17 社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀2022年中考英語(yǔ)時(shí)文熱點(diǎn)話題作文

17社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀2022年中考英語(yǔ)時(shí)文熱點(diǎn)話題作文一、講稿1．你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindnessisagift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。KindnessisagiftDearclassmates,Ithinkkindnessisaspecialgifttoeveryone.Howcanweshowittoothersinourdailylife?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【答案】例文KindnessisagiftDearclassmates,Ithinkkindnessisaspecialgifttoeveryone.Howcanweshowittoothersinourdailylife?Whenwe’reathome,it’simportanttoshowourrespecttoourparents.Helpingthemdosomehouseworkwillmakeusclosetoeachother.Weshouldalsobekindenoughtoourneighborsinourneighborhood.Whilethey’reawayfromhome,wecankeepaneyeontheirhouses.Atschool,tellourclassmatestoaskforhelpwhenevertheyneed.Ifoneofthemisabsentfromschool,wecanhelpthemwiththelessons.Onthebus,weshouldtakecareoftheelderlybygivingthemourseats.Andoncethereissomeonewhotriestofightwiththebusdriver,it’sbetterforustostophim.Ihopeeveryonecanbekindtootherssothatwecanliveinaworldfulloflove.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【詳解】1.題干解讀：你校正在舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述來(lái)寫(xiě)作演講稿；要點(diǎn)提示已給出三個(gè)場(chǎng)景，你需要在這三個(gè)場(chǎng)景中展開(kāi)“和善”的論述；最后仍需應(yīng)題目要求多補(bǔ)充一個(gè)場(chǎng)景的描寫(xiě)，切勿遺漏。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主?？梢韵劝迅饕c(diǎn)用句子表達(dá)出來(lái)，然后再組合成文。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，舉出的例子要有說(shuō)服力，想象合理并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)。注意采用一些習(xí)慣的句式，固定短語(yǔ)，以使自己的演講稿更有文采。寫(xiě)完后多讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。二、看圖作文2．習(xí)近平總書(shū)記強(qiáng)調(diào)，“中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化是中華民族的精神命脈，是涵養(yǎng)社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀的重要源泉?！蔽覈?guó)的優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化數(shù)不勝數(shù)，它們魅力無(wú)限，總會(huì)帶給我們深遠(yuǎn)的影響。作為新時(shí)代的少年，你最喜歡哪一種傳統(tǒng)文化？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面圖片提示，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勚袊?guó)傳統(tǒng)文化對(duì)你自己的積極影響。Wordbank:BeijingOpera京劇ancientcity古縣城exhibitionn.展覽intangibleculturalheritage非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)carryforward發(fā)揚(yáng)后要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于詞；2.參考詞匯僅供參考;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名，校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TraditionalcultureplaysasignificantroleinChina.ItwitnessesChineselonghistoryandcharacteristic.Thereisnodoubtitisamusttopassdownthetraditionalculturegenerationbygeneration.Everyoneshouldtaketheresponsibilityofit.Thereisoneofvariousactivitieswhichgavemeadeepimpression.Withtheaimofencouragingmorestudentstopayattentiontohandwriting,ourclasshadahandwritingcompetition.Ihadmadeadeterminationtopracticemyhandwriting.Iaskedmyclassmateforhelpandfollowedhercarefully.Duringtheprocess,Iunderstoodthestructureofeachcharacterandmeaningofit.WhenIenjoyedthebeautyofhandwriting.Ideeplyrealizedhowgreatourcultureis.Finally,Iimprovedmyhandwritinglargelyandregainedtheconfidence.Inconclusion,wecan'tignoretheimportanceoftraditionalculturetoomuch.Itisbeginningtocapturetheattentionoftheworld.Wearesupposedtodosomethingtoreserve,toinheritandtocarryforwardtheChinesetraditionalculture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于夾敘夾議文。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)首先說(shuō)明傳統(tǒng)文化的優(yōu)點(diǎn)；第二段具體敘述自己在傳承傳統(tǒng)文化上的事例；第三段強(qiáng)調(diào)傳統(tǒng)文化的重要性。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱(chēng)來(lái)提出傳統(tǒng)文化的重要性，用第一人稱(chēng)敘述自己的做法；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為輔；描述自己的做法時(shí)，應(yīng)描寫(xiě)具體；并且整篇文章要完整，保證條理清晰。