2024-2025學(xué)年人教版九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí) 專(zhuān)題09 書(shū)面表達(dá) 【期末必刷17篇】

-2025學(xué)年九年級(jí)上期期末考點(diǎn)大串講（人教版）專(zhuān)題09書(shū)面表達(dá)（17篇）同步作文（7篇）1．發(fā)明改變了世界，改變了我們的生活。比如，電視和自行車(chē)給我們的生活帶來(lái)了許多變化和便利。請(qǐng)你以“Inventions”為話題，根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：1.短文必須包括圖片中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2.詞數(shù)90左右(開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Inventionsarecreatedeverydaybecausepeoplewouldliketomakelifeeasier._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．俗話說(shuō)：“國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)?！睘榱耸棺优硇慕】?、順利成長(zhǎng)，使家庭成員之間的關(guān)系更融洽、更和諧，每個(gè)家庭都會(huì)有這樣或那樣的家庭規(guī)矩。比如：必須按時(shí)回家，不準(zhǔn)玩電腦游戲等。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合你家的實(shí)際情況，根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以“Myfamilyrules”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：1.家里有哪些家規(guī)；2.對(duì)家規(guī)的感受；3.對(duì)父母的建議。要求：詞數(shù)100左右。Myfamilyrules____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyfamilyrulesMyparentsareverystrictwithme，andtheyhavemadesomebasicrulesthatImustobey.Firstly，Imustgethomeandfinishmyhomeworkontimeafterschool.Secondly，Icannotplaycomputergames，eveninmyfreetime.Thirdly，Ihavetodosomechores，suchasmakingthebedandtidyingmybedroom.IfIbreakoneofthem，Iwillbepunished.Butthankstotheserules，Icanliveahealthyandregularlife.Ithinkthesecondruleisunfairtome.IhopesometimesIcouldbeallowedtoplaycomputergamesforawhile.Itwillmakemerelaxed.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合你家的實(shí)際情況，根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以“Myfamilyrules”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：1.家里有哪些家規(guī)；2.對(duì)家規(guī)的感受；3.對(duì)父母的建議。要求：詞數(shù)100左右。第二段敘述“守株待兔”這一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并結(jié)尾。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚條里，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，特別適用了表示先后順序的詞（First,Secondly,Thirdly）使文章更具條理性，思維縝密。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：areverystrictwith；afterschool；playcomputergames；suchas；makemerelaxed。句型：定語(yǔ)從句theyhavemadesomebasicrulesthatImustobey.條件狀語(yǔ)從句IfIbreakoneofthem，Iwillbepunished.賓語(yǔ)從句IhopesometimesIcouldbeallowedtoplaycomputergamesforawhile.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚條里，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，特別適用了表示先后順序的詞（First,Secondly,Thirdly）使文章更具條理性，思維縝密。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。（4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。

（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。3．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述上周三你生日那天發(fā)生的一件神秘的事。要點(diǎn)提示：1.放學(xué)回家后，家里沒(méi)有人；2.我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的房間很亂；3.分析可能的原因，如小偷闖入；4.后來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)是一只小狗在房間里，這是媽媽送給我的生日禮物。寫(xiě)作要求：1.詞數(shù)90左右(開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。參考詞匯：inamess亂糟糟；breakin闖入ItwasmybirthdaylastWednesday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你叫WangYang，你喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，也有一些其他的愛(ài)好，如做運(yùn)動(dòng)、讀書(shū)等。請(qǐng)你給筆友WeiHua回復(fù)一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容如下：1.你剛剛考完試，很高興有時(shí)間給她寫(xiě)回信，談?wù)搻?ài)好；2.你喜歡輕柔和傳統(tǒng)的音樂(lè)及理由；3.喜歡做運(yùn)動(dòng)健身；4.喜歡讀科學(xué)書(shū)籍及理由。要求：發(fā)揮想象力，思路清晰；詞數(shù)80左右。DearWeiHua,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangYang假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Chris對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣，他給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件，詢問(wèn)中國(guó)人日常生活中的基本社交禮儀，如待人接物、餐桌禮儀等。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)一封郵件，介紹你所知道的相關(guān)禮儀。提示詞語(yǔ)：manners,shakehands,polite,gift,chopsticks提示問(wèn)題：·Whatdowedowhenwemeetpeopleforthefirsttime?·Howdowebehaveproperlyattable?DearChris,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinChinesesocialmanners.