2025年中考英語話題作文提升訓(xùn)練：情感與態(tài)度

2025年中考英語作文一一話題作文提升訓(xùn)練專題-

第九章情感與態(tài)度

情感類的作文，大多圍繞責(zé)任、同情、關(guān)愛、感恩、誠實(shí)、幸福、挫折等話題展開.情感態(tài)

度，往往通過敘事、寫人和寫物得以呈現(xiàn)，即以事寄情、以人寄情和以物寄情等.在寫此類作文時(shí)，

首先要明確文章所涉及的情感話題，然后再表達(dá)自己的體會(huì)或看法，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)升華.在談看法

和體會(huì)時(shí)，一般可以說說這一情感態(tài)度的重要性、價(jià)值和意義,進(jìn)而談?wù)勅绾温鋵?shí)這一情感態(tài)度、

怎樣達(dá)成這一情感目標(biāo)等等.寫作時(shí)需注意，文章所傳達(dá)的態(tài)度應(yīng)是積極向上的.

話題一責(zé)任

一、話題解讀-審主題

對責(zé)任的理解通常可以分為兩個(gè)層面.一是個(gè)人對自己、家庭、社會(huì)應(yīng)該做的事、應(yīng)該盡

的責(zé)任;二是個(gè)人沒有做好分內(nèi)之事而應(yīng)承擔(dān)的責(zé)任或不利后果.責(zé)任感是每個(gè)人必備的品格，它

既包括對自己的責(zé)任，也包括對他人、對社會(huì)的責(zé)任.對中學(xué)生而言，努力學(xué)習(xí)、追求上進(jìn)就是對

自己負(fù)責(zé)的表現(xiàn);規(guī)范自己的言行,遵守社會(huì)公約，就是對他人和社會(huì)負(fù)責(zé)的表現(xiàn).

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Everyoneintheworldplaysadifferentrole,andeachrolebearsdifferentresponsibilities.As

students,weshouldtakeourownresponsibilities,too.

Firstly,studyingisourmostimportanttask.Weshouldstudyhardandconstantlytoachieve

betteracademicperformance.Wealsoneedtohaveaclearplanforourfutureanddonotletparents

worrytoomuchaboutus.Secondly,asamemberofthefamily,weshouldsupportandloveourfamily

members.Athome,weshouldrespectourparentsanddosomehouseworktoeaseourparents'burden.

Atthesametime,wecanalsoteachourparentshowtousemodernelectronicdevices,suchasthe

laptopandthesmartphone.Asamemberofthesociety,wealsohavetobeartheresponsibilityof

citizenship.Weshouldobeylawsandregulationsandfollowthepublicrules.Weshouldprotectthe

environmentandnotlitterthestreets.

Aslongaseachofusdoesourbesttodoeverythingandtakesourresponsibilities,oursociety

willbefullofloveandwarmtheverywhere.Ourlifewillbemorebeautiful.

二、話題框架-列提綱

Step1:每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)承擔(dān)責(zé)任.

Step|:我們學(xué)生應(yīng)該承擔(dān)什么責(zé)任.

Step3:表明你的觀點(diǎn).

三、話題短語和亮點(diǎn)句型一加內(nèi)容

A.話題短語

1.promoteourowngrowthanddevelopment促進(jìn)我們自己的成長和發(fā)展

2.easetheburden減輕負(fù)擔(dān)

3.achievenothing一事無成

4.tidyuprooms打掃房間

5.cultivateastrongsenseofresponsibility培養(yǎng)強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感

6.playadifferentrole起著不同的作用

7.overcomevariousdifficulties克服種種困難

8.thekeytosuccess成功的關(guān)鍵

9.learntotakesomebasicdutiesstepbystep學(xué)會(huì)逐漸承擔(dān)一些基本責(zé)任

lO.tobemoreindependentandresponsible變得更獨(dú)立、更有責(zé)任心

ll.bewellawareoftheimportance充分意識(shí)到重要性

12.makedecisionsonone'sown自己做決定

13.acapableperson一個(gè)能干的人

14.behavewell表現(xiàn)好

15.betrustworthyandsuccessful值得信任的和成功的

16.beresponsibleforourselves對自己負(fù)責(zé)

17.shareasmuchhouseworkaspossible分擔(dān)力所能及的家務(wù)

18.deepenthelove加深感情

19.fulfillourresponsibilitiesbetter更好地完成自己的責(zé)任

20.gettrustandsupportfromothers得到別人的信任和支持

21.showmygratitude表達(dá)感激

22.bear/takeresponsibilityforourstudy對我們的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)責(zé)

23.sparenoeffortstohelpothers不遺余力地幫助他人

B.亮點(diǎn)句型

1.It'sourdutytostudyhardtomakeourcountrymorepowerful.

努力學(xué)習(xí)使我們的國家更強(qiáng)大是我們的責(zé)任.

2.Beingresponsibleisthesignofgrowingup.

負(fù)責(zé)任是我們長大的標(biāo)志.

3.Withoutresponsibility,wewillachievenothing.

