續(xù)寫積累1歸還手機講義-高三上學(xué)期英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項

續(xù)寫積累：單詞、詞組、句型、實戰(zhàn)（歸還）DAY1情感細節(jié)描寫：緊張、焦慮單詞： panicn．/v.恐慌；uneasen．不安；tenseadj.緊張的→tensionn．緊張；壓力；nervousadj.緊張的→nervousnessn．緊張；scarevt.使恐懼；使害怕→scaredadj.害怕的→scaryadj.恐怖的；嚇人的；terrifyvt.使恐懼；恐嚇→terrifyingadj.極其可怕的；駭人聽聞的→terrifiedadj.非常害怕的；極度驚恐的詞組：beonpinsandneedles如坐針氈；(have)butterfliesinone’sstomach忐忑不安；likeantsonahotpan像熱鍋上的螞蟻；beseized/overewithpanic/fear驚慌失措；one’sheartinone’smouth心提到嗓子眼；one’sheartraces/beats/poundswildly/violentlywithfear嚇得心怦怦跳；pacerestlesslyupanddown不安地踱來踱去；handsshake手發(fā)抖；palmssweat手心出汗；feelone’sthroattightandone’smouthdry感到喉嚨發(fā)緊，嘴發(fā)干句型： Allstudentswerewaitingfortheirfirstexaminationresultsanxiously，beingonpinsandneedles.(比喻句)所有學(xué)生都焦急地等待著他們第一次考試的結(jié)果，如坐針氈。Whenhethoughtthathewouldbefacedwithpletelynewsurroundings，afloodoffearwelledupinhim.(無靈主語句)想到他將面臨全新的環(huán)境，一陣恐懼涌上了他的心頭。Ifeltsoscared/nervousthatmythroattightenedandmykneesweak.我感到很害怕/緊張，嗓子發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟。4.Iknowhedidn’tbelieveme，andeverytimehelookedmyway，myheartstartedpoundingwildly.我知道他不相信我，每次他朝我看的時候，我的心就開始狂跳。Herstomachwasgrippedwithanxiety，likeavolcanoeruptinginsideher.(比喻句)她的胃因為焦慮而痙攣，就像一座火山在她體內(nèi)噴發(fā)一樣。6.Hisheartbeat/raced/poundedwildlyandhislegstrembled.他的心狂跳著，雙腿發(fā)抖。相關(guān)續(xù)寫實戰(zhàn)：Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother.Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyinhertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphoneonthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeith,"Keith,thegirlleftherhandphonebehind."Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthemarket.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,"Youdon'tneedone.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone."Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword,"Iwanttotakethehandphone."Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother."Youcan't!Whatiftheownerestolookforit?"Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.Then，hetookMary'shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetookoutthebeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewaspolishingithappily.ButMarytoldhim,"Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatheraboutthis?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone."Keithsaidquickly,"Iwillsayafriendlentittome."Marysaid,"Nowyouarelyingtoo."Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone."Thisisthegirl'sphonenumber.Whydon'twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertoeandtakebackherhandphone."Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.____________Marywasveryhappytohearthat._____________________________【文本解析】Mary和她的弟弟Keith在餐館就餐時,看到了一個被忘在餐桌上的,此時機主已經(jīng)離開。Keith一直想要一部,便不聽Mary的勸說。將帶回了家,并準備撒謊說是朋友借給他的。Mary看到了機主的聯(lián)系,想說服Keith和機主聯(lián)系......【寫作指導(dǎo)】續(xù)寫思路:根據(jù)續(xù)寫第一段的首句"ThatnightKeithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime"可確定第一段的寫作思路弟弟Keith為何難以入睡?他想到了什么?對拿走機主的事,是否感到愧疚?最后他是否做出了歸還的決定?根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段的首句"Marywasveryhappytohearthat"可確定第二段的寫作思路姐姐Mary為何高興?他們聯(lián)系上機主了嗎?機主有何反應(yīng)?他們是怎樣歸還的?通過這件事,他們有何感受?其實，這就是Keith思想斗爭的過程，就是青少年自我成長的過程。【下水作文】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Helaywakefully,andhisstomachwasemptybuthismindwasfull.Keithwascrazyaboutthelatesthandphoneallthetime,evenindreams.Heturnedonthelightandrosefromthebed,sittingfrozen.Afterawhile,givingaheavysigh,hiseyesfellonatreasuredphoto,onwhichheandMaryallworebright,innocentsmiles.Suddenly,whatMayhadsaidsprangintohismind.Determinedtogivebackthehandphone,hefeltrelaxedandtriedtotellMaryinthefollowingdaymorning.Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Andimmediatelytheytogethermadeacalltotheowner.Soontheyoungladycametovisittheirhousewithabunchofflowers.Sheexpressedhergreatgratitudefromthebottomofherheart.Col