題型強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練08 書面表達(dá)之謀篇布局-2023年江蘇中考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)語法專題講解與題型強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練（牛津譯林版）

題型強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練08書面表達(dá)之謀篇布局?【考點(diǎn)介紹】考點(diǎn)分值出題方向話題作文15/20/25分按照題目給出的話題和要求進(jìn)行書寫半命題作文15/20/25分題目給出一部分，留出的橫線上自己填上合適的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作征文活動(dòng)、演講稿15/20/25分根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇“.............”為題的短文進(jìn)行投稿或者演講稿?【應(yīng)試技巧】一、認(rèn)真審題，確定時(shí)態(tài)人稱，同時(shí)關(guān)注題材格式時(shí)態(tài)：故事性文章一般用過去時(shí)，其中表達(dá)感受時(shí)可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。說明性或議論性文章一般用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，舉例時(shí)可用過去時(shí)。根據(jù)題目要求也會(huì)出現(xiàn)時(shí)態(tài)的交錯(cuò)使用，如過去和現(xiàn)在的對(duì)比等。人稱：注意在句子中人稱的統(tǒng)一。例如：Thankstotheteachers，wehaveimprovedourEnglish。其中we和our就是人稱的統(tǒng)一。二、找全信息點(diǎn)，緊扣主題，突出重點(diǎn)切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息點(diǎn)。一定把題讀全，找齊信息點(diǎn)，建議用鉛筆標(biāo)出，寫完后再涂掉。根據(jù)題目，可適當(dāng)增加合理內(nèi)容。別注意文章要有開頭和結(jié)尾。三、成文時(shí)表述正確，文字流暢切忌與漢語提示的一一對(duì)應(yīng)，使用所學(xué)表達(dá)方法將語義表達(dá)出來即可。首先考慮句子結(jié)構(gòu)(如主謂賓，主系表等)。同時(shí)注意短語的正確使用和單詞的拼寫，最好使用課本上學(xué)過的短語和句式。四、文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點(diǎn)句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一個(gè)檔次考慮文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接短語，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。五、認(rèn)真檢查檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手：(1)格式是否有錯(cuò)。(2)拼寫有無錯(cuò)誤。(3)語言是否用錯(cuò)。(4)時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。(5)標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。(6)人稱是否用錯(cuò)。寫主題句應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

①歸納出你要寫的文章的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)

②提煉出一句具有概括性的話

③主題句應(yīng)具有可讀性，抓住、吸引讀者。

（二）巧用連接詞

要想使文章有整體性、連貫性，就要學(xué)會(huì)正確使用連接詞

（三）掌握常用句型：

下面只列舉比較常用的：

1.in

order

to

為了實(shí)現(xiàn)他的夢(mèng)想，他學(xué)習(xí)非常努力。

Heworkedveryhardinordertorealizehisdream.

2.so…that

他們太累了，除了伸懶腰什么都做不了。Theywereallsotiredthattheycoulddonothingbutyawn.

3.would

rather…than

他寧愿聽他人講而不愿自己說。Hewouldratherlistentoothersthantalkhimself.

4.not

only…but

also

在短短的三年的時(shí)間里她不但完成了所有課程，而且還獲得了博士學(xué)位。

Injustthreeyears,shehadnotonlyfinishedallthelessons,butalsoreceivedherdoctor’sdegree.

5.either…or

如果考試過關(guān)，你可以買一個(gè)MP3或去云南玩一趟。

YoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupasstheexam.

6.as

well

as

他善良又樂于助人。

Hewaskindaswellashelpful.

7.…as

well

這個(gè)小孩活潑又可愛。

Thechildisactiveandfunnyaswell.

