2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：沙灘上的歡樂與挑戰(zhàn)：沙堡的故事+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)沙灘上的歡樂與挑戰(zhàn)：沙堡的故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onceuponatime,inthemidstofafinesummer,TomandhisyoungerbrotherJackwentonanamazingtriptoapicturesquebeachwiththeirfamily.ExcitementfilledtheairasTomandJackeagerlypackedtheirbucketsandshovels(鏟子),readytoexplorethesandywondersthatawaitedthem.Themomenttheyarrivedatthebeach,theywastednotimeandrusheddirectlytowardstheshoreline.Withthewindbrushinggentlyovertheircheeks,TomandJackdugtheirhandsintothesoftgrainsofsand,laughinghappilyastheyfeltgrainsofsandpassingthroughtheirfingers.Theirlaughterwasechoingalongthecoast.4續(xù)寫原文Thenthetwolittlebrothersdecidedtobuildasplendidsandcastlethatwouldleaveeveryoneinawe.Withthesoundofseabirdssinginginthebackground,theybegantheirgrandproject.Sidebyside,theycuppedtheirhands,dugintothesoftbeach,andstartedbuildingtheirdreamcastle.Withgreatcareandprecision,theysculptedandshapedthesandwiththeirfingers,craftingeachtowerandwall.Theboyswerelostintheirwork,feelingthewarmthofthesandbeneaththeirfingers.Theyseemedtohearwhisperingtalesofthedistant,mysteriousocean.5續(xù)寫原文Timeseemedtostandstillastheboyspouredtheirheartsintoeverydetailoftheirsandycreation.Witheachpassingmoment,thesandcastlegrewinbothsizeandbeautyanditbegantotakeshape.Together,theypatientlydecoratedtheirdreamcastlewithseashellsandtwigs,imaginingaworldofsoldiers,princesses,andmagicalcreatures.Seeingthecastlestandproudlybeforethem,thetwolittlebrothersbreathedoutasighofrelief.Theireyesshonewithexcitement.Theywerelikearchitectswhowereappreciatingtheirmasterpiecethatexpressedtheirextraordinaryimagination.6段首句Paragraph1：However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Paragraph2：Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在一個(gè)美好的夏日，湯姆和弟弟杰克隨家人去美麗的海灘旅行。他們帶著工具興奮地奔向沙灘，在那里盡情玩沙，之后決定建造一座令人驚嘆的沙堡。兄弟倆用心雕琢，用貝殼和樹枝裝飾，沙堡逐漸成型。他們看著自己的杰作滿心歡喜。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.然而，他們還沒反應(yīng)過來，海水就開始上漲了。起初，海水只是輕柔地漫過他們的腳背，帶來一絲清涼?？赊D(zhuǎn)眼間，海風(fēng)呼嘯起來，海浪也變得洶涌澎湃。一個(gè)個(gè)巨大的浪頭接連不斷地拍打過來，如同一頭頭兇猛的野獸，無情地沖擊著他們精心搭建的沙堡。湯姆和杰克眼睜睜地看著那些他們花費(fèi)了無數(shù)心血建造的精美塔樓和堅(jiān)固城墻，在海浪的肆虐下迅速崩塌，化作一堆堆散落的沙子。他們心急如焚，趕忙用手去阻擋海水，試圖保住沙堡，但海浪的力量太過強(qiáng)大，他們的努力顯得如此微不足道。望著即將消失的沙堡，他們的眼中充滿了失落和沮喪，心情也如同這被海浪攪亂的沙灘一般，亂糟糟的。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.杰克點(diǎn)頭表示同意，他們決定重建沙堡。盡管剛才的失落還縈繞在心頭，但兄弟倆骨子里的堅(jiān)韌讓他們很快就振作起來。他們對視一眼，從彼此的眼中看到了堅(jiān)定的決心。于是，他們再次彎下腰，用手捧起細(xì)膩的沙子，全神貫注地開始堆砌。這一次，他們汲取了之前的教訓(xùn)，不僅更加小心翼翼地塑形，還特意把沙堡建在了離海水更遠(yuǎn)的地方。他們一邊忙碌著，一邊互相鼓勵，分享著彼此對于新沙堡的創(chuàng)意和想法。在溫暖的陽光照耀下，兄弟倆的身影在沙灘上顯得格外專注，仿佛周圍的一切都與他們無關(guān)，他們的心中只有那個(gè)即將再次誕生的夢想沙堡。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Atfirst,theseawatergentlylappedovertheirfeet,bringingatouchofcoolness.Butintheblinkofaneye,theseabreezehowled,andthewavesturnedrough.Onehugewaveafteranothercrashedontotheshore,likefiercebeasts,mercilesslypoundingthesandcastletheyhadpainstakinglybuilt.TomandJackwatchedhelplesslyastheexquisitetowersandsolidwallstheyhadspentsomucheffortonquicklycrumbledintopilesofscatteredsand.Theyweresoanxiousthattheyhurriedlyusedtheirhandstoblocktheseawater,tryingtosavethesandcastle.However,thepowerofthewaveswastoostrong,andtheireffortswereinvain.Lookingatthedisappearingsandcastle,theireyeswerefilledwithlossandfrustration,andtheirmoodwasaschaoticasthebeachdisturbedbythewaves.14范文呈現(xiàn)Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.Althoughthepreviouslossstilllingeredintheirhearts,thetenacityinthetwobrothersquicklymadethemcheerup.Theylookedateachotherandsawfirmdeterminationineachother'seyes.Then,theybentdownagain,cuppedtheirhandstopickupthefinesand,andstartedbuildingwithfullconcentration.Thistime,theylearnedfromtheirpreviousexperience.Notonlydidtheyshapethesandmorecarefully,buttheyalsodeliberatelybuiltthesandcastlefartherawayfromtheseawater.Astheywerebusy,theyencouragedeachotherandsharedtheircreativeideasforthenewsandcastle.Underthewarmsunlight,thefiguresofthetwobrothersonthebeachwereextremelyfocused,asifeverythingaroundthemdidn'tmatter.Intheirhearts,therewasonlythedreamsandcastlethatwasabouttobebornagain.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Initially,theseawatercaressedtheirfeetgently,impartingasenseofcoolness.Yet,inaninstant,theseabreezeroared,andthewavesturnedtumultuous.Waveuponwavecrashedontotheshore,resemblingferociousbeasts,mercilesslyassaultingthesandcastletheyhadpainstakinglyconstructed.TomandJackwatchedindismayastheelaboratetowersandsturdywallstheyhadlaboredoversoassiduouslyrapidlycrumbledintoheapsofscatteredsand.Sodesperateweretheythattheyhastilyresortedtousingtheirhandstofendofftheencroachingseawater,inafutileattempttosalvagethesandcastle.Alas,themightofthewaveswasinsurmountable,renderingtheireffortsfruitless.Gazingatthevanishingsandcastle,theireyesweresuffusedwithdejectionanddisappointment,andtheirspiritswereasdisarrayedasthebeachbuffetedbythetempestuouswaves.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.Despitethelingeringsenseofloss,theindomitablespiritwithinthetwobrothersquicklybuoyedthemup.Theyexchangedaglance,andineachother'seyes,theybeheldunwaveringresolve.Subsequently,theystoopedoncemore,scoopingupthefinesandwiththeirhands,andsetaboutrebuildingwithunwaveringconcentration.Thistime,they