讀后續(xù)寫專題第15章萬能句型

讀后續(xù)寫之萬能句型萬能片段①:復(fù)雜心情(負(fù)向)萬能片段②:不知所措(負(fù)向)萬能片段③:感激(轉(zhuǎn)變)萬能片段④:激動(dòng)(轉(zhuǎn)變)萬能片段⑤:緊張+成功(正向)萬能片段⑥:成功+結(jié)尾(正向)解析萬能片段1:復(fù)雜心情(震驚/害怕/迷茫)Foramoment,withinmyheartwasacomplexfeeling,whichmademerootedtothespot.Ishouldnothavebehavedinthatway.有一瞬間，我心中有一種復(fù)雜的感覺，令我釘在原地(全部倒裝+定從)我不應(yīng)該那樣做(虛擬語氣)(紅字通用，藍(lán)字根據(jù)題目替換）真題例子[2016浙江卷]:在她內(nèi)心有一種復(fù)雜的感覺，簡維持一動(dòng)也不動(dòng)，疲憊和無法動(dòng)彈。Withinherheartwasacomplexfeeling.Janeremainedrootedtothespot,exhaustedandunabletomove.[2021八省聯(lián)考續(xù)寫:在我內(nèi)心有巨大的驚訝和感激，我站著一-動(dòng)也丕動(dòng)，盯著那個(gè)即將從盒子里拿出午餐的女孩。Withinmyheartwereenormoussurpriseandgratitude.Istoodrootedtothespot,staringatthegirlwhowasabouttotakeouttheirlunchfromabox.[2021全國1卷]:爸爸難以置信地釘在原地，當(dāng)他看著可怕的廚房，想象雙胞胎做了啥Withinhisheartwasacomplexfeeling.Dadremainedrootedtothespotindisbelief,watchingtheterriblekitchenandimaginingwhattheyhaddone.復(fù)雜心情詞匯Complexcomplicatedemotion(s)startledfreeze(froze)adj.復(fù)雜的adj.復(fù)雜的n.情緒adj.吃驚的v.凍住，凍結(jié)berootedtothespotabruptlystand(stood)stillimaginedwhatsbhaddonethesuddensituation(因?yàn)閼峙禄虺泽@而)釘在原地突然地站住不動(dòng)那想象下某人做啥突如其來的情況萬能片段2:不知所措(茫然/緊張/害怕)基礎(chǔ)版:心在狂跳，她不知道該怎么辦。隨著數(shù)秒后，她的腦海里出現(xiàn)了一個(gè)想法。Heartbeatingwildly,shehadnoideawhattodo.Asafewsecondspassed,anideacameintohermind.升級(jí)版:(高分替換詞+比喻+名從+時(shí)間獨(dú)立主格句式)Heartbeatingwildlylikeabeast,shewasatalosswhattodonext.Acoupleofsecondsslippingaway,anideastruckherlikelightning.（獨(dú)立主格句式:獨(dú)立主語1+非謂語動(dòng)詞，句子主語2+謂語動(dòng)詞。）真題舉例練習(xí)1:她的臉頰因?qū)擂味茻?，她不知道該怎么辦。(前半句“五官”用:獨(dú)立主格)Cheeksburningwithembarrassment,shewonderedwhattodo.練習(xí)2:頓時(shí)，她的大腦一片空白，不知道該怎么辦。(前半句“大腦”用:獨(dú)立主格)Allofasudden,hermindgoingblank,shehadnoideawhattodo.練習(xí)3:被所發(fā)生的一切嚇壞了，他站原地不動(dòng)，不知道接下來怎么辦(非謂語)。Terrifiedbywhathadhappened,hewasrootedtothespot,notknowingwhattodonext.不知所措詞匯wildlylikeabeastlikelightningslipaway(be)atalossadv.狂亂地像猛獸般地像閃電般地(時(shí)間)溜走不知所措的Mindgoingblank,..Heartbeating(racing)....Cheeksburning,...wonderwhattodoacoupleof大腦一片空白,...心狂跳...臉頰在燃燒般...(不知道)想著怎么辦一些(人或物)萬能片段3:感激(感激+感悟)①Chokedwithoverwhelminggratitude,Macbowedlowtothemrepeatedly,withoutwhosehelphecouldn'thavegonethroughit.②ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethatremindedMacofthevalueofstrangers'help,inspiringhimtospreadthiskindnesstoothers.①M(fèi)ac被巨大的感激之情所哽咽，--再向他們深深鞠躬，沒有他們的幫助，他就無法度過難關(guān)。②正是這個(gè)獨(dú)特的經(jīng)歷讓Mac想到了陌生人幫助的價(jià)值，激勵(lì)他將這種善意傳播給他人。(紅字模板通用，藍(lán)字根據(jù)題目替換)提煉:①Chokedwithoverwhelming...sb1...sb2,withoutwhosehelpsb1couldn'thavedonesth.②Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethatremindedsb1ofthevalueofsth,inspiringhimtodosth.練習(xí):[2022全國1卷theforestrun]構(gòu)思結(jié)尾:David完成跑步，明白勇氣的重要t(用以上模板)①David因巨大的興奮而哽咽，他緊緊地抱著我和他的教練，沒有(我們的)指導(dǎo)，他就無法完成跑步，他堅(jiān)持這樣說。②正是這次獨(dú)特的經(jīng)歷讓大衛(wèi)想到了勇氣和信心的價(jià)值，激勵(lì)他從此勇敢地應(yīng)對(duì)挑戰(zhàn)。參考范文:(紅字模板通用，黑字根據(jù)題目替換)Chokedwithoverwhelmingexcitement,Davidhuggedmeandhiscoachtightly,withoutwhoseguidancehecouldn'thavefinishedtherun,asheinsisted.ItwasthisuniqueexperiencethathadremindedDavidofthevalueofcourageandfaith,inspiringhimtoaddresschallengesbravelyeversince.感激詞匯overwhelmingGratituderepeatedlgothroughsthvalueadj.巨大的n.感激adv.一再地度過(難關(guān))n.價(jià)值，重要性bechockedwith(+情緒n.)bowed(low)tosbcouldn'thavedonesthremindsbofsthinspiresbtodosth因..而哽咽向某人(深深)鞠躬本不能做到(但實(shí)際做了)提醒某人做某事(使某人想到某事)激勵(lì)某人做某事.萬能片段4:激動(dòng)(開心/緊張/害怕)情緒+肢體+語言O(shè)verwhelmedbywildjoy,Irosetomyfeetandpunchedmyfistintheair,shoutingoutloud,“Imadeit!".被狂野的喜悅所淹沒，我站起來，在空中揮拳，大喊道:“我做到了!”練習(xí)1:驚慌失措，我跳了起來，盡可能大聲地尖叫:“救命!”。Overcomebyasenseofpanic,Irosetomyfeet,screamingasloudasIcould,“Help!”.練習(xí)2:被一陣緊張所支配，我跳了起來，問自己說:“我該怎么辦?”。Dominatedbyaflushofnervousness,Ijumpedtomyfeet,askingmyself,“WhatshouldIdo?”練習(xí):[2021全國1卷Mother'sDaySurprise](紅字通用，黑字根據(jù)題目替換)“成功了!我們做到了!Jeff大喊大叫，她在空中揮舞著拳頭。一種溫暖的感覺充滿了她們的心，因?yàn)檫@對(duì)她們來說真的是--次難忘的經(jīng)歷。不管怎樣，她們勝利完成了一個(gè)愉悅的驚喜“Itwasasuccess!Wemadeit!”Jeffshoutedasshepunchedherfistintheair.Asenseofwarmthfilledtheirheartsinthatitwastrulyamemorableexperienceforthem.(inthat由于=because)Believeitornot,theypulledoffadelightfulsurprise.激動(dòng)詞匯madeitinthatasenseofTrulydelightful成功了;做到了由于(=because)一種..感覺(后加情緒名詞)真正地.(=really/exactly)令人快樂/愉悅的punchedsb'sfistwarmthfilledsb'sheartamemorableexperiencepulledoff(doing)sthBelieveitornot,...揮舞拳頭溫暖充盈內(nèi)心一次難忘的經(jīng)歷勝利完成(=succeedindoing)不管怎樣;不管你信不信萬能片段5:緊張+成功Heartracingandpalmssweating,hedraggedhistremblinglegsforward.