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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Petersatatthekitchentable,havingbreakfast.Ithadbeenanotherbadnightforhisbabysister,Lily,andhisparentswerearguinginthesittingroom.HeheardhismothermentionTom,anoldmanwholivedintheforest.PeteroftenexploredtheforestandknewMr.Tomwasakindherbalist(草藥醫(yī)生).WasittruethathecouldhelpLily?Peterwouldn’trestuntilhefounditout.Afterbreakfast,Peterimmediatelysetoff.Itwasashortwalkfromhishometotheforest’sedge.Peterwassofocusedonhisthoughtsofhissisterthathedidn’tnoticethestrangecryingsoundsinthedistanceuntilhegotcloseenough.Hefollowedthesoundsuntiltheyledhimtoacave.Aflashlightlitupsuddenlyinthecave,andPetersawalittleboylyingonthedirt-coveredstone.PeterlearnedthattheboycalledCliffcametothisforestwithhismotherbutranoffbyhimself.Cliffwasinjuredanddidn’tseehismother.PeterdecidedtotakeClifftoMr.Tom.WhentheysawMr.Tomandtoldhimeverything,Mr.Tomtreatedtheinjurywithabandage(繃帶)andhelpedcontactCliff’smotherovertheradio.PetermovedclosertolookatCliff’sbandagedankleandfeltasenseofrelief.ThenPeterturnedtoMr.Tomandsaid,“Mr.Tom,mybabysisterisverysick.IoverheardMommentionyou,soIcameoutheretodaytoaskyouforhelp...”BeforePeterfinishedhiswords,Mr.Tomsaid,“Ihadtriedtohelp,butyoursisterneededtobesenttoabighospitalandalotofmoney...”Peterrealizedhisparentshadarguedbecausetheycouldn’taffordLily’streatment.Mr.TomwastryingtocomfortPeterwhensomeoneknockedonthedoor.Mr.Tomopeneditandsawalady,whoclaimedherselfasCliff’smother.“It’syou!”Mr.Tomshoutedexcitedly.“You’reafan?”theladysaid.“Icametothisareatospendaholidaywithmyson.Thankfully,youhavesavedhim.Whereishe?”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mr.Tomnoddedandledtheladytoherson.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenextmorning,inhisbedroom,Peterwaswokenupbyajoyfulscream.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Peter的妹妹Lily生病,父母為此爭吵,Peter聽聞住在森林里的草藥醫(yī)生Tom或許能幫忙,便前往森林。途中他發(fā)現(xiàn)受傷的小男孩Cliff,將其帶到Tom處。Tom為Cliff治療并聯(lián)系其母親。Peter向Tom求助妹妹之事,得知妹妹需去大醫(yī)院且費用高昂。這時Cliff的母親前來道謝,故事在此處續(xù)寫,展現(xiàn)了這筆意外之財如何幫助Peter一家解決難題,突出了善良和助人終有回報的主題。故事分析伏筆與回應(yīng):伏筆:Peter聽到父母提到Tom,且知道他是草藥醫(yī)生,便決定去森林找他幫助妹妹。
回應(yīng):Peter在森林中找到了Tom,引出后續(xù)向他求助妹妹病情以及一系列故事發(fā)展,體現(xiàn)Peter對妹妹的關(guān)心和為解決家庭困境所做的努力。伏筆:Peter在森林中聽到奇怪哭聲,循聲發(fā)現(xiàn)受傷的Cliff,這使他決定帶Cliff找Tom治療。
回應(yīng):通過救助Cliff,Peter與Tom有了更多接觸,也為Cliff的母親出現(xiàn)做鋪墊,同時展現(xiàn)Peter的善良,推動情節(jié)發(fā)展,使故事更加豐富。伏筆:Tom提到Peter的妹妹需送大醫(yī)院且費用高,父母為此爭吵,暗示家庭面臨經(jīng)濟困境。
回應(yīng):Cliff的母親送來的錢解決了這一問題,回應(yīng)了前文關(guān)于費用的伏筆,使故事發(fā)展合情合理,突出了善良帶來轉(zhuǎn)機的主題。伏筆:Peter探索過森林,熟悉路徑,所以能順利找到Tom的住所,為故事發(fā)展提供了合理性。
回應(yīng):在后續(xù)情節(jié)中,他在森林中的行動和決策都基于此,如及時帶Cliff就醫(yī)等,進一步強化了他勇敢、善良且有擔(dān)當(dāng)?shù)男蜗?。伏筆:Cliff的母親帶著兒子來森林度假,為她在森林中出現(xiàn)并對Tom表達感激之情埋下伏筆。
回應(yīng):她的出現(xiàn)和慷慨解囊不僅解決了Peter妹妹的治療費用問題,還升華了故事主題,即善良的行為會引發(fā)連鎖反應(yīng),傳遞溫暖與希望。續(xù)寫要點:第一段:Mr.Tomnoddedandledtheladytoherson.Cliff'smotherthankedMr.Tomprofuselyandofferedtocompensatehimfurther.Mr.Tom,instead,toldheraboutPeter'ssister'ssituation.Touchedbythestory,theladydecidedtodonatethemoneyshehadintendedtogiveMr.TomasarewardtohelpPeter'ssister.Mr.TomquicklycontactedPeter'sparentswiththegoodnews.