高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+十三歲為母選圣誕禮的溫暖回憶+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)十三歲為母選圣誕禮的溫暖回憶1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwas13,Ihadanawarenessthatmomsshoulderalotofresponsibilitywithoutalotofreward.Mymomwasnoexception.ShebroughtustoUnionStationtohelpusbuyChristmaspresentsforeachother-andforher.BecauseofMom,mysiblings(兄弟姐妹)andIwouldgettoexperiencethejoyofgiving.Iwantedtofindhersomethingspecial.4續(xù)寫原文ThepleasantsmellofchocolatereachedmynoseandIwantedtostay.Normally,whenwecamehere,thecandymakerswerewhatIwantedtoseemost,buttodayIhadamission.So,wewalkedon.Weexploredmanystoressellingjewelry,purses,toys,clothingandtreats,butnothingcaughtmyeye.IjustwantedsomethinguniqueforMom.Ididn’tknowwhat,butIknewIwouldrecognizeitwhenIsawit.Meanwhile,Iwonderedeventhoughshepromisedtonotlookwhilewewentshopping,howwouldwhateverIpickedbeasurprise?Allofasudden,thereitwas,theperfectgiftforher!Ononeofthestandssatafigurine(小塑像)ofalionandlamblyingdowntogether.ItwouldgowellwithadrawingofasimilarsceneMomhadhungonthewall.Ihadheardhertalkabouthowlongshehadownedthepictureandwhohaddrawnitforher.Iknewitwasveryspecial.5續(xù)寫原文Iturnedthefigurineovertocheckthepriceandcouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Icouldaffordit!Momdidn’tknowit,butIhadputsomeextramoneyinmypocketfrombabysittingtheneighborkids,soIhadmoremoneythanwhatshehadgivenme.Butshewasstandingnearby.NowaycouldImakethepurchasewithoutherknowing.Amomentlater,shenoticedtheverysamefigurine.Iwatchedhereyeslightup.Shepickeditupandturneditover.6段首句Paragraph1：Thensheputitdowndisappointedlyafterseeingtheprice.Paragraph2：IplaceditunderthetreeandsettledintowaitforChristmasmorning.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了13歲時，作者意識到母親承擔(dān)諸多責(zé)任卻收獲甚少，于是在圣誕節(jié)前夕，母親帶他們?nèi)ヂ?lián)合車站買禮物時，作者一心想給母親挑選一份特別的禮物。盡管一路上巧克力的香氣誘人，各類商店商品琳瑯滿目，但都未入作者法眼。直到看到一個獅子和羔羊躺在一起的小塑像，它與母親掛在墻上的一幅畫相似，作者認(rèn)定這就是理想的禮物。價格也在作者可承受范圍內(nèi)，不過母親就在旁邊，作者正猶豫時，母親也注意到了這個塑像，眼睛亮了起來。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thensheputitdowndisappointedlyafterseeingtheprice.Travis被老師毫無根據(jù)的指責(zé)和嚴(yán)厲的懲罰震驚得呆立當(dāng)場，委屈的淚水在眼眶里打轉(zhuǎn)，他怎么也沒想到自己滿心歡喜的展示會換來這樣的結(jié)果，一顆熱愛繪畫的心仿佛被潑了一盆冷水，既難過又困惑。一整天他都無精打采，同學(xué)們的詢問也讓他更加窘迫?；氐郊液?，他撲進(jìn)媽媽的懷里大哭起來，向媽媽訴說著這一切，眼中滿是不解與傷心，媽媽心疼地安慰著他，決定陪他一起去學(xué)校找老師把事情弄清楚，還孩子一個清白。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：IplaceditunderthetreeandsettledintowaitforChristmasmorning.待母親離開后，我迅速跑回攤位前，小心翼翼地拿起那個小塑像，緊緊地攥在手里，仿佛握住了全世界最珍貴的寶貝。我懷揣著激動又忐忑的心情走向收銀臺，付完錢后，又精心地找了一個漂亮的盒子將它包裝起來，藏在了圣誕樹的深處，那里被層層枝葉遮擋，十分隱蔽。之后的日子里，每次看到圣誕樹，我都會想象著母親在圣誕節(jié)早上發(fā)現(xiàn)這份禮物時的驚喜表情，心中滿是期待，默默地數(shù)著日子，盼望著那一刻的到來，希望這份禮物能讓母親知道我對她深深的愛和感激。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thensheputitdowndisappointedlyafterseeingtheprice.Hershouldersslumpedeversoslightlyasshereluctantlyreleasedthefigurinefromhergrasp.Aflickeroflongingstilllingeredinhereyesasshegazedatitonelasttime,asiftryingtoetchitseverydetailintohermemory.Witharesignedsigh,sheturnedaway,herstepsslowandheavy.Thebustlingnoiseofthestoreseemedtofadeintothebackgroundasshewaslostinherthoughts,perhapscalculatingthefamilybudgetandrealizingthatthissmallluxurywasjustbeyondreachfornow.Shetriedtomaskherdisappointmentwithafaintsmile,butIcouldseetheglimmerofsadnessbeneathit.14范文呈現(xiàn)IplaceditunderthetreeandsettledintowaitforChristmasmorning.MyheartwaspoundingwithamixtureofexcitementandnervousnessasIcarefullytuckedthewrappedfigurinebeneaththethickboughsoftheChristmastree.Itookastepbacktoadmiremyhandiwork,imaginingthelookofsheerdelightonmymother'sfacewhenshewoulddiscoverit.Ihadsavedupeverypennyfrombabysitting,andnowitallseemedworthit.Asthedayspassed,Iwouldoftensneakglancesatthetree,theanticipationbuildingwitheachpassingmoment.Icouldhardlywaittoseehereyeslightupandhearhergaspofsurprise,knowingthatthissmallgesturewouldhopefullyconveythedepthofmyloveandgratitudeforallthatshedid.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Then,hereyesdimmingwithdisappointment,sheputthefigurinedownafterglancingattheprice.Itwasasifallherhopesofowningithadbeendashedinthatinstant.Herhands,whichhadhelditsotenderlyjustmomentsago,nowhunglimplybyherside.Withaheavyheart,shewalkedaway,thehustleandbustleofthestoreseemingtoswallowherfigure.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)I,ontheotherhand,seizedtheopportunity.Havingsavedupmyhard-earnedmoneyfrombabysitting,Iquicklypurchasedthepreciousfigurine.ItwasIwhowouldbringasmiletoherfacethisChristmas.Icarefullyplaceditunderthetree,thebrightlycoloredornamentsandtwinklinglightsaddingtotheanticipation.SettlingintowaitforChristmasmorning,