沒有責(zé)任心，我們將一事無成.

4.1havebecomemoreresponsiblebydoinghousework.

通過做家務(wù)，我變得更有責(zé)任心了.

5.Responsibilityisoneofthemostimportantqualitiesthatapersonshouldhave.

責(zé)任心是人所應(yīng)具備的最重要的品質(zhì)之一.

6.Itisakeytaskforparentstohelpchildrenlearntotakeresponsibility.

幫助孩子學(xué)會(huì)承擔(dān)責(zé)任是父母的一項(xiàng)重要任務(wù).

7.Wemusthaveastrongsenseofresponsibilitytoourcountry.

我們必須對我們的國家有強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感.

8.Responsibilitymakesustrustworthyandsuccessful.

責(zé)任使我們值得信任并獲得成功.

9.Havingastrongsenseofresponsibilityhelpsustobebetterandbetter.

有強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感有助于我們變得越來越好.

lO.Theresponsibilityistodowhatweneedtodoanddoitwell.

責(zé)任就是做自己分內(nèi)的事情并把它做好.

1l.Theresponsibilityofstudentsistostudyhard.

學(xué)生的責(zé)任是好好學(xué)習(xí).

12.Weneedtostudyhardandfulfillourresponsibilitieswithgoodresults.

我們需要努力學(xué)習(xí)，取得好成績，更好地完成我們的責(zé)任.

四、寫前訓(xùn)練一備詞句

I.詞句操練

A.根據(jù)括號中的漢語意思完成句子.

Totakeresponsibilityinlifecan(1)(促進(jìn)自己的成長和發(fā)展).Ifwecantake

responsibility,wewill(2)(克服種種困難)andachieveourgoals.

Inmyopinion,beingresponsibleis(3)(成功的關(guān)鍵).Withoutresponsibility,we

will(4)(一事無成).Thoughweareveryyoung,westillneedtolearnto(5)

(對自己負(fù)責(zé)).Forexample,weshouldlearntoberesponsibleby(6)

(分擔(dān)力所能及的家務(wù))withourparentsinourfamily.Wecanhelpourparentswashthedishes,clean

andtidyuptheroomandsoon.Inthisway,wecanalso(7)(加深家庭成員之間的感

情)andbecomemoreresponsible.What'smore,Ithinktheresponsibilityistodowhatweneedtodo

anddoitwell.Theresponsibilityofstudentsistostudyhard.Inordertogetgoodresults,weneedto

workhardand(8)(更好地完成自己的責(zé)任).

Inaword,onlybylearningtotakeresponsibilitycanwe(9)(得到別人的信任、

支持和幫助).Beingresponsibleisthesignof(10)(長大).

答案

(1)promoteourowngrowthanddevelopment

(2)overcomevariousdifficulties

(3)thekeytosuccess

(4)achievenothing

(5)beresponsiblefbrourselves

(6)sharingasmuchhouseworkaswecan

(7)deepenthelovebetweenourfamilymembers

(8)fulfillourresponsibilitiesbetter;

(9)gettrust,supportandhelpfromothers

(10)growingup

B.將下列句子翻譯成英語.

1.當(dāng)我們懷著強(qiáng)烈的責(zé)任感去對待我們所做的每一件事時(shí)，我們一定能夠感受到責(zé)任所帶給我們

的巨大力量.

2.通過做家務(wù)，我不僅能夠?qū)W會(huì)必要的生活技能，而且還能減輕父母的壓力，有機(jī)會(huì)表達(dá)我對父母

的感激和愛.

3.首先，我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)逐漸承擔(dān)一些家庭的基本責(zé)任.幫助父母做家務(wù)就是培養(yǎng)責(zé)任心的很好的

方式.

4.我希望在生活中能夠幫助父母減輕壓力、承擔(dān)一些家庭的責(zé)任，成為一個(gè)更加獨(dú)立、更加負(fù)責(zé)

任的人.

5.正因?yàn)橛胸?zé)任心的驅(qū)使，我們才能在困難時(shí)堅(jiān)持，在成功時(shí)保持冷靜，在絕望時(shí)永不放棄.

6.責(zé)任就是做好自己分內(nèi)的事情.學(xué)生的責(zé)任是好好學(xué)習(xí)，上課認(rèn)真聽講、記筆記、積極思考.

7.幫助父母做家務(wù)培養(yǎng)了我獨(dú)自處理各種問題的能力洞時(shí)我也可以借此回報(bào)父母給我的愛和關(guān)

懷.

8.只有我們每個(gè)人都認(rèn)真盡力做好每件事，我們的社會(huì)才會(huì)處處充滿愛與溫暖.因?yàn)樨?zé)任,我們的

生活才會(huì)更加美好.

9.為了培養(yǎng)責(zé)任心，我們要學(xué)會(huì)管理好自己的時(shí)間，盡量自己解決問題而不是依靠他人.

答案

1.Whenwetreateverythingwedowithastrongsenseofresponsibility,wemustbeabletofeelthe

greatpowertheresponsibilitybringsus.