8.find

it

adj

to

do…

我覺得作聽力時(shí)有必要作筆記。

Ifinditnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.?【真題回顧】2022年淮安市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題Ⅶ.書面表達(dá)（滿分20分）71.夢(mèng)想引領(lǐng)人生，奮斗成就未來?！案袆?dòng)中國(guó)”年度人物江夢(mèng)南，幼年失聰，生活、求學(xué)之路充滿艱辛，但學(xué)醫(yī)救人一直是她的夢(mèng)想，她通過讀唇語，學(xué)會(huì)“聽”和“說”，憑借刻苦學(xué)習(xí)、不懈努力，成為一名藥學(xué)博士。請(qǐng)以“夢(mèng)想”為話題，寫一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容須包括以下所有要點(diǎn)：1.描述江夢(mèng)南的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷（練習(xí)讀唇語，努力學(xué)習(xí)，克服困難，實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想）；2.談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想（教師/志愿者……）、原因及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)。參考詞匯：讀唇語readlips注意：1.詞數(shù)80~100，已給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。AcommongirlJiangMengnanwaspresentedwithTouchingChinaAward.Shebecamedeafatanearlyage.However,shekeptfightingagainstthefate（命運(yùn)）.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AcommongirlJiangMengnanwaspresentedwithTouchingChinaAward.Shebecamedeafatanearlyage.However,shekeptfightingagainstthefate（命運(yùn)）.

JiangMengnanhasbeendeafsinceshewasachild.Theroadtolifeandstudyisfullofhardships,butithasalwaysbeenherdreamtostudymedicinetosavepeople.SoshereadlipsandstudiedhardtorealizeherdreamofbecomingaDoctorofpharmacy.