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,“Everythingwillbegreat.I’llmakeit!"(成功后)Hearingtheinspiringnews,heleapedintotheairwithjoy.[2022深圳二模GoGreen](以上紅字通用，黑字根據(jù)題目替換)心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖著顫抖的雙腿向前走。深吸一口氣，他堅(jiān)定地喃喃自語道，“--切都會(huì)很好的。我能做到!”聽到這個(gè)鼓舞人心的消息，他高興地跳到了空中。相關(guān)詞匯heartracingpalmssweatinghandsshakingthroattighteninglegstrembling心跳加速著...手心出汗著...手抖著...喉嚨緊繃著..腿在顫抖著...draggedsb'slegs/feetrosetosb'sfeetleapedintotheairmurmuredtooneselftookadeepbreath拖曳著步伐站/跳起來跳起來/躍入空中喃喃自語深吸了一口氣心跳加速，手心出汗，他拖著顫抖的雙腿向前走。深吸一口氣，他堅(jiān)定地喃喃自語道，“--切都會(huì)很好的。我能做到!”聽到這個(gè)鼓舞人心的消息，他高興地跳到了空中。Heartracingandpalmssweating,Daviddraggedhistremblinglegsbacktothecourse.Hecouldfeelnothingbuthishandsshaking,heartpoundingandthroattightning.Takingadeepbreath,hemurmuredtohimselffirmly,“Everythingwillbegreat.I'llmakeit!"....Havingfinishedtherun,Davidleapedintotheairwithjoy.緊張+成功詞匯（左邊動(dòng)詞為非謂語，右邊動(dòng)詞為謂語過去式）heartracing(heartpounding)palmssweatingHandsshakingThroattighteninglegstrembling心跳加速著...手心出汗著..手抖著...喉嚨緊繃著...腿在顫抖著....draggedsb'slegs/feetrosetosb'sfeetleapedintotheairmurmuredtooneselftookadeepbreath拖曳著步伐站/跳起來跳起來/躍入空中喃喃自語深吸了一口氣萬能片段6:成功+結(jié)尾Abuzzofexcitementfilledtheairashefinallymadeit.Peterwassothrilledinthathesucceededindeliveringthespeechandconvincingthejudges.Hethoughttohimselfthathewoulddowhateverhecouldwheneverneeded.Sheddingtearsofjoy,hewasinhighspiritsthewholeday![2022深圳二模GoGreen]空氣中彌漫著一陣熱烈的興奮，他最終做到了。Peter非常激動(dòng)，因?yàn)樗晒Φ匕l(fā)表了演講并說服了評(píng)委們。他內(nèi)心想到，只要有需要，他會(huì)盡其所能。他流下了喜悅的淚水,整天都興高采烈!練習(xí):[2016年浙江高考](紅字通用，黑字根據(jù)題目替換)空氣中彌漫著一陣熱烈的興奮，Jane最終獲救了。她非常激動(dòng)，因?yàn)樗晒Φ睾驼煞驁F(tuán)聚。她內(nèi)心想到，她再也不會(huì)犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤了。流下了喜悅的淚水，夫婦兩人都興高采烈!(句首非謂語sheddingtears)AbuzzofexcitementfilledtheairasJanewaseventuallyrescued.Shewassothrilledinthatshesucceededinreunitingwithherhusband.ShethoughttoherselfthatneverwouldshemakethesamemistakeSheddingtearsofjoy,thecouplewereinhighspirits!成功+結(jié)尾詞匯Thrilledconvincejudgeshedtearstearsofjoydj.興奮的，激動(dòng)的(=delighted)v.說服，使信服n.評(píng)委/法官v.判斷流淚喜悅的眼淚Abuzzofexcitementsucceedin(doing)sthdeliveraspeechthink