高三英語二輪復習應用文寫作課件

Exploration&Transfer

—Applywhatyouhavelearnedtodosomepracticalwriting.

Learningobjectives:1.Formabasicwritingframeforeachdifferentwritingtypebyanalyzingthelanguagefeatures,contentsandstructures.2.Applywhatyouhavelearnedtodosomepracticalwriting.3.Polishyourwritingwiththehelpofeachchecklistandremarks.

DearSirorMadam,I'maChineseexchangestudentstudyinginLondonnow.①Icanhardlywaittoapplytotakepartintheperformanceoftraditionaldancesoftheworldinourcommunity（我迫不及待地想申請參加我們社區(qū)的世界傳統(tǒng)舞蹈表演）.IhavebeenpracticingtraditionalChinesedancesinceIwassix,②whichhashelpedmewinseveralprizesindancecompetitions（這幫我在數(shù)次舞蹈比賽中獲獎，非限制性定語從句）atthenationallevel.③Moreover,beforecominghere,Ibelongedtomyschooldanceclubandwasresponsibleforteachingnewcomers.IfI'mgiventhepreciousopportunity④Ifgiventhepreciousopportunity（用狀語從句的省略句升級），I’llsparenoefforttoshowtheuniquebeautyoftraditionalChinesedance.Yours,LiHua1.申請信1-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，正在倫敦交流學習。你所在社區(qū)將舉辦各國傳統(tǒng)舞蹈表演活動，請你用英語給活動組委會寫一封郵件，申請參加此活動。內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信目的；2．相關(guān)經(jīng)驗；3．希望獲準。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右好詞beresponsiblefor對……負責DearSirorMadam,

（說明工作信息，提出申請）I’mastudenttakingsummercoursesin

Londonnow.Learningvolunteersareneeded

forthecomingChinesepainting

exhibitioninyourlocalartgallery,Ican'twaittoapplyfortheposition.（先用“現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語十被動句”，說明信息內(nèi)容，再用固定句式，表明自己迫切的心情）

（詳述個人優(yōu)勢和能做的事情）Firstly，myfluentEnglishenablesme

tocommunicatesmoothlywithBritishpaintinglovers.Moreover,withawideknowledgeofChinesepainting,Icanintroducetheartformbetter.（利用介詞短語說明自己的第二個優(yōu)勢）Betteryet,I'veparticipatedinseveralsimilaractivities,whichequippedmewithrelevantexperience.

（非限制性定語從句十高級表達，說明相關(guān)工作經(jīng)驗）

（表達決心，期待回復）Ifaccepted，Iwillsparenoefforttointroduce

thosepaintingsondisplayand

（省略句式簡潔明了，再次為文章添彩）answerquestionspatiently.I'dappreciate

itifyoucouldconsidermyapplication.Yours,LiHu1.申請信1-2實踐演練（全國卷I改編）假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學習，得知當?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1．寫信目的；2．個人優(yōu)勢；3．能做的事情。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞①enablesb.todosth.使某人能夠做某事

②sparenoeffort不遺余力

③ondisplay展出DearSteven,

Ican'twaittoinformyouaropeskippingcompetitionwillbeheldonourschoolplaygroundnextFriday.①I'dliketoinviteyoutoparticipate（我想邀請你參加）.

Toencourageusstudentstostayhealthyandenergetic,thecompetitionwillbeheldintheformofsingleskippingropeandteamskippingrope.Thestudentortheteamwhoskipsmostwillwinfirstprize.Furthermore,manyprizeswillbegiventotheplayerswhorankintop10.

②Surely,itwillbeafantasticactivity,and③I'dappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience（如盡早確認你的參與，我將不勝感激）.Yours,LiHua2.邀請信2-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你校將于下周五舉辦跳繩比賽，請給你校交換生Steven寫封信邀請他參加，內(nèi)容包括：1．時間和地點；2．目的和形式；3．設(shè)置的獎項。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞intheformof以……的形式；single/teamskippingrope單人/團體跳繩DearCaroline,

（自我介紹，發(fā)出邀請）I

amLiHua，astudentinchargeofourCampus

BroadcastingStation.

（利用“同位語十介詞短語作后置定語”介紹自己身份，簡潔明了）I'mwritingtosincerelyinviteyoutoaninterviewinourprogram.