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopetheaboveishelpful.Pleasefeelfreetoaskformoreinformation.Yours,LiHua6．人非圣賢，孰能無(wú)過(guò)？作為一名學(xué)生，在學(xué)習(xí)或生活中你是否也曾犯過(guò)錯(cuò)誤、做過(guò)傻事？在認(rèn)識(shí)到自己所犯錯(cuò)誤或明白所做的傻事后，你又是如何改正的呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示，以“TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。1.寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示：（1）簡(jiǎn)述你犯過(guò)的一次錯(cuò)誤或做過(guò)的一件傻事；（2）談?wù)勀闶侨绾卧谒说膸椭禄蛟谧约旱呐ο赂恼?；?）你從中吸取了哪些教訓(xùn)或收獲了哪些成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。2.注意事項(xiàng)：（1）詞數(shù)：80左右；（2）短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含提示的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；（4）已給標(biāo)題不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．同學(xué)們，還記得曾經(jīng)令你覺(jué)得尷尬、倒霉或沮喪的一天嗎？請(qǐng)你以“Whata(n)_________day”為題，寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的短文，敘述這段經(jīng)歷及當(dāng)時(shí)的感受。提示:1.Whendidithappen?2.Whathappenedfirst?3.Whathappenednext?4.Howdidthedayend?5.Howdidyoufeelaboutthisday?Whata(n)__________day期末真題（10篇）1．（23-24九年級(jí)上·河北唐山·期末）王梅的英國(guó)朋友Tony想了解中國(guó)人的日常風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣，下面是Tony給她發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件的部分內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容，以王梅的名義回復(fù)。IknowChineseusuallyhavegoodmanners.Canyoutellmesomemannersinyourfamilylife?Whatdoyouthinkofthem?注意：(1)回復(fù)郵件須回答所給郵件內(nèi)容中的兩個(gè)問(wèn)題，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)回復(fù)郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。(3)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。HiTony,I’mveryhappytoreceiveyouremail.Letmetellyousomemanners._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyoucanvisitourcountrysoon.Yours,WangMei2．（23-24九年級(jí)上·山西臨汾·期末）俗話說(shuō)：“沒(méi)有規(guī)矩不成方圓?！睘榱藙?chuàng)建和諧校園，使青少年身心健康成長(zhǎng)，學(xué)校和家庭都會(huì)給青少年制定很多規(guī)則。為了了解同學(xué)們對(duì)這些規(guī)則的意見(jiàn)，某校對(duì)1000名學(xué)生進(jìn)行了問(wèn)卷調(diào)查，下圖是部分項(xiàng)目的統(tǒng)計(jì)結(jié)果。假如你是該校的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)結(jié)合圖表信息，以“TheRuleIAgreewiththeMost”為主題，用兩段話寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明圖表內(nèi)容；2.從圖表中任選一項(xiàng)，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勊鼘?duì)你的積極影響。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。TheRuleIAgreewiththeMostOurschooldidasurveyamong1,000studentsonthetopicof“TheRuleIAgreewiththeMost”.Herearetheresults._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（23-24九年級(jí)上·陜西渭南·期末）在你的學(xué)習(xí)或日常生活中，一定有過(guò)最難忘的經(jīng)歷，比如開(kāi)心的、感動(dòng)的、激動(dòng)的等等。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，以“TheMostUnforgettableExperience”為題，用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：l.Whathappened?2.Howdoyoufeelaboutit?3.Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）TheMostUnforgettableExperienceIhaveexperiencedalotinmystudiesandlife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（23-24九年級(jí)上·河南·期末）中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)的遺產(chǎn)極其豐富并且輝煌，透著五千年文明古國(guó)深厚的文化底蘊(yùn)。你最喜歡的一種傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)形式是什么？請(qǐng)以“ArtinLife”為題，寫(xiě)一篇不少于100詞的短文。要求：1.短文必須包含思維導(dǎo)圖所有信息，重點(diǎn)談?wù)勀阆矚g這個(gè)藝術(shù)形式的原因；2.邏輯清晰，內(nèi)容完整，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名。ArtinLife______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（23-24九年級(jí)上·山東菏澤·期末）假如你叫LiMing，是一名中學(xué)生，經(jīng)常收聽(tīng)由英國(guó)主持人Philip主持的音樂(lè)節(jié)日。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)給主持人寫(xiě)一封100詞左右的信(開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))，內(nèi)容要包含所有提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。要點(diǎn)：1.你很喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)目，特別是節(jié)目播放的歌詞很棒的英文歌曲；2.你學(xué)習(xí)很忙或疲勞時(shí)，會(huì)打開(kāi)收音機(jī)聽(tīng)這個(gè)節(jié)目；3.從節(jié)目中你學(xué)到了很多新單詞；4.告訴他你最喜歡什么類(lèi)型的音樂(lè)，請(qǐng)他幫你介紹一些相關(guān)的歌手和CD。DearPhilip,MynameisLiMing.

