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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Inthedynamicandfast-pacedcityofMumbai,ayoungboynamedKabirlivedalivelylife.TheIndiancitywashisfavorite,filledwiththehustle(喧鬧)ofbusystreets,thesweetsmellofvariousstreetfood,andthelaughteroffriendsastheywalkedhomefromschool.HelovedeverythingaboutMumbai—theseawindthatblewhishair,thebrightcolorsandfestivitiesthatbroughtjoytothecity,andthewarmthofhisfriends’smiles.Hehadadailyroutinewhichwasfullofexcitementandjoy,livinginharmonywiththecityhecalledhome.Asaphotographylover,heoftentookpicturesofthebeautifullandscapesofthecity.Onefatefulday,however,everythingwasabouttochange.Kabir’sfather,MrKapoor,receivedaletterofgreatsignificance.Itwasanofferforanewjobinacityfaraway,anopportunitythatcouldprovidehisfatherwithcareerprospectsbutalsowouldtakethemawayfromtheircurrenthomeandthefamiliarsurroundingsKabirlovedsomuch.ThenewsleftKabirfeelingconflictedashethoughtaboutleavingbehindhisbelovedMumbaiandallitswarmthandjoy.Thefamilysatdowntodiscusstheofferindetail.MrKapoorspokepassionately,“Thisnewopportunitymaybringaboutabetterfutureforourfamily.Thereisthepossibilitythatwewillhavenewexperiences,newadventures,andnewbeginnings.”Hismothernoddedandsaid,“Ican’tagreemore.”Kabirlistenedsilently,hismindwanderingbacktothefamiliarsightsandsoundsofMumbaithathehadgrownupwith.Astheyspoke,Kabirstruggledwiththedecision.HeknewhelovedMumbaiwithallhisheart,buthealsosawthepotentialinthisnewopportunity.Heknewthatchangewasunavoidableandthatitbroughtthepotentialforgrowthandadventurewithit.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Thenextday,Kabirpickeduphiscamera,keepinghisfather’sadviceinmind.文章大意:在孟買生活的男孩Kabir熱愛這座城市的一切,這里充滿活力與歡樂,他日常喜歡拍攝城市美景。然而父親收到一份遠(yuǎn)方城市的工作邀請,這意味著全家要搬離孟買。家庭會(huì)議上父母對新機(jī)會(huì)滿懷期待,Kabir雖內(nèi)心糾結(jié)不舍,但也明白改變可能帶來成長與冒險(xiǎn)。他在對熟悉的熱愛與未知的機(jī)遇間掙扎,最終要做出一個(gè)影響全家的決定。伏筆及回應(yīng):伏筆:Kabir是攝影愛好者,常拍城市景觀。回應(yīng):續(xù)寫中他帶著相機(jī)去記錄孟買,作為告別與紀(jì)念。伏筆:新工作在遠(yuǎn)方城市,將改變?nèi)疑??;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中全家開始為搬離做準(zhǔn)備,適應(yīng)即將到來的變化。伏筆:Kabir熱愛孟買的各種美好。回應(yīng):續(xù)寫中他在告別孟買時(shí)流露出深深的不舍與眷戀。伏筆:父親提及新機(jī)會(huì)有新體驗(yàn)等?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中Kabir開始期待新城市的生活,思考新的可能。伏筆:Kabir聽父母討論時(shí)默默思考?;貞?yīng):續(xù)寫中他在行動(dòng)上體現(xiàn)出接受決定并積極面對的態(tài)度。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):
第一段:Kabir決定接受搬家,他開始和家人一起整理物品,打包行李。他看著熟悉的房間,心中五味雜陳,但也有對未來的一絲期待。他拿著相機(jī)在孟買的大街小巷穿梭,拍攝下那些曾經(jīng)最愛的角落,像是在和這座城市鄭重告別。