（節(jié)目介紹，說明訪談的時間和話題）Mainlyfocusingonourvariedand

colorfulcampuslife,

高級詞匯十現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，介紹節(jié)目，簡明扼要“TalkandTalk”enjoysgreatpopularityamongus.Actually,

fullyawareofyourabundantexperienceinteachingandrichknowledgeofliterature,wedesireatalkconcerninghowtoimprovewritingability.（高級詞匯＋形容詞短語作狀語，說明訪談話題）Would3:00pmthisSaturdaybeconvenientforyou?

（再次邀請，期待回復）Yourpresencewilldefinitelyimpressandbenefit

usconsiderably.（用兩個副詞強調(diào)程度，說明邀請的誠摯，得體自然）I'dappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourcomingatyourearliestconvenience.Yourssincerely,LiHua2.邀請信2-2實踐演練（2022·新高考I卷）假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“Talk

andTalk”的負責人李華，請你給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1．節(jié)目介紹；2．訪談的時間和話題。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞

①inchargeof負責

②focuson主要講述；專注于

③befullyawareof充分認識到DearMrHenry,

Howiseverythinggoingthesedays?①I’mwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.（我寫信向你求助）.

WhilepreparingtoattendMUNnextweek,Ihavesomedifficultywithconceptsandexpressionsofthecurrentaffairsandspeechskills.I'mwonderingifIcouldborrowyourDictionaryofEnglishMedia.②Furthernore,I'matalosshowtomakemyspeechconvincingandpersuasive.Couldyoubesokindastooffermesomeadvice?

③I’dappreciateitifyoucouldsparesometimetogivemeface-to-faceinstructions（如果你能抽時間面對面指導我，我將不勝感激）.Yours,LiHua3.求助信3-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，下周將參加英語模聯(lián)（MUN）活動，請你用英語給外教Henry寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．借用《英語媒體詞典》(DictionaryofEnglishMedia);2．請教英文演講技巧；3．請求當面指導。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞persuasiveadj.有說服力的DearMissEvans,

（說明寫信目的）Howiseverythinggoing？I’mwritingtoask

youforadviceregardingaplaywehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.(利用高級詞匯regarding和定語從句，說明求助事項)

（說明具體困難）Theplayisabouthowmoneyinfluencestheattitudeofpeopletreatingothers.

However,whatwe'reuncertain(however話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，引入下文，what引導的iswhethertheplotiscomplete.Besides,weareeagertoknowhowtocorrectourtoneandpronunciationinordertoperformthe主語從句＋whether引導的表語從句，表述第一個困難.)play

perfectly.Therefore,

I'mwonderingifitisconvenientforyoutoguide

usattenamtomorrowintheschoolhall.(利用I’mwondering和賓語從句，禮貌得體地商定時間、地點)

（希望得到幫助，期待早日回復）I’dappreciateitifyoucoulddousafavor.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua3求助信3-2實踐演練（2020·全國卷II改編）假定你是李華，你和同學根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。請你給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導。內(nèi)容包括：1．劇情簡介；2．指導內(nèi)容；3．商定時間、地點。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞①adapt...from...改編自······②dosb.afavor幫某人一個忙③beeagertodosth.渴望做某事DearJack,

Asforhowtouseyourfreetimemoreeffectively,①I'dliketoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions（我想給你一些實用的建議）.

②Firstofall,

reduceyourscreentimeandstopusinganybeforeschoolandatmealtimes.③Furthermore,increasereal-timecommunicationwithyourfriendsandfamilyandbe“present”andconnected.④What'smore,itmakessensetoleadanactivelife,so⑤makethemostofyourfreetimetogetactivelyinvolvedinsomeafter-schoolactivities（充分利用業(yè)余時間積極參加一些課外活動）.

⑥Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou（我希望我的建議能對你有所幫助）.Yours,LiHua4.建議信4-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你的美國筆友Jack來信說他的課余生活十分單調(diào)，他每天花大量的課余時間在電子設(shè)備上，請你給他回信，就如何安排課余時間提出建議。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞①makesense有意義②leadanactivelife過積極的生活DearJim,

（寫信意圖）Asforyourletteraskingabouthowtoavoidbeinginfectedatthisparticulartime,I'dliketoofferyousomepracticalsuggestions.

