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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給的段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasanunusuallyquietmorningintheemergencyroomonDecembertwenty-fifth.Quiet,thatis,exceptforthenursesstandingaroundthenurses'stationcomplainingabouthavingtoworkChristmasDay.Iwastriagenurse(分診護(hù)士)thatday,andwashavingacupofhotdrinkinthenurses'stationwhenanadmitingclerkcametotellmeIhadfivepatientswaitingtobeevaluated.Iwhined(哭嚷著),“Five,howdidIgetfive!”SoIwentstraightoutandcalledthefirstname.Fivebodiesshowedupatmytriagedesk,apaleskinnywomanandfoursmallchildreninsomewhatmessyclothing.“Areyouallsick?”Iaskedsuspiciously"Yes"shesaidweakly,loweringherhead."Okay,"Ireplied,unconvinced,“who'sfirst?”O(jiān)nebyonetheysatdown,andIaskedtheusualquestions.Whenitcametodescriptionsoftheirpresentingproblems,thingsgotalittlestrange.Twoofthechildrenhadheadaches,buttheheadachesweren'taccompaniedbythenormalbodylanguageofholdingtheheadortryingtokeepitstillpainfully.Twochildrenhadearaches,butonlyonecouldtellmewhichearwasaffected.Themothercomplainedofacough,butseemedtoworktoproduceit.Somethingwaswrong.WhenIexplainedtothemotherthatitmightbealittlewhilebeforeadoctorsawherbecause,eventhoughthewaitingroomwasempty,ambulanceshadbroughtinseveralmorecriticalpatientsintheback,sheresponded,"Takeyourtime!It'swarminhere."Sheturnedand,withasmile,guidedherchildrenintothewaitingroom.Icheckedthechartaftertheadmittingclerkhadfinishedregisteringthefamily.Noaddress—theywerehomeless.Thewaitingroomwaswarm.Iwentbacktothenursesstationandmentionedthehomelessfamilyinthewaitingroom.Thenurses,complainingaboutworkingChristmas,turnedtosympathyforafamilyjusttryingtogetwarmonChristmas.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thenurseswentintoaction.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The“party”lastedintothelateafternoon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________續(xù)寫(xiě)分析第一段：Thenurseswentintoaction.情節(jié)銜接：此段承接前文護(hù)士們得知這家人無(wú)家可歸，只是想在溫暖的急診室度過(guò)圣誕節(jié)的情節(jié)?！白o(hù)士們行動(dòng)起來(lái)”作為起始句，需重點(diǎn)展現(xiàn)護(hù)士們?nèi)绾斡脤?shí)際行動(dòng)給予這家人關(guān)懷?？赏ㄟ^(guò)具體分工描寫(xiě)，如有的護(hù)士準(zhǔn)備食物，有的護(hù)士收集衣物，有的護(hù)士布置溫馨環(huán)境，體現(xiàn)眾人的齊心協(xié)力。同時(shí)，穿插護(hù)士們的語(yǔ)言和心理活動(dòng)，如“我們不能讓他們?cè)谑フQ這天只感受到寒冷”，將情感自然融入行動(dòng)中，為后文“派對(duì)”的溫馨氛圍做鋪墊。情感推進(jìn)：從最初對(duì)工作在圣誕節(jié)的抱怨，到了解真相后的同情，再到主動(dòng)行動(dòng)時(shí)的熱情，護(hù)士們的情感實(shí)現(xiàn)了從消極到積極的轉(zhuǎn)變。通過(guò)對(duì)護(hù)士們忙碌身影、溫暖笑容的刻畫(huà)，傳遞出人性的善良與節(jié)日的溫情，讓讀者感受到善意在群體中蔓延的力量。細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充：添加對(duì)孩子們反應(yīng)的描寫(xiě)，如“孩子們睜大眼睛，好奇又驚喜地看著忙碌的護(hù)士們”，增強(qiáng)畫(huà)面感染力；描述護(hù)士們準(zhǔn)備的物品細(xì)節(jié)，如“嶄新的毛毯上還帶著柔軟的絨毛，熱騰騰的姜餅散發(fā)著香甜氣息”，豐富場(chǎng)景的真實(shí)感。第二段：The“party”lastedintothelateafternoon.情節(jié)銜接：該段圍繞“派對(duì)”的持續(xù)展開(kāi)，進(jìn)一步深化情感交流?？擅鑼?xiě)孩子們與護(hù)士們的互動(dòng)游戲、母親感動(dòng)落淚的場(chǎng)景，以及眾人分享故事的溫馨時(shí)刻，展現(xiàn)這場(chǎng)特殊“派對(duì)”帶來(lái)的歡樂(lè)與溫暖。同時(shí)，通過(guò)時(shí)間的流逝暗示美好時(shí)光的短暫，為結(jié)尾的情感升華埋下伏筆。情感升華：隨著派對(duì)的進(jìn)行，護(hù)士們與這家人之間建立起深厚的情感連接，從陌生人變?yōu)楸舜岁P(guān)懷的朋友。孩子們的純真笑容、母親的真誠(chéng)感謝，以及護(hù)士們內(nèi)心的滿足感，共同構(gòu)成了一幅充滿愛(ài)的畫(huà)面。