高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專題之助人類跨越陌生的善意：腎移植后的溫暖情誼講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Manyorgantransplants(器官移植)comefromthosewhoarebloodrelativesorclosefriends.It’srareforapersontomakealivingorgandonationtoastranger.Notsurprisingwhenyouconsidertheoperativerisksandotherpotentialproblems.That’swhatPaulWagnerthoughtuntilhereadanarticleabout

,awebsitethatconnectspeoplewhoneedtransplantswiththosewillingtobedonors(捐贈(zèng)者),Paulgrewupinapoorfamilyandadmitstomakingmanymistakesinhisyouth,includingusingdrugs.“ButIalwaysgotanotherchance,”hesaid.Paulsaidhelpcamewhenheneededitmost,andbecauseofthat,hewantedtogivesomeoneelseachance.ThatsomeoneturnedouttobeformeroperasingerGailTomas,whowassufferingfromkidney(腎)failureandbadlyneededanewkidney.ButherhopesforadonorweresoslightbecauseofherO+

bloodtype.Paul,alsotypeO+,emailedGail,offeringtodonatehiskidneytoher.Hesaid,“Itwouldbewrongofmenottohelp.”Thatattitude,however,wasnotsharedbymostsurgeons,whorefusedtoparticipate.ThesurgeonwhoagreedonlydidsoafterlonginterviewswithPaultobecertainabouthismotivation.ThetransplantfinallytookplaceonNationalDonorDay.AfraidthatGailandherfamilywouldfeeltiedtohimmerelyoutofappreciation,PaulmadeitcleartoGailthathedidn’twanttogettoknowher.ButGailinsistedonmakingfriendswithhimandwastryingtofindanopportunitytobreakdownthebarrierstotheirfriendship.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThenGail’sfirstbirthdayafterthetransplantwasapproachingandshegotanidea.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theirfriendshipstartedafterthebirthdayparty.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意器官移植大多在血親或好友間進(jìn)行，陌生人活體捐贈(zèng)很少見。保羅?瓦格納看到一個(gè)連接移植需求者和捐贈(zèng)者的網(wǎng)站后，決定為患腎衰竭且血型特殊（O+）、很難找到腎源的前歌劇演唱家蓋爾?托馬斯捐贈(zèng)腎臟。多數(shù)外科醫(yī)生拒絕參與，只有一位經(jīng)過長時(shí)間詢問保羅動(dòng)機(jī)后同意手術(shù)。術(shù)后，保羅不想讓蓋爾因感激而與自己有過多聯(lián)系，但蓋爾想和他做朋友并試圖打破障礙。五要素分析人物：保羅和蓋爾。時(shí)間：從保羅決定捐贈(zèng)到蓋爾術(shù)后一段時(shí)間。地點(diǎn)：未提及，主要圍繞手術(shù)相關(guān)和兩人的生活。起因：蓋爾腎衰竭需腎移植，保羅想幫助她。經(jīng)過：保羅聯(lián)系蓋爾，經(jīng)歷手術(shù)困難，術(shù)后保羅態(tài)度冷淡，蓋爾想交友。結(jié)果：蓋爾想進(jìn)一步發(fā)展與保羅的關(guān)系。幾處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：蓋爾想打破與保羅之間的友誼障礙?；貞?yīng)：第一段續(xù)寫蓋爾借生日派對(duì)邀請(qǐng)保羅，嘗試?yán)P(guān)系。伏筆：保羅不想因感激建立關(guān)系，但內(nèi)心善良?；貞?yīng)：第二段續(xù)寫在派對(duì)上兩人交流，保羅被打動(dòng)，友誼開始發(fā)展。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段情感線：期待、緊張，蓋爾期待保羅接受邀請(qǐng)，又擔(dān)心他拒絕。故事線：蓋爾精心準(zhǔn)備邀請(qǐng)，保羅收到邀請(qǐng)后內(nèi)心有所觸動(dòng)，考慮是否參加。第二段情感線：溫暖、感動(dòng)，雙方在派對(duì)上分享彼此故事，情感升溫。故事線：描述派對(duì)上溫馨的氛圍、兩人的交流內(nèi)容，展現(xiàn)友誼開始建立。主旨升華句Truekindnessisabridgethatcanconnecttwostrangers'heartsdeeply.Selflessgivingnotonlysaveslivesbutalsosowstheseedsofbeautifulfriendship.Intheactofhelpingothers,wemayunexpectedlyfindpreciousfriendshipswaitingforus.Alife-savinggiftcanbreakdownthewallsbetweenpeopleandbuildabondoflove.Thebeautyofhumanityshinesbrightlywhenstrangersbecomefriendsthroughactsofkindness.寫作示范第一篇ThenGail’sfirstbirthdayafterthetransplantwasapproachingandshegotanidea.SheplannedtoholdasmallbutwarmbirthdaypartyandinvitedPaulasthespecialguest.Shespentdayspreparing,makingsureeverythingwasperfect.Shewroteaheartfeltletterwiththeinvitation,tellingPaulhowmuchshevaluedhisgiftandhispresenceatthepartywouldbethebestgiftforher.WhenPaulgottheinvitation,hewashesitantatfirstbutthendecidedtogo.

Theirfriendshipstartedafterthebirthdayparty.Attheparty,GailwelcomedPaulwithopenarms.Theysatandtalkedforhours.Paulsharedhispaststrugglesandhowhefoundmeaninginhelpingher.Gailtoldhimabouthercareerandhowsheovercamedifficulties.Theybothfeltastrongconnection,andtheirfriendshipgrewfromthatday.第二篇ThenGail’sfirstbirthdayafterthetransplantwasapproachingandshegotanidea.ShethoughtitwasagreatchancetoshowPaulhergratitudeandstartafriendship.Sheorganizedabirthdaypartywithathemerelatedtonewlifeandhope.ShesentPaulaninvitationwithaphotoofherselflookinghealthy.Shewrotethatthisnewlifewasagiftfromhimandhopedhecouldcelebratewithher.Paulreceiveditandfelthersincerity.

Theirfriendshipstartedafterthebirthdayparty.WhenPaularrived,Gailintroducedhimtoallherfamilyandfriends.TheytoldstoriesaboutGail'srecovery.Paulwasmovedbytheirlove.Asthepartywenton,heandGailfoundtheyhadsimilarinterests.Theylaughedandjoked,andabeautifulfriendshipbegantobloom.第三篇ThenGail’sfirstbirthdayafterthetransplantwasapproachingandshegotanidea.ShedecidedtohaveauniquebirthdaypartyandmakePaulthecenterofattention.ShepreparedaslideshowofherrecoveryjourneywithPaul'shelphighlighted.Shealsopreparedaspecialthank-youspeech.ShesenttheinvitationtoPaul,hopinghewouldcomeandfeelhergenuineappreciation.Paulwassurprisedbytheinvitationandfeltasofteninginhisheart.

Theirfriendshipstartedafterthebirthdayparty.Attheparty,Gaildeliveredherspeech,andthereweretearsinhereyes.Paulwasdeeplytouched.Theythentalkedaboutlife,dreams,andthemeaningofgiving.Theyrealizedtheycouldbegreatfriends.Theirlaughterfilledtheroom,andanewchapteroffriendshipopened.參考答案ThenGail’sfirstbirthdayafterthetransplantwasapproachingandshegotanidea.Sheaskedherfamilytohelphermakeahandmadephotobookofherlifebeforeandafterthetransplant,withaspecialsectiondedicatedtoPaul.Sheplannedtog