethedecadeofthe1960swerealreadyapparent.One

cloudthatquicklybecameamajorstormtooktheform.ofabookthatwas

publishedin1962,SilentSpring.SilentSpringisoneofafewbooksthathave

changedhistory.

SilentSpringisaboutchemicals,specificallyaboutonetypeofchemical

chlorinatedhydrocarbons—andmorespecificallyaboutonefamousmember

ofthatgroup,DDT.Manypeoplewhohavegrownupsincethe1960shave

notheardofDDT,butbeforeSilentSpring,andforanumberofyearsafter

ward,DDTanditsrelativeswereimportanttoolsinthecivilizedworld'sat

tempttocontrolnaturethroughtheuseoftechnologyandchemicals.DDTis

apowerfulinsecticideandwasusedthroughouttheworldtokillinsectpests

ofallkinds.

DDThadbeendiscoveredin1939andbegantobewidelyusedduringthe

SecondWorldWar.Formanyyearsitseemedtobejustonemoremiraculous

productofmodemscience.DDTwasusedtodestroypopulationsofmany

harmfulinsects,malaria-carryingmosquitoes,lice,andflies.Thereisno

questionthatDDTandsimilarchemicalsdid,andstillaredoing,alotofgood.

Thedangerfrominsect-carrieddiseasessuchasmalariaandyellowfeverhas

beengreatlyreduced,andthelivesofmanypeoplehavebeensavedand

lengthenedbytheiruse.

SilentSpring,however,toldabouttheothersideofDDTanditsrelatives.

Usingcarefullycollectedscientificevidence,theauthorshowedthatDDTand

similarpesticideshadatleasttwodangeroussideeffects.Oneofthesewas

thetendencyofpesticidestokillalloftheinsectsinthelocationwherethey

wereused.Notallinsectsareharmful,however.Manybees,forexample,

perform,necessaryfunctions,suchaspollinatingplantsandevencontrolling

thenumbersofother,moreharmful,insects.Whenusefulinsectsare

eliminated,theresulthasoftenbeengreaterproblemsthanbeforethe

pesticidewasused.Asecondproblemwithchlorinatedhydrocarbonsisthat

theydonotdisappearquickly;theyarestablechemicalsthataccumulatein

thebodiesofinsectsandthebirdsandanimalsthateatthemandcontinueto

doharmwhenandwheretheeffectwasnotintended.Birdsareespecially

affectedbyDDT-typepesticides.Manybirdseatinsectsandwormsasfood,

andthechemicalsthatwereintheinsectscollectintheirbodies,frequently

leadingtotheirdeath.AsSilentSpringdemonstratedsoclearly,the

disappearanceofmanykindsofbirdswasduetothepresenceofpesticidesin

theirfoodsources.

Mostimportantly,SilentSpringbroughttotheworldatlargethebeginningof

anunderstandingofmodernecology.Webegantoseethatthenaturalworld

weliveinismadeupofanumberofplants,insects,andanimals,somegood,

somenotsogood,andthatwecannotencourageoreliminatesomewithout

producingeffectsinmanyothers,andeveninourselves.

SilentSpringisapowerfulbook,beautifullyandsensitivelywritten,andit

carriesastrongmessage.Itisfullofcomplexscientificinformation,butitis

equallyaveryhumanandcaringbook.Itdoesnottrytopresentabalanced

pictureortofindexcusesforthemistakeswemadewithpesticides.Itisan

argumentforanewanddifferentwayoflookingatnatureandourrelation

shipwithnature.Thebook

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14.

In1924CivicClubDinner,sponsoredbyOpportunity,bringingblackwriters

andwhitepublisherstogether,March21.Thiseventisconsideredtheformal

launchingof.

15.

Speakingwillturnintoapleasantexperienceafteryou.

A.graduatefromschool

B.flyanairplanealoneforthefirsttime

C.joininsomegroupsinthecommunity

D.getmorespeakingexperiences

16.Domesaretheenvironment-friendlybuilding.

17.TheBusinessofMediaViolence

In2001,peoplearoundtheworldspentUS$14billiongoingtothemovies.

