讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬之緣與意外之善+講義 高三下學(xué)期第二次模擬考試英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。CedarPointwasanamusementparkinOhioIhadbeenexpectingtovisitasachild.Welivedclosetothepark,soIoftenheardthescreamsofpeopleontherollercoaster,sawthetiredkidswiththeirparentswhentheyleft.Sometimes,Ilookedwistfullyatthelightsthroughmywindowatnight.WhenIwasnine,mygrandmothermanagedtosavealittlebitofmoneyhereandthereandtookmethereonedaythatsummer.Iyelled,excitementbubblinginsideme.Aswearrivedattheparkforthefirsttime,kidswereeverywhere,eatingpopcorn(爆米花)andblowingbubbles.Myeyeswidenedindelightatthescene.Iwantedtodoallthosethings,butdeepdown,Iknewwedidn’thaveenoughmoney.Wecouldonlyaffordtobuyaticketonlyforonerideforfifteenminutes.Ipulledmygrandmothertowardtheticketwindowtobuyaticketforthecarousel(旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬).ItwasexactlyasIhadimagined,straightoutofamovie.Mygrandmothersmiledfondlyandleaneddown,givingthetickettotherideoperator,MrSalas.Lettinggo,Irushedtotheride,stoppingonlytopickwhichhorsetositon.Theywereallsobeautiful,comingindifferentcolorswith’differentexpressions‘ontheirplasticfaces.Tome,itfeltlikethedecisionofalifetime.“Comeon,sweetie!Therideisgoingtostart!”mygrandmothercalledout,laughingatmyindecision.Seeingthat,MrSalasalsosmiledwarmly.Finally,Ipickedthehorsewiththepinkhairandbluesaddle.Inthefollowingminutes,Iwasabsorbedinenjoyingtheride,forgettingmyfamilywasstruggling.Mygrandmotherwavedeachtimetheridepassedherby.MrSalaswatchedmefromadistance.Sadly,thecarouselrideendedmuchtooquickly.Mygrandmotherwaswaitingandtookmyhand.Igotdownfromthehorseunwillingly,feelingbittersweet.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者小時(shí)候一直期待去俄亥俄州的雪松點(diǎn)游樂(lè)園，九歲那年夏天，祖母好不容易攢了些錢(qián)帶他去，但只夠買(mǎi)一次15分鐘的旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬的票。作者盡情享受了這次旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬之旅，結(jié)束時(shí)雖有些不舍，但也只能無(wú)奈離開(kāi)。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)伏筆：作者一家經(jīng)濟(jì)拮據(jù)，只買(mǎi)得起一次旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬的票。回應(yīng)：MrSalas被作者的純真快樂(lè)所打動(dòng)，送了全天通票，讓作者有機(jī)會(huì)體驗(yàn)更多游樂(lè)設(shè)施，解決了因經(jīng)濟(jì)條件無(wú)法盡情游玩的問(wèn)題，給了作者一個(gè)意外的驚喜，也使故事充滿(mǎn)溫情。伏筆：作者對(duì)游樂(lè)園充滿(mǎn)期待，聽(tīng)到過(guò)山車(chē)的尖叫、看到離開(kāi)的疲憊孩子和夜晚的燈光，都表現(xiàn)出他內(nèi)心的渴望?；貞?yīng)：得到全天通票后，作者終于可以盡情體驗(yàn)游樂(lè)園的各種項(xiàng)目，滿(mǎn)足了他一直以來(lái)的愿望，使他從之前的只能短暫體驗(yàn)變得可以充分享受游樂(lè)園的樂(lè)趣，回應(yīng)了前文的期待。伏筆：MrSalas看到作者挑選木馬時(shí)的猶豫不決，以及祖母的呼喚和作者的投入，他全程關(guān)注著作者?