高考英語復(fù)習讀后續(xù)寫練習：哈利戰(zhàn)風記：從恐懼到勇敢的蛻變

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習哈利戰(zhàn)風記：從恐懼到勇敢的蛻變1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Harry,theWindisBlowingHarrywasafraidofthewind.Itwhistledunderhisdoor.ItfollowedHarryhomefromtheschoolbus.Itblewoffhishat.Atnight,itmadethetreesblowinginthewoodsnearhishouse.“Howcananyonebeafraidofthewind?”SomeonelaughedatHarry.Harry'sfriendAntonydidn'tmakefunofHarry.“You'llgetoverit,Harry,”hesaid.SometimesthatmadeHarryfeelbetter.Butnotforlong.OnedayAntonycametoHarry’shousetoplay.“Lookatmyglider(滑翔機),”saidAntony.“Itdoestricksandloop-de-loopswhenIflyitoutsideinthewind.”“Nice,”saidHarry.Theyplayedcars.Theyplayedrobots.Theydrewpictures.Cloudsrolledin.ThetreeinfrontofHarry'shouseswayed.Agarbagecanfellclattereddownthestreet."Harry,”saidAntony,“thewindisblowing.Idon'twanttostayinside.Iwanttoflymyglider.”4續(xù)寫原文Harrywassilent.“Wanttocome?”askedAntony."No,thanks,”answeredHarry.Harrystayedinsideandplayedwithhisconstructionset.HepicturedlaunchingthegliderwithAntony.Butwhenheimaginedthewindblowingagainsthisface,hewasdown.Hefeltsadtobeinhisroomwhileeveryoneelsewasoutside.Harrygotabigpieceofpaperanddrewakite.Hecutitoutandcoloredit.Hepretendedthekitewasflyingagainsttheclouds.Butafterawhile,hegottiredofpretending.OutsidethewindowAntony'sgliderwasmakingcircles.Itwasflyingupsidedown.Harrysighed.Hewastiredoffeelingafraid.Suddenlyhewantedtostamphisfeet.Hewantedtotelloutloud.Hewantedtoyell,“IAMNOTAFRAID!!”Sohetriedit.Harrywassurprised.Itfeltgoodtoyell.ThenHarrytookhiskiteandwentoutside.5段首句Paragraph1：Thewindwasblowing,buthemarchedforwardandpulledhimselfintothebranchesofthetreeinfrontofhishouse.Paragraph2：Thewindblewharder,thenHarrylethiskitego.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8哈利一直害怕風，常被人嘲笑，但朋友安東尼給予鼓勵。一天安東尼來玩，風大時他想出去放滑翔機，哈利拒絕并留在屋內(nèi)玩。之后哈利畫風箏假裝放飛，可很快厭倦。看到安東尼的滑翔機在空中精彩表現(xiàn)，哈利受刺激，決定克服恐懼。他先是爬上家門前樹，最后在風更大時放飛風箏，成功戰(zhàn)勝恐懼，還感受到風的美好，實現(xiàn)自我突破。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thewindwasblowing,buthemarchedforwardandpulledhimselfintothebranchesofthetreeinfrontofhishouse.風在呼嘯，但哈利鼓起勇氣向前，奮力爬上家門前樹的樹枝。他緊緊抱住樹枝，雙腿微微顫抖，眼睛緊張地盯著周圍。風不斷吹過，樹枝搖晃得厲害，他感覺自己隨時可能掉下去。但他想起安東尼在外面快樂地玩滑翔機，心中涌起一股不服輸?shù)膭艃?。他小心翼翼地調(diào)整姿勢，往更高處爬去。這時，一片樹葉被風吹到他臉上，他嚇了一跳，但很快鎮(zhèn)定下來。他看到安東尼在樹下向他招手，給他加油，這讓他更有動力繼續(xù)前進。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thewindblewharder,thenHarrylethiskitego.風刮得更猛了，哈利深吸一口氣，然后放開了手中的風箏。風箏瞬間被風卷上高空，在空中快速上升、盤旋。哈利仰頭看著風箏，眼睛睜得大大的，充滿了驚喜。他的心跳得很快，但這次是因為興奮。他開始在樹下奔跑起來，手中的風箏線不斷放出。隨著風箏越飛越高，他感覺自己的恐懼也被拋到了九霄云外。他大喊著：“我做到了！”臉上洋溢著燦爛的笑容，在風中享受著這份勝利的喜悅。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Thewindblewharder,thenHarrylethiskitego.Thekitewasimmediatelysweptupintotheskybythewind,risingandcirclingrapidly.Harrylookedupatthekitewithhiseyeswideopen,fullofsurprise.Hisheartwasbeatingfast,butthistimeitwasbecauseofexcitement.Hestartedrunningunderthetree,lettingoutthekitestringinhishand.Asthekiteflewhigherandhigher,hefelthisfearbeingblownaway.Heshouted,"Ididit!"withabigsmileonhisface,enjoyingthejoyofvictoryinthewind.13范文呈現(xiàn)Icouldseethepaininhiseyes,anddespitemydisappointment,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelempathyformyfriend.Iknewhewasn'tabadpersonatheart;hewasjustpushedtotheedgebylife'shardships.Takingadeepbreath,Itoldhimthatmakingmistakeswasnottheend,buttheimportantthingwastofacethembravelyandcorrectthem.Iencouragedhimtoconfesstotheteacherwithmeandseekleniency.Afteramomentofhesitation,Colinnodded.Wewenttotheteacherandexplainedthesituationsincerely.Theteacher,afterasternreprimand,alsoshowedunderstandingforColin'sfamily.Withtheteacher'shelp,Colinmadeamendsforhismistakebydoingvolunteerworkatschoolandgraduallymanagedtomoveonfromthisdarkperiod.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thewindwashowling,yetHarrysummonedhiscourageandadvancedresolutely,haulinghimselfontothebranchesofthetreebeforehishouse.Clutchingthebranchestightly,hislegsquiveredslightly.Hisgazewasfixedapprehensivelyonthesurroundings.Withthewindlashingceaselessly,thebranchesswayedwildly,makinghimfeelasifhemightplungeatanyinstant.However,whenthethoughtofAntonyrelishingthegliderflightoutsideflashedthroughhismind,asurgeofdeterminationwelledupwithinhim.Meticulouslyadjustinghisstance,heclamberedhigher.Suddenly,aleafwasblownontohisface,startlinghimmomentarily,butheswiftlyregainedhiscomposure.SpottingAntonywavingandcheeringfrombeneaththetreespurredhimonfurther.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thewindintensified,andthenHarryreleasedhiskite.Instantaneously,thekitewaswhiskedaloftbythewind,ascendingandswirlingrapidly.Harry'seyeswidenedinastonishmentashegazedskywardatthekite.Hisheartpoundedfuriously,yetthistimeitwaswithexcitement.Hecommencedrunningbeneaththetree,payingoutthekitestringinhishand.Asthekitesoared