TheU.S.domesticboxofficealonehitUS$9billion—a75percentincrease

from1991—andtherearehugerevenuesfromhomevideo/DVDsales,rentals

andspin-offmerchandise.Buteventheseprofitsaredwarfedbymusic,the

largestglobalmediasector.In2000,salesreachedUS$37billion,withmusic

consumptionhighamongyoungaudienceseverywhere.Videogamesarenot

farbehind:globalsalesfor2002wereanticipatedtobeUS$31billion.

AnExpandingForeignMarket

Americanmediacorporationsearnatleasthalfoftheirprofitsfromforeign

sales.Andglobalmarketsaregrowingfastasstandardsoflivingarerising

aroundtheworld.SalesofTVs,stereos,VCRsandsatellitedishesare

increasing,andinthelastdecadeortwo,newandexpandingmarketshave

emergedincountriesthathaveabandonedstatecontrolofmediaand

distribution.

Today,U.S.filmsareshowninmorethan150countriesworldwide,andthe

U.S.filmindustryprovidesmostofthepre-recordedvideosandDVDssold

throughouttheworld.Americantelevisionprogramsarebroadcastinover

125internationalmarkets,andMTVcanbeseeninmoreforeignhouseholds

thanAmericanones.

Thisinternationalsuccesshasatremendousimpactnotjustonthe

recipient(愿意接受的)countries,butalsoontheculturalenvironmentofthe

U.S.Tosomeextent,thetailiswaggingthedog:moreandmore,thedemands

andtastesofforeignmarketsareinfluencingwhatpopularproductsgetmade

intheU.S.

ActionSells:FilmandTelevision

Nowhereisthisinfluencemoreevidentthaninthefilmindustry.IntheU.S.

andCanada,moviesratednGH(General)andnPG"(ParentalGuidance)

consistentlybringsinmorerevenuesthanR-ratedfilms.YetthenumberofG

andPGfilmshasdroppedinrecentyears,andthenumberofrestrictedfilms

hasrisen.Two-thirdsofHollywoodfilmsin2001wererated"R".

Filmproducersareunequivocal(不含糊的)aboutwhythisisso:theforeign

marketlikesactionfilms.

Actiontravelswell.Actionmoviesdon'trequirecomplexplotsorcharacters.

Theyrelyonfights,killings,specialeffectsandexplosionstoholdtheir

audiences.And,unlikecomedyordrama—whichdependongoodstories,

sharphumor,andcrediblecharacters,allofwhichareoftenculture-specific一

actionfilmsrequirelittleinthewayofgoodwritingandacting.They're

simple,andthey'reuniversallyunderstood.Totopitoff,thelargelynon-

verbalnatureofthekindoffilmsthatjournalistSharonWaxmanreferstoas

Hshort-on-dialogue,high-on-testosterone"makestheirdubbing（酉己音）or

translationrelativelyinexpensive.

Thereare,ofcourse,exceptionstotherule.ThefilmTitanicmadealmostUS

$2billioninworldwidesalesasof2001—makingitthebiggest-grossing

movieofalltime.TheBritishfilmTheFullMontywasaninternationalhits

andMyBigFatGreekWeddingdebunkedalltheprofitformulasin2002.

Butsuchoffbeatsuccessesarehardtopredict.AflicksuchasDieHardor

Terminatorismuchmoreofasurething.Mostfilmbudgetstodayaverage

US$75-100mil-lion,soHollywoodstudiosdon'tliketotakechances.

AllthismeansenormouspressureontheAmericanmovieindustrytoabandon

complexityinfavourofactionfilms.Theeffectisakindof"dumbing-down"

oftheindustryingeneral.Foreigninvestorsaremuchlesslikelytoinvestin

filmsfocusingonserioussocialthemesorwomen'sissues,oronesthatfeature

minoritycasts.Suchfilms,howeverbrilliant,arenotwherethebigmoneyis.

Worldwideappealdeterminescastingandscript,decisions-andthe

overwhelmingdemandisforwhiteactorsandaction.

Successbreedssuccess,andthesheerubiquity（無處不在）ofthese

productionsandal

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18.

Thegoodpartsofalltheprogramskeepgettingbetterbecauseof.

19.

inyourbodyfunctionstokeepthebalancebetweenthecaloriesyour

bodybumsandthequantityittakesin.

20.

TheconceptofEPRensuresthattakemoreresponsibilitiesfor

managingtheenvironmentalimpactsoftheirproductsthroughouttheirlife.

