高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)+暑假鄉(xiāng)下：鏡子碎后的抉擇 課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)暑假鄉(xiāng)下：鏡子碎后的抉擇1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Thelong-awaitedsummervacationfinallycame,andIimmediatelyheadedforGrandpa’scountrysidehomewithexcitement.IwaslookingforwardtoseeingGrandpaandplayingwithmybestfriend,Steve,hissmartdog.Lifeinthecountrysidewasgreat.IenjoyedGrandpa’stastyvegetablesoupandhadalotoffunplayingwithSteve.Weexploredthewoods,chased(追逐)birds,andtriedfishingbythestream,laughingallthewhile.Oneday,Grandpawenttothefarmtogetfreshpumpkinsandtomatoesforabigdinner.Whilewaitingforhimtocomeback,Ifeltabitbored.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文“Steve,let’shavesomefun!”Ideclared,andwithawag(搖擺)ofhistail,heexcitedlyagreed.Ourgameofhide-and-seekfilledthehousewithlaughter.“Youcan’tcatchme!”Ilaughed,hidingandrunningawayfromSteve.ButStevewassosmartthathecouldalwaysfindme,whetherinthebedroomorthecupboard.However,whilewewerehavingfun,somethingunexpectedhappened.Suddenlytherewasaloudcrashinthelivingroom,breakingthecalmlikeastonedisturbingaquietpond.ItturnedoutthatIaccidentallyknockedoveramirrorwhileplaying.Themirror,onceneatandprettyonthetable,wasnowbrokenpiecesonthefloorbecauseofourplayfulgame.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文MyheartpoundedasIlookedatthemess.Thewindblewthroughtheopenwindow,makingthecurtainswavinginthewind,whichupsetmeevenmore.Ididn’tknowwhattodowiththebrokenmirror.ShouldItellGrandpaortrytohidewhathadhappened?Ithoughtaboutit,andSteveloweredhisears.Itseemedthathealsorealizedthatwehadmadeahugemistake.“Whatshouldwedo,Steve?”Iaskedquietly,tryingtofindcomfort.Itwasatoughdecision,andIfeltreallyguilty.Admittingthemistakeseemedhard.SuddenlyIhadanidea—maybeIcouldputtheblameonStevealone.6段首句Paragraph1:WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.Paragraph2:Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’svegetablesoupwasnowmixedwithregret.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9文中講述了暑假，“我”懷著激動(dòng)的心情前往鄉(xiāng)下?tīng)敔敿?，與爺爺和他的聰明狗狗史蒂夫度過(guò)了歡樂(lè)時(shí)光，一起探索樹(shù)林、追鳥(niǎo)、釣魚(yú)。一天爺爺去農(nóng)場(chǎng)，“我”和史蒂夫玩捉迷藏時(shí)，不小心撞碎了客廳的鏡子?？吹界R子破碎的瞬間，“我”內(nèi)心充滿慌張與愧疚，不知如何是好，甚至還產(chǎn)生了將過(guò)錯(cuò)歸咎于史蒂夫的念頭。故事展現(xiàn)了“我”在鄉(xiāng)村的快樂(lè)假期突遇意外狀況，以及“我”在犯錯(cuò)后的復(fù)雜心理，讓讀者不禁好奇“我”最終會(huì)如何抉擇，是否能勇敢面對(duì)自己的錯(cuò)誤。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph1:WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.爺爺?shù)纳碛皠偝霈F(xiàn)在門口，他的目光便被地上那堆破碎的鏡片吸引住了。我站在一旁，心像敲鼓一樣“砰砰”直跳，偷偷瞥向爺爺，只見(jiàn)他微微皺起眉頭，眼睛里滿是疑惑與驚訝?？諝夥路鹚查g凝固，我緊張得連呼吸都放輕了，兩只手不停地揪著衣角，大腦飛速運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)，想著是不是應(yīng)該現(xiàn)在就坦白一切，可又害怕?tīng)敔數(shù)呢?zé)備。史蒂夫似乎也感受到了緊張的氣氛，悄悄地躲到了桌子底下，只露出半個(gè)身子，不安地看著爺爺。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph2:Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’svegetablesoupwasnowmixedwithregret..Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’svegetablesoupwasnowmixedwithregret.餐桌上，原本香氣撲鼻的蔬菜湯此刻在我口中變得索然無(wú)味。我低著頭，機(jī)械地用勺子攪動(dòng)著碗里的湯，心里全是對(duì)鏡子的愧疚。爺爺像往常一樣，往我碗里夾了一塊南瓜，笑著問(wèn)我今天過(guò)得怎么樣，聲音里聽(tīng)不出一絲生氣。我抬頭看了爺爺一眼，又迅速低下頭，囁嚅著回答“挺好的”，可心里卻像被一塊大石頭壓著，沉重得喘不過(guò)氣來(lái)。后悔的情緒在心中蔓延，我多希望時(shí)間能倒流，讓我在玩鬧的時(shí)候小心一點(diǎn)，不犯下這樣的錯(cuò)誤。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.Themomenthesteppedthroughthedoorway,hiseyeswereimmediatelydrawntotheshatteredpiecesscatteredacrossthefloor.Istoodthere,myheartpoundingviolently,stealingfurtiveglancesathim.Hisbrowsknittedslightly,andhiseyeswerefilledwithastonishmentandbewilderment.Theairseemedtofreezeinaninstant.IwassonervousthatIscarcelydaredtobreathe,myhandsfidgetingwiththehemofmyshirtasmymindraced,debatingwhetherIshouldconfessrightthenandthere,yetdreadingtheimpendingscolding.Steve,too,seemedtosensethetenseatmosphereandquietlyslunkunderthetable,onlyhalfofhisbodyvisible,peeringuneasilyatGrandpa.14范文呈現(xiàn)Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’svegetablesoupwasnowmixedwithregret.Atthediningtable,theonce-deliciousvegetablesoupnowtastedblandinmymouth.Ihungmyheadlow,mechanicallystirringthesoupinmybowlwithaspoon,mymindconsumedwithguiltoverthebrokenmirror.Grandpa,asusual,placedapieceofpumpkininmybowlandaskedwithasmilehowmydayhadbeen,hisvoicebetrayingnohintofanger.Iglancedupathimbrieflybeforequicklyavertingmygazeandmumblingahalf-hearted"Fine."Butinside,Ifeltasifaheavystonewereweighingmedown,makingithardtobreathe.Thefeelingofregretspreadthroughme,andIwishedwithallmyheartthatIcouldturnbacktimeandhavebeenmorecarefulduringourplaytime,soasnottohavecommittedsuchablunder.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.Nosoonerhadhecrossedthethresholdthanhisgazewasrivetedonthefragmentedmirrorthatlaystrewnacrossthefloorlikeajigsawpuzzleundone.Standingthere,myheartthumpingwildly,Ipeekedathimnervously.Hisbrowsknittedinconsternation,astonishmentpaintedvividlyacrosshisface.Theairhungheavy,asiftimeitselfhadpaused.Steve,sensingthetautatmosphere,hadcreptbeneaththetable,onlyhisquiveringtailprotruding.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’sv