專題6.書(shū)面表達(dá)（教師版）

書(shū)面表達(dá)一20202021湖北省武漢市漢陽(yáng)區(qū)請(qǐng)用以下材料寫(xiě)一篇文章來(lái)介紹你的好朋友王強(qiáng)。要點(diǎn)如下：1.以前很怕英語(yǔ)，現(xiàn)在上課聽(tīng)講認(rèn)真，做筆記，進(jìn)步很大。2.去年去歐洲旅游，發(fā)現(xiàn)那里有很多中國(guó)制造的產(chǎn)品，感到很自豪。3.有機(jī)會(huì)與外國(guó)人交流，覺(jué)得學(xué)好英語(yǔ)很重要。4.補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)你對(duì)學(xué)英語(yǔ)的建議。要求：1.詞數(shù)：60802.內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯參考詞匯：productn.產(chǎn)品；foreignern.外國(guó)人municatewith與...交流_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ihaveagoodfriend.HisnameisWangQiang.HeusedtobeafraidofEnglish.Nowhelistenscarefullyinclass,takesnotesandmakesgreatprogress.HewenttoEuropelastyearandfoundthatthereweremanyproductsmadeinChina.Hewasveryproud.There,hehadtheopportunitytomunicatewithforeignersandthoughtitimportanttolearnEnglishwell.IthinkitisveryimportantforustolearnEnglishwell.WecanreadEnglisharticles.WecanalsolistentomoreEnglishsongs.IthinkwatchingEnglishmoviesisalsoagoodwaytoimproveourEnglish.【解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)以下材料寫(xiě)一篇文章來(lái)介紹好朋友王強(qiáng)。要點(diǎn)已給出，不能遺漏和省略。文中必須圍繞所給提示來(lái)寫(xiě)，最后必須添加兩點(diǎn)對(duì)學(xué)英語(yǔ)的建議。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文用第三人稱和第一人稱來(lái)介紹，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，也用到了一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式的變化，描述盡量用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)出來(lái)。二20192020湖北省武漢市漢陽(yáng)區(qū)你們學(xué)校在舉行以"重陽(yáng)敬老"為主題的征稿活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下中文提示，寫(xiě)一篇80個(gè)詞左右的短文。要點(diǎn)如下：1.重陽(yáng)節(jié)（DoubleNinthFestival）是我國(guó)的一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。2.你認(rèn)為尊重老人很重要，我們大家都應(yīng)該尊重老人。3.你很愛(ài)自己的爺爺奶奶，你常常去看他們，幫他們做家務(wù)，逗他們開(kāi)心。4.你對(duì)所有老人都有禮貌。在公交上你常給他們讓座。5.你還主動(dòng)照顧街坊的獨(dú)居老人，幫助打掃房屋，陪老人聊天。6.適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一條。參考詞匯：cheer...up使高興neighborhoodn.街區(qū)；街坊respectv.尊敬_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DoubleNinthFestivalisatraditionalFestivalinChina.Ithinkitisveryimportanttorespecttheoldandallofusshouldrespecttheold.Ilovemygrandparentsverymuch.Ioftengotoseethem,helpthemwiththehouseworkandamusethem.IampolitetoalltheoldpeopleandIoftengivemyseattothemonthebus.Ialsoofferedtotakecareofelderlypeoplelivingaloneinmyneighborhood.Ihelpedcleanthehouseandchattedwiththeoldman.Ithinkweshouldvisittheelderlypeopleaslongaswearefree,notonDoubleNinthFestival.【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于提綱類作文寫(xiě)作。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。三20192020湖北省武漢市江岸區(qū)假設(shè)你是小美,為了感謝外教Mike對(duì)自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上的幫助,在他即將回英國(guó)之前,請(qǐng)他來(lái)家中過(guò)周末,請(qǐng)擬寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信,要點(diǎn)如下:1.自己以前很害羞,但現(xiàn)在敢于表達(dá)自己,英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)有很大提升;2.學(xué)會(huì)了很多有趣但有效的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)新方法,如:聽(tīng)英文歌、畫(huà)思維導(dǎo)圖等；3.準(zhǔn)備送Mike中國(guó)剪圖作為饋贈(zèng),在中國(guó);剪紙可以貼在窗戶或門(mén)上祈福；4.周末會(huì)吃上中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)美食——餃子,相信Mike一定會(huì)喜歡;5.補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)對(duì)Mike的祝福。注意：1、文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;2、不得逐條翻譯,內(nèi)容要連貫得體;3、文章的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)參考詞匯:思維導(dǎo)圖mindmap中國(guó)剪紙Chinesepapercutting張貼putupDearMike,ThankyousomuchforhelpingmealotwithmyEnglish.