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PAGEUNIT5WORKINGTHELAND如何寫爭(zhēng)論文本單元要求寫一篇爭(zhēng)論性的文章。爭(zhēng)論文通過爭(zhēng)論或說(shuō)理來(lái)表達(dá)作者的見解和主見。作者對(duì)某一問題持有一種看法，為了使讀者同意自己的看法，提出若干理由，企圖勸服他人。[基本框架]爭(zhēng)論性的文章一般分為以下三段：第一段：先闡述爭(zhēng)論的問題并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)；其次段：闡述自己支持觀點(diǎn)的緣由或者是另一方的觀點(diǎn)及緣由；第三段：做一個(gè)總結(jié)。[常用詞塊]1．a(chǎn)ccordingtoarecentsurvey依據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查2．withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展3．a(chǎn)widespreadconcernovertheissue這個(gè)問題引起了廣泛的關(guān)注4．a(chǎn)dvantagesanddisadvantages利弊；優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)5．severalpositiveaspectsasfollows如下幾個(gè)主動(dòng)的方面6．reducethedisadvantagestotheminimum把弊處削減到最低限度7．becomemoreandmorepopular變得越來(lái)越受歡迎8．twodifferentopinionstowardit對(duì)于這件事有兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)9．forthefollowingthreereasons由于以下三個(gè)緣由10．onthebasisoftheabovediscussion基于以上探討[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開頭1．Manystudentshavebeenfacedwiththeproblemof...很多學(xué)生始終面臨……的問題2．Recentlythephenomenonhasbecomeaheatedtopic.最近這種現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)熱門話題。3．Recentlytheissuehasarousedagreatconcernamong...最近問題已引起……的很大擔(dān)憂4．Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover...如今人們?cè)絹?lái)越擔(dān)憂……5．Recentlyweheld/haveheldadiscussionaboutwhether...最近我們實(shí)行了一個(gè)關(guān)于是否……的探討★正文佳句1．Asisknowntoall，...play(s)animportantpart/roleinourdailylife/modernsociety.However，differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabout...眾所周知，……在我們的日常生活/現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中起著重要的作用。然而，不同的人對(duì)……有不同的觀點(diǎn)2．Somepeople/Themajorityofthestudentsthinkit(is)agoodidea/important/useful/convenientfor...todo...有些人/絕大多數(shù)的學(xué)生認(rèn)為對(duì)……來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是一個(gè)好辦法/重要/有用/便利。3．Othersargue/claimthattheoppositeistrue.其他人認(rèn)為/聲稱，狀況恰恰相反。4．However，aseverycoinhastwosides，...alsohasitsdisadvantages.然而，事物都有兩面性，……也有它的劣勢(shì)?！镉辔督Y(jié)尾1．Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguments/statements，but...兩種觀點(diǎn)/說(shuō)法可能都有些道理，但是……2．Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove，wecandrawtheconclusionthat...從以上探討，我們可以得出……結(jié)論3．Itishightimethatwetookmeasuresto.../We'dbettertakeeffectivemeasurestoprevent...是我們實(shí)行措施……的時(shí)候了/我們最好實(shí)行有效措施以防止……4．Insummary，ifwecontinuetoignoretheissue，moreproblemswillcomeup.總而言之，假如我們接著忽視這個(gè)問題，就會(huì)出現(xiàn)更多的問題。5．Takingalltheseintoaccount，we...把全部這些都考慮在內(nèi)，我們……[升格示例]近日，你們班就中學(xué)生該不該進(jìn)行軍訓(xùn)進(jìn)行了探討。針對(duì)這一探討，請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，發(fā)表你的看法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1．軍訓(xùn)目的；2．軍訓(xùn)內(nèi)容；3．你的看法。留意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：軍訓(xùn)militarytraining[學(xué)生習(xí)作]Militarytrainingcandevelopasenseofdisciplineandteamworkinstudents.Studentsareexpectedtoimprovetheirstrongwill.Trainingprogramshaveplayedaroleinthedevelopmentofstudents.Forastudent,themilitarytrainingisoftenconsideredboring.Becausehejustfollowsadullwayofexercise,forexample,standinginthesunorrunningforalongtime.Theexerciseistoomuchforsomestudents.Studentsshouldbepermittedtodoitbasedontheirphysicalconditions.Itisnecessaryforstudentstobetrained.點(diǎn)評(píng)：1.文中出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。如其次段其次句because引導(dǎo)的緣由狀語(yǔ)從句獨(dú)立成句。2.要點(diǎn)雖然齊全，但內(nèi)容不充分，造成行文不太連貫。3.句式不夠亮麗，高級(jí)句式一般。4.沒有有效地運(yùn)用語(yǔ)句連接手段，以至于全文不太清楚，上下文不太連貫。[升格作文]Theaimofmilitarytrainingistodevelopasenseofdisciplineandteamworkinstudentsandstudentsareexpectedtoexperiencethehardshipstoimprovetheirstrongwill.Butforastudent,themilitarytrainingisoftenconsideredboringbecausehejustfollowsadullwayofexercise,forexample,standinginthesunorrunningforalongtime.Theexerciseistoomuchforsomestudentswhoareweakphysically.Thoughaskedtodobasicexercise,studentsshouldbepermittedtodoitbasedontheirphysicalconditions.Inaword,itisnecessaryforstudentstobetrained.假如你是李華，你班就化學(xué)農(nóng)業(yè)和有機(jī)農(nóng)業(yè)進(jìn)行了探討，請(qǐng)寫一篇文章闡述一下你的觀點(diǎn)。內(nèi)容包括：1．有機(jī)農(nóng)產(chǎn)品更健康，讓人放心；2．有機(jī)農(nóng)耕對(duì)環(huán)境不造成破壞；3．有機(jī)農(nóng)耕讓農(nóng)夫增加收入。留意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：pesticideresidues農(nóng)藥殘留AsfarasI'mconcerned,organicfarmingispreferabletochemicalfarming.Herearesomereasons.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allinall,I'minfavouroforganicfarming.Ihopemoreandmorefarmerswillturntoorganicfarminginthefuture.[參考范文]AsfarasI'mconcerned,organicfarmingispreferabletochemicalfarming.Herearesomereasons.Firstly,inorganicfarming,farmersareforbiddentospraychemicalpesticidesontheplants,sotherearenopesticideresiduesleftonthem.Secondly,farmersusenaturalwastefromanimals,whichwillbegoodforimprovingtheconditionofthesoil.Thirdly,organicfarmingcanincreasethefarmers'income.Withmoreandmorepeoplecaringmostabouttheirhe