（具體的建議及理由）Firstofall，mysuggestionisthatyoustayathomeandavoidgoingoutunlessnecessary,whichisbeneficialtoyourselfandothers.

（表語從句中的虛擬語氣十省略句十非限制性定語從句，句式豐富，說明第一個建議及理由。）Furthermore,dowearaprotectivemaskoutdoorsandwashhandsfrequentlyandproperly.（“助動詞十動詞原形”，強調(diào)戴口罩的重要性）What'smore,strengthenyourimmune

systemandexerciseregularly,thusenablingyoutostayawayfrom

anyinfections.

現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，使得該建議更有說服性

（表達祝愿）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou.Yours,LiHua4.建議信4-2實踐演練假定你是李華，你的澳大利亞的朋友Jim所居住的地區(qū)最近出現(xiàn)了新冠病毒患者，他感到很害怕，向你征求建議。請你給他提出建議，內(nèi)容包括：1．你的建議和理由；2．表達祝愿。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞①atthisparticulartime在這個特殊時期②strengthenimmune

system

增強免疫力

③stayawayfrom遠離

5.告知信5-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，是2022年北京冬奧會的志愿者，元宵節(jié)在奧運村度過。請你寫信告訴你的英國朋友Peter這個難忘的元宵節(jié)的情況，內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的經(jīng)歷；

2.你的感受；

3.你表達期待。注意寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右DearPeter，Howiseverythinggoing?

①I’dliketosharewithyoumymemorableLanternFestivalspentintheOlympicVillage.（我想告訴你我在奧運村度過的難忘的元宵節(jié)情況）Withredlanternslookinggoodagainstthesnow,theVillagesawmyjoyfulLanternFestivalwithothervolunteers.②Additionally,therewerevariousactivities,includingdoingpaper-cuts,guessinglanternriddles,andmakinglanterns.Weenjoyeddelicioustangyuan,andIhadfunguessingriddles.ThememorableLanternFestivalnotonlygotmeimmersedinatraditionalfestivalatmospherebutdeepenedmyunderstandingofthenewmottooftheOlympics-Together.③Eagerlylookingforwardtoyourcomingtoskiwithme（熱切地期待著你來和我一起滑雪）.

Yours,LiHua好詞：①

memorableadj.難忘的②

getsb.immersedin使某人沉浸于.....

5.告知信5-2實踐演練（全國卷II改編）假定你是校排球隊隊長李華，請你寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.比賽信息；

2.賽前準備；

3.表達期待。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearChris,

（告知比賽信息）

I’mexcitedtoinformyouourteamistocompeteinanimportantvolleyballmatchnextweek.

（介紹比賽具體信息和賽前的訓練安排）Asscheduled,theeventwillbeheldinourschoolgymat9am

nextSunday.Tomakefullpreparationsforit,Ihavemadeaspecifictrainingplan.

Alltheteammembersaresupposedtotakethe

非謂語動詞作狀語+高級詞匯，是增分點trainingpunctually.Additionally,weareexpectedtopracticealotinanefforttoimproveourskillsandcooperatebetterwitheachother.

(被動句十高級詞匯，說明訓練目的)Idohopewecandoagoodjobthroughjointefforts.

（表達期待）Eagerlylookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours

LiHu好詞：1.asscheduled如期2.inanefforttodosth6.咨詢信6-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你的英國朋友

Terry一行人要來你市體驗元宵節(jié)，他請你幫他們預定酒店。請你給他回復一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2．詢問到達時間；

3．詢問具體要求（價位、房間數(shù)等）。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。DearTerry，Delightedtolearnyou’

recomingtohaveatasteoftheLanternFestivalinourcity,I’dliketoreserve

a

hotel

foryou

inadvance.ButIneedsomedetailsofyourtravel.①Firstly,I'dliketoknowwhattime

your

flightwillarriveattheairportsoIcanpickyouup.②Besides/Additionally,pricesofahotelroomrangefrom￥399to￥999,sowhichkindofroomsdoyouprefer?

③Finally,howmanyroomsdoyouexactlyneed?OnlyifIfigureoutallofthequestionscanImakereservationsforyou.④Anyearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.（如能盡早回復，我將非常感激）

Yours,LiHua

好詞：

①haveatasteof領(lǐng)略；體驗

②rangefrom...to..．從......到．....．不等③figureout弄清．.....