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMike,ThankyousomuchforhelpingmealotwithmyEnglish.Iusedtobeveryshy.ButnowIdaretoexpressmyselfandmyspokenEnglishhasimprovedalot.Withyourhelp,IhavealsolearnedmanyinterestingbuteffectivenewwaysoflearningEnglish,suchaslisteningtoEnglishsongs,drawingmindmapsandsoon.IamgoingtosendyouChinesepapercuttingsasathankyou.InChina,papercutscanbeputupWindowsordoorsforblessing.BeforeyougobacktoEngland,Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomyhomefortheweekend.Onweekend,youwillhavedumplings,atraditionalChinesefood.I’msureyouwilllikethem.Ihopeyouwillalwaysbehappy.Yours,XiaoMei【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文。假設(shè)你是小美，要求你根據(jù)所給出的材料提示內(nèi)容，給你的外教Mike寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信，感謝他對(duì)自己在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上的幫助，在他即將回英國(guó)之前，請(qǐng)他來(lái)家中過(guò)周末。注意要點(diǎn)要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文采用第一人稱來(lái)展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等；語(yǔ)言的表述要符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。四20192020湖北省武漢市外國(guó)語(yǔ)學(xué)校學(xué)校即將舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，以TheChangesinMyHometown為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇6080詞的短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.家鄉(xiāng)人民過(guò)去生活貧困，房屋破舊；2.過(guò)去道路不寬敞，也不干凈；3.現(xiàn)在發(fā)生了很大變化，家鄉(xiāng)人民住房寬敞明亮，許多人擁有了自己的汽車(chē)；4.每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自各地的游客；5.對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)未來(lái)的發(fā)展提出自己的期望。提示詞：wideadj.寬敝的；ownv.擁有touristn.游客；TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall.Peoplelivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Pollutionwasveryserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.Thetrafficwasnotconvenient,sofewvisitorscamehere.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbeemorebeautiful.Themountainshaveturnedgreener,theriversclearerandtheskybluer.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldetovisitourcity.I’msuremyhometownwillbeebetterandbetterinthefuture.【解析】1.題干解讀：這是一篇命題作文，以TheChangesinMyHometown為題，文中必須包含所給提示的內(nèi)容，介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在的不同。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文用第一人稱來(lái)介紹；因?yàn)槭羌亦l(xiāng)的變化，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意承接開(kāi)頭，本文思路清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，用詞恰當(dāng)，意思通俗易懂。五20192020湖北省襄陽(yáng)市假定你所在的班級(jí)上周舉行了一次“KeepOurSchoolClean”的主題班會(huì)，你們班針對(duì)這個(gè)主題踴躍發(fā)言，提出了許多好的建議，結(jié)束時(shí)班長(zhǎng)（monitor）做了總結(jié)發(fā)言。班會(huì)很成功，大家收獲很多。于是你給校園英文報(bào)寫(xiě)了一篇報(bào)道。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示及注意事項(xiàng)，完成這篇英文報(bào)道。1．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示：1)活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、主題；2）活動(dòng)過(guò)程、內(nèi)容；3）你的簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)價(jià)。2．注意事項(xiàng)：1)字?jǐn)?shù)：90詞左右；2)短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含提示的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；4)已給的標(biāo)題及開(kāi)頭不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)，也不得抄入答題卡。AClassMeetingonKeepingOurSchoolCleanInordertostudyandliveinacleanandbeautifulenvironment,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AClassMeetingonKeepingOurSchoolCleanInordertostudyandliveinacleanandbeautifulenvironment,wehadaclassmeetingonkeepingourschoolcleanlastweekinourclassroom.Atthebeginningofthemeeting,ourheadteacherfirstannouncedthethemeofthemeeting.Thenthestudentsbegantodiscusshowtokeepourschoolclean.Somestudentsthoughtweshouldnotlitter.Weshouldthrowthegarbageintothedustbin.Otherssuggestedweshouldnotdrawonthewallandwemustprotecttheflowersandtreesoftheschool.Everyonespokeactivelyandputforwardmanygoodsuggestions.Attheendofthemeeting,themonitorgaveasummaryspeechtotheclassmeeting.Ithoughtourclassmeetingwasverysuccessful.Allofusrealizedtheimportanceofschooltidiness,andwealsounderstoodhowtokeepourschoolcleaninourdailylife.