Ialsohaveadream.IwanttobeateacherwhenIgrowup.It’sbeenmydreamsinceIwasakid.BecauseIlikeplayingwithchildren,andIalsoliketoteachmyknowledgetoothers.Inordertorealizemydream,Imuststudyhardandsticktomydream.【解析】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求根據(jù)“要點(diǎn)”描述江夢(mèng)南的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷以及談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先介紹江夢(mèng)南的成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷；第二步，介紹自己的夢(mèng)想；第三步，介紹為什么有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想以及如何實(shí)現(xiàn)它。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①befullof充滿②growup長(zhǎng)大③inorderto為了④stickto堅(jiān)持[高分句型]①JiangMengnanhasbeendeafsinceshewasachild.（since引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②Theroadtolifeandstudyisfullofhardships,butithasalwaysbeenherdreamtostudymedicinetosavepeople.（并列連詞and以及轉(zhuǎn)折連詞but的使用）2022年南通市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題八、書面表達(dá)（本題滿分20分）81.華夏大地，人杰地靈；中華文明，源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng)。假如你是李華，你國(guó)外的朋友Andy想了解中國(guó)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖提示，選擇或自擬至少兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行介紹。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。LearningthatyouareinterestedinChina,Ifeelhonoredtointroducemycountrytoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LearningthatyouareinterestedinChina,Ifeelhonoredtointroducemycountrytoyou.First,therearemanygreatmeninourcountry,suchasYuanLongping.YuanLongpingisknownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”.Hemadeagreatcontributiontotheworldfoodsupply.Second,therearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinChina,suchastheGreatWall.ItisknownasoneofthesevenWondersoftheWorld.Third,Chinaalsohasmanytraditionalfestivals,suchasSpringFestival,DragonBoatFestival,Mid-AutumnFestivalandsoon.ChinesepeopleattachthemostimportancetotheSpringFestival.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據(jù)所給圖示提示，選擇至少兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，向Andy介紹中國(guó)的人物、名勝、節(jié)日等。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；人稱以第三人稱為主。本文介紹時(shí)可以根據(jù)所給的人物、景點(diǎn)、節(jié)日描述，也可以自擬要點(diǎn)介紹。行文確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯(cuò)誤。2022年鹽城市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題六、書面表達(dá)（滿分20分）76.學(xué)校英語俱樂部將組織題為“OneThingIwillDofor________”的征文比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，寫一篇短文參賽，分享你將為朋友、家人、學(xué)?；蛏鐣?huì)做的一件事。1.Whatwillyoudo?2.Howwillyoudoit?3.Whydoyouchoosetodoit?…注意事項(xiàng)：（1）補(bǔ)全題目，如“myfriend,myparents,ourschool”等；（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；（3）詞數(shù)：100左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（4）文章必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。OneThingIwillDofor________Ihavemadegreatprogressinthepastthreeyears.NowIwanttodoonethingfor_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OneThingIwillDoforMyParentsIhavemadegreatprogressinthepastthreeyears.NowIwanttodoonethingformyparents.Iwanttomakeabreakfastformyparents.I’mgoingtothesupermarketonSaturdayafternoontobuywhatIneedforbreakfast.Then,thenextmorningIwillgetupearlysoasnottowakemyparents.Iwillmakemymother’sfavoritesandwichesandcoffee.Myfatherlikestoeattomatobeefnoodlesforbreakfast,Iwilllearnhowtocookonmyphone.Makesuretheycanhaveadeliciousbreakfastaftergettingup.Ihavehadthisideainmyheartformanyyears,butInevergetthechancetodoit.Inthepastfewyears,myparentsalwaysgotupearlytopreparebreakfastforme.Itistheirloveandsupportthatmakemebetter,soIwanttoreturnthemwiththesamelove.Ilovethem.【解析】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)情景綜合運(yùn)用各種時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂保持一致性；③提示：文章寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意將作文標(biāo)題補(bǔ)充完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先介紹自己想為誰做一件事；第二步，具體闡述自己想做什么事，以及怎樣做這件事；第三步，闡述自己為什么想做這件事。