高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：橄欖球賽場上的暖心瞬間：對手抽筋他選擇伸出援手+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習橄欖球賽場上的暖心瞬間：對手抽筋，他選擇伸出援手1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Americanfootballcanbeprettycompetitive.Fromoldopponentstofandrama,it'sjustanotherpartofthegame.Therehaveevenbeenall-outviolentfightsinthenameofdefendingyourteam.However,onehighschoolfootballplayerMarioHoefershowedthathisloveforthesportdidn'ttakepriorityoverhelpingapersoninneed.OneafternooninSeptember,CharlesCityHighSchoolfootballteamMariowasonfacednearbyNewHamptoninaFridayfootballgame.MariowascaptainofhisteamandCarterthequarterbackoftheopposingteam.Itwasreallyfoggyandawfullyhot.Filledwithexcitedaudienceinthestands,thestadiumfeltlikeaheatedsteamer.Everyplayerwaswewinsweatevenduringthewarm-ups.Allthismeantthegamewouldbeatoughoneandatestorthemindandbodyofbothteams.4續(xù)寫原文Soonthegamebeganandforthefirstthreequarters,eachteamseemedtohaveachancetowinandtheytooktheleadbyturns.SoexhaustedwasMariorunningbackandforththathecramped（抽筋）uptwice.EachtimehegotacrampneartheNewHamptonsideline,histeammatescametohisassistanceandstretchedhislegtoeasethecramp.Thoughfeelinguncomfortableandwornout,MariosoldieredonasCharlesCityprotectedaslimleadandNewHamptonattemptedalatecomeback.Inthefourthquarter,MariosawhisteammatesacrossthefieldbreakupacrucialpassintendedforCarter.Mariowasabouttocrossovertotheothersideofthefieldtohighfivehisteammateswhenhenoticedthatbesidehim,Carterfellontotheground,screaminginpain,hiseyeswideopenandalookofpaniconhisface.Cartergrabbedhisleftcalf（小腿肚）,tryingtomovehislegindifferentpositions.JudgingfromCarter'sdesperateexpression,MariorealizedCarterwaspossiblyexperiencinganunbearablecrampjustashehimselfhadgonethroughminutesbefore.ButtheNewHamptonplayerswerefartherawayfromthequarterback.5段首句Paragraph1:Marioknewwhattodonext.Paragraph2:Thephotowaspostedonsocialmedia.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8美式橄欖球比賽競爭激烈，甚至會因捍衛(wèi)自己的球隊而引發(fā)激烈沖突。然而，高中橄欖球隊員馬里奧?霍弗卻展示了他對運動的熱愛并未凌駕于幫助他人之上。九月的一個周五下午，查爾斯市高中橄欖球隊與新漢普頓隊比賽，馬里奧是本隊隊長，卡特是對方球隊的四分衛(wèi)。比賽當天霧氣濃重且天氣炎熱，體育場就像一個蒸籠，球員們熱身時就已大汗淋漓，這對兩支球隊的身心都是巨大考驗。比賽前三個季度，兩隊交替領(lǐng)先，馬里奧來回奔跑，兩次抽筋，每次抽筋時隊友都會過來幫他緩解。在第四季度，馬里奧注意到卡特因抽筋痛苦地倒在地上，而新漢普頓隊的隊員離卡特較遠。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Marioknewwhattodonext.馬里奧知道接下來該怎么做。他沒有絲毫猶豫，迅速來到卡特身邊，蹲下身子，臉上滿是關(guān)切。他一邊輕聲安慰著卡特，讓他不要緊張，一邊熟練地檢查起卡特的小腿。就像自己抽筋時隊友幫助自己那樣，馬里奧小心翼翼地抓住卡特的腳，慢慢地將他的腿伸直，然后輕輕按壓他的小腿肚，幫助他緩解肌肉痙攣帶來的疼痛。卡特一開始還因為疼痛而不停地扭動身體，嘴里發(fā)出痛苦的呻吟，但隨著馬里奧的動作，他逐漸安靜了下來，緊皺的眉頭也慢慢舒展開來。馬里奧一邊按摩，一邊跟卡特聊天，分散他的注意力。“嘿，兄弟，放松點，很快就會好的。這種抽筋雖然疼，但忍一忍就過去了?！瘪R里奧的聲音充滿了力量和溫暖?？ㄌ馗屑さ乜粗R里奧，雖然疼得說不出話，但眼神中充滿了對馬里奧的感謝。周圍的觀眾原本還在為比賽的激烈而歡呼吶喊，此刻都安靜了下來，他們被這一幕深深打動。大家紛紛投來贊許的目光，為馬里奧的善良和友愛鼓掌。馬里奧的隊友們也沒有責怪他去幫助對手，反而為他的行為感到驕傲。比賽因此暫停了一會兒，裁判也被馬里奧的舉動所感動，沒有催促比賽繼續(xù)進行。在馬里奧的幫助下，卡特的抽筋癥狀逐漸緩解，他緩緩地站了起來，向馬里奧伸出了手，真誠地說：“謝謝你，馬里奧，你真是個好人?！