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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouverymuch!Yours,LiMing6．（23-24九年級(jí)上·山東菏澤·期末）作為一名學(xué)生，上課是我們學(xué)習(xí)生活的主要內(nèi)容。從小學(xué)到中學(xué)，哪一次課堂是你銘記于心的？請(qǐng)以Aclasstoremember為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文描述你這難忘的課堂經(jīng)歷。內(nèi)容提示：1.Whathappenedintheclass?2.Howdidyoufeelabouttheclass?3.Whyisthisclassunforgettableforyou?要求：1.內(nèi)容包括以上要求，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.不少于90詞，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名等信息。Aclasstoremember________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（23-24九年級(jí)上·湖北隨州·期末）中華文化博大精深，展現(xiàn)出了獨(dú)特魅力，讓世界為之贊嘆。假如你是張濤，你的外國(guó)朋友Alan非常喜歡中國(guó)，想對(duì)中國(guó)文化有更進(jìn)一步的了解。請(qǐng)你從以下幾個(gè)方面，給他寫(xiě)一封email，向他簡(jiǎn)單介紹中國(guó)的文化特色。寫(xiě)作要求：1.文中必須包含圖中所有信息，并需要適當(dāng)拓展；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等個(gè)人信息；3.詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearAlan,Howisitgoing?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,ZhangTao8．（23-24九年級(jí)上·廣西梧州·期末）為滿足學(xué)生的個(gè)性發(fā)展需求，各個(gè)學(xué)校都自行設(shè)計(jì)和開(kāi)發(fā)了校本課程(school-basedlesson）。請(qǐng)以“Myfavouriteschool-basedlesson”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀阆矚g的校本課程。內(nèi)容包括：1．學(xué)校開(kāi)設(shè)的校本課程（如畫(huà)畫(huà)、音樂(lè)、攝影、舞蹈、書(shū)法、籃球等）；2．你喜歡上的一門(mén)校本課程及其開(kāi)課情況（如上課時(shí)間、活動(dòng)等）；3．選擇的理由。寫(xiě)作要求：1．內(nèi)容包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．文中不得透露真實(shí)個(gè)人信息；3．詞數(shù)80左右（短文首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：校本課程school-basedlesson

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籃球basketballMyfavouriteschool-basedlessonTherearemanydifferentkindsofschool-basedlessonsinourschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（23-24九年級(jí)上·山西呂梁·期末）青少年正處于價(jià)值觀形成的關(guān)鍵時(shí)期，對(duì)于很多事情都有自己的想法，為此，也免不了和自己的父母產(chǎn)生分歧。你一定也有類(lèi)似的經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)單寫(xiě)出你的家規(guī)，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀闶侨绾位馀c他們之間的矛盾的，并談?wù)勀阕约旱南敕敖ㄗh。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名。提示：be(not)supposed/expectedto;be(not)allowedtoAcountryhasitslawsandafamilyhasitsrules.Myfamilyalsohassomerules.Firstofall,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（23-24九年級(jí)上·浙江紹興·期末）寒假將近，某中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站正在舉行“Howtospendameaningfulwinterholiday?”征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)圍繞上述主題撰寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)征文投稿。征文要求：1.立意正確，主題清晰；2.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，邏輯流暢；3.語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美，句式豐富；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息；5.詞數(shù)：120左右。Howtospendameaningfulwinterholiday?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2024-2025學(xué)年九年級(jí)上期期末考點(diǎn)大串講（人教版）專(zhuān)題09書(shū)面表達(dá)（17篇）同步作文（7篇）1．發(fā)明改變了世界，改變了我們的生活。比如，電視和自行車(chē)給我們的生活帶來(lái)了許多變化和便利。請(qǐng)你以“Inventions”為話題，根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。要求：1.短文必須包括圖片中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；2.