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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習童年好奇入林記,迷途方知母言重1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Undoubtedly,MotherNatureisalwaysattractivetokids.Inourchildhood,howoftendidweturnadeafeartoourparents’advice?Veryoften!Thus,welandedourselvesinasituationwherewegreatlyregrettedouractofnothavinglistenedtotheadviceofthewise.SuchanunforgettableexperienceIhadattheageof7gavemeaninvaluablelesson,afterwhichIdeeplyunderstoodwhymygentlemotherwasrepeatingtheboringsuggestionsandIwouldtrytotakehersuggestionsseriously.4續(xù)寫原文Inmychildhood,Iwassocrazyaboutnaturethatevenplayingamongthecolorfulflowersinourgardencouldmakemyday.Ourhousewasnexttothewoodswhichhadalwaysstirredup(激起)greatcuriosityinmeinwantingtofindoutwhatwaswithin.EverytimeIsawfascinatingbutterfliesdancingfromthewoods,mycuriositygrew.Butmymotherdidn’tlikemewanderingoffonmyownandalwaysensuredthatIwaswithinhersight.Evenifsheallowedmetoexplorethesurroundingareaonmyown,itwasonlytobesomewherenearthehouse.Beingascuriousasthecat,Ialwaysdesiredtoexplorethewoods.Itseemedasifmymotherhadunderstoodmydesire,soshehadwarmedmeonlotsofoccasionsnevertoenterthewoodsalone.5續(xù)寫原文“Mom,canIgooutandplayinthegarden?”Iasked.“Sure,”shewouldreplyeachtime.“Kate,youcanplayinthegardenbutyoumustpromisemeonething—onlywhenI’mwithyoucanyougointothewoods.Therearenocasesofanimalattacksonhumans,butit’sstilldangerousforalittlekidlikeyou.It’stooeasytogetlostinthewoods.”“Sure,you’vesaidthatmanytimes!”Iansweredwithoutpatienceatherrepeatedreminders.6段首句Paragraph1:However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Paragraph2:“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9大自然對孩子總是充滿吸引力,7歲的“我”便是如此?!拔摇奔遗彉淞郑拔摇睂淞譂M懷好奇,渴望探索其中。母親雖允許“我”在花園玩耍,但反復叮囑不能獨自進入樹林,擔心有危險。“我”卻對母親的多次提醒感到不耐煩,最終在好奇心的驅(qū)使下,還是做出了冒險的決定。點1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:
However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.然而,一天早上,好奇心戰(zhàn)勝了我。我在花園玩耍時,一只色彩斑斕的蝴蝶翩翩從樹林中飛出,停在一朵花上。我目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著它,腦海里不斷回響著母親的告誡,但那神秘的樹林實在太有吸引力了。終于,我忍不住跨過花園圍欄,躡手躡腳地走進樹林。初入樹林,清新的草木香氣撲面而來,我看到了許多從未見過的野花和形狀奇特的石頭。我興奮地追逐著蝴蝶,越走越深??蓾u漸地,周圍的景色變得陌生起來,陽光透過茂密的枝葉灑下,形成一片片光斑,我開始感到害怕,意識到自己可能迷路了。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.“凱特?”在被夕陽余暉籠罩的樹林深處,傳來母親的聲音。我又驚又喜,大聲回應:“媽媽,我在這兒!”聲音帶著哭腔。我朝著聲音的方向拼命跑去,樹枝劃破了我的衣服,腳下的落葉讓我差點摔倒。終于,我看到了母親焦急的身影。母親緊緊抱住我,眼中含著淚,說:“寶貝,你嚇死媽媽了?!蔽依⒕蔚氐拖骂^,向母親道歉。這次經(jīng)歷讓我深刻明白,母親的叮囑都是為了我的安全。從那以后,我再也不敢輕易違背母親的話,每當面對誘惑時,都會想起這次在樹林里的可怕經(jīng)歷。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Whileplayinginthegarden,Isawabrightly-coloredbutterflyflutteringoutofthewoodsandalightingonaflower.Istaredatitintently,mymother'swarningsechoinginmymind.Buttheallureofthemysteriouswoodswasjusttoostrong.Eventually,Icouldn'tresistandsteppedoverthegardenfence,creepingintothewoods.AssoonasIentered,thefreshscentofplantsandearthhitme.IsawmanywildflowersIhadneverseenbeforeandoddly-shapedrocks.Excitedly,Ichasedafterthebutterfly,goingdeeperanddeeper.Gradually,thesurroundingsbecameunfamiliar.Thesunlightfilteredthroughthethickfoliage,creatingpatchesoflight.IbegantofeelscaredandrealizedthatImightbelost.14范文呈現(xiàn)“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.Iwasbothsurprisedanddelighted,shouting,“Mom,I’mhere!”withacryingtone.IrantowardsthevoiceasfastasIcould.Branchesscratchedmyclothes,andthefallenleavesunderfootalmostmademefall.Finally,Isawmymother'sanxiousfigure.Shehuggedmetightly,hereyesfilledwithtears.“Honey,youscaredmetodeath,”shesaid.Ihungmyheadinshameandapologizedtoher.Thisexperiencemademedeeplyunderstandthatmymother'swarningswereallformysafety.Fromthenon,Ineverdaredtodisobeymymothereasily.WheneverIfacedtemptations,Iwouldthinkofthisterrifyingexperienceinthewoods.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)However,curiosityovercamemeonefatefulmorning.AsIwasengrossedinplayinginthegarden,aresplendently-coloredbutterflyflutteredoutfromthewoods,gracefullylandingonaflower.Mesmerized,Ifixedmygazeuponit,mymother'srepeatedwarningsreverberatinginmymind.Nevertheless,theallureoftheenigmaticwoodsprovedirresistible.Withoutfurtherhesitation,Isteppedoverthegardenfenceandstealthilymademywayintothewoods.ThemomentIentered,afresh,earthyaromaofplantsassailedmynostrils.Ibeheldnumerouswildflowershithertounseenbymeandpeculiarly-shapedrocks.Inastateofexhilaration,Igavechasetothebutterfly,venturingdeeperanddeeperintothewoods.Beforelong,thesurroundingsbecameunrecognizable.Sunlight,filteringthroughthedensefoliage,createdadappledpatternoflightandshadow.Asenseoffearcreptoverme,andIsuddenlyrealizedthatIhadlostmyway.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)“Kate?”Camemymother'svoice,faintlyechoingfrombehindthetreesbathedinthewarmglowofthesettingsun.Asurgeofsurpriseandjoycoursedthroughme,andIcriedout,“Mom,I’mhere!”myvoicetingedwithsobs.Isprintedtowardsthesourceofthevoice,heedlessofthebranchesthatscratchedmyclothesandtheslipperyfallenleavesthatthreatenedtotripmeup.Finally,Icaughtsi
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