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇提綱作文。明確文章內(nèi)容：介紹班會(huì)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)及主題；班會(huì)進(jìn)行的過(guò)程及討論內(nèi)容：首先宣布班會(huì)主題，然后同學(xué)討論，最后班長(zhǎng)總結(jié)。拓展：同學(xué)們討論的建議。最后要發(fā)表自己對(duì)班會(huì)的評(píng)價(jià)。明確人稱和時(shí)態(tài)：第一人稱；一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇短文分三段進(jìn)行介紹：第一段介紹班會(huì)的主題，時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)；第二段介紹班會(huì)過(guò)程：首先班主任宣布主題，然后同學(xué)討論，最后班長(zhǎng)總結(jié)；第三段發(fā)表對(duì)班會(huì)的看法及班會(huì)收獲。短文內(nèi)容豐富，邏輯清晰，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：Atthebeginningofthemeeting，hethemeofthemeeting，throw…into，spokeactively，Attheendofthemeeting，Allofus，theimportanceofschooltidiness，keepourschoolclean，inourdailylife復(fù)合句：Somestudentsthoughtweshouldnotlitter；Otherssuggestedweshouldnotdrawonthewallandwemustprotecttheflowersandtreesoftheschool.六2020湖北省武漢市武昌區(qū)假如你是李華，你們班將舉辦一場(chǎng)告別初中生活的晚會(huì)，請(qǐng)你代表班級(jí)用英文寫(xiě)一封郵件，邀請(qǐng)你們的外教David前來(lái)參加。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：6月30日晚上7:00，本班教室；2.分享過(guò)去的幸福記憶，暢想未來(lái)的美好夢(mèng)想；3.感恩老師關(guān)愛(ài)，感謝同學(xué)友情；4.同唱一首歌曲，互贈(zèng)一份禮品；5.請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充一至兩點(diǎn)與晚會(huì)相關(guān)的活動(dòng)。注意：1.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.詞數(shù)：60~80；3.內(nèi)容連貫，不要逐條翻譯；4.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：sharen.分享memoryn.記憶presentn.禮物DearDavid:I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoourfarewellparty.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________We’reexpectingyouring.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearDavid:I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoourfarewellparty.Thepartywillbeat7:00p.m.onJune30thinourclassroom.Wehavemadeafullpreparationforit.Duringtheparty,firstwearegoingtoshareoursweetmemoriesinthepastthreeyearswitheachother.Second,weareexpectedtotalkaboutourdreamsaboutthefuture.Thenwewillgivethankstoteacherswhohavehelpedusalot.We’llalsothankourclassmatesforourfriendship.Afterthatwe’llsingasongtogetherandsendpresents.Lastbutnotleast,studentsandteacherswilltakephotostogether.We’reexpectingyouring.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書(shū)信類寫(xiě)作，根據(jù)題目要求，承接文章開(kāi)頭，按照內(nèi)容要求告訴收信人晚會(huì)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、目的以及活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，活動(dòng)內(nèi)容可自行補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)到兩點(diǎn)，可以參考題目中給出的詞匯。寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文承接第一段點(diǎn)明來(lái)信目的；第二段，應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)介紹清楚晚會(huì)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，分點(diǎn)描述活動(dòng)內(nèi)容安排；文章最后一段（題目已給出），期待對(duì)方到來(lái)。文章內(nèi)容需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。七20192020湖北省鄂州市梁子湖區(qū)最近你校針對(duì)“青少年在周末應(yīng)不應(yīng)該和朋友外出”的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)討論結(jié)果，以“Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。AgreeDisagreerelaxgooverlessons.entertainmenthaveagoodsleep...helpparentsdohousework要求：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.內(nèi)容需包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不用逐詞翻譯；3.條理清楚，語(yǔ)句連貫；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校和姓名。Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyclassmatesaboutwhetherteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Intheend,weallagreedthatgoingoutissometimes,notalways.Andteenagerscangooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends.【答案】Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?RecentlyI’vehadadiscussionwithmyclassmatesaboutwhetherteenagerscangooutwithfriendsonweekends.