2.Bydoinghousework,Icannotonlylearnthenecessarylifeskillsbutalsoeasemyparents'burden.I

alsohaveachancetoshowmygratitudeandlovetomyparents.

3.First,weshouldlearntotakesomebasicfamilyresponsibilitiesstepbystep.Helpingparentsdo

houseworkisagoodwaytocultivateasenseofresponsibility.

4.IhopethatIcanhelpmyparentstorelievetheirpressure,takesomefamilyresponsibilitiesand

becomeamoreindependentandresponsiblepersoninmylife.

5.Itisbecausewearedrivenbyresponsibilitythatwecanpersistindifficulties,keepcalmwhenwe

succeed,andnevergiveupwhenwearedesperate.

6.Takingresponsibilityistodowellwhatweshoulddo.Theresponsibilityofstudentsistostudy

hard,listentoteacherscarefully,takenotesandthinkactivelyinclass.

7.Helpingmyparentsdohouseworkcultivatedmyabilitytodealwithallkindsofproblemsonmy

own.Atthesametime,Icanalsotakethischancetorewardmyparentsfortheirloveandcare.

8.Aslongaseachofustriesourbesttodoeverything,oursocietywillbefullofloveandwarmth

everywhere.Becauseofresponsibility,ourlifewillbemorebeautiful.

9.Inordertocultivateasenseofresponsibility,weshouldlearntomanageourowntimeandtryto

solveproblemsbyourselvesinsteadofrelyingonothers.

融段落操韁

將下列句子排成一篇文理通順的短文.

1.What'smore,weneedtostudyhardonourown.

2.Tobeginwith,weshouldlearntolookafterourselves.

3.Forexample,weneedtolearnhowtocook,howtowashclothesandhowtomanageourtime

wisely.

4.1thinkweshouldtaketheresponsibilityforourselves.

5.Weshouldtryhardtosolveproblemsbyourselvesinsteadofdependingonothers.

6.Inconclusion,aswearegrowingup,itistimeforustoberesponsibleforourselves.

7.Weneedtodohomeworkindependently.

排序后的正確順序是:________________________________________________________________

答案423-1-7-5-6

五、篇章實(shí)戰(zhàn)一寫短文

A.很多人對中學(xué)生幫助父母做家務(wù)的看法不同.假設(shè)你認(rèn)為通過做家務(wù),你能得到很多.請以“I

GetaLotofBenefitsfromDoingHousework”為題用英語寫一篇短文.

IGetaLotofBenefitsfromDoingHousework

答案

Somepeoplethinkthatstudentsdon'tneedtodohousework.Theythinkthattheonlything

studentsneedtodoistostudyhard.ButIdon'tthinkthisisagoodidea.

Iamsurethatdoinghouseworkisgoodforme.Therearesomereasonsforthis.First,doing

houseworkcanmakemeindependent.Ishouldn'trelyonothersinmylife.SoImustlearntodo

housework.Second,somehardhouseworkcanberegardedasakindofphysicalexercise;doingsome

houseworkcankeepmehealthyandstrong.Finally,bydoingsomehousework,Icanhelprelievemy

parents'pressure,takesomefamilyresponsibilitiesandbecomeamoreindependentandresponsible

person.Doinghouseworkisalsoachancetoshowmygratitudeandlovetomyparents.

Inshort,ifwewanttobecomeanindependentperson,weneedtotakeourresponsibilitiesin

dailylifewhichincludedoinghouseworkathome.Infact,Igetalotofbenefitsfromdoing

housework.

B.無論是在自己家中、在學(xué)?；蛘咴谏鐣?huì)上，學(xué)生都需要有責(zé)任意識(shí)和責(zé)任擔(dān)當(dāng).請以“T。Bea

ResponsibleStudent”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕恼J(rèn)識(shí)，并舉例說明你的理解.

ToBeaResponsibleStudent

答案

Havingastrongsenseofresponsibilityhelpsustobebetterandbetter.Tobearesponsible

student,IthinkIshoulddothefollowingthings.

Firstly,asastudent,Ishouldstudyhardandconstantlyimprovemylearningability.Itisalso

importanttotrymybesttobehavewellatschool.Forexample,Ishouldlistentoteacherscarefully,

takenoteswhennecessaryandthinkactivelyinclass.Moreimportantly,weshouldnotonlylearnto

manageourowntime,butalsotrytosolveproblemsbyourselvesinsteadofrelyingonothers.

Secondly,asafamilymember,Ishouldlearntotakesomebasicfamilyresponsibilitiesstepby

step.Helpingparentsdohouseworkisagoodwaytocultivateasenseofresponsibility.Ishouldcare

formyfamilymembers.Allinall,Ishouldberesponsiblefornotonlymyselfbutalsomyfamily

members.

Aslongaseachofustakesourownresponsibility,oursocietywillbefullofloveandwarmth.

Becauseofresponsibility,ourlifewillbemorebeautiful.