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wanttodosth.想要做某事②getup起床③makesure確保④preparesth.forsb.為某人準(zhǔn)備某物[高分句型]①I’mgoingtothesupermarketonSaturdayafternoontobuywhatIneedforbreakfast.（what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）②Itistheirloveandsupportthatmakemebetter（Itis+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+其他）2022年蘇州市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題第七部分書面表達(dá)（共1題；滿分25分）57.《蘇州日?qǐng)?bào)》英文?？浴癙racticemakesperfect”為題向中學(xué)生開展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你對(duì)該諺語的理解；2.你生活中的一個(gè)事例（例如：運(yùn)動(dòng)、樂器、家務(wù)、學(xué)習(xí)等方面）；3.你的感悟，注意：1.詞數(shù)100，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；2.內(nèi)容需涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)與考生相關(guān)的真實(shí)校名和姓名等信息。PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imean__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】PracticemakesperfectHaveyouheardofthesaying“practicemakesperfect”?Imeanthatweshouldpracticeunfamiliarthingsagainandagain.We’llbeabletoperformitperfectly.ThepracticeoflearningEnglishisagoodexample.WearenotlivinginanEnglishspeakingcountry.So,inordertolearnitwell,weneedextrapractice,suchasreadingEnglishbooks,goingtoEnglishcorners,orcommunicatingwithforeigners.Youcan’tmasterEnglishjustbysittingatyourdesk.Asanotherexample,ifwewanttobeskilledinusingthecomputer,wealsoneedtopracticeusingit.Somechildrenbecomelittleexpertsincomputer,justbecausetheyplaywithiteveryday.Onthecontrary,ifwejuststicktobooks,wewillstillfeelconfusedwhenusingcomputers.Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemightsafelydrawtheconclusionthatpracticemakesperfect.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“熟能生巧”這句諺語展開描述。本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱第一人稱為主。分為兩段式：第一段引出主題，介紹自己對(duì)這句諺語的理解；第二段從學(xué)習(xí)英語以及學(xué)習(xí)使用電腦這兩個(gè)方面，解讀這句諺語。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。2022年揚(yáng)州市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題B.寫作（計(jì)20分）76.最近，你校開展了“巧手制書簽，書香滿校園”主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”為題，根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇英語短文，向?qū)W校英文報(bào)的讀書專欄投稿，介紹制作書簽的目的和過程，并分享制作心得。Whyyoumadeithelpenjoyreadingyourfavouritebook（name,typeofbook,whatyoulikemost）HowyoumadeitMaterials&Tools●card●scissors,glue…Steps●cutthecardinto…●drawapictureof…●write（yourfavouritesentencefromthebookorafamoussayingor…）●…Howyoufelt…要求：（1）表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；（2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmark-makingactivity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebookLastweekItookpartinourschool’sReading&Bookmark-makingactivity.Itspurposewastohelpusenjoyreadingourfavouritebook.MyfavoritebookistheclassicnovelJourneytotheWest,oneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovels.IlikeMonkeyKingbestbecausehehelpstheweakandnevergivesup.Inordertomakeabookmark,Ipreparedacard,scissors,glueandsoon.First,Icutthecardintolongstrips.AndthenIdrewapictureofamonkeyontheleftandwroteafamoussaying“Nothingisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.”ontherighttoencouragemenottogiveupwhenfacingdifficulties.Atlast,Igluedittoathinpieceofwood.AlthoughImetsomedifficultiesinthisprocess,InevergaveupandIamproudofmyself.【解析】本文以“ADIYbookmarkformyfavouritebook”為題，并結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容，描述制作書簽的目的和過程，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主；人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段介紹制作書簽的目的，以及最喜歡的書的類型和最喜歡這本書的什么地方；第二段重點(diǎn)描述制作書簽需要的材料和工具以及制作書簽的過程；第三段描述自己的感想。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。