三、材料作文3．假如你是劉杰，你校正在開(kāi)展“踐行核心價(jià)值觀，爭(zhēng)做向上善好少年”主題活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，用英文寫(xiě)一篇活動(dòng)倡議書(shū)。提示：1.在家里：關(guān)心家人，勤做家務(wù)，節(jié)約水電……2.在學(xué)校：努力學(xué)習(xí)，尊敬老師，團(tuán)結(jié)同學(xué)……3.在社會(huì)：遵守交規(guī)，文明禮貌，不亂扔垃圾……要求：1.90詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名。參考詞匯：familymembers；dohousework；respect；insociety；obey；throwlitterOurschoolhasbeencarryingoutthethemeactivitiesofpracticingthecorevaluesandencouragingthestudentstobegood.Asastudent,whatshouldwedoinourdailylife?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Let’stakeactionandcallonmorepeopletojoinus!【答案】例文：Ourschoolhasbeencarryingoutthethemeactivitiesofpracticingthecorevaluesandencouragingthestudentstobegood.Asastudent,whatshouldwedoinourdailylife?First,weshouldbehavewellathome.Weshouldoffertohelpourparentsdohousework,suchassweepingthefloor,washingtheclothes,cookingdinnerandsoon.Also,weshouldspendmoretimecommunicatingwithourparentsandtryourbesttounderstandthem.Second,atschool,weshouldrespectourteachersandgetonwellwithourclassmates.Weshouldalsostudyhardandtakeanactivepartinallkindsofusefuloutdooractivities.Finally,insociety,wemustobeythetrafficrules.Forexample,wemustwalkonwalk-side.Whenwecrosszebra-crossing,stopandlookrightandleft,thengoacrosstheroadfast.Don’tthrowlittereverywhere.Let’stakeactionandcallonmorepeopletojoinus!【詳解】1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)所給的信息提示，用英文為“踐行核心價(jià)值觀，爭(zhēng)做向上善好少年”的主題活動(dòng)寫(xiě)一篇倡議書(shū)。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等；語(yǔ)言的表述要符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。4．為了實(shí)踐社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀，學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)決定舉行一次以“Goodmannersaroundus”為題的征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示及要求，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文參加比賽。GoodmannersaroundusAthome1.understandparents2.neverarguewiththem3.helpdohousework4.…Atschool1.helpeachother2.befriendlytoclassmates3.…4.…inpublic1.notshout2.notdroplitter3.…4.…要求：1.文章中必須包含要點(diǎn)提示的所有信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。3.詞數(shù)不少于100詞，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。GoodmannersaroundusAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldhavegoodmanners.Here_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】GoodmannersaroundusAsmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldhavegoodmanners.Herearesomegoodmannersaroundus.Athome,weshouldunderstandparentsandneverarguewiththem.Weshouldalsohelpparentsdohouseworkanddosomethingnecessaryaftertheycomebackfromwork.Atschool,weshouldhelpeachotherandbefriendlytoclassmatesaswell.Don'tforgettobepolitetoteachers,theyalwayscareaboutus.What'smore,weshouldkeepourclassroomcleanandneverwalkongrass.Inpublic,wecan'tshoutordroplittereverywhere.Rememberthatweneedtowaitforourturn,becauseitisrudetopushinbeforeothers.Atlastwecandowhatwecantohelppeopleinneed.Let'sfollowthesegoodmannersandbecomegoodstudents.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇征文比賽的材料作文，以“Goodmannersaroundus”為題，涉及到在家，在學(xué)校和在公共場(chǎng)所應(yīng)該做他不應(yīng)該做的事情。介紹文明行為情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注重語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的通順和流暢，避免使用錯(cuò)誤的單詞、句子和時(shí)態(tài)。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文描述了我們周?chē)囊恍┪拿餍袨?。首先用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，說(shuō)明在家里應(yīng)該理解父母，不與父母爭(zhēng)吵，幫助父母做家務(wù)等；然后介紹在校應(yīng)當(dāng)與同學(xué)友好，互相幫助等；最后介紹了在公共場(chǎng)所不應(yīng)當(dāng)大聲喧嘩，吐痰等。shoulddo運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，helpeachother，befriendlyto等短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。