④makereservationsfor為．....．預訂6.咨詢信6-2實踐演練（全國卷I）假定你是李華。計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關(guān)情況（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。DearSirorMadam.

（說明身份和目的）I’mLiHua,planningtogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.

使用非謂語動詞讓閱卷老師眼前一亮I’mwonderingifyoucanoffermeinformationconcerningyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.

用concerning比about更高級

（詢問情況）Firstly,

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtellmewhenthecoursewillstartandhowmanyclasshoursthereareperweek.

Besides,whatabouttheclasssize?Additionally,I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Finally,whatdeservesmyspecialattentioniswhethertherewillbeanyhostfamiliesoruniversitydormitories.

what引導的主語從句更能引起關(guān)注

（表達感激）Anyearlyreplywillbehighlyappreciated.

被動語態(tài)比主動語態(tài)更吸睛

Yours,Lihua好詞：1.concerningprep.關(guān)于2.deservespecialattention值得特別關(guān)注7.回復信7-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是高三學生李華，你的英國好友

Jim在你們學校網(wǎng)站上看到了學生參加學農(nóng)活動的照片，很感興趣，發(fā)來郵件詢問，內(nèi)容包括：

1．學農(nóng)活動的相關(guān)信息（時間、內(nèi)容．.....);2．你參加學農(nóng)活動的感受。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。DearJim,①I’mdelightedyouarefascinatedaboutthe“Learningfromfarmers”activityorganizedbyourschoollastSaturday,I’dliketosharewithyousomedetails.（我很高興你對我們學校上周六組織的學農(nóng)活動很感興趣，我想告訴你一些細節(jié)）.At9ammyclassmatesandItookabustoafarminnorthernBeijing②Itwasat9ammyclassmatesandItookabustoafarminnorthernBeijing（用強調(diào)句升級）,wherewehelpedthefarmerspickapplesthewholeday.I’mdelightedthatIcoulddomybittohelpthefarmersthroughmywork.③Additionally,Ilearnedforthefirsttimeofthedifficultygettingfruitsontothekitchentable.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyouagain.

Yours,LiHua好詞:1.doone’sbittodosth盡力做某事2.forthefirsttime首次；第一次7.回復信7-2實踐演練（全國卷I改編）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習俗。請你回復郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1.到達時間；2．合適的禮物；3．餐桌禮儀。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。DearTerry,

（說明回信的目的）

It’sgreattolearnyouareinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shome.

AsforsomeChinesetablemanners,

利用固定句式，簡潔地說明Terry應邀去中國朋友家做客I’dliketosharewithyousomerelevantdetails.

（介紹到達時間、合適的禮物和餐桌禮儀）

Firstly,arriveontimeoralittleearlierbecausebeingpunctualis

利用"because引導的狀語從句十被動句式"，說明到達的時間，consideredpoliteinChina.Additionally,ifyou’dliketobringagif,abunchofflowersorsomefreshfruitwillbeagood

表達地道高級choice.

Mostimportantly,attable,it’stheelderlywhoareusuallythefirsttoeatsincetheyarewell

respectedinChina

利用"強調(diào)句式十狀語從句十被動句式"，說明餐桌禮儀，句式豐富多變，吸引閱卷老師Iftheyinsistyoueatfirst,justgoahead.

（希望對方做客愉快）Justrelaxandenjoyyourvisit.

Yours,

LiHua好句：1.relevantadj.相關(guān)的2.punctaladj.準時的3.abunchof一束8.推薦信

8-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你的美國朋友

Peter寫信告訴你他對中國古詩很感興趣，請你給他推薦一本學習中國古詩的書。請你回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.推薦的書及原因；

2．如何購買。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右DearPeter,

①KnowingyourkeeninterestinclassicalChinesepoetry,I’dliketorecommendLearnChinesethroughTangPoetrytoyou

(得知你對中國經(jīng)典詩歌很感興趣趣,我向你推薦《用唐詩學漢語》).It’sacollectionoffamousChinesepoetrywrittenduringtheTang

Dynasty

,②thegoldenagetoChinesepoetry(中國詩歌的黃金時代,名詞短語作同位語).

Intendedfor

beginners,thebookmainlyfocusesonpoemsthatareeasytounderstand.③Additionally,thebookoffersEnglishtranslationsofallthepoems,whichwillbeofbenefittoyou.Thebookisavailableonline.

