讀后續(xù)寫+公園里善意的傳遞+講義 高一下學(xué)期期中英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Itwasabusydayfor20-year-oldJustin.Hishotdogstandintheparkwascrowdedwithmanycustomers.Hewaspoorsohecouldn’taffordtorentacafetosellhotdogs.Suddenly,anoldwomangottohiscounterandaskedhowmuchahotdogwas.“Theyrangefrom$3to$7,”hereplied.“Butthat’satouchexpensive.Iwasjustcurioushowmuchtheycost.Idon’twantany,”shesaidbeforewalkingaway.Justinnoticedshesataloneonabenchacrossfromhisstand.Shekeptlookinginhisdirection,andherealizedshewantedahotdogbutcouldn’taffordone.Hefeltbadforher,sohequicklybakedoneandbroughtittoher.“Iforgottotellyouthatyou’remy50thcustomeroftheday,soyougetafreehotdog!”hesaid.“Oh,isthatso?”theoldladyasked.“Thankyou.I’mEmily,bytheway.”Shetasteditimmediatelyandwasshockedhowdeliciousitwas.“It’sdifferentfromregularhotdogs,”shesaid,takinganotherbite.Justinsaid,“Ilovecooking,soIkeeptryingdifferentthingswithmyfood.Ihavecustomerswaitingforme.Haveawonderfulday,”hehurriedaway.Thenextday,whenEmilyreturned,Justintreatedhertoahotdogagain.Emilyrefusedbecauseshedidn’thavemoney,butheinsisted(堅(jiān)持).“YourfeedbackmatterstomesoIcanimprovemysauces(醬)andmybusiness!”hesaid.“Oh,you’resuchasweetboy,”Emilysmiledthroughtears.“Thankyou.”Deepdown,EmilyknewJustinwasfeedingherbecauseshecouldn’taffordthehotdog.Shetoldhimitwasn’tneeded.Buthekeptfeedinghereveryday.Oneday,whenEmilywenttotheparkagain,shesaid,“Ikeptacountofthehotdogsyouboughtme,andyou’vealreadyspent$100onme.Sonowit’smyturntohelpyou,boy.Comewithme.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。EmilyledJustintoanoldbuildingthatlookedlikeadesertedcafe._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EmilydecidedtogiveJustintheplacetostarthiscafefreeofrent.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意20歲的賈斯汀在公園經(jīng)營熱狗攤，生活貧困。一位老婦人艾米麗詢問熱狗價格后因覺得貴而離開，賈斯汀看出她想吃但買不起，便以她是第50位顧客為由免費(fèi)送她一個。此后每天賈斯汀都堅(jiān)持請艾米麗吃熱狗，稱需要她的反饋來改進(jìn)醬料和生意。一天，艾米麗說賈斯汀已為她花費(fèi)100美元，要帶他去一個地方。二、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)（一）伏筆賈斯汀對烹飪的熱愛和創(chuàng)新：文中提到賈斯汀熱愛烹飪且會在食物上嘗試不同做法，這為他后續(xù)可能在新的場所發(fā)揮廚藝特長埋下伏筆。在續(xù)寫中可以體現(xiàn)他如何利用這個機(jī)會進(jìn)一步展現(xiàn)自己的烹飪才華。艾米麗的感激與內(nèi)心的想法：艾米麗深知賈斯汀是因?yàn)樗I不起熱狗而一直投喂她，她心懷感激且覺得應(yīng)該回報(bào)。這為她后續(xù)帶賈斯汀去某個地方并幫助他做鋪墊，在續(xù)寫中要體現(xiàn)她回報(bào)的方式和賈斯汀的反應(yīng)。廢棄咖啡館的出現(xiàn)：艾米麗帶賈斯汀來到一個像廢棄咖啡館的老建筑，暗示這里可能會有新的故事發(fā)展，也許會成為賈斯汀事業(yè)的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)。（二）續(xù)寫回應(yīng)第一段：描述賈斯汀跟隨艾米麗來到廢棄咖啡館后的反應(yīng)和發(fā)現(xiàn)，可能包括對咖啡館環(huán)境的觀察、對艾米麗意圖的猜測等，為下文艾米麗的決定做鋪墊。第二段：承接上文，講述艾米麗決定將這個地方免費(fèi)租給賈斯汀開咖啡館，以及賈斯汀的驚喜和感激之情，展現(xiàn)他們之間善良的傳遞和美好的結(jié)局，同時也可以描述賈斯汀對未來的規(guī)劃和期待。三、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（一）第一段賈斯汀對廢棄咖啡館外觀和內(nèi)部環(huán)境的初步印象描寫，如破舊程度、空間大小等。他內(nèi)心的疑惑和猜測，思考艾米麗帶他來這里的目的。可以適當(dāng)加入一些細(xì)節(jié)，比如咖啡館內(nèi)殘留的一些物品或痕跡，引發(fā)賈斯汀的聯(lián)想。（二）第二段艾米麗表明要免費(fèi)給賈斯汀這個地方開咖啡館的決定和她的理由闡述。賈斯汀的驚喜、激動和感激的表現(xiàn)，包括語言、表情和動作等。對賈斯汀未來在咖啡館經(jīng)營的簡單展望，如他的計(jì)劃、夢想以及對艾米麗的感謝承諾等。四、故事線故事以賈斯汀在公園賣熱狗為起點(diǎn)，遇到艾米麗后展開善良的互動，賈斯汀每天免費(fèi)給艾米麗熱狗，艾米麗心懷感激。接著艾米麗帶賈斯汀到廢棄咖啡館，最終決定免費(fèi)給他用于開咖啡館，故事線圍繞著善良的給予與回報(bào)，以及賈斯汀事業(yè)可能的轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)展開。五、情感線從賈斯汀對艾米麗的同情和善意，到艾米麗的感激，再到最后艾米麗決定幫助賈斯汀時雙方的感動與喜悅，情感線隨著故事發(fā)展逐漸升溫，體現(xiàn)了人與人之間溫暖的情感交流和善良的力量。六、主旨升華句（5句英文）Kindnessbegetskindness,andasmallactoflovecanleadtoabeautifulcycleofgivingandreceiving.