詞數(shù)90左右(開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Inventionsarecreatedeverydaybecausepeoplewouldliketomakelifeeasier._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inventionsarecreatedeverydaybecausepeoplewouldliketomakelifeeasier.TherearefamousinventionsliketheTVandthebicycle.TheTVprovidesuswithdifferentkindsofinformationsothatwecanknowmoreabouttheworld.Wecanalsowatchentertainmentprogramstorelaxourselves.Thebicycleisveryuseful,too.Wegotoschoolorworkbybike.It’snotsoexpensivethatmostofuscanaffordit.Itmakesnopollution,whichisgoodforourenvironment.What’smore,bicycleridingisakindofexcitingsportwhichisquitegoodforourhealth.Thoughtherehavebeenmanygreatinventions,Iwishtoinventakindofpenwhichcanhelpuswritemorequicklyandneatly.Ifwemeetproblemswhendoingourhomework,itwilltellushowtosolvethem.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：要求以“Inventions”為話題，結(jié)合圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明電視和自行車(chē)為人們提供了便利；第二步，具體介紹自行車(chē)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和騎自行車(chē)的好處；第三步，介紹自己想要的發(fā)明、用途和理由。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①differentkindsof不同種類(lèi)的②begoodfor有益于③What’smore另外[高分句型]①TheTVprovidesuswithdifferentkindsofinformationsothatwecanknowmoreabouttheworld.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句）②Ifwemeetproblemswhendoingourhomework,itwilltellushowtosolvethem.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）2．俗話說(shuō)：“國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)?！睘榱耸棺优硇慕】怠㈨樌砷L(zhǎng)，使家庭成員之間的關(guān)系更融洽、更和諧，每個(gè)家庭都會(huì)有這樣或那樣的家庭規(guī)矩。比如：必須按時(shí)回家，不準(zhǔn)玩電腦游戲等。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合你家的實(shí)際情況，根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以“Myfamilyrules”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：1.家里有哪些家規(guī)；2.對(duì)家規(guī)的感受；3.對(duì)父母的建議。要求：詞數(shù)100左右。Myfamilyrules____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyfamilyrulesMyparentsareverystrictwithme，andtheyhavemadesomebasicrulesthatImustobey.Firstly，Imustgethomeandfinishmyhomeworkontimeafterschool.Secondly，Icannotplaycomputergames，eveninmyfreetime.Thirdly，Ihavetodosomechores，suchasmakingthebedandtidyingmybedroom.IfIbreakoneofthem，Iwillbepunished.Butthankstotheserules，Icanliveahealthyandregularlife.Ithinkthesecondruleisunfairtome.IhopesometimesIcouldbeallowedtoplaycomputergamesforawhile.Itwillmakemerelaxed.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合你家的實(shí)際情況，根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以“Myfamilyrules”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。提示：1.家里有哪些家規(guī)；2.對(duì)家規(guī)的感受；3.對(duì)父母的建議。要求：詞數(shù)100左右。第二段敘述“守株待兔”這一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并結(jié)尾。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用第一人稱來(lái)敘述故事內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚條里，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，特別適用了表示先后順序的詞（First,Secondly,Thirdly）使文章更具條理性，思維縝密。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：areverystrictwith；afterschool；playcomputergames；suchas；makemerelaxed。句型：定語(yǔ)從句theyhavemadesomebasicrulesthatImustobey.條件狀語(yǔ)從句IfIbreakoneofthem，Iwillbepunished.賓語(yǔ)從句IhopesometimesIcouldbeallowedtoplaycomputergamesforawhile.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚條里，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，特別適用了表示先后順序的詞（First,Secondly,Thirdly）使文章更具條理性，思維縝密。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。（4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。