結(jié)尾處可通過(guò)環(huán)境描寫(xiě)或人物內(nèi)心獨(dú)白，點(diǎn)明“善意與關(guān)愛(ài)能驅(qū)散寒冷，帶來(lái)最珍貴的溫暖”這一主題。主題深化：以“派對(duì)”為載體，將圣誕節(jié)的歡樂(lè)氛圍與人性的美好結(jié)合，強(qiáng)調(diào)在特殊時(shí)刻給予他人幫助的意義。不僅展現(xiàn)了個(gè)人的善良舉動(dòng)，更體現(xiàn)了集體的溫暖力量，以及善意傳遞帶來(lái)的深遠(yuǎn)影響，使故事主題得到升華。故事線圣誕值班與意外接診：圣誕節(jié)清晨，急診室里護(hù)士們抱怨值班，此時(shí)分診護(hù)士接到五位患者，問(wèn)診時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)癥狀異常。發(fā)現(xiàn)真相與同情萌生：通過(guò)檢查得知這家人無(wú)家可歸，只是想在溫暖的急診室避寒，護(hù)士們的態(tài)度從抱怨轉(zhuǎn)為同情。暖心行動(dòng)與歡樂(lè)派對(duì)：護(hù)士們積極行動(dòng)，為這家人準(zhǔn)備食物、衣物，舉辦“派對(duì)”，在互動(dòng)中傳遞溫暖與愛(ài)。短語(yǔ)gointoaction（采取行動(dòng)）showsympathyfor（對(duì)……表示同情）bedressedin（穿著）awarmandcozyatmosphere（溫馨舒適的氛圍）sharestories（分享故事）burstintolaughter（突然大笑）befilledwithgratitude（充滿感激）asenseoffulfillment（成就感）spreadwarmthandlove（傳遞溫暖與愛(ài)）makeadifference（產(chǎn)生影響）cometogether（團(tuán)結(jié)起來(lái)）handoutgifts（分發(fā)禮物）inthespiritofChristmas（本著圣誕節(jié)的精神）aheart-warmingscene（感人的場(chǎng)景）createpreciousmemories（創(chuàng)造珍貴的回憶）huddletogether（擠在一起）asimpleactofkindness（一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善舉）lightupsomeone’sday（照亮某人的一天）主旨升華句OnthatChristmasDay,theemergencyroombecameahavenoflove,provingthatthecoldestwintercanbewarmedbythesimplestactsofkindness.（在那個(gè)圣誕節(jié)，急診室變成了愛(ài)的港灣，證明最寒冷的冬天也能被最樸素的善舉溫暖。）The“party”intheemergencyroomtaughteveryonethattrueChristmasspiritliesnotinfancygiftsbutinopeningourheartstothoseinneed.（急診室里的這場(chǎng)“派對(duì)”讓每個(gè)人明白，真正的圣誕精神不在于精美的禮物，而在于向有需要的人敞開(kāi)心扉。）Asthenursesandthehomelessfamilylaughedtogether,theycreatedabondstrongerthanblood,showingthatcompassionhasthepowertobridgedivides.（當(dāng)護(hù)士們與無(wú)家可歸的一家人一同歡笑時(shí)，他們建立起了比血緣更牢固的紐帶，表明同情的力量能夠跨越隔閡。）Thatday,theemergencyroomwitnessedthemagicofkindness—asimplegestureturnedableakChristmasintoadayfilledwithunforgettablewarmthandhope.（那一天，急診室見(jiàn)證了善良的魔力——一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的舉動(dòng)將黯淡的圣誕節(jié)變成了充滿難忘溫暖與希望的一天。）Inthemidstofmedicalequipmentandhurriedfootsteps,loveblossomed,remindingusthatthemostpreciousgiftsaretheoneswegivefromtheheart.（在醫(yī)療設(shè)備與匆忙的腳步聲中，愛(ài)悄然綻放，提醒我們最珍貴的禮物是發(fā)自內(nèi)心的給予。）寫(xiě)作示范示范一Thenurseswentintoaction.Lisadashedtothecafeteriaandreturnedwithtraysofsandwichesandhotchocolate.Sarahrummagedthroughthelost-and-foundbox,pullingoutsweatersandscarves.OthersdecoratedthewaitingroomwithleftoverChristmasornamentsfromthestafflounge.Whenthefamilyentered,theireyeswidenedindisbelief.Thechildrengaspedastheysawasmalltreetwinklingwithlights.“MerryChristmas!”thenurseschimed.Themother’seyeswelledupwithtears.“Youdidn’thavetodothis,”shewhispered.“Butwewantedto,”repliedEmma,placingasoftblanketaroundhershoulders.The“party”lastedintothelateafternoon.Thechildrenplayedgameswiththenurses,theirlaughterechoingthroughthehalls.Onelittlegirldrewapictureofthenursesasangels,proudlypresentingittothegroup.Themothersharedstoriesoftheirjourney,andthenurseslistened,heartsheavyyetfilledwithdeterminationtohelp.Asthesunbegantoset,thefamilypreparedtoleave.Themotherhuggedeachnursetightly.“ThiswasthebestChristmaswe’veeverhad,”shesaid.Watchingthemwalkout,thenursesknewtheyhadnotonlywarmedbodiesbutalsotouchedsoulsthatday.