短文層次清楚，條理分明，主題鮮明，中心突出。文章里還使用了一些較好的句型。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：arguewith；comebackfromwork；helpeachother；dosomethingnecessary；careabout；waitforourturn等。句型：1.Herearesomegoodmannersaroundus.2.Weshouldalsohelpparentsdohouseworkanddosomethingnecessaryaftertheycomebackfromwork.3.Don'tforgettobepolitetoteachers,theyalwayscareaboutus.4.Rememberthatweneedtowaitforourturn,becauseitisrudetopushinbeforeothers.5．為了踐行社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀，你校學(xué)生會(huì)決定舉辦以“文明禮儀伴我行”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下的要點(diǎn)提示及要求，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文參賽。要點(diǎn)提示：1.尊敬父母，幫助他們做家務(wù)；2.對(duì)人有禮貌，誠(chéng)實(shí)友好，幫助他人；3.不在公共場(chǎng)所大聲講話，不亂扔垃圾；4.節(jié)約糧食，節(jié)約用水;……要求：1.短文須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻譯)，并在此基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.字?jǐn)?shù)要求90詞左右。(短文開(kāi)頭與已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；3.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshouldhavegoodmanners._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文：Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshouldhavegoodmanners.First,weshouldrespectourparentsandhelpthemdosomehousework.Second,weshouldbepoliteandhonest.Also,it’salwaysgoodtobekindandfriendly.Weshouldtryourbesttohelpthepeopleinneed.Third,we’dbetternottalkloudlyinpublic.Don’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.It’sourdutytokeepourcitycleanandbeautiful.Fourth,wearesupposedtosavefoodandwater.Lastly,it’simportantandnecessaryforustohelpprotecttheenvironment.Inaword,goodmannerscanmakeadifferenceandleadtoabetterfuture.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)出具體的文明禮儀的表現(xiàn)方面，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。

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寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要與已給出的開(kāi)頭融合起來(lái)，本文主要用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)介紹內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，提出建議可以多用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。6．“友善(kindness)”是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀個(gè)人層面的價(jià)值標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一。在現(xiàn)實(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)、生活和工作中，我們應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)友善待人。假如你是LiMing,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的寫(xiě)作要求，寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.你對(duì)友善的看法，并簡(jiǎn)要介紹你所遇到的某一個(gè)善人及其所做的善事;2.在生活中我們應(yīng)該怎樣做一個(gè)友善的人？3.呼吁同學(xué)們都學(xué)會(huì)友善對(duì)待他人,與人和睦共處。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱(chēng)、老師和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡。Goodafternoon,TodayIamgoingtotalksomethingaboutkindness_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou.【答案】例文Beingkindisanimportantwayofbringingjoytoothers.Inourlife,kindpeoplearearoundus.Twoyearsago,onmywaytoschool,Ifelloffmybikeandhurtmyleg.Justthenakindmancameovertohelpmeandcalledmyparents.Thankstohishelp,myparentscamesoon.Ithinkallofusshouldlearntobekind.Whenweseeothersintrouble,weshouldgivethemahandandhelpthemout.Mydearfriends,let'slearntobekindandgetonwellwithothers.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。主要是以“友善”為主線展開(kāi)描寫(xiě)。要結(jié)合題目中給出的一些寫(xiě)作要求進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)相結(jié)合進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，人稱(chēng)用第一人稱(chēng)展開(kāi)客觀介紹。文章可分三段描寫(xiě)。第一段開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，指出友善是給別人帶來(lái)快樂(lè)的重要方式；第二段通過(guò)自己的親身經(jīng)歷舉例自己遇到的善人；第三段呼吁人們要友善對(duì)待他人，與人和睦共處。注意文章描寫(xiě)要具體，思路清晰，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，用詞恰當(dāng)，意思通俗易懂。