高中英語北師大版必修三UNIT 7 Period 8　Writing-A Formal Email

Period8Writing—AFormalEmailUNIT7ART細(xì)讀文本寫作指導(dǎo)實(shí)踐演練細(xì)讀文本Readthepassageonpage19andchoosethebestanswer.1.WhydoesLiuZewritethisemail?A.Toaskhowtomakemusicvideos.B.Tointerviewsomeyoungplayers.C.Toaskforinformationaboutenteringafilminthefestival.D.Toaskhowtomakeasportdocumentary.√Activity1

Readforsomedetails.2.Intheemail，whichissomethingthatLiuZedoesn’twanttoknow?A.Someinformationaboutthefilmsinthefestival.B.Moreinformationabouthowtoapplyforthisfestival.C.Someinformationabouttheprizes.D.Someinformationaboutbasketball.√1.Fillintheblankstocompletethestructureaccordingtotheemailyoureadonpage19.Activity2

Readforthestructures.AformalemailSender:(1)______...Receiver:To...Subject:QuestionsAbouttheYouthShortFilmFestivalSalutation:Dear(2)___________FromSir/MadamAformalemailBeginning:(3)________ofwritingBodyEnding:Ⅰ(7)__________...Informationaboutthe(4)_____inthefestival.Moreinformationabouthowto(5)__________thisfestival.Informationaboutthe(6)______.Signature:Yours(8)_________...Purposefilmsapplyforprizesappreciatefaithfully2.Accordingtotheemailyoureadonpage19，wecanlearnwhenwewriteanemailwecanusethefollowingoutline.(寫作模板)From：<

>To：______________________________________________________________Subject：__________________________________________________________DearSir/Madam，Iamwritingtoaskfor

.Iam

yearsoldandIamastudentat

.Iwouldliketo

.Doyou

？Couldyoutellme

？Iwonderifyoucouldalsogivememoreinformationabout

.Inaddition，woulditbepossibletotellmeabout

？Iappreciateyour

andlookforwardtohearingfromyou.Yoursfaithfully，×××1.PleasefindoutthesentencesthatLiuZeusestoshowpoliterequests.(1)____________________________________________________________(2)____________________________________________________________(3)____________________________________________________________(4)____________________________________________________________(5)____________________________________________________________Activity3

Readforsomegoodsentences.Iamwritingtoaskforinformation...Iwouldliketoaskaboutthefilmsforyourfestival.Couldyoutellmeifthiskindoffilmwouldbeacceptable?Iwonderifyoucouldalsogivememoreinformation...Inaddition,woulditbepossibletotellmeabouttheprizes?2.PleasefindoutthesentencesthatLiuZeusestointroducehimself.(1)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(3)____________________________________________________________返回IamsixteenyearsoldandIamastudentatNo.1SeniorSecondaryIstartedmakingmusicvideosthreeyearsago，andIamveryfondLastyear，Imademyfirstshortfilm.