三、3.ListeningComprehension。0題）

21.（28）

A.Withthehelpofresponsiblesmokers.

B.Withthehelpofhuntersandwoodworkers.

C.Buymoregoodequipments.

D.Addmorefiremenandfireengines.

22.

[B2]

23.聽力原文：M:Honey,thebasketballgameisabouttostart.Andcouldyou

bringsomechipsandabowloficecream?And...uh...asliceofpizzafrom

thefridge.

W:Anythingelse?

M:Nope,that'sfornow.Hey,honey,youknow,(22)they'reorganizinga

companybasketballteam,andI'mthinkingofjoining.Whatdoyouthink?

W:Humph?

M:"Humph"?Whatdoyoumean"Humph"?Iwasthestarplayerinhigh

school.

W:Yeah,twenty-fiveyearsago.Look,(23)1justdon'twantyouhavingaheart

attackrunningupanddownthecourt.

M:So,whatareyousuggesting?ShouldIjustabandontheidea?I'mnotthat

outofshape.

W:Well...yououghttoatleasthaveaphysicalcheck-upbeforeyoubegin.I

mean,ithasbeenatleastfiveyearssinceyouplayedatall.

M:Well,okey,but...

W:And(24)youneedtowatchyourdietandcutbackonthefattyfood,lick

icecream.Andyoushouldtryeatingmorefreshfruitsandvegetables.

M:Yeah,you'reprobablyright.

W:And(25)youshouldtakeupalittleweighttrainingtostrengthenyour

musclesorperhapstrycyclingtobuildupyourheartsystem.Oh,andyou

needtogotobedearlyinsteadofwatchingTVhalfthenight.

M:Hey,you'restartingtosoundlikemypersonalfitnessinstructor!

W:No,Ijustloveyou,andIwantyoutobearoundforalong,longtime.

(23)

A.Toplaybasketballwithfriendsfromwork.

B.Totryoutforthecompanybaseballteam.

C.Togetinshapeandcompeteinacyclingrace.

D.Towatchthebasketballgameliveinastadium.

24.

[BIO]

25.(29)

A.BecausemanyarchitectsstudiedwithWright.

B.BecauseWrightstartedthepracticeof^land-scraping".

C.BecauseWrightusedelementsofenvelopebuilding.

0.BecausemostofthehousesWrightbuiltweremadeofstone,

26.(26)

A.Morethan100students.

B.About50students.

C.About200students.

D.8to10students.

27.(32)

A.ThattheBritishwereretreatingtotheCharlesRiver.

B.ThattheBritishwouldattackbysea.

C.ThattheBritishwerewillingtosignadeclarationofindependence.

D.ThattheBritishhadwonthefirsttwobattlesoftheRevolution.

28.(36)

A.Industriesinthepastandatpresent.

B.Changesinthedevelopmentofindustries.

C.Thefreedomofindustriestodayandinthepast.

D.Theprotectionofindustrialworkersandcustomers.

29.聽力原文：M:Youdidn'tseemtobeabletositstillforclass.Areyou

expectingsomething?

W:Yes.TmexpectingacalltoseeifIwasacceptedfbrthepositionatCole's.

Icoulddowiththecash.

Q:Whatdoesthewomanmean?

(18)

A.Sheiseagertobeacceptedbytheuniversity.

B.SheiswaitingtoseeifshecouldgetthejobfromCole's.

C.SheisexpectingtoseeifColewouldlendhersomecash.

D.Shehasnoideaaboutwhethershecanaffordtheuniversitytuition.

30.聽力原文：Areyouafraid,toraiseyourhandinclass,evenwhenyou

knowtheanswer?Ifyouare,mostpeoplewouldsaythatyouareshy.Ifyou

feelshy,youarenotalone.Nineoutoftenpeopleareatleastalittleshy.But

howevershyyouare,scientificevidenceseemstoshowthatitisn'tyourfault.

Youmayhavebeenbomthatway.

Howdopsychologistsmeasureshyness?Onewayisbyobservation.They

keepdetailedrecordsofpeople'sactions—likehowoftenthesepeoplespeak

toothers,orhowlongittakessomeonetosay"Hello'1toastranger.Another

waytomeasureshynessistoaskpeoplequestions.Thetestonlytakesabout

10minutes.Itasksquestionlike"Doyoulikegoingoutalot?"andnDoyou

havemanyfriends?"Peoplemustanswereither"Yes"or"No”.These

questionscanpredicthowpeopleactuallybehaveinsocialsituations.