（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。3．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，描述上周三你生日那天發(fā)生的一件神秘的事。要點(diǎn)提示：1.放學(xué)回家后，家里沒(méi)有人；2.我發(fā)現(xiàn)我的房間很亂；3.分析可能的原因，如小偷闖入；4.后來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)是一只小狗在房間里，這是媽媽送給我的生日禮物。寫(xiě)作要求：1.詞數(shù)90左右(開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。參考詞匯：inamess亂糟糟；breakin闖入ItwasmybirthdaylastWednesday.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ItwasmybirthdaylastWednesday.Afterschool,Icamehomeasusual.Tomysurprise,IfoundmyroomwasinamesswhenIopenedthedoor.Mybookswereeverywhere.Ididn’tknowwhodidthat.Theremustbesomeonevisitingmyroom.Iwasveryangryanddecidedtofindoutwhodidthis.Iguesseditmightbeathiefwhobrokeinmyroom,butotherroomswerecleanandtidy.ThenIthoughtitcouldbemylittlebrother,whoplayedinmyroom.However,hewastooshorttoopenthedoor.AsIwondered,alovelydogcameout.Atthesametime,myparentscameandtoldmeitwasmybirthdaypresent.IwassohappythatIdidn’tcareaboutthemessanymore.ThatbirthdaypresentisthebestonethatI’veeverreceived.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”。③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)注意題干給出的“放學(xué)后回到家后，房間的情況”；“見(jiàn)到房間很亂，心里活動(dòng)是什么樣的”；以及“最后發(fā)覺(jué)是媽媽送的寵物狗”等要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹事件發(fā)生的背景。第二步，介紹事件發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)，重點(diǎn)介紹作者的心理活動(dòng)。第三步，收尾并表達(dá)作者對(duì)禮物的喜愛(ài)之情。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①mess混亂②angry生氣的③birthdaypresent生日禮物[高分句型]①Theremustbesomeonevisitingmyroom.（therebe句型）②ThenIthoughtitcouldbemylittlebrother,whoplayedinmyroom.（定語(yǔ)從句）4．假如你叫WangYang，你喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，也有一些其他的愛(ài)好，如做運(yùn)動(dòng)、讀書(shū)等。請(qǐng)你給筆友WeiHua回復(fù)一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容如下：1.你剛剛考完試，很高興有時(shí)間給她寫(xiě)回信，談?wù)搻?ài)好；2.你喜歡輕柔和傳統(tǒng)的音樂(lè)及理由；3.喜歡做運(yùn)動(dòng)健身；4.喜歡讀科學(xué)書(shū)籍及理由。要求：發(fā)揮想象力，思路清晰；詞數(shù)80左右。DearWeiHua,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangYang【答案】DearWeiHua,Thanksforyourletter.Howareyou?Ihavejustfinishedtheexams.I’mhappyIhavetimetowritetoyou.Eachofushashisownfavorites.AndIhavesomethingofmyownfavorites,too.Inmysparetime,Iliketoenjoymusicthatisgentleandtraditional,whichIthinkcanmakemefeeleasyandsetmefree.Besides,Ioftendosportstobuildupmybodyandkeephealthy.ButmosttimeIliketoreadbooksthatareonscience.Ithinkthatsciencebooksareinterestingandhavelotsofthingsthatinterestme.I’msureIcanlearnmorefromreadingbooksonscience.Yours,WangYang【詳解】這是一篇書(shū)信作文，也是提綱類(lèi)作文。假如你叫WangYang，你喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，也有一些其他的愛(ài)好，如做運(yùn)動(dòng)、讀書(shū)等。請(qǐng)你給筆友WeiHua回復(fù)一封電子郵件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。結(jié)合所給材料可知本文時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。認(rèn)真閱讀提示，審清主題，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，列出本文的寫(xiě)作提綱，要包含所給的所有內(nèi)容并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中可適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意表達(dá)順序，表達(dá)要有條理性，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，要符合邏輯關(guān)系，字?jǐn)?shù)要在80詞以上，不要寫(xiě)的太少。