7．為了實(shí)現(xiàn)社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀，你校學(xué)生會(huì)決定舉辦以“文明禮貌伴我行”為主題的英文征文比賽，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示與要求，寫(xiě)一篇英文短文參賽。要點(diǎn)提示：1.尊敬(respect)父母，幫助他們做家務(wù)；2.待人有禮貌，誠(chéng)實(shí)友好，幫助他人；3.不在公共場(chǎng)所大聲講話，不亂丟垃圾；4.節(jié)約糧食，節(jié)約用水……寫(xiě)作要求：1.短文必須包括以上要點(diǎn)提示信息(不要逐字翻譯)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名或地名，否則不予評(píng)分。參考詞組:besupposedtodo,throwlitter,tap(水龍頭)Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshouldhavegoodmanners.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshouldhavegoodmanners.Firstly,it'snecessaryforustorespectourparents.Wecanalsohelpthemdosomehousework.Secondly,weshouldbepoliteandfriendlytoothers.EveryoneissupposedtobehonestIt'sgoodtohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Thirdly,weshouldpayattentiontoourbehavior.Don'tspeakloudly,neverthrowlitteraround,Lastbutnotleast,wearesupposedtosavefoodandwater.Don'ttakemorefoodthanweneedandremembertoturnoffthetap.Inaword,goodmannerscanmakeadifferenceandleadtoabetterfuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于簡(jiǎn)單的議論文寫(xiě)作，學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)決定舉辦以“文明禮貌伴我行”為主題的英文征文比賽，具體文明禮貌的項(xiàng)目已經(jīng)給出，包括尊敬(respect)父母，幫助他們做家務(wù)；待人有禮貌，誠(chéng)實(shí)友好，幫助他人；不在公共場(chǎng)所大聲講話，不亂丟垃圾；節(jié)約糧食，節(jié)約用水，注意不要逐字翻譯，要注意適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增添一些細(xì)節(jié)，使作文更加流暢自然。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)敘述征文的內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，第一段是題干給出的，第二段起開(kāi)始介紹文明禮貌的具體倡議，用firstly，secondly，thirdly，lastbutnotleast等詞連接要點(diǎn)，層次分明，最后一段是一句倡議加總結(jié)“總之，良好的舉止可以有所作為，并帶來(lái)更美好的未來(lái)”，總體來(lái)說(shuō)例文寫(xiě)作敘述完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：respectparents，dosomehousework，befriendlyto，besupposedtodo，beintrouble，payattentionto，speakloudly，throwlitteraround，savefood，turnoffthetap，Inaword，makeadifference，leadto。句型：Itis+adj+forsbtodo；動(dòng)詞原形開(kāi)頭的祈使句的肯定句及否定句.8．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)60—80詞。（15分）為了踐行社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀，我校決定舉辦以“文明禮儀伴我行”為主題的討論會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勅绾巫鲆粋€(gè)文明的中學(xué)生。地點(diǎn)內(nèi)容在家里對(duì)父母有禮貌，多做家務(wù)活………在學(xué)校尊敬老師，與同學(xué)友好相處，勤奮學(xué)習(xí)……在公共場(chǎng)所遵守交通規(guī)則，排隊(duì)等候，不亂扔垃圾……要求：1.開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾以給出，不列入總詞數(shù)。2.所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格內(nèi)所有的信息，并做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：文明的civilizedAsamiddleschoolstudent,weshouldhavegoodmanners.Inmyopinion,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sjointogethertobecivilizedstudents!【答案】Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshouldhavegoodmanners.Inmyopinion,First,weshouldrespectourparentsandhelpthemdosomehousework.Second,weshouldbepoliteandhonest.Weshouldrespectourteachersatschoolandgetonwellwithotherclassmates.WealsoworkhardAlso,it’salwaysgoodtobekindandfriendly.Weshouldtryourbesttohelpthepeopleinneed.Third,weshouldfollowtrafficrules.Besides,we’dbetternottalkloudlyinpublic.Don’tthrowrubbisheverywhere.It’sourdutytokeepourcitycleanandbeautiful.Fourth,wearesupposedtosavefoodandwater.Lastly,it’simportantandnecessaryforustohelpprotecttheenvironment.Inaword,goodmannerscanmakeadifferenceandleadtoabetterfuture.Let’sjointogethertobecivilizedstudents!【解析】試題分析：本文屬于材料類(lèi)作文，話題是““文明禮儀伴我行””，本作文較難,仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句要通順，意思要連貫，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文意思連貫?？梢赃m當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，但是要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。注意拼寫(xiě)，字?jǐn)?shù)要符合要求?！