王靜第七單元作文.ppt

1、writing,Theme(主題): School Rules,Unit 7,Watch a play and see what rules they are breaking ?,What rules are they breaking?,Dont wear earrings. Students are not allowed to wear earrings. Students should not be allowed to wear earrings. Dont fight . Students are not allowed to fight. Students should not

2、 be allowed to fight. Dont wear their own clothes. Students are not allowed to wear their own clothes Students should not be allowed to wear their own clothes,Useful phrase,Be (not) allowed to ,students,Students should be allowed to do homework with friends.,Do you agree or disagree?,表達(dá)觀點(diǎn),I think .(

3、肯定) I dont think .(否定),They can help each other. They often talk instead of doing homework.,Students should be allowed to have part-time jobs.,表達(dá)觀點(diǎn),I think .(肯定) I dont think .(否定),They will have a better experience. They need time to study.,With a partner, discuss some rules at school that you agre

4、e or disagree with. Make some notes in the chart.,Make an oral report,Use the following expressions to help you There be I think its very adj. for us to In my opinion, we should be allowed to ,Rules of My School There are lots of rules in my school. For example,we must clean our classroom every morn

5、ing. I think its very necessary for us to keep it clean. And its good for our health. We have to wear school uniform every day. I think the uniforms are ugly. In my opinion, we should be allowed to choose our own clothes.,范文賞析,校規(guī) 寫作 指導(dǎo),開篇點(diǎn)題,規(guī)章制度和觀點(diǎn),結(jié)尾綜述,My Opinions about School RulesEach school has

6、rules for the students. Some are good for us, Ithink, but others are not. We are required to wear school uniforms every day. It helps us have aneasylife, so we canputall our effort into study. Many students like eating snacks at school, but I dont think its a good habit. Its bad for our health. Howe

7、ver, as formobilephones, we students have quite different ideas. We are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school. Ithinkit is not a good rule. Sometimes we can use mobile phones to contact our parents if we have problems. So I think the rule can be changed a little like “Dont use mobile phones i

8、n class.” Anyway, school rules are necessary for us to make fewer mistakes. But it would be better for teachers to listen to students opinions. So the rules can be accepted by all the students.,Answer questions: 1.How many school rules does writer mention? 2.What does writer think of wearing school

9、uniforms ? 3.Does writer agree to bring mobile phones to school? why?,寫作 策略 指導(dǎo),審,1.文體2.時態(tài) 3.語態(tài)4.人稱,列,列舉要點(diǎn),添,1.圍繞要點(diǎn)添加內(nèi)容 2.添連接詞使文章層次分明,查,美,應(yīng)用高級詞匯，不同句式 等提升文章檔次,1.時態(tài)2.語法 3.標(biāo)點(diǎn)4.詞數(shù),布局 謀篇,以“My Opinions about School Rules”為主題的英語征文活動。請你依此寫一篇征文。內(nèi)容：1.介紹兩條你贊同的校規(guī)及一條你反對的校規(guī)，并陳述理由；2.提出你對校規(guī)制定的建議。,writing,About writing,書面表達(dá)評分原則,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 運(yùn)用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量 運(yùn)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和時態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確性 上下文的連貫。,Appreciation,講評時間,lets do it better.,Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.,沒有規(guī)矩 不成方圓,Reviseyour composition. Think a