第14斬單元話題滿分寫作精練精析20篇（期末真題名校模擬）-2021-2022學(xué)年八年級英語下學(xué)期期末復(fù)習(xí)挑戰(zhàn)滿分百題斬（牛津譯林版）

20212022學(xué)年八年級英語下學(xué)期期末復(fù)習(xí)挑戰(zhàn)滿分百題斬（牛津譯林版）第14斬單元話題滿分寫作精練精析（期末真題+名校模擬）1．八(5)班將舉行一次主題班會，暢談一年來自己的收獲與變化。請為Peter準(zhǔn)備一份80字左右的演講稿，具體內(nèi)容如下表：過去現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)讀書少，花時(shí)間在……喜歡讀書，閱讀使我……飲食經(jīng)常吃漢堡和可樂，很少鍛煉……每天吃水果蔬菜，堅(jiān)持鍛煉禮儀在公共場所大聲喧嘩，插隊(duì)推擠……舉止文明，禮貌待人愛心不知道關(guān)心他人……參加慈善活動……；幫助需要幫助的人展望未來

相信自己會做得更好……要求:1.內(nèi)容完整，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語言準(zhǔn)確，語句通順，語意連貫：2.詞數(shù)不少于80。開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)：3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校。Hello,everyone.I’mPeterfromClass5,Grade8.Backtothelifeinthelastyear,IthinkIhavechangedalotandmadegreatprogressinmanyways.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforlistening!2．李強(qiáng)是你班上的一名同學(xué)，這學(xué)期他變化很多，學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大。請你根據(jù)下表中的要點(diǎn)提示，完成一篇英文作文，不要逐字翻譯。過去1.花很多時(shí)間打電腦游戲；2.討厭看書?，F(xiàn)在1.每天看一小時(shí)書；2.喜歡看科學(xué)類書籍，覺得有趣；3.從圖書館借書或在iPad上科學(xué)故事。原因1.從書中獲得樂趣；2.獲得知識；3.打開新世界注意：詞數(shù)80左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．請根據(jù)提示，寫一篇有關(guān)中國的旅游指南，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。要求語言通順，條理清晰，詞數(shù)不少于80詞。要點(diǎn)：1、地處亞洲，由34個(gè)省份（province）和地區(qū)（district）組成。首都北京是現(xiàn)代化的大城市；2、和英國一樣，有悠久的歷史；3、有很多名勝?？梢詤⒂^長城。蘇州、杭州因?yàn)閳@林而出名。有很多自然風(fēng)光，如黃山；4、不同地區(qū)的天氣情況不同。去之前做好準(zhǔn)備；5、使用人民幣。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．學(xué)校英語角本周的主題是“Myfavouritecountry”。Andy最喜歡的國家是法國，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇70詞左右的短文介紹法國。Location:westernEuropeHistory:manycenturiesParis:thecapital,culturalcentreTourism:attract83millionforeignersayear,gardensandbeaches,TheEiffelTower,DisneylandParisMoney:EUROMyfavouritecountryisFrance.IhopeIcouldvisititsomeday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．目前，你們班有許多學(xué)生不喜歡閱讀。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析并提出意見。詞數(shù)80左右。原因1）花太多時(shí)間做作業(yè)；2）沒有讀書習(xí)慣；3）時(shí)間花在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上課外閱讀的好處1）更好地了解世界；2）學(xué)會如何思考；3）生活更加豐富多彩你的建議……（至少兩點(diǎn)）注意：詞數(shù)80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．莎士比亞說，“生活里沒有書籍，就像沒有陽光?！遍喿x對人的成長的影響是巨大的，但根據(jù)調(diào)查，現(xiàn)在很多中學(xué)生沒有主動閱讀的習(xí)慣，享受不到閱讀的樂趣，請以“BeaBetterReader”為題，寫一篇短文：(1)簡單分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因；(2)結(jié)合自身情況、談?wù)勯喿x的意義(如：獲取知識、放松……)；(3)如何成為更好的閱讀者?(如制定讀書計(jì)劃……)要求：(1)80詞左右(標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名。BeaBetterReaderReadingisveryimportantinourlife,but_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．現(xiàn)在人們的生活條件越來越好，生活品質(zhì)也越來越高，很多人在假期選擇出游，帶上家人，享受大自然的美。請以“Adayout”為題，寫一篇不少于80字的短文，介紹你和家人最近一次出游的情況，必須包含以下要點(diǎn)：1.出行的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，交通方式等