2022年宿遷市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題六、書面表達(dá)（滿分15分）71.實(shí)施“雙減”政策，推行“陽光作業(yè)”，我們同學(xué)可以從繁重的課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)中解放出來，有更多的時(shí)間培養(yǎng)興趣愛好，陪伴家人、朋友。學(xué)校請(qǐng)你與學(xué)弟、學(xué)妹們分享如何合理安排課余生活，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示完成一篇題為“Enjoystudy,enjoylife”的英語短文。Enjoystudy,enjoylife校園1.參加各種活動(dòng)，如：繪畫、舞蹈等；2.多做運(yùn)動(dòng)，有益健康；3.……（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）家庭1.暢說夢(mèng)想，傾訴煩惱；2.幫做家務(wù)，學(xué)會(huì)一些生活技能；3.……（補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjoystudy,enjoylifeBecauseofthe“doublereduction”policy,wehavemoretimetodowhatweliketoenjoystudyandlife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,ifwespendourfreetimeproperly,wewillgetalotinbothbodyandmind.【答案】Enjoystudy,enjoylifeBecauseofthe“doublereduction”policy,wehavemoretimetodowhatweliketoenjoystudyandlife.Inschool,weshouldactivelyparticipateinvariousactivities,suchaspainting,dancing,football,etc.Throughthesesports,wecanmakeourbodieshealthierandstronger.Ifstudentshavedifficulties,weshouldalsoactivelyhelpthem.Athome,weshouldliveinpeacewithourparents.Weshouldtalkaboutourdreamswiththemandtalkaboutourtroublesintime.Letparentsknoweverythingaboutus.Withtheirsupport,wewillgettwicetheresultwithhalftheeffort.Atthesametime,weshouldalsohelpourparentsdosomehouseworkandlearnsomelifeskills.Ifyouareinabadmood,youcanlistentosomemusicordosomethingyoulike.Inaword,ifwespendourfreetimeproperly,wewillgetalotinbothbodyandmind.【解析】本文以“Enjoystudy,enjoylife”為題介紹如何合理安排課余生活，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段介紹在學(xué)校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。2022年連云港市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題七、書面表達(dá)(共1小題;滿分25分)76.“雙減”之后,如何讓我們的暑假生活過得快樂而有意義?請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖片及文字提示,以“HappySummerVacation"為題給校報(bào)英語專欄寫一篇短文,為同學(xué)們提供一些建議并說明理由。注意:(1)詞數(shù)90左右,短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)人總詞數(shù);(2)文中應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫;(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。HappySummerVacationThesummervacationiscoming.Withmorefreetime,howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesummervacationiscoming.Withmorefreetime,howcanwehaveahappyandmeaningfulvacation?Hereismyadvice.First,wecandosomesports.Wecangorunningeverymorning.Itcanhelpuskeephealthy.Besides,wecandosomehouseworkathome.Itisnecessaryforustolearnsomelifeskillsandlookafterourselves.What’smore,weneedtoreadsomebooks.Readinghelpsimproveourknowledgeandopensupawholenewweoldtous.Wecanalsojoinsomeclubs,suchastheSingingClubortheDancingClub.Itcanhelpusdevelophobbies.Ihopeyoucanhaveacolourfulvacation.【解析】本文以“HappySummerVacation”為題介紹如何讓我們的暑假生活過得快樂而有意義，文章可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段介紹假期可以如何度過的方式以及各自的理由；第三段表達(dá)期待大家都能有一個(gè)愉快的假期。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。2022年無錫市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題八、書面表達(dá)（本大題共20分）生命中總有一些值得我們感恩的人。最近，無錫教育電視臺(tái)將舉辦題為“ThePersonIWanttoThank”的英語演講比賽。假如你想感謝身邊某位對(duì)你有影響的人(父/母親、老師、朋友……),請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下流程圖寫一篇英文演講稿參加比賽。Influence(...)ExperienceInfluence(...)Experience(example/story)Introduction(looks;personalities;...)注意事項(xiàng)：演講稿須根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；流程圖中括號(hào)部分為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右，演講稿的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；演講稿中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息；演講稿必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上。ThePersonIWanttoThank________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThePersonIWanttoThankInmylife,manypeoplehavehelpedmealot,butMissWangisoneofthemostimportantpersonsinmylife.Iwanttothankhermost.