話題二同情與關(guān)愛

一、話題解讀一審主題

同情是仁愛之心的具體體現(xiàn)，是一個(gè)人對他人不幸遭遇的感同身受.擁有了同情心，我們才能

對他人伸出援助之手.通過同情去理解別人的痛苦,自己的內(nèi)心情感也能更豐富.為他人送去溫暖,

為自己帶來收獲.關(guān)愛他人,就等同于善待自己.關(guān)愛他人本身就是一個(gè)完善自己的過程，通過關(guān)愛

他人，我們能相應(yīng)地得到他人的回饋和幫助.

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Inthiscomingwinterholiday,Iwilljoinavolunteerteamtodosomethingfbrchildrenina

remotevillage.Manyofthosekidsthereareinpoorconditionandsomeofthemhavedroppedoutof

school.

Ithinkoneproblemforthesechildrenisthattheyareshortofnecessaries.Thus,Iplantoaskmy

classmatestodosomedonationsfirst,andthenwecanprovidethemwithsomebooks,clothesand

shoes.WhenIamthere,Iwillaccompanythemandlearnmoreabouttheirproblemsthatneedtobe

solvedatoncesothatIcancallonmorepeopletohelpthemontheInternet.Ialsoplantowritea

reportaboutthepovertyandproblemsofthesechildren.Ihopethisreportcanmakemorepeople

awareofthisproblemandgetthemtojoinuswithahelpinghand.

Wearelivingunderthesamebluesky,andweshouldcareaboutothersanddosomethingfor

thosewhoareinneed.Aslongaseveryonegivesalittlelove,theworldwillbecomemorebeautiful.I

believethisjourneywillbemeaningfulandhelpful.

二、話題框架一列提綱

Step1:說明利用寒假去幫助貧困孩子的計(jì)劃.

StepI具體闡述為什么要幫助、關(guān)愛這些孩子，如何把關(guān)愛落實(shí)在行動(dòng)上.

Step|:呼吁大家一起幫助、關(guān)愛這些孩子.

三、話題短語和亮點(diǎn)句型一加內(nèi)容

A.話題短語

1.takepityontheold同情老人

2.moveforwardbravely勇往直前

3.cheerthemup鼓舞他們/使他們振作

4.providechildrenwithsomebooks為孩子們提供一些書籍

5.encouragementandsupport鼓勵(lì)和支持

6.makedonationsforchildren為孩子們組織捐贈(zèng)

7.shortofmanynecessaries缺少生活必需品

8.atraditionalvirtue傳統(tǒng)美德

9.infavourof/against贊成/反對

10.makeeveryeffort盡一切努力

11.gothroughdifficulties渡過難關(guān)

12.carefor關(guān)愛

13.gotoaremotearea去遙遠(yuǎn)的地區(qū)

14beshortofmoney缺錢

15.callonmorepeopletohelpthem號召更多的人來幫助他們

16.withouthesitation毫不猶豫

17.pressingproblems緊迫問題

18.1endahelpinghand伸出援助之手

19.respecttheelderly尊重老人

20.beawareoftheproblem意識(shí)到這個(gè)問題

21.seehopeinthedisaster在災(zāi)難中看到希望

22.fbcuson/concentrateontheold關(guān)注老人

23.havesometrouble/difficultydoingsomething做某事有困難

24.material/spiritualcomfort物質(zhì)/精神安慰

25.besurroundedbycare被關(guān)懷包圍

26.withasenseofbeinguseless有一種無用的感覺

B.亮點(diǎn)句型

1.Tocareforothersistotreatyourselfwell.

關(guān)愛他人就是善待自己.

2.Aslongaseveryonegivesalittlelove,theworldwillbecomemorebeautiful.

只要人人都獻(xiàn)出一點(diǎn)愛,世界將變得更美好.

3.Nothingismoreimportantthantakinggoodcareoftheelderlyandmakingthemhappy.

沒有什么比照顧好老人，讓他們快樂更重要的了.

4.Weshouldmakeeveryefforttohelpthepeoplewhoareintrouble.

我們應(yīng)不遺余力地幫助那些有困難的人.

5.Itisobvious/clearthatweshouldletmoreoldpeoplefeelthecareandwarmthofthesociety.

我們應(yīng)該讓更多的老人感到社會(huì)的關(guān)愛和溫暖.

6.WhatIdidshowsmylovetothechildreninpoorcondition.

我所做的事情表達(dá)了我對貧困孩子的愛.

7.Helpingothersisatraditionalvirtue.

幫助別人是一種傳統(tǒng)美德.

8.Itismygreathonourtobeavolunteer.

很榮幸成為一名志愿者.

9.Filialpietyisthemostimportantinallvirtues.

百善孝為先.

lO.Letstakecareoftheearthtogether.

讓我們一起關(guān)愛地球吧！

11.Manyhandsmakelightwork.

眾人拾柴火焰高.

四、寫前訓(xùn)練一備詞句

I.詞句操練

A.根據(jù)括號中的漢語意思完成句子.