2.活動3.感受

Adayout__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．目前，你所在的學(xué)校正在積極創(chuàng)建全市文明校園，請你以校學(xué)生會的名義就“創(chuàng)建文明校園”這一主題，根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一封80詞左右的倡議書。要點(diǎn)提示如下：1.保持教室的整潔，不亂扔垃圾；

2.不在公共場所大聲喧嘩，圖書館保持安靜；3.遵守交通規(guī)則，總是排隊(duì)；

4.舉止有禮，互幫互助；

5.……Dearschoolmates,Ourschoolistryingtobeabetterplaceforallofus.Weknowgoodmannersarereallyimportant.Andwecandosomethingforit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sstartfromourselves!TheStudents’UnionJune13th,20189．不學(xué)禮，無以立。儀容儀表有禮儀、行為舉止有禮儀、人際交往有禮儀。禮，乃中華民族之傳統(tǒng)，亦是做人之根本。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“MannersinLives（生活中的禮儀）”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀銥槭裁凑J(rèn)為良好的禮儀很重要，以及你在生活中是如何踐行的。提示詞語：socialdevelopment,respect,friendly,public提示問題：●Whydoyouthinkgoodmannersareimportant?●Whatdoyoudoinyourlives?Goodmannersareimportantinourlives.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10.假設(shè)你所在的城市即將舉辦國際貿(mào)易博覽會。有關(guān)部門現(xiàn)向全社會招聘志愿者。要求：1．具有為國際友人服務(wù)的熱情；2．掌握豐富的文化知識，既是服務(wù)人員，也是文化的使者；3．具有流利的英語表達(dá)能力，能做好溝通工作。假如你叫林平平，請根據(jù)以上要求，寫一封想當(dāng)博覽會志愿者的申請信。要求：字跡工整，80詞左右。開頭、結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。生詞：國際貿(mào)易博覽會theInternationalTradeExpositionDearSirorMadam,Thankyoufortakingyourtimetoreadmyletter.AstheingoftheInternationalTradeExposition,I'dlikeverymuchtobeavolunteer._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tosumup,IbelieveIcanbeaqualifiedvolunteer.IwillvalueitanddoallIcanifIcouldbeacceptedtobeone.Yours.LinPingping11．上周，你參加了某公益組織開展的“Helpingunattendedchildren(留守兒童)”活動，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英文報(bào)道并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。?nèi)容提示：1.第一天帶孩子們?nèi)ル娪霸嚎磩赢嬈洞篝[天宮》；2.第二天教孩子們學(xué)習(xí)中國傳統(tǒng)技藝，包括剪紙、皮影戲等；3.第三天和孩子們討論中外肢體語言的差異，如……；4.你對這次活動的感受。要求：1.詞數(shù)100左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.內(nèi)容必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使文章連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或人名。參考詞匯：《大鬧天宮》HavocinHeavenHelpingunattendedchildrenLastweekwasmemorablebecausewedidsomemeaningfulworkforunattendedchildren.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．你是李華，是一名初二年級的學(xué)生干部。網(wǎng)課結(jié)束返校后，你發(fā)現(xiàn)一些同學(xué)在學(xué)習(xí)方面感到吃力。你希望組織一批學(xué)習(xí)互助志愿者，開展“同輩互助”的活動。請你寫一封招募信，招募志愿者。內(nèi)容包括：活動目的幫助學(xué)習(xí)有困難的同學(xué)活動時(shí)間五月開始；每個(gè)科目，每周一次；放學(xué)后志愿者要求有時(shí)間；擅長某些科目；有意愿幫助同學(xué)報(bào)名方式4月30日之前，前往學(xué)生會辦公室報(bào)名字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右?？蛇m當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)。參考詞匯：同輩互助：PeerAssistanceVolunteersareneededRecently,somestudentshavedifficultyinstudyingafterwerestarttheofflinelessonsatschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．