讀后續(xù)寫公開課buildacoffeehouse課件高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

Continuationwriting

Bytheendofthesession,we’llbeableto

1.

understandthemeaningofthetext;2.

designareasonableandlogicendingofthestory;3.

polishthestorywithsomeadvancedexpressions;4.

applywhatyouhavelearnedtopractice.HowtoreadHowtodesignHowtowriteHowtopolishHowtoread1.Readforelementsofthestory2.ReadforPlot3.ReadforthemeReadforelementsofthestoryI,Gary,othersupportersofmineDuringmyfirsttermaspresidentofStudents’UnionOncampusRaisemoneytobuildacoffeehouseasmyfirstmissionReadforPlotImanagedtogetGary,whowasactive,energetic,cleverandeloquent,tojoinme.Garyprovedtobethemostcapableandefficientinthegroupofhelpers.Iwantedtotakecreditforeverything.Myegotookoverandmyarroganceandpridewereoutofcontrol.Iwasmoreconfidentofthemission.Garywasreallyhelpful.Ibecameincreasinglyarrogant.ReadforthemeParagraph1:Itwasn’tlongbeforeallmysupporters,evenGary,begantoturnagainstme.IwasannoyedbutIdon’tcareaboutthat.Paragraph2:IfinallyrealizedwhatastupidmistakeIhadmade.Iwasregretfulandwantedtomakeupforit.ReadforthemeWhatshouldbethethemeofthestory?Teamwork,Cooperation,Modesty*Pridecomesfromshallownesswhilearrogancecomesfromignorance.*Weshouldbemodestandworkwithpartnerstoachievesomething.Howtodesign

Tips:1.Lockthesubjectofthegivensentence;2.Designfromtwoaspects:eventsandemotions;3.Theendingshouldbepositiveandeducational.Paragraphl:Itwasn'tlongbeforeallmysupporters,evenGary,begantoturnagainstme.

l.Howdidthesupportersturntheirbacksonme?2.WhatdidGarydotoshowhisdisappointmentanddiscontentment?3.HowdidIfeelandreactthen?4.Whatwastheinfluenceofourconflictsonthemission?Paragraph2:Ifinallyrealizedwhatastupidmistakelhadmade.

l.WhatmistakedidIrealizelhadmade?2.WhatdidIdotomakeupforthemistake?3.HowdidGaryandtheothersupportersreact?4.WhathappenedfinallyandwhatdidIthinkoftheexperience?HowtowriteAnswerthequestionsaboveandwe’llgetadraftquickly.Howtopolish1.Appreciatethesentencesfromthetext.1)WhenIwaselectedthepresidentofStudent’sUnion,everybodycongratulatedmeonmycampaignsayingitwasoneofthebesttheschoolhadseen.2)Havingdeterminedmygoal,Isetupasmallgroupofhelperstodofundraising.3)Gradually,allofuswhoparticipatedfeltlikewewerepartofsomethingmuchbiggerthanwewere.4)Ibeganspeakingdowntomygroupmembers,demandingtheylistentomebecauseIthoughtIknewwhatwasbest.2.Moreskills

1)心理描寫---憤怒explodewithanger勃然大怒shake/boilwithanger/rage怒火中燒Filledwithfury,Jimwasunabletoutterasingleword.Jim滿腔憤怒，一句話也說不出來。Kate’sreplyfueledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano.凱特的回答如火上澆油，于是他的憤怒就像火山一樣爆發(fā)了。Iexclaimedwithfury,stormingintomyroomandslammingthedoorbeforeshecouldrespond.我憤怒地叫了起來，沖進(jìn)房間，在她沒來得及回答前就砰地關(guān)上了門。2)心理描寫---愧疚,后悔befullofguilt

滿心愧疚shedtearsofregret

流下后悔的淚水beashamedofdoingsth....后悔做某事“IfIhadn’tquarreledwithTom,Iwouldn’thavetobehere.”Janethought

regretfully,withtearswellingupinhereyes.“如果我沒有和湯姆吵架，我就不會(huì)在這里了?！焙喓蠡诘叵?，眼里涌出了淚水。Iwasovercomebyawaveofguiltand

wordsfailedtoexpressmyregret.

我被一陣內(nèi)疚所壓倒，言語無法表達(dá)我的遺憾。With/Holdingthelittledogstatueinhishand,theoldmanfelt

afloodofregretwelledupinhim.

手里拿著小狗雕塑，老人覺著心中涌起一陣懊悔。3)Only+whenIrealizetheimportanceof...+willIdosth.倒裝句4)Itwas+one’sjointefforts/support/forgiveness/generositythatmademefeelrelieved.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型5)主語+動(dòng)作A+動(dòng)作Band動(dòng)作C（三個(gè)并列謂語，動(dòng)作依次發(fā)生）動(dòng)作鏈6)Havingdone…+主句.（表示先做了某事，再發(fā)生核心動(dòng)作）非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)7)Withsth....doing／done...+主句+doing...with結(jié)構(gòu)+主句+現(xiàn)在分詞結(jié)構(gòu)3.Thelanguageshouldbevivid,

thecontentshouldbeinterrelated,

theplotshouldbeevident,

thevalueshouldbewarm.Possibleversion:Itwasn’tlongbeforeallmysupporters,evenGary,begantoturnagainstme.

ButIwasstillobsessedwithmy

power

andIevenpicturedwhatpraisetheprincipalwouldgivemewhenIaccomplishedthis

mission.However,thingsstartedtogobad.WhenIorderedthemto

continuethefund-raisingmission,theyignoredmyrequests,doingthingsattheirownwill.EvenGaryhadaquarrelwithmeinpublic,whichmademefilledwithanger.NotuntilIfeltsoembarrassedanddepresseddidIwakeuptothefactthatIhadlostallmyfriendsincludingGary.Meanwhile,buildingthe

coffeehouse

seemstobehopeless.IfinallyrealizedwhatastupidmistakeIhadmade.

Ilearnedthatonlythosewhoarehumbleandrespectotherswouldmakeitintheend.

Iwasovercomebyawaveofguiltand

raninto

Gary,workingupthecouragetomakemyapology.Firstastonishedandthenrelievedwithawarmsmile,Garygavemeahugfinally,whichmeanthehadforgivenme.WithGary'shelp,ourteam

members

areallback.Througheveryone's

jointefforts,