第二段:到達(dá)新城市后,Kabir被眼前不同的景象所吸引。盡管還是會(huì)時(shí)常想念孟買,但他也積極地去探索新環(huán)境,結(jié)交新朋友。他用相機(jī)記錄新城市的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴,發(fā)現(xiàn)這里也有著獨(dú)特的魅力,逐漸適應(yīng)并融入了新生活。情感線:起初,Kabir對要離開孟買充滿了不舍與糾結(jié),這座城市承載了他太多美好的回憶。當(dāng)決定接受搬家后,在告別孟買的過程中,眷戀與傷感交織。到了新城市,雖仍有對舊地的思念,但好奇與期待逐漸占據(jù)上風(fēng),開始積極面對新環(huán)境,情感從消極的不舍向積極的接納轉(zhuǎn)變。故事線:Kabir在孟買快樂生活,因父親工作變動(dòng)面臨搬家抉擇,決定接受后與孟買告別,來到新城市,從初到時(shí)的陌生到慢慢探索發(fā)現(xiàn)新城市的魅力,最終融入其中開啟新生活。主旨升華句:Changeislikeadoor,closingbehindusthefamiliar,andopeningaheadtheunknownyetfullofpossibilities.(改變就像一扇門,在身后關(guān)閉熟悉的一切,在前方開啟未知卻充滿可能的世界。)Embracingchangemeanssteppingoutofourcomfortzoneandembarkingonajourneyofself-discoveryandgrowth.(擁抱改變意味著走出舒適區(qū),踏上自我發(fā)現(xiàn)與成長之旅。)Althoughleavingthepastishard,itisinnewbeginningsthatwefindthechancetorewriteourstory.(雖然離開過去很難,但在新的開始中我們才有機(jī)會(huì)重寫自己的故事。)Thepathofchangemaybewinding,butitleadsustoabroaderandmorecolorfulhorizon.(改變的道路或許曲折,但它引領(lǐng)我們走向更廣闊、更絢麗的天地。)Whenweacceptchangewithanopenheart,weopenourselvestoaworldofunexpectedwonders.(當(dāng)我們敞開心扉接受改變時(shí),我們便向一個(gè)充滿意外驚喜的世界敞開了自己。)寫作示范一:Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Hetoldhisparentsthathewaswillingtomove.Thefollowingdayswereaflurryofactivity.Kabirhelpedhisparentspackuptheirbelongings,hisheartheavyeachtimeheplacedaniteminabox.Buthealsorememberedhisfather'swordsandpickeduphiscamera.HeroamedthestreetsofMumbaionelasttime,photographingtheoldtempleswiththeirintricatecarvings,thebustlingmarketplacesfilledwithpeoplehagglingoverprices,andtheseathatstretchedoutendlessly.Thesepictureswouldbehispreciousmemoriesofthecity.Thenextday,Kabirandhisfamilysetoffforthenewcity.Astheydrove,Kabirwatchedthescenerychange.Whentheyarrived,hewasgreetedbyamoderncityscapewithtallskyscrapersandwideboulevards.Hefeltabitlostatfirst,butthenhestartedexploring.HemetaboynamedRajintheneighborhoodpark.Rajshowedhimaround,andKabirusedhiscameratocapturethenewsights.Herealizedthatthisnewcityalsohaditsowncharm,andhewasreadytoembracethisnewchapterofhislife.寫作示范二:Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Heacceptedthemovewithamixtureofsadnessandanticipation.Hespentthedaysayinggoodbyetohisfriends,promisingtokeepintouch.Thenhestartedpackinghiscameraequipmentcarefully.Heknewhewantedtodocumentthistransition.Hetookpicturesofhisschool,thestreetwhereheplayedcricketwithhispals,andthesmallcornershopwhereheboughthisfavoritecandies.Thenextday,Kabirgotintothecarwithhisfamily.Alongtheway,helookedatthephotoshehadtakeninMumbai.Whentheyreachedthenewcity,itwasawholenewworld.Theairsmelleddifferent,andthesoundswereunfamiliar.ButKabirwasdeterminedtomakethebestofit.Hewentforawalkinthenewcitycenter.There,hesawagroupofkidshisagedoingastreetartproject.Hejoinedthem,takingpicturesandmakingnewfriends.Heunderstoodthatchangewasnottobefearedbuttobeembracedasitbroughtnewopportunitiestolearnandgrow.參考范文:Intheend,Kabirmadeadecisionthatheknewwasrightforhimandhisfamily.Withaheavyheart,heagreedtomovetothenewcity.However,MrKapoorcouldsenseKabir’sreluctancefromhisexpression,amixtureofsadnessandhesitation.TakingKabir’shand,hereassuredhim,“Wewillcomebacktovisitwheneverwehavethechance.”Inanefforttocomfortherson,MrsKapoorproposedthatKabirusehiscameratocapturesomepreciousmem
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