④Hopemyrecommendationcanbehelpful.(希望我的建議能有所幫助).⑤Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,doletmeknow.(如果你還有其他問題,請告訴我).

Yours

,

LiHua好詞：①beintendedforsb

為某人準備的

②focuson關(guān)注；集中于.......8.推薦信

8-2實踐演練（北京高考改編）假定你是紅星中學高三學生李華，你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣，計劃明年來北京上大學。他向你咨詢相關(guān)信息。請給他回郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示歡迎；2．推薦他上哪所大學；3．建議他做哪些準備工作。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。DearJim,

（說明寫信目的及要推薦的學校）DelightedatyourfutureeducationplaninBeijing,I’mwritingtoconveymywarmestwelcome.KnowingyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IrecommendyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.

利用"虛擬語氣和同位語",使推薦更加合情合理

（說明推薦的理由）ItsChineseLiteraturemajorisperfectforyouwhereyoucanbecompletelysoakedinChinese

高級詞匯十定語從句，說明推薦理由，生動簡潔profoundhistoryandrichculture.

Additionally,

it’sagoodideatotakesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesesothatyou

固定句式十狀語從句，說明需要做的準備，委婉得體canadapttotheChineselanguageenvironment.

（表示期待）Hopemyrecommendationcanbehelpful.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,doletmeknow.

Yours,

LiHua好詞：1.besoakedin沉浸在........2.profoundadj.深厚的DearTim,

①I’mwritingtoapologizeformybadmanners（因我的沒禮貌我寫信道歉）whenreceivingyourgiftatmybirthdayparty.ThoughInevermeanttohurtyou,youmighthavefeltuneasy.

Thefactis②thatIforgotthedifferencesbetweenChineseandAmericancultures（我忘記了中美文化的差異，表語從句）whengivingandreceivinggifts.AChineseusuallydoesnotopenagiftinthepresenceofthegiver,whileanAmericantendstoopenitimmediatelywhengettingit.③Actually,

Ilikeyourgiftverymuch.

④Pleaseforgivemythoughtlessnessandacceptmyapology（請原諒我的粗心并接受我的道歉）.IwilllearnmoreaboutAmericancultureandpreventsuchthingshappeningagain.Yours,LiHua9.道歉信9-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Tim在你的生日晚會上送給你一件禮物，當時你只說了謝謝，但沒有打開?，F(xiàn)在你意識到自己的做法會讓美國人覺得不禮貌。請你用英語給他寫一封道歉信。內(nèi)容包括：1．表達歉意；2．做出解釋；3．做出承諾（多學習等）。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞①in

thepresence ofsb.在某人面前②immediately

adv.立即；直接地 conj.一……就DearBob,

（表達歉意）I＇mwritingtoapologizetoyouforbeingunabletoaccompanyyoutothebookstoretomorrowasplanned.

（解釋失約原因）ThereasonisthatIwillattendafamilyget-together

tomorrowwhenmycousinPeterwillreturnhomefromBeijing.（利用表語從句，說明失約的原因）Actually,PeterandIgrewuptogetherwhenwewerekidsandlaterhewenttostudyinBeijing.Therefore,it'sexcitingformetoseehimagainafterhalfayear.

（請求對方接受道歉并另約時間）Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology. WouldyoumindifIsuggestedwegotothebookstorenextweekend?

（利用疑問句和虛擬語氣委婉地另約時間）Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua9.道歉信9-2實踐演練全國卷II假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約，請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示歉意；2．說明原因；3．另約時間。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞①accompany陪伴②asplanned

按計劃DearJim,

IamLiHua.①I’dliketoconveymysinceregratitudetoyouforyourpickingupmycellphoneandreturningittome.（我想誠摯地感謝你拾到我的手機并歸還給我）.