寫(xiě)完以后，注意再讀一遍，看看有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤（時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致等）。更重要的是，良好的健康是考試成功的重要因素。你需要早起早睡以獲得充足的睡眠。此外，你最好均衡飲食，避免吃垃圾食品。眾所周知，良好的人際關(guān)系可以使我們快樂(lè)和舒適。善待他人，幫助有困難的人。我們應(yīng)該和別人分享悲傷和快樂(lè)。最后但并非最不重要的是，我們有必要放松。你可以做一些運(yùn)動(dòng)，如散步或玩球。聽(tīng)音樂(lè)和看電影也是放松的好方法。希望你能享受你的學(xué)校生活，有一個(gè)光明的未來(lái)。【點(diǎn)睛】本書(shū)面表達(dá)是給學(xué)弟學(xué)妹的一封信，給他們提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，敘述清楚條里，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，使文章更具條理性，思維縝密。（1）學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。（2）列好提綱和要點(diǎn)及需要的重要短語(yǔ)或句型。（3）切忌堆砌詞語(yǔ)、句子，注意運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞使句子流暢、連貫。注意表達(dá)的順序。（4）注意書(shū)寫(xiě)的規(guī)范：大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)等的正確運(yùn)用。

（5）注意檢查：?jiǎn)卧~拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)序、主謂一致等。假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Chris對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣，他給你發(fā)來(lái)郵件，詢問(wèn)中國(guó)人日常生活中的基本社交禮儀，如待人接物、餐桌禮儀等。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)一封郵件，介紹你所知道的相關(guān)禮儀。提示詞語(yǔ)：manners,shakehands,polite,gift,chopsticks提示問(wèn)題：·Whatdowedowhenwemeetpeopleforthefirsttime?·Howdowebehaveproperlyattable?DearChris,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinChinesesocialmanners.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopetheaboveishelpful.Pleasefeelfreetoaskformoreinformation.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinChinesesocialmanners.Chinaisacountrywithalonghistory,sotherearemanycustomshere.Letmetellyousomeofthem.Firstly,youaresupposedtoshakehandswhenyoumeetsomeoneforthefirsttime.Secondly,youshouldbringagiftwhenyouareinvitedtoapartyandbesuretoarriveontimeorafewminutesearlier.Thirdly,whenyoueatmealswithothers,it’srudetopointatotherswithyourchopsticks.Anddon’tmakenoisewhenyouhaveyoursoup.Ihopetheaboveishelpful.Pleasefeelfreetoaskformoreinformation.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇郵件作文。要求根據(jù)提示問(wèn)題，給Chris介紹中國(guó)人日常生活中的基本社交禮儀，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要以第二人稱來(lái)介紹，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段從待人接物、餐桌禮儀方面給出建議；第三段收尾。要保證語(yǔ)言連貫，無(wú)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。6．人非圣賢，孰能無(wú)過(guò)？作為一名學(xué)生，在學(xué)習(xí)或生活中你是否也曾犯過(guò)錯(cuò)誤、做過(guò)傻事？在認(rèn)識(shí)到自己所犯錯(cuò)誤或明白所做的傻事后，你又是如何改正的呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示，以“TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。1.寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)提示：（1）簡(jiǎn)述你犯過(guò)的一次錯(cuò)誤或做過(guò)的一件傻事；（2）談?wù)勀闶侨绾卧谒说膸椭禄蛟谧约旱呐ο赂恼?；?）你從中吸取了哪些教訓(xùn)或收獲了哪些成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。2.注意事項(xiàng)：（1）詞數(shù)：80左右；（2）短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含提示的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；（4）已給標(biāo)題不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUp_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheMistakeMadeMeGrowUpOneday,Isatintheclassroomalone.S