Supposethetesttellsyouthatsomeoneisshy.Chancesaregoodthatperson

willactshy.

Whenscientistsmeasureshyness,theyarereallycomparingdegreesof

shyness.Inotherwords,whenresearcherssaypeopleareshy,theyreally

meantheyaremoreshythanothers.

(30)

A.Becausemanypeopledon'tknowhowtobehaveinsocialsituations.

B.Becausemostpeopleareshybynature.

C.Nobodywilllaughatyouforbeingshy.

D.Shynessisdifficulttoovercome.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.Thebullwasasacredcreatureinthereligionandfolkloreoftheancient

world.Itisnotsurprising,therefore,thatthefinancialmarketsofwestern

Europeshouldbemovedbythoseancientlegendsaboutthecreativepower

ofthebull.Thestockmarketspeculatorstranslatedthatpowerintomoney

andmadeitpartofthespeechoffinancialinvestors.Thebull'sbackwas

strongenoughtocarrythegamblefsgreedformoney.Thereweresomewho

boughtstockbecausetheyexpecteditwouldriseinpriceandgivethema

goodprofit.Thiskindofspeculatorwassooncalleda"bull".

Ontheothersideofthecoinwasthe"bear".Insteadofbuyingastock,then

sellingit,thebeardidtheopposite.Hesoldastockfirst,thenboughtitback

atwhathehopedwouldbealowerprice.Thereishardevidencethat"bull”

wasstockmarketslanginEuropeinthemiddle1700*s.Suchevidencecanbe

foundintheworksofseveral18thcenturyBritishdramatists.Thefamous

ColleyCibber,forexample,describesamanwhoboastsofthemoneyhehas

beenmakingontheLondonExchange."Everyshilling,nhesays,*'outof

stocks,bulls,bearsandbubbles!'*

SamuelFootecallsoneofhischaractersa"merebullandbearbooby:the

patronoflameducks,brokersandfraudulent(欺騙性的)footbankrupts!"

Still,itisgenerallybelievedthat"bear"becamepartofstockmarketslang

longbefore“bull”didso.Theuseof"bear",wearetold,comesfromavery

oldandwell-knownfable.Thisisthestoryofamanwhosoldtheskinofa

bearevenbeforehecaughttheanimal,justassomespeculatorssoldstocks

thattheyhadnotyetbought.Englishfinanciersofthe17thcenturymadefun

ofsuchtradersandcalledthem"breakskinjobbers'1.AsanEnglishdictionary

ofthetimeexplained:"Tosellabearistosellwhatonehasnot."

Thefinancialhistoryofthepast200years,bothinAmericaandEurope,tells

somewildstoriesaboutthebearsandbullsandtheireffortstoinfluencethe

stockmarket.Someoftheirdishonestdeals,tradesandspeculationshave

givenwritersanddramatistsmuchmaterialfortheirplays,novelsandsatires.

Happily,inrecenttimes,thebearsandthebullshavebeenbroughtunder

control.Lawshavebeenpassedtokeepdishonesttradersfromtheexchanges.

Thebearsandthebullsintheirtimehavehadtheirfunandtheirprofits.They

certainlywereawildbreedintheirmoredramaticanddestructivedays,

bringingruintotheexchangesandeconomiesofnations.

Theymakecolorful,excitingreading,buttheyarepartofthepast.Today,

thankGod,thebearsandbullshavebeentamed.Theynowactlikehouse

pets—asseeninthewordsofamodemAmericanpoet,"Iplaywiththebulls

andthebears.',

Whichofthefollowingisthemostsuitabletitleforthispassage?

A.BearsandBulls

B.TheDomesticationofBears

C.PhrasesandAnimals

D.Bullfighting

32.Whatistrueabouttheproposedruleonmercury*?

A.Itwillprohibittheemissionofmercurypollutantstrictly.

B.ItwillhelpU.S.governmentdealwithclimateproblem.

C.ItwillhindertheU.S.Congressfrompassingabillongreenhousegases.