；貞?yīng)：這促使他后來(lái)做出送票的決定，他的關(guān)注和微笑為送票行為做了鋪墊，使他的善舉不顯得突兀，也體現(xiàn)了他善良、細(xì)心的性格特點(diǎn)，推動(dòng)了情節(jié)發(fā)展。伏筆：旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬的美麗和作者認(rèn)為挑選木馬是“一生的決定”，凸顯了這次短暫體驗(yàn)對(duì)作者的重要性?；貞?yīng)：全天通票讓作者有更多類(lèi)似重要而美好的體驗(yàn)，強(qiáng)化了游樂(lè)園在作者心中的美好印象，同時(shí)也升華了MrSalas的善舉的意義，從讓作者享受一次旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬變成了給他一個(gè)難忘的游樂(lè)園歡樂(lè)時(shí)光。伏筆：作者在旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬上的快樂(lè)和結(jié)束時(shí)的不舍，表現(xiàn)出他對(duì)游樂(lè)園的喜愛(ài)和對(duì)更多游玩機(jī)會(huì)的渴望?；貞?yīng)：全天通票使作者的渴望得以實(shí)現(xiàn)，他可以盡情享受各種游樂(lè)設(shè)施，情感上從之前的不舍變?yōu)榕d奮和感激，豐富了情感線，也使故事更加完整和感人。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)情感線：第一段：作者和祖母起初對(duì)MrSalas的接近感到有些驚訝，隨后從他的微笑和話(huà)語(yǔ)中感受到善意，心中滿(mǎn)是疑惑和好奇，不知道他要做什么，同時(shí)也有一絲期待。第二段：當(dāng)MrSalas拿著全天通票回來(lái)時(shí)，作者和祖母先是震驚，不敢相信這是真的，接著轉(zhuǎn)為極度的喜悅和感激，作者興奮地想要去體驗(yàn)更多游樂(lè)設(shè)施，祖母則為陌生人的慷慨而感動(dòng)，對(duì)人性的美好有了更深的體會(huì)，整個(gè)氛圍充滿(mǎn)了溫暖和幸福。故事線：第一段：MrSalas帶著微笑走過(guò)來(lái)，夸贊作者在旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬上的快樂(lè)模樣讓他很感動(dòng)，詢(xún)問(wèn)了作者的一些情況，然后說(shuō)他去去就回，讓作者和祖母在原地等候，作者和祖母面面相覷，不知道他葫蘆里賣(mài)的什么藥，但還是站在那里等待。第二段：過(guò)了一會(huì)兒，MrSalas拿著一張雪松點(diǎn)游樂(lè)園的全天通票回來(lái)，遞給作者，說(shuō)他希望作者能在游樂(lè)園度過(guò)愉快的一天，因?yàn)樗麖淖髡叩难壑锌吹搅藢?duì)游樂(lè)園的熱愛(ài)和渴望。作者接過(guò)票，激動(dòng)得說(shuō)不出話(huà)來(lái)，祖母也眼眶濕潤(rùn)，不停地向MrSalas道謝。作者拿著票，迫不及待地沖向其他游樂(lè)設(shè)施，開(kāi)始了他快樂(lè)而難忘的一天。主旨升華句Inthemostunexpectedmoments,kindnesscanblossomlikeaflower,spreadingitsfragranceandturningasimpledayintoamemorythatwarmstheheartforever.（在最意想不到的時(shí)刻，善良能如花朵般綻放，散發(fā)芬芳，將平凡的一天變成永遠(yuǎn)溫暖心靈的回憶。）Sometimes,thesmallestactsofgenerositycanopenthedoortoaworldofjoyandwonder,remindingusthateveninthefaceofhardship,therearealwaysangelsamongus,readytomakeourdreamscometrue.（有時(shí)，最微小的慷慨之舉能打開(kāi)一扇通往歡樂(lè)和奇妙世界的門(mén)，提醒我們即使身處困境，身邊也總有天使，隨時(shí)準(zhǔn)備讓我們的夢(mèng)想成真。）Asingleactofkindnesscanbethesparkthatignitesachainreactionofloveandhappiness,provingthatinaworldthatoftenseemscold,thewarmthofthehumanspiritcanstillshinebrightlyandtransformlives.（一個(gè)善舉可以成為點(diǎn)燃愛(ài)與幸福連鎖反應(yīng)的火花，證明在這個(gè)看似冷漠的世界里，人類(lèi)精神的溫暖仍然可以閃耀光芒，改變生活。）Thekindnessofastrangerislikearayofsunshineonacloudyday,breakingthroughthegloomandilluminatingthepathtoadayfilledwithlaughter,adventure,andcherishedmemories.（陌生人的善良就像陰天里的一縷陽(yáng)光，穿透陰霾，照亮了通往充滿(mǎn)歡笑、冒險(xiǎn)和珍貴回憶的一天的道路。）Inthesimplegestureofgivingaticket,MrSalasshowedusthattruewealthliesnotinmoney,butintheabilitytoshareloveandcreatehappiness,leavinganindeliblemarkonayoungheartandteachingusallthepowerofkindness.