We(l)(給孩子們捐贈(zèng))inthefloodedareasatmyschoollastweek.Idonated

someclothes,shoes,schoolbags,andotherschoolthings,becauseIknewmanyofthechildrenwere

havingahardtimeand(2)(缺少生活必需品).AnotherreasonwhyIdonatedtheseis

thatIwantedthemtoknowthatthefloodmay(3)(摧毀他們的家園)andcarryaway

theirbelongings,butloveisalwaysaroundthem.Inaddition,Ialsowantedthemtoknowtheydidn't

haveto(4)(擔(dān)心困難狀況)theyarefacing,becausewewould(5)(盡

一切努力)tohelpthem(6)(渡過難關(guān)).Tobehonest,Iwasverymovedbythefact

thatalthoughthey(7)(面對罕見的災(zāi)難),theystillkeptcalm.Theirspiritalsoinspired

ustofacedifficultiesand(8)(勇往直前).

Throughthisdonation,I(9)(充分意識(shí)至U)thefactthatasmallactofkindness

alsomakesabigdifference.Aslongaswe(10)(伸出援助之手),wecanbringwarmth

andlovetoothersandmakethem(11)(在災(zāi)難中看到光明和希望).

答案

(1)madeadonationtochildren

(2)shortofmanynecessaries

(3)destroytheirhouses

(4)worryaboutthedifficultsituation

(5)makeeveryeffort

(6)gothroughdifficulties

(7)facedsuchararedisaster

(8)moveforwardbravely

(9)amwellawareof

(10)lendahelpinghand

(11)seelightandhopeinthedisaster

B.將下列句子翻譯成英語.

1.作為子女，無論我們有多忙，我們都應(yīng)該在物質(zhì)和精神上給予老人關(guān)懷.例如，我們應(yīng)該?；丶铱?/p>

看父母，給他們買一些他們喜歡的東西讓他們開心.

2.沒有什么比照顧老人、使他們開心更重要了.我要回報(bào)他們給我的愛和關(guān)懷.

3.我很樂意幫助那些缺少衣服、鞋子和書籍的孩子們.我相信他們會(huì)從我給他們的物品中感受到

溫暖和關(guān)懷.

4.孩子是祖國的未來，我們要更多地關(guān)心他們的興趣和生活狀況,促進(jìn)他們健康成長.

5.關(guān)愛老人是中國的傳統(tǒng)美德.我們應(yīng)該經(jīng)常陪伴他們，和他們聊天，讓他們感到更快樂、不那么

孤單.

6.我們正在被各種各樣的污染所包圍.目前，很多志愿者為關(guān)愛地球所做的事情使我們感到溫暖、

感動(dòng)和感激.

7.我們面臨的緊迫問題之一是如何關(guān)愛老人.我認(rèn)為他們最需要的不是物質(zhì)上的安慰，而是精神

上的安慰.

8.當(dāng)我在學(xué)習(xí)上遇到困難時(shí)，爸爸媽媽總是鼓勵(lì)我，給我信心.正是他們的關(guān)愛幫助我取得進(jìn)步，變

得越來越好.

9.如果世界是一間小屋,關(guān)愛就是小屋中的一扇窗;如果世界是一片海，那么關(guān)愛就是茫茫大海上

的一盞明燈.

答案

1.Aschildren,nomatterhowbusyweare,weshouldgivetheoldspiritualandmaterialcare.For

example,weshouldgohometoseeourparentsfrequently,buysomethingtheylikeandmakethem

happy.

2.Nothingismoreimportantthantakingcareoftheelderlyandmakingthemhappy.Iwouldliketo

rewardtheloveandcaretheyhavegivenme.

3.1amwillingtohelpthechildrenwhoareshortofclothes,shoesandbooks.Ibelievetheywillfeel

warmthandcarefromtheitemsIgivethem.

4.Childrenarethefutureofourmotherland.Weshouldpaymoreattentiontotheirinterestsandliving

conditions,andmakethemgrowhealthily.

5.CaringfortheoldisatraditionalChinesevirtue.Weshouldoftenaccompanythem,chatwiththem

andmakethemfeelhappierandlesslonely.

6.Wearesurroundedbyallkindsofpollution.Atpresent,manyvolunteershavedonesomethingto

carefortheearth,whichmakesusfeelwarm,movedandgrateful.

7.Oneofthepressingproblemswearefacingishowtocarefortheelderly.Ithinkwhattheyneed

mostisnotmaterialcomfortsbutspiritualones.

8.WhenIhavetroublewithmystudy,myparentsalwayscheermeupandgivemeconfidence.Itis

theircarethathelpsmemakeprogressandbecomebetterandbetter.

9.Iftheworldisasmallhouse,loveisawindowinthehouse.Iftheworldisasea,loveisalighton

thevastsea.

II.段落操練

將下列句子排成一篇文理通順的短文.

1.Myparentssupportmeandlovemeallthetime.

2.Loveiseverywhereinmylife.

3.Itistheirlovethathelpsmemakeprogressandbecomebetterandbetter.

4.Myfriendscareaboutmeaswell.