根據(jù)你校校刊KIDSMAG中的HAVEYOURSAY欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,AtKIDSMAGweliketoshareyourideasaboutourschool.Inmycolumn,HAVEYOURSAY,youcanletotherkidsknowwhatyouthink.Thismonthwewantyoutohaveyoursayaboutbeingaresponsible（責(zé)任感的）studentinourschool:Whatgoodmannersshouldwehaveatschool?Whatvoluntaryworkcanwedoatschool?Howcanweliveagreenlifeatschool?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Tom注意：1.對所有要點(diǎn)注意陳述，省略號處適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意分段。2.詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。3.文章不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Iamgladtosharemyideasaboutbeingaresponsiblestudentinyourschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．水資源匱乏是世界難題之一，但我們的同學(xué)中仍然存在不少浪費(fèi)水的情況。請根據(jù)這種現(xiàn)象寫一篇英語短文。要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：7090字。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.內(nèi)容包括：（1）這種現(xiàn)象的危害是什么；（2）我們該如何節(jié)約水（至少兩條建議）（3）號召同學(xué)們節(jié)約水資源。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的班級與人名。Let’ssavewaterThelackofwaterisoneofthebiggestproblemsintheworld.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Saveenergy,loveourEarth”.(以“節(jié)約能源，熱愛地球”為題寫一篇60詞以上的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)Suggestedoutlines:Whyshouldwesaveenergy?Asmiddleschoolstudents,whatshouldwedotosaveenergy?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．假設(shè)你是李明，去年剛到南京來讀書，你的筆友Shirley也想來南京游玩，為了更好地計(jì)劃這趟旅行，她給你寫了一封郵件，請根據(jù)Shirley的郵件內(nèi)容，給她寫封回信。DearMing,Howareyou?IknowyoustudyinNanjingnow.Nanjingisanoldcitywithalonghistory.Hasitchangedalotovertheyears?Couldyoutellmethechanges?IwanttovisitNanjingthisSummerVacation.Iwanttoknowthehistoryofthecityandenjoythebeautifulviews.Couldyougivemesomeadvice?Yours,Shirley注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.回復(fù)必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使全文連貫，通順;3.文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearShirley,Thankyouforyouemail.I’mveryhappytohelpyoulearnaboutNanjing.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyousoon.Yours,LiMing17．假定你是李華，上周六你們學(xué)校開展了“HelpingUnattendedChildren(幫助留守兒童)”的志愿活動，你的朋友Tom對此活動非常感興趣，請你根據(jù)以下提示，給你的朋友Tom寫一郵件介紹此活動。提示：1）志愿活動的內(nèi)容（如：看卡通電影，了解傳統(tǒng)文化，去游樂園，讀書分享）2)志愿活動的感受……注意：1）字?jǐn)?shù)：80字左右（開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）2）文章必須包含所有提示內(nèi)容，并可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）條理清楚，行文連貫。DearTom,Ithasbeenalongtimesincewemetlasttime.Howiseverythinggoing?Ourschoolheld__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua18．假如你是李華，你的筆友Dave將來中國做客，向你請教一些中國的禮儀習(xí)俗，請根據(jù)下列圖片要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇作文。要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息；4.詞數(shù)；不少于70詞。(開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))DearDave,How’sitgoing?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua19．上周六你們班組織了一次去養(yǎng)老院為老人獻(xiàn)愛心的公益活動。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫一篇日記。時(shí)間8:00方式Bybike路上用零用錢買蔬菜、水果和鮮花給老人?；顒由衔缦匆路驋叻块g，整理床鋪中午煮飯，和老人共進(jìn)午餐下午有的和老人聊天，有的唱歌跳舞，五點(diǎn)騎車返回你的感受……(至少一點(diǎn))提示詞：