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Somestudentsthinktheyshouldn’tgoout.Theythinkthatstudentsneedtogoovertheirlessonsatweekends.Ifyoualwayswentout,youcan’thaveagoodsleepandifyoudon’tgoout,youcanalsohelpparentsdohousework.Theotherstudentsthinkentertainmentisasimportantasstudying.Theyhaveheavystudyduringweekdaysanditisagoodchanceforthemtorelaxattheweekend.Inaddition,goingoutcanletthemknowmoreabouttheoutsideworld.Intheend,weallagreedthatgoingoutissometimes,notalways.Andteenagerscangooutwiththeirfriendsonweekends.【解析】題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文，要求以“Shouldteenagersgooutwithfriendsonweekends?”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括同意和不同意兩派，并按表格信息分別詳細(xì)闡述原因。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章主要采用第三人稱進(jìn)行客觀論述，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；文章分為三段：第一段點(diǎn)明主題，指出討論的話題；第二段分別對(duì)兩派觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行詳細(xì)闡述；第三段進(jìn)行總結(jié)，得出結(jié)論。文章層次分明、條理清晰、語(yǔ)言精煉。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：haveopinionsabout；needtodo；goover；helpsb.do；inaddition；letsb.do。句型：that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；as+形容詞/副詞原級(jí)+as；itis+n.+forsb.todo。八20192020湖北省恩施市巴東縣假如你是李華，三年前開(kāi)始學(xué)英語(yǔ)時(shí)，聽(tīng)力和閱讀很薄弱，是來(lái)自澳大利亞的Sam同學(xué)主動(dòng)關(guān)心你、幫助你，使你走出困境。臨近他回國(guó)之際，你想對(duì)他表示感謝。根據(jù)下表中的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一份不少于80詞的留言。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)1.學(xué)英語(yǔ)時(shí)，聽(tīng)力和閱讀感覺(jué)很難；2.Sam對(duì)你的幫助和建議經(jīng)常在課余時(shí)間幫助我；多看英語(yǔ)電影、多聽(tīng)英語(yǔ)歌曲；.……(自由發(fā)揮，至少一條)3.你的收獲和感謝；DearSam,Howtimeflies!It’stimeforustosaygoodbye.YouhaveofferedmesomuchhelpinmyEnglishthatIthinkwordstoshowmythanksarefarfromenough.Istillrememberthreeyearsago,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforallyourhelp.Andbestwishesforyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSam,Howtimeflies!It’stimeforustosaygoodbye.YouhaveofferedmesomuchhelpinmyEnglishthatIthinkwordstoshowmythanksarefarfromenough.Istillrememberthreeyearsago,IhaddifficultiesinlearningEnglish.Itwasdifficultformetomemorizesomanywordsandunderstandwhatpeopleweresaying.MyspokenEnglishandwrittenEnglishwerepoor,too.However,IwassoluckythatImetyou,akindhearted,smartandpatientboy.Firstly,youtaughtmetolistenmoreandreadmore.Anditreallyhelpedmealot.Besides,yousuggestedthatIshouldwatchEnglishmoviesandsingclassicEnglishsongs.Inaddition,youtoldmetoformthehabitofreadingEnglishaloudinthemorningandreadingnovelsbeforegoingtobed.Asaresult,Ifinallymadegreatprogress.Thankyouforallyourhelp.Andbestwishesforyou!Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇為材料作文，要求以李華的身份，按照下表中的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給來(lái)自澳大利亞的同學(xué)Sam寫(xiě)一份留言，向他表達(dá)謝意，感謝他3年來(lái)在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面給你提供的幫助。1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文要求以李華的身份，用第一人稱給來(lái)自澳大利亞的同學(xué)Sam寫(xiě)一份留言，向他表達(dá)謝意，感謝他3年來(lái)在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面給你提供的幫助。講述過(guò)去的事情，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；書(shū)寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意用全所給材料，文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。九20192020湖北省黃岡市麻城市假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Emily給你發(fā)來(lái)一封電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你家鄉(xiāng)近五年的變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)提示給她回復(fù)郵件，簡(jiǎn)單介紹你家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生的變化。要點(diǎn)提示：1.環(huán)境方面（比如種花栽樹(shù)）;2.交通方式方面（比如道路,交通工具）;3.休閑方式方面(比如健身娛樂(lè));寫(xiě)作要求：1.詞數(shù)90詞左右（短文的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所給的提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。