5.WhenIhavetroublewithmystudy,myparentsnevergetangrywithme.

6.Instead,theyalwayscheermeupandgivemeconfidence.

7.Myfriendsoftenhelpmewithmystudy.

8.1thinkeveryonewhogetslovewillbeextremelyhappy.

9.1nordertoshowmyloveandgratitude,Iwilldosomethingfortheminreturn.

10.Whattheydomakesmefeelwarm,touchedandgrateful.

排序后的正確順序是:________________________________________________________________

答案2-1-5-6-3-4-7-10-9-8

五、篇章實(shí)戰(zhàn)一寫短文

A.世界上還有很多需要幫助的人,他們有的可能生活在困境中，有的因?yàn)樨毟F,孩子無法上學(xué).國際

慈善日就是讓更多人知道慈善,讓更多需要幫助的人能夠得到溫暖.請以“IWouldLiketoDo

SomethingforCharity”為題,用英語寫一篇短文.

IWouldLiketoDoSomethingforCharity

答案

TheInternationalDayofCharityiscoming.Iwouldliketodosomethingforcharity.Iwouldlike

toselloldthingsforcharity.

Insomepoorpartsofourcountry,manystudentscan'tgotoschoolforvariousreasons.Some

peopledon'thaveenoughmoneytogotohospital,either.Ithinkeveryoneshouldkeephealthyand

havetherighttoreceiveeducation.Soweshouldmakeeveryefforttohelpthem.Justasthesaying

goes,“Manyhandsmakelightwork.”

Iwouldliketocollectsomeoldbutusefulthingstosellatschool.Withthemoney,Icanhelpthe

childreninthepoorareaswhoareshortofclothes,shoesandbooks.Ihopetheywillfeelwarmthand

carefromthesociety.Ibelievewiththehelpofthesociety,thechildrenwhoareoutofschoolwill

returntoschoolassoonaspossible.

Asweallknow,childrenarethefutureandhopeofourcountry.Weshouldpaymoreattentionto

theirlivingconditionsandhelpthemgrowhealthily.Aslongaseachofuslendsahelpinghand,they

willcertainlygothroughtheirdifficulties.

B.隨著人口老齡化日趨嚴(yán)重，老年人也成為我們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn).作為學(xué)生，我們該如何關(guān)心、關(guān)愛身

邊的老年人?請以“CarefortheOldPeopleAroundUs”為題,用英語寫一篇短文.

CarefortheOldPeopleAroundUs

答案

Caringfortheelderlyhasbecomeasocialproblem.Asstudents,whatcanwedotoshowour

loveandcaretothem?

First,weshouldoftenconcernaboutthelifeoftheelderly.Forexample,wecanoftenchatwith

theelderly,andaccompanytheelderlyasoftenaspossible.Itsverynicetotaketheelderlyoutfora

walkifwehavetime.Ithinkcaringfortheelderlynotjustconcernstheirfoodandhousing,buttheir

spiritualneeds.Companyiswhattheyneedmost.

Ialwaysshowmyrespectandlovetotheoldaroundme.Mygrandparentsdon'tlivewithus,but

Ialwaysdomybesttohelpthem.Iusuallyvisitthemandhelpthemdosomehousework.Sometimes,

Ialsogotoanursinghometoaccompanytheelderlythere,whichmakesthemfeelhappierandless

lonely.

Inmyopinion,itisourdutytotakecareoftheold.Aslongaseveryonegivesalittlelove,the

worldwillbecomemorebeautiful.Let*stakeactiontocarefortheoldpeoplearoundus.

話題三幸福與樂觀

一、話題解讀一審主題

幸福，是一種心理感受，一種滿足的心態(tài).它可以是父母無微不至的關(guān)愛,也可以是假日里悠閑

地品茶讀書的愜意.不同的人對幸福也有著不同的理解.此話題的寫作內(nèi)容比較廣泛，既可以談?wù)?/p>

什么是幸福，什么讓人感到幸福，也可以具體記敘一個(gè)幸福的瞬間，一件讓人感到幸福的小事等.同

時(shí)，人難免會(huì)遇到挫折和困難，這時(shí)候我們應(yīng)該積極面對、迎難而上，勇于克服困難、接受挑戰(zhàn)，用

樂觀的心態(tài)積極面對困難.

范文欣賞

Lifeisnoteasyforus.Everydaywehavetofaceaseriesofproblems.Forexample,students

willencounteralotofdifficultiesinlearningwhengoingtoschooltolearnknowledge,andadults

havetoworkhardtomakemoneytosupporttheirfamilies.

Asstudents,weoftenfeelgreatstress.Firstly,wehavetolearnlessonscoveringdifferent

subjectsandfinishmountainsofhomeworkeveryday.Besides,wehavetofacethepressureof

variousexaminations,amongwhichtheHighSchoolEntranceExaminationisthemoststressfulone.

Wefeellikewe'vebeenlivingundertremendouspressure.

