專題13-2021年天津卷英語(yǔ)真題作文深度點(diǎn)評(píng)與滿分作文賞析

專題13-2021年天津卷英語(yǔ)真題作文深度點(diǎn)評(píng)與滿分作文賞析【試題再現(xiàn)第一次筆試】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿，介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容包括：（1）該地方的基本情況（如名稱、地理位置等）：（2）該地方的特色（如文化、景點(diǎn)等）（3）你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫?！驹囶}解讀】第一步：審題體裁：說(shuō)明文時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法第一段是文章的總起段，說(shuō)明四川省有很多著名的景點(diǎn)；第二段介紹景點(diǎn)九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分說(shuō)明你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。要求：1.說(shuō)明四川省有很多著名的景點(diǎn)①四川的地理位置：中國(guó)西南部②著名景點(diǎn)：九寨溝、都江堰灌溉工程2.介紹景點(diǎn)九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程①九寨溝是自然保護(hù)區(qū)②給人印象最深的層層疊疊的瀑布和五顏六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀動(dòng)植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，現(xiàn)在仍然起著灌溉的作用3.你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受：九寨溝的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造會(huì)讓你驚嘆第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）belocatedin；world-famous；placesofinterest；anaturereserve；impressive；multi-levelwaterfalls；haveachancetodo…；rareanimals；scenicspot；datefrom；playanimportantpartin；beamazedby第三步：連詞成句(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。【滿分范文欣賞1】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinOnepossibleversionABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinTianjin,abeautifulcityontheHaiheRiver,islocatedinthenorthofChinanexttothecapitalcityofBeijing.Withalonghistoryandrichculturaltraditions,Tianjinattractstouristsfrombothhomeandabroad.Therearealotofplacesofinterest.TheAncientCultureStreetiswellknownforthebeautifulartsandcraftsthatreflectthewisdomandcreativityofthelocalpeople.TheTianjinEye,whichstandsovertheHaiheRivergivesanamazingviewofthecity.OtherplacesworthvisitingincludetheWaterParkinthecitycenterandtheHuangyaguanGreatWallinJizhouDistrict.Whatimpressesmemostisthefriendlyandoptimisticpeoplelivinghere.Theyareworkinghardtomakethecityamorebeautifulplace.【滿分范文欣賞2】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationProject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiuzhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【試題再現(xiàn)第二次考試】假定你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家，他母親Nancy通過(guò)電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問(wèn)你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：（1）表示感謝并問(wèn)候；（2）計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；（3）你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容實(shí)、行文連貫；（3）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。【試題解讀】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你在英國(guó)游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國(guó)學(xué)生Chris家，他母親Nancy通過(guò)電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問(wèn)你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：表示感謝并問(wèn)候；計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。【詳解】1.詞匯積累照顧：takecareof→lookafter另外，此外：inaddition→besides→what’smore雇傭：employ→hire既然：nowthat→since2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.拓展句：AstheInternetindustrydevelopsrapidly，thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.【滿分范文欣賞1】DearNancy,Thanksforyourletter.It’sbeenalongtimesinceIleftLondon.How’severythinggoing?AsI’vecompletedstudyinhighschoolthereisgoingtobealongvacationthissummer.AndIhavegotquiteanumberofthingsonmyto-dolist.ThetoppriorityistravellingacrossChinawithmyparents.Therearesomanygreatplaceswe’dliketovisit.It’sprettyhardforustomakethechoice.Anyway,we’regoingtofigureoutourtravelplaninafewdays.Inaddition,I’mgoingtogetpreparedformycollegelife.I’vedecidedtochoosebiochemistryasmymajor.SoIwilldosomeresearchandtrytofindapart-timejobinabiochemistrylab.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvicesinceyou’vebeenworkingasauniversityteacherfor30years.Thanksagainforyourletter.Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiJin【滿分范文欣賞2】DearNancy,IamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.I'mgoingtoTian'anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGre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