Actually,wheneverIlookatmycellphone,Iwillthinkofyou,akindandhonestyoungAmerican.IbecamenearlymadthemomentIfoundmynewcellphonemissing,sinceIboughtitwithmyownhard-earnedmoneyafterworkingparttimeformonthsatweekends.②Allinall,③wordsfailtoconveymygratitude（我無法用語言表達我的感激）.Hopefully,youwillcomesomedayandthen④IwillshowyouaroundBeijingtorepayyourkindness（為回報你的好意，我會帶你游玩北京）.Yours,LiHua10.感謝信10-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你不慎丟失的手機被來中國旅游的美國青年Jim撿到并歸還，現(xiàn)Jim已經(jīng)回國。請你根據(jù)下面的要點提示，寫封郵件表示感謝。1．寫信目的；2．感謝的理由；3．你的愿望。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞themoment一……就DearAlex,

（表達感謝）It＇sreallyhardtosaygoodbyetoyou！Butmeanwhile,I'meagerlywritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourhelp.

（回顧Alex的幫助）Istillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedto

improvingmyoralEnglishandwrittenEnglish.

高級句式＋賓語從句，說明自己誠摯的謝意Additionally,youalsofranklysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Mostimportantly,withoutyouradviceandassistance,Iwouldnothavemadesuch

unbelievableprogressinEnglishandwouldnothaveevenrankedfirstintherecentEnglishspeechcontest.（利用虛擬語氣，說明對方的建議對自己的幫助）Allinall,wordsfailtoconveyhowgratefulIam.

（再次致謝并臨別祝愿）Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours,LiHua10.感謝信10-2實踐演練（浙江高考）假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學習英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示感謝；2．回顧Alex對你的幫助；3．臨別祝愿。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞①bedevotedtodoingsth致力于做某事②frankly

坦率地DearMr.Henry,

I'mLiHua,oneofyourcustomers.①I’mwritingtocomplainaboutthedisappointingserviceofyouronlinestore.（我寫信投訴貴網(wǎng)店令人不滿的服務）.

Iorderedfivepacksofadultmasksfromyouronlinestorethreeweeksago,butIdidn'treceivethemuntilyesterday.Besides,whenopeningthepackage,Ifounditwasthetypeforchildren.②Worsestill,

Ihavetriedtocontactyourcustomerservice,buttherehasbeennoreply.Pleasereturnmymoneyorexchangethetypeforadultforme.

③Ihopeyoucansolvetheproblemassoonaspossible.（我希望您能盡快處理此事）.Yours,LiHua11.投訴信11-1仿寫再借鑒假定你是李華，你在英國學習，某天你在網(wǎng)站訂購了五包成人口罩。但收到口罩后發(fā)現(xiàn)了幾個問題。請你用英語給網(wǎng)店老板Mr.Henry寫一封投訴信，主要內(nèi)容包括：1．陳述投訴原因：收到的是兒童口罩；客服不回應；2．提出解決辦法。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞exchange更換；customerservice客服DearSirorMadam,

（自我介紹，提出投訴）I＇mLiHua，oneofyourcustomers，writingtomakeacomplaintaboutthepoorserviceofyourwaiters.利用現(xiàn)在分詞呈現(xiàn)不一樣的開頭

（說明投訴的問題，提出要求）ItwasyesterdaythatIwenttoyourrestauranttohavelunchbutIhadanawfulexperience.IwashavingbeefnoodleswhensuddenlyIfoundtwofliesinthem,whichmademedisgusted.

（固定句式bedoingsth.when...＋which引導的非限制性定語從句，說明投訴的事由之一）

What'sworse,Iaskedthewaitertochange

foranotherdish,onlytobecompletelyignoredbyhim.

利用onlytodo作結(jié)果狀語，說明服務員惡劣的服務態(tài)度，投訴的事由之二

Therefore,I'dlikeyoutoinvestigatethematterseriouslyandmakeaformalapologytome.

（表示期望）I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivedueattentiontothematter.Yours,LiHua11.投訴信11-2實踐演練假定你是李華，你在英國學習，昨天你有一次不愉快的就餐經(jīng)歷，你對餐廳服務員的態(tài)度非常不滿意，于是請你給該餐廳老板寫信投訴。內(nèi)容包括：1．問題：牛肉面（beefnoodles）里有蒼蠅（fly），服務員態(tài)度惡劣；2．要求：餐廳賠禮道歉；3．希望能改進服務。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞makeaformalapologytosb.正式向某人道歉TheMostInfluentialBooktoMe

AmongthebooksI'veread,theLittlePrinceinfluencesmemost①itistheLittlePrincethatinfluencesmemost（用強調(diào)句升級加黑體部分）.