However,weneedtounderstandthatthisisacompetitivesociety.Everyonehastoworkhardto

haveabrightfuture.Althoughsometimeslifeishardforus,weshouldlearntofacelifewithasmile.

AsanoldChinesesayinggoes,"Thereisnothinghardforawillingheart.'1Aslongaswefaceallthe

problemsandtroublesoptimistically,wecanovercomethemoneafteranother,andourworldwillbe

fullofsunshine.

二、話題框架一列提綱

Step1:生活中我們會(huì)遇到很多困難.

Step2:學(xué)會(huì)樂觀、微笑地面對生活.

Step3:微笑帶給我們的好處.

三、話題短語和亮點(diǎn)句型一加內(nèi)容

A.話題短語

l.makemoneytosupportfamily賺錢養(yǎng)家

2.feelgreatpressureontheshoulders感到肩上的壓力巨大

3.linkhappinesstolife把快樂和生活聯(lián)系起來

4.facethepressureoftheexamination面對考試的壓力

5.benefitfromreading受益于閱讀

6.beworthdoing值得做

7.relievethepressureofstudy緩解學(xué)習(xí)的壓力

8.shapeone'scharacter塑造某人的性格

9.sharehappiness分享快樂

10.formthehabitofsmiling養(yǎng)成微笑的習(xí)慣

ll.bedevotedtoyourcareer專注于你的事業(yè)

12.beoptimisticaboutlife樂觀地面對生活

13.liveundertremendouspressure生活在巨大的壓力下

14.calmdown冷靜下來

15.feellifew汕heart用心感受生活

16.facethechallengebravely勇敢面對挑戰(zhàn)

17.solvetheprobleminawiseway聰明地解決問題

18.haveapositiveattitudetowardssetbacks對挫折持積極的態(tài)度

19.amazinglandscapesandhistoricalinterests令人驚嘆的風(fēng)景和歷史名勝

20.dosportsregularly有規(guī)律地進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)

21.liveamiserablelife過悲慘的生活

22.overcomesetbacks克月艮挫折

B.亮點(diǎn)句型

1.Travellingcanhelptoreleasemystudypressure.

旅行有助于減輕我的學(xué)習(xí)壓力.

2.That'swhyIchoosetofacelifewithasmile.

那就是為什么我選擇用微笑面對生活.

3.Travellingisaprocessofdiscovery,duringwhichIcanknowmoreabouthistoryandculture.

旅游是一個(gè)發(fā)現(xiàn)的過程，它能夠讓我了解更多的歷史和文化.

4.Readingnotonlyprovidesmewithknowledge,butalsoenablesmetounderstandtheworldaround

me.

閱讀不僅給我提供知識(shí)，還使我能夠了解周圍的世界.

5.It'sreadingthatalwaysbringsmefunandjoy.

正是閱讀總是帶給我快樂.

6.Lifeisfullofchangesandchallenges.

生活充滿著變化和挑戰(zhàn).

7.There'saneedtotakethischancetoexpressmygratitude.

抓住這次機(jī)會(huì)表達(dá)我的感謝是有必要的.

8.Itisawasteoftimeandenergytoconstantlycomplainabouttheunfairnessoflife.

不斷地抱怨生活的不公只會(huì)浪費(fèi)時(shí)間和精力.

9.Readingistheeducationinaclassroomthathasnowalls.

閱讀是在沒有圍墻的教室里進(jìn)行的教育.

lO.ThemoreoptimisticIam,theeasierthelifewillbe.

我越樂觀，生活就會(huì)越容易.

11.Smilingmakesmyfriendsfeelwarmandmakesusclosertoeachother.

微笑能夠讓朋友感到溫暖，使我們彼此靠得更近.

12.Optimismhasakindofmagicpowerthatcanhelpmeovercomedifficulties.

樂觀有一種能夠幫助我克服困難的魔力.

13.Happinesscomesfromstruggle.

幸福來自奮斗.

四、寫前訓(xùn)練一備詞句

I.詞句操練

A.根據(jù)括號中的漢語意思完成句子.

Whatishappiness?Therearedifferentopinionsaboutit.Somepeoplethinkhappinessisto(l)

(與家人在一起)andtocommunicatewithfriends.Somethinkthatyouwillbehappy

ifyou(2)(樂觀地面對生活)andifyouare(3)(專注于你的事

業(yè)).Othersthinkthathappinessmeansyoualways(4)(取得新的成績).Inmyopinion,

Ithinkhappinessisafeelinginlie.Forexample,IwillfeelhappywhenIgetgoodgradesafter

studyinghard.IfIcan(5)(周末睡懶覺),1willalsofeelhappy.Whenmygooddeeds

areacceptedandpraisedbymyclassmatesandteachers,Iwillfeelfullofhappiness.Ifwelearnto(6)

(用心感受生活),happinesswillcometousnaturally.

Allinall,Ithinkhappinesscomesfromtheharvestandjoygained(7)(通過我彳門

自己的努力).Whenyou(8)(克服一個(gè)又一個(gè)的挫折)andlookattheroadthatyou

havepassed,theremustbe(9)(幸福感)inyourheart,because(10)(幸

福來自奮斗).