（在送出一張票的簡(jiǎn)單舉動(dòng)中，MrSalas向我們展示了真正的財(cái)富不在于金錢(qián)，而在于分享愛(ài)和創(chuàng)造幸福的能力，在一顆年輕的心上留下了不可磨滅的印記，并讓我們都懂得了善良的力量。）寫(xiě)作示范第一篇Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.Helookedatmeandsaid,"Youngman,Isawhowmuchyouenjoyedthatride.Youhaveaspecialkindofjoythat'scontagious."Iblushedandhidbehindmygrandmotheralittle.Hethenaskedmygrandmotherafewquestionsaboutourdayandourfamily.Afterchattingforabit,hesaidhe'dberightbackandaskedustowait.MygrandmotherandIexchangedpuzzledglances,butwenodded.Aswewatchedhimwalkaway,Icouldn'thelpbutwonderwhathewasupto.Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.Igaspedindisbelief,andmygrandmother'seyesfilledwithtears.MrSalashandedthetickettomeandsaid,"Iwantyoutohaveagreatdayhere.Youdeserveit."Iwasoverjoyedandthankedhimoverandover.Mygrandmotherhuggedhimtightly,unabletoexpresshergratitudeinwords.Withtheticketinhand,Ifeltliketheluckiestkidintheworld.Iranofftothenearestride,myheartfilledwithexcitementandanewfoundfaithinthekindnessofstrangers.ThatdayatCedarPointbecameoneofthemostmemorabledaysofmylife,allbecauseofMrSalas'sincredibleactofkindness.第二篇Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.Hecroucheddowntomylevelandsaid,"Youknow,kid,youlookedlikeyouwerehavingthetimeofyourlifeonthatcarousel.ItremindedmeofwhenIwasachildandhowmuchthesesimplejoysmeant."Istaredathim,alittleconfusedbutalsotouchedbyhiswords.Hethenpattedmyheadandtoldmygrandmotherhehadanidea.Hewalkedawaybriskly,leavinguswithasenseofanticipation.Mygrandmothersqueezedmyhand,andwewaited,ourheartspoundingwithamixtureofcuriosityandhope.Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.Myjawdropped,andIcouldhardlybelievemyeyes.Mygrandmotherletoutasmallcryofsurprise.MrSalasgrinnedandsaid,"Ijustcouldn'tletthislittleone'sdayendsosoon.Iwanthimtoexperienceallthefunthisplacehastooffer."Iwasspeechlesswithgratitude.Mygrandmotherthankedhimprofusely,andIhuggedthetickettomychestasifitwerethemostpreciousthingintheworld.Fromthatmomenton,Idashedfromoneridetoanother,mylaughterechoingthroughthepark.Thatday,notonlydidIgettoenjoythewondersofCedarPoint,butIalsolearnedthatkindnesshasthepowertoturnanordinarydayintoanextraordinaryadventure,andthattheworldisfullofgood-heartedpeoplewaitingtomakeadifference.參考答案Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.Heaskedwhywedidn’tcontinuetoridethecarousel.Mygrandmotherexplainedtohimthatweonlyhadenoughmoneyforoneride.Henoddedinunderstanding.Butthen,hiseyesheldaglimmerofkindnessandunderstandingashelookedatmeandmygrandmother.Hesaidgently,“Excuseme,ma’am.Ic