瘪R里奧微笑著握住卡特的手，說：“不用謝，這是我應(yīng)該做的，希望你能盡快恢復狀態(tài)。”10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Thephotowaspostedonsocialmedia.這張照片被發(fā)布到了社交媒體上。照片中，馬里奧正專注地為卡特按摩小腿，兩人的表情都很真實，一個滿是關(guān)切，一個帶著痛苦和感激。這張照片迅速在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上走紅，引發(fā)了大量的關(guān)注和討論。網(wǎng)友們紛紛點贊評論，稱贊馬里奧的善良和友愛，稱他展現(xiàn)了體育精神的真正內(nèi)涵。許多媒體也對這件事進行了報道，將馬里奧的行為視為體育界的榜樣。學校得知此事后，為馬里奧舉辦了一場表彰大會，校長在大會上高度贊揚了馬里奧的行為，稱他不僅為學校贏得了榮譽，也為全體學生樹立了良好的道德榜樣。馬里奧的父母也為他感到無比驕傲，他們說從小就教育馬里奧要善良、樂于助人，沒想到他在賽場上將這些品質(zhì)展現(xiàn)得如此淋漓盡致?？ㄌ厮诘那蜿犚矊︸R里奧表示了感謝，他們邀請馬里奧參加球隊的訓練，并希望能與他成為朋友。在后續(xù)的比賽中，馬里奧和卡特再次相遇，這次他們不再是對手，而是互相鼓勵、互相支持的朋友。他們用自己的行動詮釋了體育精神的真諦，讓人們看到了體育不僅僅是競爭，更是友愛和互助。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Marioknewwhattodonext.Withouthesitation,herushedtoCarter'ssideandcroucheddown,hisfacefullofconcern.WhilegentlycomfortingCarter,tellinghimnottobenervous,heskillfullyexaminedCarter'scalf.Justashisteammateshadhelpedhimwhenhehadcramps,MariocarefullygrabbedCarter'sfoot,slowlystraightenedhisleg,andthengentlypressedhiscalftorelievethepaincausedbymusclespasms.Atfirst,Carterkepttwistinghisbodyinpainandmoaning,butasMarioworkedonhisleg,hegraduallycalmeddown,andthefrownonhisfaceslowlyrelaxed.MariochattedwithCarterwhilemassaging,tryingtodistracthim."Hey,buddy,relax.It'llbeokaysoon.Thesecrampsarepainful,butthey'llpassifyouendurethem."Mario'svoicewasfullofstrengthandwarmth.CarterlookedatMariogratefully.Althoughhewasintoomuchpaintospeak,hiseyeswerefilledwithgratitude.Theaudience,whohadbeencheeringloudlyfortheintensegame,fellsilentatthismoment.Theyweredeeplytouchedbythisscene.EveryonecastapprovingglancesandapplaudedMario'skindnessandfriendship.Mario'steammatesdidn'tblamehimforhelpingtheopponent.Instead,theywereproudofhisactions.Thegamewaspausedforawhile.TherefereewasalsomovedbyMario'sbehavioranddidn'turgethegametocontinue.WithMario'shelp,Carter'scrampgraduallyeased.HeslowlystoodupandstretchedouthishandtoMario,sayingsincerely,"Thankyou,Mario.You'rereallyagoodperson."MariosmiledandshookCarter'shand,saying,"You'rewelcome.It'swhatIshoulddo.Ihopeyoucanrecoverquickly."13范文呈現(xiàn)Thephotowaspostedonsocialmedia.Inthephoto,MariowasconcentratingonmassagingCarter'scalf.Theexpressionsonbothoftheirfaceswereveryreal,onefullofconcernandtheotherwithpainandgratitude.ThephotoquicklywentviralontheInternet,attractingalotofattentionanddiscussion.Netizenslikedandcommentedoneafteranother,praisingMario'skindnessandfriendship,sayingthathehaddemonstratedthetruemeaningofsportsmanship.Manymediaalsoreportedonthisincident,regardingMario'sbehaviorasanexampleinthesportsworld.Afterlearningaboutthis,theschoolheldacommendationmeetingforMario.TheprincipalhighlypraisedMario'sbehavioratthemeeting,sayingthathehadnotonlywonhonorfortheschoolbutalsosetagoodmoralexampleforallthestudents.Mario'sparentswereextremelyproudofhim.TheysaidthattheyhadtaughtMariotobekindandhelpfulsincehewasachild,andtheydidn'texpecthimtoshowthesequalitiessovividlyonthefield.Carter'steamalsoexpressedtheirgratitudetoMario.TheyinvitedMariotoparticipateintheirteam'strainingandhopedtobecomefriendswithhim.Inthesubsequentgames,MarioandCartermetagain.Thistime,theywerenolongeropponentsbutfriendswhoencouragedandsupportedeachother.Theyusedtheiractionstointerpretthetruemeaningofsportsmanship,showingpeoplethatsportsarenotonlyaboutcompetitionbutalsoaboutfriendshipandmutualassistance.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Marioknewwhattodonext.Withoutamoment'shesitation,hedashedtowardsCarterandcroucheddownbesidehim,hisfeaturesetchedwithgenuineconcern.AshesoftlyreassuredCarter,tellinghimtostaycalm,heskillfullybegantoexamineCarter'scalf.Justashisteammateshaddoneforhimwhenhesufferedfromcramps,MariogingerlygraspedCarter'sfoot,slowlystraighteninghislegandthengentlypressinghiscalftoalleviatetheexcruciatingpainofthemusclespasms.Initially,Carterwrithedinagony,emittingpainedmoans,butasMario'ssoothingministrationscontinued,hegraduallyquieteddown,thefurrowedlinesonhisbroweasing.MarioengagedCarterinconversationwhilemassaging,aimingtodiverthisattentionfromthepain."Hey,pal,takeiteasy.It'llbefinesoon.Thesecrampsaretough,butthey'llsubsideifyouhanginthere,"Mariosaid,hisvoicebrimmingwithwarmthandstrength.CarterlookedatMariowitheyesfilledwithgratitude.Despitebeingtoooverwhelmedbypaintospeak,hisgazeconveyedhisdeepappreciation.Theonce-raucousaudience,whohadbeencheeringpassionatelyfortheintensegame,fellintoahushedsilence.Theyweredeeplymovedbythisheart-warmingscene.EveryonecastadmiringglancesandapplaudedMario'skindnessandcamaraderie.Mario'steammates,farfromblaminghimforhelpingtheopponent,wereinsteadproudofhisactions.Thegamecametoatemporaryhalt.Thereferee,too,wastouchedbyMario'sgestureandrefrainedfromurgingthegametoresume.WithMario'shelp,Carter'scrampsymptomsgraduallysubsided.HeroseslowlytohisfeetandextendedhishandtoMario,sayingsincerely,"Thankyou,Mario.You'retrulyagreatguy."MariosmiledandclaspedCarter'shand,replying,"Noproblem.It'stherightthingtodo.Ihopeyou'llbebackintopformsoon."15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thephotowaspostedonsocialmedia.Inthephoto,MariowasintentlymassagingCarter'scalf,andtheexpressionsontheirfaceswerestrikinglygenuine-oneradiatingconcernandtheotheramixofpainandgratitude.ThephotoinstantlywentviralontheInternet,sparkingaflurryofattentionanddiscussion.Netizensfloodedthecommentssectionwithlikesandpraise,commendingMario'skindnessandfriendship,andhailinghimasatrueembodimentofsportsmanship.Manymediaoutletsalsoreportedonthisincident,holdingMario'sactionsupasanexemplarymodelinthesportsrealm.Uponlearningofthis,theschoolorganizedacommendationceremonyforMario.