buy，（v.）買；ontheway在路上；pocketmoney零用錢；washclothes，洗衣服；makethebed整理床鋪；chatwithsb.和……聊天；goback返回。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名；2.包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；3.字跡工整，語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚；4.詞數(shù)90詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）May8th,2021

SaturdaySunnyOurclasswenttohelptheoldpeopleinanoldpeople’shome.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________20．假如你是班長，你負(fù)責(zé)制定你們班五月份的志愿者活動計(jì)劃。請你寫一篇80—100詞的發(fā)言稿，代表班委會向全班的志愿者介紹一下該月的活動安排。要求：1.活動計(jì)劃中有兩項(xiàng)內(nèi)容需自擬。2.發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入要求詞數(shù)。時(shí)間活動計(jì)劃5月10日去火車站清理垃圾5月17日去養(yǎng)老院……5月24日去人民公園……5月31日幫助某社區(qū)的小學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)，給他們講故事Attention,please!I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutourplanforthevolunteerworkinMay.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.參考答案：1．例文：Hello,everyone.I’mPeterfromClass5,Grade8.Backtothelifeinthelastyear,IthinkIhavechangedalotandmadegreatprogressinmanyways.First,inthepast,Iseldomreadbooks.Iusedtospendmostoftimeplayingputergames.NowIfinditinterestingtoreadbecausegoodbookshelpmerelaxafterabusyday.Second,Iusedtoeathamburgersalotandhardlydidsports.Butnow,Ieatfruitsandvegetableseverydayandkeepexercising.Third,Iwasimpolitebefore.Isometimesshoutedloudlyorpushedinbeforeothers.NowIbehavepolitelyinpublic.Finally,Iusedtocarelittleaboutothers.ButnowItakepartincharityactivitiesandhelpmorepeopleinneed.IamsureIwilldomuchbetterinthefuture.Thanksforlistening!【解析】1.題干解讀：閱讀題干可知要求我們寫一篇演講稿，介紹自己一年來自己的收獲與變化。寫作內(nèi)容主要包括過去與現(xiàn)在關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)、飲食、禮儀和愛心等方面的變化，以及對未來的展望。寫作前可以提前列舉出可能會用到的短語、句型等；寫作時(shí)注意寫作手法要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；寫作后注意檢查。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：這是一篇材料型作文，需根據(jù)題干提示內(nèi)容展開寫作。時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。題干開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，第二段主要寫一年來的收獲與變化，最后寫對未來的展望，寫作時(shí)可運(yùn)用邏輯詞使文章條理更加清晰。2．例文LiQiangisoneofmyclassmates.Hehaschangedalotthisterm.Heusedtospendmuchtimeplayingputergames.Hedidn’tlikereadingbooks.Butnowhefindsreadingisfun.Hereadsforanhoureveryday.Sciencebooksarehisfavouritebecausehethinkstheyareinteresting.UsuallyheborrowsbooksfromthelibraryordownloadssciencestoriesinhisiPad.Whyisheinterestedinreadingbooks?Becausehegetsfunfromreadingandhethinksreadingcanhelphimgetmuchknowledgeandopenupanewworldtohim.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹李強(qiáng)的變化，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第三人稱來介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。作文可分為兩段，第一段介紹李強(qiáng)過去和現(xiàn)在的一些表現(xiàn)和變化；第二段介紹他取得變化原因。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。3．例文：ChinaislocatedinAsiaandconsistsof34provincesanddistricts.Beijing,itscapitalcity,ismodernandbig.ChinahasalonghistoryaswellasBritain.Therearemanyplacestovisit.YoucanseetheGreatWallinBeijing.SuzhouandHangzhouarefamousfortheirgardens.Chinaalsohasalotofnaturalbeauty,suchasHuangshan.TheweatherinChinaisverydifferentaroundthecountry.It’sverycoldinwinterinthenorthwhileit’sverywarminthesouth.Bepreparedbeforeyouvisitaplace.Moreover,rememberthatpeopleuseRMBthere,notdollarsorpounds.【解析】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)了，寫一篇關(guān)于中國的旅游指南，介紹中國的概況、名勝及自然風(fēng)光、氣候及所使用的貨幣等。保證要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要以第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。可采用兩段式，第一段介紹中國的地理信息、有悠久的歷史、名勝及自然風(fēng)光；第二段介紹其天氣情況及中國的通用貨幣。要做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。4．MyfavouritecountryisFrance.IhopeIcouldvisititsomeday.FranceisinwesternEurope.Itisanoldcountrywithahistoryofmanycenturies.ItscapitalcityisParis.ParisisalsotheculturalcentreofFranceandevenEurope.Franceattracts83millionforeignerseveryyear.Therearemanyplacesofinterestinthecountry.Itisfamousforitsgardensandbeaches.Andeveryday，thousandsofpeoplevisittheEiffelTowerandDisneylandParis.PeopleinFrancedon’tusedollars.TheyuseEUROlikepeopleinotherEuropeancountries.