示范二Thenurseswentintoaction.Theyquicklydividedtasks:somecalledlocalcharitiesforextrasupplies,whileotherstransformedaspareroomintoacozyspace.Marybroughtinherdaughter’soutgrowntoys,andJohnsetupasmallmusicplayer,fillingtheairwithfestivecarols.Thechildren’sfaceslitupwhentheyreceivedcoloringbooksandcrayons.Oneboyshylyasked,“Isthisreallyforus?”NurseKatecroucheddown,smiling.“Ofcourse!Santaheardyouwerehereandsentsomeearlypresents.”Themotherwatched,speechless,asherchildrenexperiencedjoyshethoughtthey’dneverhave.The“party”lastedintothelateafternoon.Theroomwasfilledwiththesmelloffreshlybakedcookiesandthesoundofsharedlaughter.Thenursestookturnsreadingstoriestothechildren,whosnuggledclose,theireyesbrightwithwonder.Aseveningapproached,thefamilyreluctantlygotreadytoleave.Butbeforetheydid,theyoungestchildhandedeachnurseahandmadepaperstar.“ThankyouformakingourChristmasspecial,”shesaid.Thenursesstoodinsilence,watchingthemgo,knowingthatthisChristmas,theyhadreceivedfarmorethantheyhadgiven.示范三Thenurseswentintoaction.Withinminutes,thewaitingroomwastransformed.Redribbonsadornedthewalls,andapileofdonatedclotheslayneatlyonatable.Thenursespooledtheirownmoneytobuysmallpresents—astuffedbearfortheyoungest,abookfortheoldest.Whenthefamilyentered,themothercoveredhermouth,overcomewithemotion.“We’rejustsograteful,”shemanagedtosay.NurseAmygentlytookherhand.“You’repartofourfamilytoday.”Thechildrenwastednotime,divingintothepileoftoys,theirlaughterlikemusictoeveryone’sears.The“party”lastedintothelateafternoon.Asthehourspassed,thebondbetweenthenursesandthefamilygrewstronger.TheydancedtoChristmassongs,sharedjokes,andevenhadafriendlycookie-decoratingcompetition.Whenitwastimetopart,themotherpulledoutaworn-outjournal.“Iwanttowritedowneveryone’sname,”shesaid,“sowe’llneverforgetthiskindness.”Thenursesgatheredaround,eachaddingamessageofhope.Asthefamilywalkedaway,thenursesfeltadeepsenseoffulfillment,realizingthatsometimes,themostmeaningfulcelebrationshappeninthemostunexpectedplaces.示范四Thenurseswentintoaction.Theyworkedtirelessly,creatingafestivewonderland.Somenursesmadesnowflakesoutofpaper,whileothersarrangedamakeshiftstageforaminitalentshow.Thechildrenweregivennewhatsandmittens,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.Themothersatquietly,tearsstreamingdownherfaceasshewatchedherchildrenexperiencehappiness.NurseTomkneltbesideher.“ThisiswhatChristmasisallabout,”hesaid.“Givingandsharinglove.”Shenodded,unabletospeak,herheartoverflowingwithgratitude.The“party”lastedintothelateafternoon.Theemergencyroomwasalivewithenergy.Thechildrenperformedsongsandskits,earningthunderousapplausefromthenurses.Themother,encouragedbythewarmtharoundher,evenjoinedin,singingalullabyfromherchildhood.Asthedayended,thefamilypackedtheirnewbelongings,theirarmsfullofloveandmemories.Beforeleaving,theoldestchildturnedtothenurses.“You’reourheroes,”hesaid.Thenurseswatchedthemdisappearintothewinternight,theirheartsglowingwiththeknowledgethattheyhadmadeadifference—notjusttoafamily,buttotheveryspiritofChristmas.Onepossibleversion:Thenurseswentintoaction.Someclaimedmealsfromthehospitalcafeteriaandprepared