School.ofit.寫作指導(dǎo)本單元的寫作任務(wù)是寫一封詢問信息的正式電子郵件，屬于應(yīng)用文。電子郵件包括發(fā)件人、收件人、主題、稱呼、正文、結(jié)束語和簽名。1.篇章結(jié)構(gòu)(1)開頭——陳述寫信的目的和原因；(2)主體——表達(dá)自己想要了解的具體內(nèi)容和方面；(3)結(jié)尾——表達(dá)祝愿并希望盡快得到回復(fù)。2.注意事項(xiàng)(1)格式正確，要具體地寫你想表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，要注意表達(dá)清楚、簡練，讓收件人很容易得知你要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。用詞準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)，善于運(yùn)用高級(jí)句式和詞匯；(2)文章中的時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或者一般將來時(shí)；(3)語氣要誠懇、有禮貌。[常用表達(dá)]1.開頭部分常用表達(dá)Iamwritingtoaskforinformationabout...我寫信是為了問一些關(guān)于……的信息。Iwouldliketoaskaboutthefilmsinyourfestival.我想問一些關(guān)于你們電影節(jié)電影的事情。2.主體部分常用表達(dá)Couldyoutellmeifthiskindoffilmwouldbeacceptable?您能告訴我這種電影是否會(huì)被接受嗎？Iwonderifyoucouldgivememoreinformation.我想知道您能否給我更多信息。Woulditpossibletotellmeabouttheprizes?可以告訴我關(guān)于獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)的事情嗎？3.結(jié)尾部分常用表達(dá)Thankyouforyourpatience.謝謝您的耐心。Iappreciateyourhelpandlookforwardtohearingfromyou.感謝您的幫助，期待收到您的來信。Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.盼望您早日回復(fù)。返回實(shí)踐演練假定你是學(xué)生李華，下個(gè)月你將以交換生的身份到美國的一所學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)歌劇。對(duì)此，你充滿期待，但也有一些顧慮。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語給該學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席寫一封郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：1.對(duì)美國的學(xué)校生活充滿期待；2.請(qǐng)對(duì)方介紹當(dāng)?shù)氐囊恍┬畔?天氣、飲食等)；3.請(qǐng)對(duì)方介紹如何與美國學(xué)生相處。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。第一步審題謀篇[審題]寫作要求是詢問去美國做交換生需要注意的問題。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1.確定文體：這是一封詢問信息的正式電子郵件，寫作中應(yīng)注意正式電子郵件的常規(guī)格式。2.主體時(shí)態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主。3.主體人稱：由于是詢問自己去美國做交換生需要注意的問題，所以人稱應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主。[謀篇]首段：說明寫郵件的目的；中段：詢問有關(guān)問題；尾段：表示感謝和期待。第二步遣詞造句[核心詞匯](含本單元詞匯)1.交換生 ________________2.弄明白 __________3.方面 ________4.注意 _______________5.與……相處 _______________6.緊張的 ______exchangestudentfigureoutaspectpayattentiontogetalongwith...tense[連詞成句]1.我寫信詢問有關(guān)美國的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況。I’mwriting

.2.下個(gè)月我將作為交換生去你們學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)歌劇。Iwillgotoyourschooltostudyoperas

nextmonth.3.我想弄清楚當(dāng)我到美國時(shí)，在吃飯時(shí)應(yīng)該注意哪些方面？IwanttofigureoutwhenIarriveinAmerica，whataspects______________________whenI’meatingfood?toaskaboutthelifeandstudyinAmericaasanexchangestudentshouldIpayattentionto4.因?yàn)槲幕町?，我不知道怎樣與美國學(xué)生相處。Idon’tknow

becausewehavedifferentcultures.5.這件事讓我很是緊張。Thismatter

.howtogetalongwithAmericanstudentsmakesmeverytense第三步句式升級(jí)1.請(qǐng)把句1和句2按下面括號(hào)內(nèi)的提示合成一句話。(1)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(原因狀語從句)(2)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(合并成表因果關(guān)系的并列句)I’mwritingtoaskaboutthelifeandstudyinAmerica，becauseIwillgotoyourschooltostudyoperasasanexchangestudentnextmonth.Iwillgotoyourschooltostudyoperasasanexchangestudentnextmonth，soI’mwritingtoaskaboutthelifeandstudyinAmerica.2.請(qǐng)用省略結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句3。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.請(qǐng)用非限制性定語從句把句4和句5合成一句話。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IwanttofigureoutwhenIarriveinAmerica，whataspectsshouldIpayattentiontowheneatingfood?Idon’tknowhowtogetalongwithAmericanstudentsbecausewehavedifferentcultures，whichmakesmeverytense.第四步組句成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇英語短文。參考范文From：<li.hua@***>To：enquiries@***StudentUSubject：QuestionsaboutthelifeandstudyofexchangestudentsinAmericaDearSir/Madam，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MynameisLiHua.I’mwritingtoaskaboutthelifeandstudyinAmerica，becauseIwillgotoyourschooltostudyoperasasanexchangestudentnextmonth.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________