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，介紹一下法國。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如therebe,placesofinterest,befamousfor,thousandsof以及withahistoryofmanycenturies等，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫?！军c(diǎn)睛】寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀觥⒚鞔_的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。5．例文Atpresentonlyafewstudentsdosomereadingafterclass.Hereareseveralreasons.Firstofall,quitealotofstudentsareburdenedwithtoomuchhomework.Stillothershaven’tformedahabitofreading.TheywouldratherspendtheirsparetimeonTVorontheInternet.However,readinghasmanybenefits.Throughreadingwecanlearnmoreabouttheworld.Besides,itcanhelpusthinkbetter.Lastbutnotleast,readingcanmakeourlifemorecolourful.Herearemysuggestions.Foronething,teachersaresupposedtolimittheamountofourhomeworksothatwecanhavemoretimetoread.Foranother,it’sagoodideatoformreadingclubsandlearnfromeachother.【解析】1.題干解讀：這篇作文要求學(xué)生們對目前很多學(xué)生不喜歡閱讀的現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分析，闡述課外閱讀的好處，并提出自己的建議。題目中用表格的形式羅列了文章中應(yīng)包括的要點(diǎn)，學(xué)生們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些提示，組織文章的內(nèi)容，并結(jié)合實(shí)際，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，豐富文章的內(nèi)容。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：審題可知，這篇作文應(yīng)以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主進(jìn)行敘述。注意將題目中列出的要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來，并分清層次，使表達(dá)更加清晰。寫作中應(yīng)注意英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)的特點(diǎn)和與漢語表達(dá)習(xí)慣的不同，使用簡單句、并列句和復(fù)合句等多種句式，同時(shí)注意上下文意的銜接，使文章的表達(dá)流暢，意思連貫。6．例文BeaBetterReaderReadingisveryimportantinourlife,butmanymiddlestudentsdon’tformahabitofreading.Becausetheythinkreadingisveryboring.Inmyopinion,Ithinkreadingplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Iusedtohatereading,becauseIthinkittakesuptoomuchtimeandIcan’tgetpleasurefromit.WiththehelpofmyChineseteacher,Irealizethatreadingcanopenupanewworldforme.AndIcanlearnalotfromit.Ihavesomeadviceonhowtobeabetterreader.First,wecanmakeareadingplan,suchasreadingabookonceamonth.Second,readsomebooksthatyouareinterestedin.Ithinkthesesuggestionscanhelpyou.Ihopeallstudentscanbeabetterreader.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“如何成為一名更好的閱讀者”為題，寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，人稱以第一人稱為主。分為三段式：第一段介紹許多學(xué)生不喜歡閱讀以及自己對閱讀的看法；第二段結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷講述自己從不喜歡閱讀到喜歡的過程；最后一段介紹如何成為一名更好的閱讀者的方法。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。7．例文：AdayoutLastsummerholiday,myparentstookmetoHangzhouforaholiday.WewenttherebytrainonJuly25.PeopleoftensaythatHangzhouisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinChina.Whenwearrivedthere,Isawitwithmyowneyes.Ibelievedit.TherearealotofplacesofinterestinHangzhou.WetookaboattripontheWestLakeandclimbedthehillthere.Wehadagoodtime.AfterIcamebackhome,Iwasverytiredbutveryhappy.IwillneverforgetthetriptoHangzhou.【解析】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，寫出自己和家人最近一次出游的情況，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。2.

寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般過去時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。8．Dearschoolmates,Ourschoolistryingtobeabetterplaceforallofus.Weknowgoodmannersarereallyimportant.Andwecandosomethingforit.Inordertomakeourschoolmorebeautiful,weshouldkeepourclassroomscleaneveryday.Remembernottodroplittereverywhere.Andweshouldremembernottolaughortalkloudlyafterclassinpublicplaces.Whenweareinthelibrary,wemustkeepquiet.It’salsoimportanttofollowtrafficruleseverywhereandqueueforeverything.Weshouldalwaysbehavepolitelyandhelpeachotheranytime.Goodmannersmakeourschoolbetter,aswellasus.

Let’sstartfromourselves!TheStudents’UnionJune13th,2018【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，以校學(xué)生會的名義就“創(chuàng)建文明校園”這一主題，寫一封倡議書?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇給材料作文，寫一封“創(chuàng)建文明校園”的