第二段:Thenextmorning,inhisbedroom,Peterwaswokenupbyajoyfulscream.Itwashismother,whorushedintotellhimthatakindstrangerhadpaidforLily'streatmentandthatshewasgoingtogetbetter.Peterwasoverjoyedandrealizedthepowerofkindness.HethankedMr.Tomandlater,whenhemetCliffandhismotheragain,hethankedthemaswell.Fromthenon,Peterwasinspiredtobekindtoothers,knowingthatevenasmallactofkindnesscouldmakeabigdifference.情感線:Peter最初因妹妹生病而憂心忡忡,帶著希望尋找Tom;在救助Cliff過程中展現(xiàn)出善良和責(zé)任感;得知妹妹治療費用高昂時感到無助;當(dāng)Cliff的母親表示愿意幫忙時,又燃起希望;最后妹妹有了治療機會,他滿心歡喜且深受觸動,立志傳承善良,情感變化豐富,凸顯了善良在困境中帶來希望與力量的主題。故事線:Peter的妹妹Lily生病,父母爭吵,Peter聽聞Tom能幫忙。Peter前往森林,途中發(fā)現(xiàn)受傷的Cliff。Peter帶Cliff找Tom治療,Tom聯(lián)系Cliff的母親。Peter向Tom求助妹妹之事,得知費用難題。Cliff的母親出現(xiàn),Tom告知其Peter妹妹情況。續(xù)寫部分,Cliff的母親捐款,Lily有了治療機會。主旨升華句:Kindnessisaboomerangthatalwaysreturnstous,sometimesinthemostunexpectedways.(善良是一個回旋鏢,總會以最意想不到的方式回到我們身邊。)Inthedarkestoftimes,asingleactofkindnesscanbetheglimmerofhopethatlightsuptheentiresky.(在最黑暗的時刻,一個小小的善舉可能成為照亮整個天空的希望之光。)Whenwereachouttohelpothers,weareunknowinglyopeningthedoortoblessingsthatwillcomeourway.(當(dāng)我們伸出援手幫助他人時,不知不覺中也為自己開啟了即將到來的祝福之門。)Thechainofkindnessisunbreakable;oncestarted,ithasthepowertotransformlivesandspreadlovefarandwide.(善良的鏈條是牢不可破的;一旦開始,它就有能力改變生活,將愛廣泛傳播。)Everyactofkindnessisaseedplantedinthegardenoflife,whichwillsurelybearthefruitofloveandgratitudeinduetime.(每一個善舉都是在生命花園里種下的一顆種子,在適當(dāng)?shù)臅r候一定會結(jié)出愛與感恩的果實。)寫作示范第一篇
Mr.Tomnoddedandledtheladytoherson.AsshesawCliff,reliefwashedoverherface.ShehuggedhersontightlyandturnedtoMr.Tom."Ican'tthankyouenough.Youareatruehero."Mr.Tomsmiledandsaid,"Thereisanotherchildwhoneedshelp.Peter'ssisterisverysick,andhisfamilycan'taffordthetreatment."Thelady'seyessoftened.Shereachedintoherpurseandtookoutathickwadofcash."PleasegivethistoPeter'sparents.Ihopeithelps."Mr.Tomwasastonishedbutgratefullyaccepted.HeimmediatelycalledPeter'sfatherandsharedthegoodnews.Thenextmorning,inhisbedroom,Peterwaswokenupbyajoyfulscream.Itwashismother,cryingtearsofhappiness."Peter,amiraclehashappened!AkindwomanpaidforLily'streatment.She'sgoingtobeokay!"Peter'sheartswelledwithgratitude.HerushedtofindMr.Tomandthankedhim.Later,whenhemetCliffandhismotheragain,hethankedthempersonally.Fromthatdayon,Petervowedtoalwaysbekind,knowingthatkindnesscouldchangelives.Helearnedthatinaworldfullofdifficulties,ahelpinghandcouldbethemostpreciousgift.第二篇
Mr.Tomnoddedandledtheladytoherson.SherushedtoCliff'sside,checkinghisinjuryandthankingMr.Tomrepeatedly.Mr.TomtookadeepbreathandtoldheraboutPeter'ssister.Theladylistenedintentlyandwasdeeplymoved."Ihavebeenblessedtoday,andIwanttopassonthatblessing."ShehandedMr.Tomacheck."PleasemakesurethisgetstoPeter'sfamily.Ihopeiteasestheirburden."Mr.Tomwasoverwhelmedbyherkindness.Hepromisedtodeliveritpromptly.Thenextmorning,inhisbedroom,Peterwaswokenupbyajoyfulscream.Hismotherburstintotheroom,herfacebeaming."Peter,someoneanonymoushaspaidforLily'shospitalbills.Shecangetthetreatmentsheneeds!"Petercouldn'tbelieveit.Heknewitwastheresultofthekindnesshehadwitnessed.Fromthenon,Petermadeithismissiontospreadkindness.Heunderstoodthatasimpleactofkindnesscouldcreatearippleeffect,bringinghopeandhappinesstothoseinneed.Theexperiencetaughthimthateveninthetoughestsituations,kindnesswasthekeytounlockingabetterfuture.Onepossibleversion:Mr.Tomnoddedandledtheladytoherson.TheladyhurriedtoCliff’ssideandhuggedhim.Mr.TomtoldtheladythatitwasPeterwhotookherinjuredso
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