D.Itwillencouragetheproductionofmorepowerfromrenewablesources.

33.

Thepurposeofthepassageistodiscuss.

A.migrationbetweencountries

B.thereasonsofinternationalmigrants

C.migrationinsidethecountry

D.theproblemsofinternationalmigrants

五、5.ErrorCorrection?題）

34.

[S2]

35.ChildrenbornintoaBushmansocietyofSouth

Africaarecompletelydependentlyontheirfamilyfor

food.Whiletheyareveryyoung,theirmother'smilk

willbetheprimarymeanofnourishment（營養(yǎng)）.Later[Si]

theirfathers,uncles,andbrotherswillsupplythemby[S2]

meat,andtheirmothers,auntsandsisterswithwild

plantfoods.Notuntilthechildrenarefiveorsix,

perhapsmoreolder,willtheycontributetothegroup's[S3]

subsistence（生存，口糧）.

Childrenliveinthecampsoftheirparentsuntil

theirmany.Intheinterim（期間）theylearnthe

roleswhichrulestheymustlive.Tosurvive,theymust[S4]

listenwelltotheelderswhohaveexperiencednatureand

theirrewardsandpunishments.[S5]

Thenchildrengrowanddevelop.Theylearnthatis[S6]

thejobofthemalestoprovidethecampwithmeat.

Skillinhuntingisdevelopedbychildren'sgamesandby

watchingandhearingtofathersanduncles.Theyboys[S7]

aslolearnthatitwillbetheirresponsibilityasadults

toprotecttheirgroupsoffthewrongdoingsofother[S8]

groups.

Thechildrenlearnthatthefemalesarethe

gathers.Roots,nuts,berries,stems,andleavesare

collectedandbroughtbackfortheday'smeal.Itisthe

menwhosupplythecampwiththemajorityofthefood.[S9]

Theirgatheringactivitiesaccountupto80percentofthe[S10]

foodbyweight.ElizabethMarshallThomasgivesa

vividdescriptionofthegatheringofBushmanwomenin

hisbookTheharmlessPeople.

[SI]

36.

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六、6.EirorCorrection。題）

37.

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38.

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參考答案

l.AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccidentLastFridaymorningIwas

standingatthebusstopwaitingforBusNo375.Becauseseverallinespassed

bythestationanditwasrushhourmanypeoplehadgatheredtherebefore

nextbuscamesomeoffthepavementothersonthelawn.Abuspulledinto

thestationatlast.BeforeIrecognizedthenumberofthepackedbuspeople

alreadythrongedforwardandfoughttheirwaytothedoor.SuddenlyIheard

somebodyshout"Help!Help!1*Itwasfromthecrowd.Allthepassengers

lookedtowardthepointwherethesoundcamefrom.Apregnantwomanwas

lyingontheroadnearbythebusdoorbleedingallover.Iwasfrightenedand

dazed.Anambulancecameandtookthewomantohospital.Busescomeand

wentbutIjuststoodtherelostinthought.Probablybecausetimeandtidewait

fornomanpeopleinmodemsocietyarealwaysinahurrylesttheyshouldbe

leftbehindandevendismissed.Therecanneverbepeaceofmind.Thusrises

thenumberoftrafficaccident.Iftherewerelesspressureonpeoplethere

mightbefeweraccidents.AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccidentLast

FridaymorningIwasstandingatthebusstopwaitingforBusNo,375.

Becauseseverallinespassedbythestationanditwasrushhour,manypeople

hadgatheredtherebeforenextbuscame,someoffthepavement,otherson

thelawn.Abuspulledintothestationatlast.BeforeIrecognizedthenumber

ofthepackedbus,peoplealreadythrongedforwardandfoughttheirwayto

thedoor.SuddenlyIheardsomebodyshout"Help!Help!MItwasfromthe

crowd.Allthepassengerslookedtowardthepointwherethesoundcamefrom.

Apregnantwomanwaslyingontheroadnearbythebusdoor,bleedingall

over.Iwasfrightenedanddazed.Anambulancecameandtookthewomanto

hospital.Busescomeandwent,butIjuststoodthere,lostinthought.Probably

becausetimeandtidewaitfornoman,peopleinmodemsocietyarealways

inahurry,lesttheyshouldbeleftbehindandevendismissed.Therecannever

bepeaceofmind.Thusrisesthenumberoftrafficaccident.Iftherewereless

pressureonpeopletheremightbefeweraccidents.

