書面表達專題4.ppt

1、書面表達專題(四),學生習作點評 (一) 實現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關系，不僅要善于言表、更要學會傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為“Being a Good Listener”的英文演講稿。,注意：1.對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。 2詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 3演講稿中不得提及考生所在學校及本人姓名。 Good afternoon，everyone! The topic of my speech today is“Being a Good Listener” _ Thank you for your listening!,學生習作 G

2、ood afternoon，everyone! The topic of my speech today is“Being a Good Listener” Good listening can always show respect，promote understanding，and improve interpersonal relationship.,Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children，so they will understand them better，and find it ea

3、sy to narrow the generation gap；teachers should listen more to their students，then they can meet their needs better，and place themselves in a good relationship with their students；students should listen more to their classmates，thus they will help and learn from each other，and a friendship is likely

4、 to be formed.,What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others.Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk；show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile；be openminded to different opinions even though you dont like them.In a word，goo

5、d listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. Thank you for your listening!,教師點評 文章開門見山，點明“為何傾聽”，并且運用了并列謂語動詞來表達。 在“誰來傾聽”一部分，作者運用并列的“parents should listen.；teachers should listen.；students should listen.”，使文章讀來瑯瑯上口，很有氣勢。,在“怎樣傾聽”這一部分，作者提出了三點建議。本段首先運用what引導的主語從句；其次用了三個并列的祈使句，符合演講稿的語言特點；

6、最后，以in a word 作出總結(jié)。 總之，文章不管是從結(jié)構(gòu)上，還是從語言上，都不愧為一篇佳作。,(二) Directions：Write an English composition in about 100 to 120 words according to the points given in Chinese. 1我最難忘的一課。 2具體說明為什么難忘。 3感想。 _,學生習作 On my study way，a English class makes a deep impression on me and is remian in my memory.At that time，Im

7、 not interested in English and always do other something in English classes.However，this English class makes me change my mind about English.The English teachers lecture attracts me deeply.She opens a door for me，make me realize English is very important and interesting.She gives me enough confidence learn English well.In a word，this class changes my life in some way.Therefore，I swear I must learn English well and I can.,教師點評 本文漢語式英語較多，出現(xiàn)了許多時態(tài)錯誤。既然是記敘“難忘的一課”，應以一般過去時為主。本文除最后一句外，其他各句的時態(tài)均應改為過去時態(tài)。 此處為漢語式表達，應改為In my study life/career。 冠詞使用錯誤，a應改為an。 remain 為系動