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】：這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的作文，本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；用上了所給的所有詞，并做了適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，語(yǔ)句要通順，意思要連貫，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫，無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。9．誠(chéng)信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠(chéng)信危機(jī)所困擾。上周末，他本來(lái)和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影，但是他卻因?yàn)樵诩覐?fù)習(xí)考試，把這件事忘了，直到第二天才想起來(lái)。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。請(qǐng)你就此事給校報(bào)投稿，以“TheImportanceofPromise”為題，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1、簡(jiǎn)述事件；2、談?wù)勛约旱目捶?，并給Daming一些建議。注意：1、詞數(shù)80—100；2、行文連貫，邏輯合理；3、文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；4、文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。TheImportanceofPromiseDeareditor,Peoplealwaysemphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）theimportanceofthepromise,andtheyhatepeoplewhobreaktheirpromise.Promiseisveryimportant.Everyoneshouldkeepit.Yours,Tony【答案】TheImportanceofPromiseDeareditor,Peoplealwaysemphasize（強(qiáng)調(diào)）theimportanceofthepromise,andtheyhatepeoplewhobreaktheirpromise.Recently,athinghappenedtomyfriend,andIthinkitwasreallyhisfault.Lastweekend,myfriendDaminghadadatewithhisfriendLinglingtowatchamovie.Buthetotallyforgotitthatdaybecauseofhisreviewforhisexam.SoLinglinggottooangrytoforgivehim.Inmyopinion,itwasreallyhisfault.ForgettingthedatenotonlyledtoLingling’sanger,butalsomadeherlosetrustinhim.KeepingpromisesisalwaysthetraditionalvirtueoftheChinesenation.WhatDamingshoulddonowistoaskforforgivenessandpromisethathewillneverdothatagain.Promiseisveryimportant.Everyoneshouldkeepit.Yours,Tony【分析】本文為一篇稿件，需要學(xué)生通過(guò)大明和玲玲之間，大明沒(méi)有信守承諾的事情，談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)，先寫(xiě)出大明和玲玲之間的事情，然后再說(shuō)自己對(duì)此的看法?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn)，大明是犯錯(cuò)了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過(guò)。接下來(lái)說(shuō)出自己對(duì)此事件的看法，不信守承諾會(huì)導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任，對(duì)大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯(cuò)之外，還需要再次保證永不再犯?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上，比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外，中間也使用了一些連接詞，例如but，so，becauseof等，使文章更加通順。四、話題作文10．你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindnessisagift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。KindnessisagiftDearclassmates,Ithinkkindnessisaspecialgifttoeveryone.Howcanweshowittoothersinourdailylife?That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【答案】例文Dearclassmates,Ithinkkindnessisaspecialgifttoeveryone.Howcanweshowittoothersinourdailylife?Whenwe’reathome,it’simportanttoshowourrespecttoourparents.Helpingthemdosomehouseworkwillmakeusclosetoeachother.Weshouldalsobekindenoughtoourneighboursinourneighborhood.Whilethey’reawayfromhome,wecankeepaneyeontheirhouses.Atschool,tellourclassmatestoaskforhelpwhenevertheyneed.Ifoneofthemisabsentfromschool,wecanhelpthemwiththelesson.Onthebus,weshouldtakecareoftheelderlybygivingthemourseats.Andoncethereissomeonewhotriestofightwiththebusdriver,it’sbetterforustostophim.Ihopeeveryonecanbekindtootherssothatwecanliveinaworldfulloflove.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【解析】【詳解】你校正在舉辦以“社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，你準(zhǔn)備從“和善”這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)論述，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“Kindnessisagift”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。內(nèi)容要求中指出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定句子人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)等問(wèn)