MissWangismyEnglishteacher.Sheisbeautifulwithlonghair.

She’sverykindandoutgoing.Shelikestohelpwithothers.ShehashelpedmealotinlearningEnglish.Sheissoenergeticthatherclassesareveryinterestingandfunny.Sometimesshe’stoostrictwithus.Icouldn’tdowellinEnglishbefore.WithherhelpIstartedtotakemuchinterestinlearningEnglish.I’mgoodatEnglishnow.NotonlydidshehelpedmewithmyEnglish,shealsotaughtmehowtofacethetrouble.

Thankherforgivingmesomuchhelp.Iwillstudyharderandharder.【解析】文章屬于比較開放的話題作文寫作；文章主題是“我想感謝的人”，寫作時(shí)要緊扣主題；第一段指明我最想感謝的人是誰，并且要對(duì)他或她的容貌、性格進(jìn)行介紹；第二段舉出我和他或她之間發(fā)生的具體值得感恩的事例；第三段敘述他或她對(duì)我的影響。文章采用三段式；用第一、三人稱來敘述；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；敘述情感要真切。2022年泰州市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題八、書面表達(dá)（滿分20分）78.我們?cè)谧兓谐砷L(zhǎng)，成長(zhǎng)讓我們的人生充滿意義?；厥兹瓿踔袝r(shí)光，我們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)、思想、性格、生活等方面發(fā)生了很多變化。你所在學(xué)校公眾號(hào)的英語寫作欄目正在開展“我的成長(zhǎng)”征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)分享你初中三年中的成長(zhǎng)故事，具體講述其中一個(gè)變化。要點(diǎn)如下：1.變化是什么？2.變化過程是什么？3.你從中得到了什么啟發(fā)？要求：1.必須含有所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)拓展；2.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)100左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wegrowupinchange.Growthmakesourlifefullofmeaning.Lookingbackonthethreeyearsofjuniorhighschool,Ihaveexperiencedmanychangesinmystudy,thoughts,personality,lifeandsoon.ThebiggestpersonalchangeI’veevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.WhenIwasachild,Ididn’tenjoybooksatall.Later,mymotheralwaysreadstoriesformeandboughtmebooks.Gradually,Ibegantolovereading.Whilereading,Ifeelliketalkingwithawiseman.Readingisalsoafantasticwaytoenjoymyfreetime.Booksaremyfriends.Andtheywillbenefitmealot.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)提示問題，分享自己初中生活以來的一個(gè)變化，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)要以第一人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)綜合使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般過去時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段介紹變化是什么；第二段介紹變化過程是什么；第三段介紹從中得到了什么啟發(fā)。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。2022年徐州市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題六、書面表達(dá)（滿分20分）71.你校在課后服務(wù)活動(dòng)中，根據(jù)學(xué)生的需求開設(shè)了豐富多彩的課程（見下表）。你選修了其中的一門，收獲頗豐。你校英文報(bào)正在組織題為“Meandmyafter-classcourse”的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.你選修的課程；2.你學(xué)習(xí)該課程的經(jīng)歷；3.你的收獲及感受。①運(yùn)動(dòng)（Sports）②閱讀（Reading）③手工（DIY）④繪畫（Painting）⑤聲樂（Singing）⑥……（自擬）注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右；2.短文中不得泄露個(gè)人信息；3.請(qǐng)按照如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Meandmyafter-classcourseInmyschool,therearemanykindsofafter-classcourses.Ichoose____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Meandmyafter-classcourseInmyschool,therearemanykindsofafter-classcourses.IchoosethecourseofDIY.DIYliterallymeansmakingthingsbyhand.Myfirstassignmentwastousethecoloredbubblemudcommonlyusedbyprimaryschoolstudentsnow,pasteacoloredblessingonthesmallboard,andthenmakeaframewithcoloredwool.BecauseIthinkeveryonehasadifferentunderstandingofhappiness.ImadeawordFuintocolor.It’squiteatestofaperson’spatiencetodosomesimplehandicrafts,suchascrossstitch,foldingthousandpapercrane...Throughthisstudy,Ilearnedthatwecanmakehandmadeinmanyways.Wastebeveragebottles,wool,icecreamsticksandsooncanbecomerawmaterialsforhandmade.Wecancreateourownsatisfactoryworksthroughourownimagination.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。以“Meandmyafter-classcourse”為主題，結(jié)合所給要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇作文。本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)行文；人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。寫作時(shí)先從表格里選擇一個(gè)課外課程，之后再根據(jù)三個(gè)要點(diǎn)展開敘述。文章要確保語句通順，無單詞語法錯(cuò)誤。2022年鎮(zhèn)江市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題七、書面表達(dá)(共1題;滿分15分)66.假如你是李華，看到某英語報(bào)社將要組織的勞動(dòng)體驗(yàn)和體育鍛煉夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)的宣傳。請(qǐng)用英語給編輯寫一封信，談一談你更想?yún)⑴c的一種活動(dòng)及理由，并對(duì)你選擇的活動(dòng)提出建議。要求：1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括一種活動(dòng)的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.對(duì)你所選擇的活動(dòng)說明理由，并對(duì)其提出建議;3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.Ihopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua【解析】本文屬于書信作文寫作，要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容給報(bào)社編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀銜?huì)選擇的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目及選擇的理由，并對(duì)活動(dòng)提出建議。