答案

(1)bewithfamilymembers

(2)areoptimisticaboutlife

(3)devotedtoyourcareer

(4)makenewachievements

(5)havealonglazysleeponweekends

(6)feellifewithheart

(7)byourownefforts

(8)overcomethesetbacksonebyone

(9)asenseofhappiness

(lO)happinesscomesfromstruggle

B.將下列句子翻譯成英語.

1.每個(gè)人都有他自己幸福的秘密.我幸福的秘密就是有規(guī)律地進(jìn)行運(yùn)動(dòng)并鼓勵(lì)自己努力學(xué)習(xí)取得

更多的收獲.

2.電影的主題是告訴人們要積極對待生活，無論發(fā)生什么事情，仍然需要每天用微笑面對生活.

3.我們應(yīng)該樂觀地對待生活，如果我們保持一個(gè)良好的生活態(tài)度，幸福會(huì)無處不在,我們的世界將

會(huì)充滿陽光.

4.我從閱讀中找到了快樂并收獲頗多.書籍帶給我快樂.在書籍中，我可以和現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中永遠(yuǎn)都遇

不到的人交朋友.

5.據(jù)說生活就像一面鏡子.你對它微笑，它就會(huì)對你微笑.所以我們應(yīng)該享受生活而不是抱怨生活.

6.當(dāng)我遇到困難的時(shí)候，我會(huì)選擇微笑面對生活而不是輕易放棄，我會(huì)用我的樂觀去勇敢面對困

難.

7.我總是選擇微笑是為了讓我自己振作起來，微笑不僅能夠安慰我自己，而且能夠減輕我的痛苦.

8.幸?？梢允歉改笩o微不至的關(guān)愛，也可以是假日里悠閑的品茶、讀書的樂趣.不同的人對幸福

有不同的理解.

9.當(dāng)遇到挫折和困難時(shí),我們應(yīng)該積極面對、迎難而上，勇于克服困難、接受挑戰(zhàn).

10.旅游使我快樂.旅游期間我可以欣賞令人驚嘆的風(fēng)景和歷史名勝，發(fā)現(xiàn)生活中的美.

答案

1.Everyonehashisownsecretsofhappiness.Mysecretofhappinessistodosportsregularlyaswell

asencouragemyselftoworkhardandachievemore.

2.Thethemeofthemovieistotellpeopletotakeapositiveattitudetowardslife.Nomatterwhat

happens,westillneedtofacelifewithasmileeveryday.

3.Weshouldtreatlifepositively.Ifwekeepagoodattitudetowardslife,happinesswillbeeverywhere.

Ourworldwillbefullofsunshine.

4.1findpleasureandbenefitalotfromreadingbooks.Booksbringmehappiness.Icanmakefriends

withthepeopleIwillnevermeetinreallifeinthebooks.

5.It'ssaidthatlifeislikeamirror.Whenyousmileatit,itsmilesback.Soweshouldenjoyourlife

ratherthancomplainaboutit.

6.WhenIamintrouble,Ichoosetofacelifewithasmileinsteadofgivingupeasily.Iwillusemy

optimismtofacedifficultiesbravely.

7.1alwayschoosetosmileinordertocheermyselfup,andsmilingcannotonlycomfortmyselfbut

alsoreducethepain1amsuffering.

8.Happinesscanbeparents'consideratecare,ortheleisurelyteatastingandreadingmomenton

holidays.Differentpeoplehavedifferentunderstandingofhappiness.

9.Whenweencountersetbacksanddifficulties,weshouldfacethempositivelyandbravely,and

acceptchallengesandgothroughdifficulties.

10.Travellingmakesmefeelhappy.Icanenjoyalotofamazinglandscapesandhistoricalinterests

duringthetrip.Icanalsofindthebeautyinlife.

n.段落操縹

將下列句子排成一篇文理通順的短文.

1.Oneofmysecretsofhappinessistodosportsregularly.

2.Everyonehashisorherownsecretsofhappiness.

3.1enjoyyogabecauseIcanrelaxmyselfandbecomehealthier.

4.1usuallydoyogawithmysisteronSaturdaymorning.

5.AnothersecretisthatImakeaneverydaylistofallthethingsandpeopleIamthankfulto.

6.Thesearemysecretsofhappiness,andIhopeitcanbehelpful.

7.Finally,Iwouldenjoymyliferatherthancomplainabouteverything.

排序后的正確順序是:________________________________________________________________

答案2-1-4-3-5-7-6

五、篇章實(shí)戰(zhàn)一寫短文

A.人難免會(huì)遇到挫折和困難,這時(shí)候我們應(yīng)該用樂觀的心態(tài)積極面對、接受挑戰(zhàn).請以“IHave

LearnttoFaceDifficultiesBravely”為題，用英語寫一篇短文.

要點(diǎn)提示：

1.Whatkindofdifficultydidyoumeet?Giveoneexample.

2.Whatmadeyoufaceandovercomeit?

3.Howdidy