2.MyViewonOnlineShopping(l)Intheeraofnetworkonlineshoppinghas

becomeoneofthemodernmeansbywhichpeopledotheirshopping.More

andmorecollegestudentsareenjoyingtheconvenienceandfunthat

netwoMyViewonOnlineShopping(l)Intheeraofnetwork,onlineshopping

hasbecomeoneofthemodemmeansbywhichpeopledotheirshopping.

Moreandmorecollegestudentsareenjoyingtheconvenienceandfunthat

netwo解析：本文是一篇六級作文考試中常見的議論文，要求考生就“大

學生網(wǎng)上購物”展開討論。題目要求考生首先描述這一現(xiàn)象，其次分析原

因，最后表達自己的看法，是典型的現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

［寫作提綱］

一、描述背景，引出現(xiàn)象

1.描述背景：網(wǎng)絡(luò)時代，網(wǎng)上購物成為一種流行趨勢(network,online

shopping,modern)

2.引出現(xiàn)象：大學生選擇網(wǎng)上購物，享受其帶來的方便和樂趣(college

students,enjoy,convenience,fun)

二、分析原因

1.原因一：網(wǎng)上購物價格便宜，能省錢(lowerprice,savemoney)

2.原因二：網(wǎng)上購物資源豐富，能買到商場里買不到的東西(awealthof

commodityinformation,available,everythingconceivable)

3.原因三：網(wǎng)上購物不用排隊,只需點鼠標(insteadofqueuingup,afew

clicksofmouse)

三、“我”的看法：更多人將接受網(wǎng)購，享受到選擇多、價位低的好處

(accept,cheapershopping,moreselections)

(l)intheeraof意為“在…時代

(2)過渡句，提出問題。

(3)分析原因的常用表達。

(4)Firstofall,Besides,Moreover,分析網(wǎng)上購物流行的三條原因。

(5)Inotherwords意為“換言之”，進一步解釋上文所表達的意思。

⑹常用來引出個人觀點。

3.1saDiplomaEverything?Nowadays?thereisawidelyheldbeliefthat

diplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiploma②atallcosts

andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncan

beexplainedbyatleast③tworeasons.④Ontheonehandpeoplebelieve

ahigherdiplomacan?guaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessful

careersandrespectablepositions.@Ontheotherhandthediplomapeople

hold⑦isattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisa

preconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverythingforexampletofindajobto

haveadatewithagirl.⑧Inmyopinion⑨itisnodoubtthatdiplomais

importantbecauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.Howevera

diplomacannotproveeverything?nomatterhowhighadiplomais.A

higherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindof

education.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherhe

orsheisvirtuousthesestillremainasquestions.IsaDiplomaEverything?

Nowadays?thereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Some

peoplewillgainahigherdiploma②atallcosts,andothersforcetheir

childrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyat

least③tworeasons.④Ontheonehand,peoplebelieveahigherdiploma

can⑤guaranteeaprosperousfuture,suchassuccessfulcareersand

respectablepositions.@Ontheotherhand,thediplomapeoplehold?is

attachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionfbr

peopletodoalmosteverything,forexample,tofindajob,tohaveadatewith

agirl.?Inmyopinion,⑨itisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportant,because

itshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.However,adiplomacannot

proveeverything,?nomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacan

onlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asfor

whetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuous,

thesestillremainasquestions.解析：①由題目可知這是一篇分析型作

文，需要運用“描述現(xiàn)象一解釋原因一提出解決辦法''的模式。本文按照

要求可分成二部分。第一段簡單介紹目前社會存在的現(xiàn)象；第二段分析

造成這一現(xiàn)象的具體原因；第三段闡述自己對該問題的看法。②在每

段的論述中請注意句式的變化，如定語從句、讓步狀語從句等；注意銜

接手段的使用，如however,asfor等。

4.ChangesinFamilyExpensesThestatisticfiguresgivenbythistableshow

therearesomefundamentalchangesinfamilyexpensesinChinafrom1985

to2005.TheamountofmoneyspentonfoodandclothinghasdecreChanges

inFamilyExpensesTh