本文主要采用第一人稱單數(shù)來寫，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般將來時(shí)為輔。寫作時(shí)承接短文開頭，即直接說明選擇的活動(dòng)項(xiàng)目以及總體原因，作為信件的第一段；第二段根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)依次說明選擇此項(xiàng)目的具體原因；第三段對(duì)此項(xiàng)目提出一兩個(gè)建議并結(jié)尾。具體原因的闡述為本文重點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)巧妙運(yùn)用銜接語言，使列舉原因更有條理，更清晰易懂。2022年常州市中考英語書面表達(dá)真題七、書面表達(dá)(共1題;滿分15分)57.某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)YourVoice欄目中有如下征文通知，請(qǐng)你寫篇英語文章投稿，談?wù)勀愕南敕?。It’snotveryeasyforteenagerstomaketruefriends.Someofthemmakefriendsbyfollowingsuit(隨大流).Thatmeanstheydothesameastheirfriends,suchasplayingonlinegamesorsayingbadwordsbehindothers,althoughthey’renotwillingto.Shareyourideasaboutthetopic.1.Isitwisetofollowsuitinordertomakefriends?2.Howcanteenagersmaketruefriends?Don’tforgettosupportyourideaswithyourexperienceasanexample.注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.詞數(shù)100左右；文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Iwanttosharemyideasaboutthetopic._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iwanttosharemyideasaboutthetopic.Inmyopinion,makingfriendsbyfollowingsuitisnotwise.Becauseeveryoneisanindividual,withhisowninterestsandpersonality.Sodon’tfollowthecrowdandjustdowhatotherpeopleliketodo.Weshouldmakefriendswiththosewhocangiveushelpandshareourhappinessandsadness.Tomaketruefriends,youmustbefriendlytoothers.Smileatothersandyouwillgetasmileinreturn.Youcanmakefriendswiththosewhosharethesameinterestwithyouorthosewhoaretotallydifferentfromyou.Trytohelpyourfriendswhentheyareintroublebecauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”為話題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作。注意要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)要以第一、第二人稱來行文，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文可分為三段，第一段引出話題；第二段介紹自己認(rèn)為為了交朋友而跟風(fēng)是否是明智的；第三段介紹青少年怎樣才能交到真正的朋友。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。?【模擬訓(xùn)練】五、書面表達(dá)（共1題,計(jì)20分）81.你校舉辦了“中學(xué)生安全教育日”英語征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，以“LiveaSafeLife”為題，寫一篇短文參賽。注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)：100詞左右(文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。LiveasafelifeAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】LiveasafelifeAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstly,weshouldeathealthyfoodsuchasfruitandvegetableseveryday.It’swisetostayawayfromtoocoldfoodinsummer.Secondly,it’snecessarytofollowtrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.Don’tridesidebyside.It’swrongtotouchmobilesontheway.Besides,becarefulwhenwemakefriendsonline.We’dbetternottellothersourtelephonenumber,addressorpasswords,especiallystrangers.Finally,weoughtnottorunaftereachotheratschool.Moreover,whenhavingsports,remembertoprotectourselvesfromdanger.Inaword,safetymustcomefirst.【解析】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求以“LiveaSafeLife”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“給出安全的生活的建議”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“飲食、道路安全、交友，校園安全”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，安全必須是第一位的。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①keep...inmind記?、趕tayawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離③hadbetter最好④runafter追趕[高分句型]①Secondly,it’snecessarytofollowtrafficruleswhencrossingtheroad.（It固定句型）②Besides,becarefulwhenwemakefriendsonline.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）VII.書面表達(dá)（20分）71.公眾健康日（7月7日），旨在倡導(dǎo)“全民健康，快樂為本”的理念。隨著生活水平的提高，健康越來越受到重視。你們準(zhǔn)備組織一個(gè)關(guān)于“健康”主題的演講活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面內(nèi)容，準(zhǔn)備一篇題為Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife的演講稿。Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife健康包括身體（physical）健康和心理（mental）健康。身體健康1.健康飲食；2.適當(dāng)鍛煉；3.充足睡眠。心理健康1.積極樂觀；2.與人為善；3.……（至少一點(diǎn)）希望……（至少一點(diǎn)）注意事項(xiàng)：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearandclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?Firstly,weshouldkeepourbodieshealthy.Notonlydoweneedtoeathealthyfood,butwealsoneedtoexerciseinaproperwayeveryday.Forexample,wecanrunfor30minuteseverymorningorplaysportsafterschool.Meanwhile,westillneedenoughsleepeveryday.Secondly,mentalhealthisalsoveryimportant.Weneedtoloveourlifeandtrytobeactive.Weneedtogetalongwellwithoth