（善有善報(bào)，一個小小的愛的舉動可以引發(fā)給予和接受的美好循環(huán)。）Whenwereachouttohelpotherswithapureheart,weoftenfindunexpectedblessingsinreturn.

（當(dāng)我們用一顆純凈的心去幫助別人時，我們常常會得到意想不到的回報(bào)。）Thepowerofcompassioncantransformlivesandcreateopportunitieswherethereseemedtobenone.

（同情的力量可以改變生活，在看似沒有機(jī)會的地方創(chuàng)造機(jī)會。）Inaworldfullofhustleandbustle,thesimpleactofsharingandcaringcanmakeahugedifference.

（在一個忙碌的世界里，分享和關(guān)心的簡單行為可以產(chǎn)生巨大的影響。）Truewealthliesnotinmaterialpossessionsbutinthekindnessweshowandtherelationshipswebuild.

（真正的財(cái)富不在于物質(zhì)財(cái)富，而在于我們所表現(xiàn)出的善良和我們所建立的關(guān)系。）七、寫作示范（一）EmilyledJustintoanoldbuildingthatlookedlikeadesertedcafe.Justin'seyeswidenedashetookinthedilapidatedexterior.Thepaintwaspeelingoffthewalls,andthewindowsweredusty.Astheyentered,hesawtheoldfurniturescatteredaroundandacounterthatseemedtohaveseenbetterdays."Whatisthisplace,Emily?"heasked,hisvoicefilledwithcuriosity.Emilysmiledmysteriouslyandsaid,"Justwaitandsee,boy."Justinwalkedaround,imaginingwhatitcouldbewithalittlebitofwork.Hefeltatingeofexcitementmixedwithuncertainty.EmilydecidedtogiveJustintheplacetostarthiscafefreeofrent.Justinwasstunned.Hecouldn'tbelievehisears."Emily,areyousure?Thisistoomuch,"hesaid,hiseyesshiningwithgratitude.Emilynoddedfirmly."You'vebeensokindtome.Thisismywayofhelpingyou.Ibelieveinyourtalentandyourkindness.Makethisplaceasuccess."JustinhuggedEmilytightly,tearswellingupinhiseyes.Hevowedtomakethebestofthisopportunity.Hestartedplanningimmediately,thinkingaboutthenewmenu,thedecoration,andhowhewouldmakethiscafeawarmandinvitingplace.Heknewthatthiswasachanceofalifetime,andhewasdeterminedtomakeitcount,notjustforhimselfbutalsotorepayEmily'skindness.（二）EmilyledJustintoanoldbuildingthatlookedlikeadesertedcafe.Thedoorcreakedastheypusheditopen.Inside,thesmellofoldwoodandahintofsomethinglongforgottenfilledtheair.Justingazedaroundinamazementattheworn-outtablesandchairs,andthefadedpostersonthewalls."Emily,whyhaveyoubroughtmehere?"heasked,hisheartpoundingwithanticipation.Emilywalkedovertoawindowandwipedawaythedust."Thisplacehaspotential,Justin.Ithinkyoucanseeittoo,"shesaidwithatwinkleinhereye.Justinnoddedslowly,startingtounderstandherintention.EmilydecidedtogiveJustintheplacetostarthiscafefreeofrent.Justinwasspeechlessforamoment,thenahugesmilespreadacrosshisface."Emily,Idon'tknowhowtothankyou.Thisisadreamcometrue,"hesaid,hisvoicecrackingwithemotion.Heimmediatelybeganvisualizinghowhewouldtransformthespace.Hethoughtofthedeliciousaromasofhisspecialhotdogsfillingtheroom,andthehappycustomerschattingandenjoyingtheirmeals.HepromisedEmilythathewouldworkhardandmakethecafeaplaceshewouldbeproudof.Asheleftthatday,hisstepswerelighter,andhisheartwasfullofhopeandgratitude.Heknewthatthiswasthebeginningofanewchapter,andhewasreadytoembraceitwithallhisheart,thankstoEmily'sgenerousgiftofkindness.參考答案EmilyledJustintoanoldbuildingthatlookedlikeadesertedcafe.“Whatisthisplacefor?”Justinasked,confused.“It’snowyours,Justin.Thisisyourcafé,”shesaid,andJustinlookedather,puzzled.“Mycafé?Whatdoyoumean?