DearEmily,I’mgladtotellyouthatgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownoverthepastfiveyears.Herearesomechanges.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!I‘mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearEmily,I’mgladtotellyouthatgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownoverthepastfiveyears.Herearesomechanges.First,peopledidnotpayattentiontotheenvironmentaroundtheminthepast.Solotsofrubbishusedtobehereandthere,butnowtheyknowrubbishshouldbethrownintotherubbishbin,sothestreetsbeecleaner.What’smore,morerestroomsarebuiltnotonlyinthecitiesbutalsointhevillages.Itmakesmyhometownmorebeautiful.Second,theroadsarewiderandwider.Itisconvenientforpeopletodriveorhaveawalk.Third,peopleusedtowatchTVorplayputersathome.Butnow,theydodifferentthings.Inthemorningsorevenings,theydancetogether.Oldpeopleusuallyhaveawalkwiththeirfamilies.Theywanttoimprovetheirhealth.I’mreallyhappytoseethesegreatchangesinmyhometown.Bestwishes!Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】題干解讀：根據(jù)要求可知：要從三方面介紹家鄉(xiāng)的變化：1.環(huán)境；2.交通方式；3.休閑方式。根據(jù)題干可知，要用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)，描述發(fā)生的變化，要把過(guò)去和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行比較，介紹過(guò)去的情況要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：短文采用了總—分—總的順序介紹家鄉(xiāng)的變化：分別從環(huán)境、道路交通和休閑娛樂(lè)方式進(jìn)行比較，最后期待對(duì)方來(lái)家鄉(xiāng)參觀。高分亮點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：takeplace；payattentionto；hereandthere；what’smore;notonly…butalso;lookforwardtodoingsth.句型：含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；usedto表示一般過(guò)去時(shí)；so引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。十20202021湖北省隨州市廣水市假設(shè)Linda是你的好朋友，你們兩年沒(méi)有見(jiàn)面了。上個(gè)星期她從國(guó)外留學(xué)回來(lái)，你們很高興見(jiàn)到彼此。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，簡(jiǎn)要介紹Linda的變化。提示：1.外貌：以前個(gè)子矮，短發(fā)；現(xiàn)在個(gè)子高多了，長(zhǎng)發(fā)。2.愛(ài)好：以前喜歡打乒乓球、看電視和聊天；現(xiàn)在喜歡彈鋼琴、看書(shū)和散步。3.性格：以前外向；現(xiàn)在有些內(nèi)向要求：1.不要逐字翻譯，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.層次清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢；3.80詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ihaveafriend.HernameisLinda.Sheisabeautifulgirl.Ihaveneverseenherfortwoyears.Shecamebackfromstudyingabroadlastweek.It'sapleasureforustomeeteachother.Sheusedtolikeplayingtabletennis,watchingTVandchatting.Butnowshelikesplayingthepiano,readingandtakingawalk.Inthepast,sheusedtobeshortandhadshorthair,nowsheismuchtallerandshehaslonghair.Sheusedtobeoutgoing,butnowshechangesintoaintrovertedgirl!Whatgreatchangesshehas！【解析】這篇短文使用了大量的固定格式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如usedtpdo過(guò)去常常做某事；likedoingsth喜歡做某事；but但是等等。語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂眠B詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。十一20202021武漢市蔡甸區(qū)求新聯(lián)盟假如你是李華，班會(huì)課上老師組織大家討論假期學(xué)習(xí)和生活計(jì)劃，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以內(nèi)容提示，用英語(yǔ)匯報(bào)一下你的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:1.博覽群書(shū)，學(xué)習(xí)技能；2.健康飲食，堅(jiān)持鍛煉；3.親子交流，增進(jìn)了解；4.熱愛(ài)勞動(dòng)，分擔(dān)家務(wù)；5.熱愛(ài)公益，關(guān)愛(ài)他人；6.可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)有關(guān)信息或個(gè)人想法。注意：1.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不逐條翻譯。參考詞匯：skillv.技能municatev.交流charityactivitiesn.慈善活動(dòng)DearClassmates,Summerholidayising,andhereismyplanforit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________…Ihopeallofyoucanenjoytheingholiday.That’sall.Thankyou.【答案】Dearclassmates,Summerholidayising,andhereismyplanforit.First,I’dliketochooseseveralgoodbooksandreadthemcarefully.Thiscanhelpmeopenmymindandlearnmoreabouttheworld.Ialsothinkit’snecessaryformetolearnatleastoneskill.I’minterestedincooking,soIwilllearntocooksomedeliciousdi