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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasshoppingataclothingstoretofindabirthdaygiftforafriend.Forafewmoments,IforgotaboutthegiftwhenIsawsomeskinnyjeans.I'ddreamedofpurchasingthem,butIalwaysputthatthoughtonthebackburnersincemostgirlswearingthemweremuchyounger.Thisday,though,myeagernesswasstronger.IgrabbedjeansinmysizeandwalkedtothedressingroomwhereIwasgreetedbyayoung,cheerfulgirl.Shesaidinaloudvoice“Oh,you'lllookfine."Inthedressingroom,Iheldupthejeansinfrontofme.ButwouldIbebraveenoughtowearthem?Irarelyworejeans,letaloneskinnyjeans.Islippedthejeansovermylegs.Theyweretight,butIhadgonethisfar,soItriedhardtopullthemuptomywaist.TherewasnowayIwasabletozipperthosejeans.Theyweretootight.Itriedtositdowntotakeoffthejeans,butmykneeswouldn'tbendatall,Ileanedonthewallforsupporttotakeoffthejeans.However,myfootgotstuck,andIfelltothefloorwithaloudnoise.Thegirlcalledout,“Areyouokay?”Ilookedoutsideandcouldseeherwalkingtowardmydressingroom.Clearly,ifIcouldseeher,shecouldseeme.“I'mokay,"Iyelledout.“Ijustneedalargersize.”ShemadeaU-turntogetmeanotherpair.Ihopedthatwouldgivemetimetostandup.IfiguredifIcouldbendmyrightlegslightly,I'dbeabletotakethemoff.Tryinghard,Icouldn'thelplaughing.However,mylaughterwasstoppedbythegirl'ssoftvoice.Itriedtoanswerbutcouldn'tgetthewordsoutofmymouthwithoutlaughing.Shetriedtohandmethelargerjeansthroughthebottomofthedoor.“Holdon,I'mcoming,”IassuredherasItriedtomoveclosertothedoor.“Comein,"Isaid.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
ThereIwas,onthefloor,trappedinthejeans."_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________NotuntilIgothomedidIrealizeIhadforgottentobuyagift.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意我在服裝店給朋友選生日禮物時(shí),看到心儀已久的緊身牛仔褲,就想試穿一下。試穿時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)褲子太緊拉不上拉鏈,坐下脫褲子時(shí)膝蓋無(wú)法彎曲,腳還卡住了,摔倒在地。店員聽(tīng)到聲音詢問(wèn),我謊稱要大一號(hào),希望趁她拿褲子的時(shí)間站起來(lái)。后來(lái)店員過(guò)來(lái),我讓她進(jìn)來(lái)幫忙。五要素分析人物:我和年輕的女店員。時(shí)間:在服裝店購(gòu)物時(shí)。地點(diǎn):服裝店的試衣間。起因:我想試穿一直渴望的緊身牛仔褲。經(jīng)過(guò):試穿時(shí)遇到困難,摔倒,和店員溝通。結(jié)果:店員過(guò)來(lái)準(zhǔn)備幫我。幾處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:我被困住且店員要進(jìn)來(lái)。回應(yīng):第一段續(xù)寫應(yīng)描述店員進(jìn)來(lái)后的尷尬又好笑的場(chǎng)景。伏筆:我本來(lái)是買禮物的。回應(yīng):第二段續(xù)寫提到我回家才想起,然后返回購(gòu)買。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段情感線:極度尷尬,但因店員的反應(yīng)又有一絲輕松。故事線:詳細(xì)描述店員看到我被困的反應(yīng)和幫助我脫困的過(guò)程,有搞笑細(xì)節(jié)。第二段情感線:恍然和無(wú)奈,對(duì)自己因牛仔褲風(fēng)波而忘記買禮物感到好笑。故事線:講述回家后的發(fā)現(xiàn),以及后續(xù)回去買禮物時(shí)對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷的回味。主旨升華句Life'slittleembarrassmentsarelikespicesthataddflavortoourordinarydays.Eveninthemostawkwardmoments,abitoflaughtercanturnabadsituationaround.Sometimes,ourpursuitofsomethingwelovecanleadtohilariousandmemorablesituations.Embarrassingexperiencesarejustunexpecteddetoursonthejourneyoflife,makingitmorecolorful.Inthechaosofourownmaking,wecanfindthebeautyofhumanconnectionandlaughter.寫作示范第一篇ThereIwas,onthefloor,trappedinthejeans.Thegirlwalkedin,andhereyeswidenedinsurprise.Thenshecouldn'tholdbackherlaughter.Ijoinedin,andtheawkwardnessmeltedaway.Shehelpedmefreemyfootandpulloffthejeans.Wejokedaboutmy"jeansadventure"asIputonthenewpair.
NotuntilIgothomedidIrealizeIhadforgottentobuyagift.Ishookmyheadatmyforgetfulness.Butthememoryofthedressingroomincidentmademesmile.Thenextday,Ireturnedtothestore.AsIshoppedforthegift,Isharedmystorywiththecashier,spreadingthelaughter.第二篇ThereIwas,onthefloor,trappedinthejeans.Thegirlopenedthedoorandgaspedbeforegiggling.Shelentmeahand,andwithsomestruggle,wegotthejeansoff.Ithankedher,andwelaughedabouthowsillyIlooked.Iputonthelargersizeandshowedher.
NotuntilIgothomedidIrealizeIhadforgottentobuyagift.Ifeltabitsillybutalsoamusedbymydistraction.Later,whenIwentbacktothestore,Irememberedthewholeeventwithagrin.ItwasanembarrassingyetfunepisodethatIwouldn'tsoonforget.范文:ThereIwas,onthefloor,trappedinthejeans.Seeingthis,thesalesgirlstartedpullingthelegsinanattempttofreeme.Now,wewerebothroaringwithlaughter.Finally,inwhatseemedlikedforever,thewarofpullingoffthejeanswasover.Theskinnyjeanswerefinallyoff,andIwasfree,butthelaughtercontinuedasIstoodup.Thesalesgirlhandedmethelargersizedjeanstotryon.“No,thankyou.IthinkI'llstickwithmysafeleggings!”“Oh,youaresoadorable,"shesaidonceagain.NotuntilIgothomedidIrealizeIhadforgottentobuyagift.Buttomyrelief,Ilearnedtwothingsthatday.On
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