It'saboutapilotwhocrasheshisplaneandisstuckinthedesertuntilhemeetsthelittleprincefromanotherplanet.Thelittleprincetellsthepilotstoriesofhismagicaljourneyfromhislittleplanetandofhisencounterswithdifferentgrown-ups.

Simpleasthestoryis,itinspiresmeinmanyways.②Besides,

I'venotonlyrealizedtheimportanceofcompanybutalsolearnedtoopenmyheartandlovethepeoplearoundme.③notonlyhaveIrealizedtheimportanceofcompanybutalsolearnedtoopenmyheartandlovethepeoplearoundme.

（用倒裝句升級加黑體部分）.12.參賽短文&教育12-1仿寫再借鑒你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請你以“對我影響最大的一本書”為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1．書籍簡介；2．對你的影響。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。好詞①in

thepresence ofsb.在某人面前②immediately

adv.立即；直接地 conj.一……就YouthandMe

（簡要介紹讀報經(jīng)歷）Ithasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded．Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.用強調(diào)句強調(diào)報紙對自己的重要性，開篇就表達不俗

（談論自己喜愛的欄目）Whenfeelingdepressed，Ioftenchoosetoenjoy

thenovelpartwhichincludesnumbersofimaginativestories.狀語從句省略句十定語從句，說明自己喜愛的欄目之一Notonlycan

thesestoriesrelievemystress,buttheycanalsobroadenmyhorizons.用notonly倒裝句說明欄目對自己的益處，滿分吸睛句Besides,thecolumnthatbenefitsmyEnglishstudyalotistheonethatcarriesarticlesaboutforeignculturesandthemostefficientwaysoflearningEnglish.

（期望和祝福）It’smysincerehopethatYouthwillbemorepopularamong用主語從句表達期望和祝福，滿分結(jié)尾句12.參賽短文&教育12-2實踐演練（2021·新高考I卷）你校英文報Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1．讀報的經(jīng)歷；2．喜愛的欄目；3．期望和祝福。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2．短文題目已給出。好詞①relievestress減壓②broadenone’s

horizons拓寬視野13.倡議書13-1仿寫再借鑒假設(shè)你是某國際學校的學生會主席李華，請你圍繞"低碳生活，保護環(huán)境"的主題，根據(jù)下面所給提示，用英語給你校學生寫一封倡議書。內(nèi)容包括：1．保護環(huán)境的重要性；2．如何低碳生活；

3．發(fā)出倡議。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。Dearfellowstudents,Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.①It’shightimethatwetook/shouldtakeimmediateaction（是我們立即采取行動的時候了）orwewouldhavenowheretolive.②Withoutdoubt,westudentscanprotectourenvironmentbylivingalow-carbonlife.Firstly,doturnofflightsandotherswitcheswhennotusingthemtosaveelectricity.③Moreover,ifwegoout,weshouldwalk,rideortakepublictransportinsteadofdriving.Finally,reusingpaperandbottlesinourdailylifeisalsohighlyrecommended.④Let’sstartwithsmallthingsnowtomakeourenvironmentbetterandbetter.（讓我們現(xiàn)在從小事做起，使我們的環(huán)境越來越好).好詞:①withthedevelopmentof隨著....．的發(fā)展②insteadof代替13.倡議書13-2實踐演練假定你是某國際學校的學生李華，你校正在開展"創(chuàng)建美麗校園"的活動。請你用英語給全校學生寫一封倡議書。

內(nèi)容包括：

1．創(chuàng)建美麗校園的重要性；2．校園內(nèi)存在的不文明現(xiàn)象；3．你的態(tài)度。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。

Dearfellowstudents，

（說明倡議的背景）

I’mwritingtocalloneveryonetotakeanactivepartinbuildingabeautifulcampus.

Anattractivecampuscanmakeourlearningpleasantandthusimproveourgrades.

（說明倡議的內(nèi)容）

However,somestudentscanbeseenrunningonthelawn,pickingflowersorthrowing

利用被動句說明不文明現(xiàn)象，利用which引導的非限制性定語從句rubbisheverywhere,whichharmsourschoolenvironment.

Withoutdoubt,it’shightimethatimmediate

其對校園的危害measuresshouldbetakentochangethepresentsituation.

Inmyview,

everyoneisresponsibleforthebeautyofourcampus.Moreover,

ifweallavoiddoinganythingimproper,ourcampuswillbecomemuch