高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+善良的查理與頑皮的比爾+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習善良的查理與頑皮的比爾1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Charliewasveryobedienttohisparentsandteachers,forwhicheveryonelovedhimalot.Duetohisfather’sjob,hisfamilymovedtoanewcity,whereheenteredanewschool.AsCharliewasagoodboy,soonmostofhisnewclassmatesbecamehisgoodfriends.Theteachersalsopraisedthisnewboy,becauseofhisintelligenceandnicebehaviortoall.ButtherewasoneboyintheclasswhodidnotlikeCharlieatall!HisnamewasBillandhewasaverynaughtyboy,forwhichnoonelikedhimatall.HefoundthatCharliewasaquietboy.Sohestartedcreatingtroublesforhisnewclassmate.Atthelunchtime,whenCharliewashavinglunch,Billcameuptohimandasked,“Hey,whatdoyouhaveforlunch?”“It’scakeandsweets,”Charlierepliedwithasmile.4續(xù)寫原文“IlovesweetsandsoIwilleatthisfoodtoday.”Billsaidgrudgingly.HesnatchedthelunchboxfromCharlie.Theotherboyssittingaroundwerefurious,butnoonedaredtoprotestduetofearsofbeingbulliedbyBillandhislittlegang.Fromthatdayon,BillregularlyateCharlie’slunchandeventhrewawaythewaterfromhiswaterbottleoneday.ButCharliestillkeptquietanddidnotcomplaintotheteacher.Billneverdidhishomeworkandalwaysforcedthegoodboysoftheclass,includingCharlie,towriteitdownonhiscopyforhim!WhenCharlie’sparentslearnedaboutallthesebulliesofBill,theywantedtocometotheschoolandcomplainaboutthisnaughtyboy.ButCharliestoppedthemandsaid,“Mom,Dad,pleasedonotworry.Everythingwillbeallright.Afterall,Billisalsoakidlikeme.”5續(xù)寫原文Thedayswentbyandthetimecamefortheannualsportsattheschool.Charliewasalsogoodatsportsandheparticipatedinanumberofevents.Billalsoparticipatedinsackrace(套袋賽跑),thoughhecouldnotrunveryfastduetohisfatbody.6段首句Paragraph1：SeeingCharliewonfirstprizein100meters,Billfeltverybadandthenmadeadecision.Paragraph2：CharliethentookBilltotheschooldoctorwhotendedhisinjuredleg.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了查理隨家人搬到新城市上學，他乖巧懂事，深受師生喜愛，卻遭同學比爾刁難，比爾常搶他午餐、逼他代寫作業(yè)等。但查理默默忍受，未向老師告狀。學校運動會時，查理100米賽跑奪冠，比爾心生嫉妒使壞卻弄傷自己，查理不計前嫌帶他看醫(yī)生，此后比爾深受觸動，改過自新，兩人還成了朋友，班級氛圍也更和諧。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：SeeingCharliewonfirstprizein100meters,Billfeltverybadandthenmadeadecision.看到查理贏得100米比賽第一名，比爾心里極度失衡，于是惡意在套袋賽跑中故意推搡查理，結果自己重心不穩(wěn)摔倒在地，腿部受傷。查理見狀，立刻放棄比賽名次，毫不猶豫地跑向比爾，其他同學都圍了過來，對眼前的一幕感到驚訝。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：CharliethentookBilltotheschooldoctorwhotendedhisinjuredleg.查理小心翼翼地扶起比爾，然后堅定地帶著他往學校醫(yī)務室走去。校醫(yī)為比爾處理傷口時，比爾滿臉愧疚，終于鼓起勇氣向查理道歉，承認自己之前的種種錯誤行為。查理微笑著原諒了他，從此比爾洗心革面，兩人成為了真正的好朋友，班級也因他們的和解而更加團結友愛。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WitnessingCharlie'svictoryinthe100-meterrace,Billwasconsumedbyenvyandspite.Thus,duringthesackrace,withamaliciousintention,hedeliberatelyshovedCharlie,onlytofindhimselflosingbalanceandtumblingdown,severelyinjuringhisleg.Uponseeingthis,Charlie,withoutamoment'shesitation,abandonedhispursuitoftheracerankingandrushedtowardsBill.Theotherstudentsgatheredaround,astonishedbythesceneunfoldingbeforethem.14范文呈現(xiàn)CharliegentlyliftedBillupandresolutelyledhimtotheschoolinfirmary.WhiletheschooldoctorwastendingtoBill'swound,Bill,overcomewithguilt,finallysummonedthecouragetoapologizetoCharlie,confessingallhispreviousmisdeeds.Charlie,withaforgivingsmile,pardonedhim.Fromthenon,Billwastransformed.Thetwobecamegenuinefriends,andtheclassgrewmoreunitedandamicableasaresultoftheirreconciliation.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Itwasattheschool'sannualsportsdaythatthelong-standingrivalrybetweenCharlieandBillreachedaturningpoint.HavingwitnessedCharlie'soutstandingperformanceandhisgloriousvictoryinthe100-meterrace,Bill,whoseheartwasfilledwithenvyandresentment,madeafatefuldecision.Intheensuingsackrace,withamaliciousglintinhiseye,herecklesslyshovedCharlie,onlytofindhimselfcrashingtotheground,hislegtwistedandinjured.ItwasCharlie,theepitomeofkindness,who,withoutamoment'sdelay,forsookhischanceofwinninganddashedtowardsBill.Theonlookers,theireyeswidewithastonishment,watchedasCharlie'sactofselflessnessunfolded.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Subsequently,Charlie,withgentleyetfirmhands,helpedBilltohisfeetandescortedhimtotheschoolinfirmary.There,astheschooldoctormeticulouslyattendedtoBill'swound,aprofoundsenseofguiltwashedoverBill.Summoningallhiscourage,hefinallyutteredasincereapologytoCharlie,confessingtohispastwrongdoings.ItwasCharlie'smagnanimoussmileandforgivingwordsthatsealedtheirnewfoundfriendship.Fromthatdayforward,Billwasachangedboy.Thetwobecameinseparable,andtheclass,once