外研版八年級寫作課件.ppt

一、認(rèn)真審題，明確要求 1、審文體。體裁有記敘文、說明文、應(yīng)用文等。應(yīng) 用文包括書信、通知、日記、便條等。動筆之前，審好文體。 2、審格式。每種體裁都有其固定的格式。在近幾年考卷的書面表達(dá)體裁中，以書信、求職信、通知、 演講稿和看圖作文為主。 3、審人稱。弄清書面表達(dá)要求用何種人稱，第一人稱、第二人稱還是第三人稱。 4、審時態(tài)。弄清這篇文章用什么時態(tài)。,二、緊扣文意，組織要點(diǎn)。 書面表達(dá)的評分憑據(jù)之一是內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。因此在認(rèn)真審題，弄清題意的基礎(chǔ)上，應(yīng)逐個地、完整無缺地把內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)列出來。對于圖畫內(nèi)容的提示，要注意仔細(xì)觀察圖畫內(nèi)容。,三、選詞造句，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。 1、多用短句。 2、寫有把握的句子。 3、盡量使用主動語態(tài)，少用被動語態(tài)。 4、避免用中式英語。,四、整理成篇，行文連貫 根據(jù)要點(diǎn)完成連詞成句后，分清文章的層次， 先說什么，后說什么，把這些句子重新排列組合起來，使之前后成為一篇完整的短文，內(nèi)容連貫，中心突出。同時句子與句子之間的過渡要自然，即在需要處加上適當(dāng)表示并列、遞進(jìn)、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章文理通順。,Useful Conjunctions(常用連詞) So , and, but, if , when, such as, because, since, even though, sothat, as soon as , not onlybut also,五、計劃時間，檢查復(fù)核 審題、擬腹稿、打草稿、寫成文、檢查等各環(huán)節(jié) 要合理安排時間，以防止因時間不夠而草率了事。,各檔次的給分范圍和要求： 第六檔：（14 15分）包含全部要點(diǎn)；語言基本無誤； 行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。 第五檔：（1113分）基本包含 點(diǎn)，遺漏少量次要點(diǎn)；語言有少量錯誤；行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚。 第四檔：（810分）包含部分要點(diǎn)；語言雖有較多錯誤，尚能達(dá)意。 第三檔：（ 5 7分） 要點(diǎn)不明確；語言錯誤多， 影響意思表達(dá)。 第二檔：（ 3 4分） 只抄寫了提示詞；錯誤百出，不知所云。 第一檔：（ 02 分)白卷或文不對題。,寫作六步法,審審試題,圈圈要點(diǎn),注注短語,寫 寫 全文,改改病錯,謄謄美觀,Writing skills:,時態(tài)一致 必須注意所用時態(tài)符合上下文。如果用過去時敘述一個故事，就要保證通篇都用過去時，不要在作文中間變成現(xiàn)在時。同樣，如果是在談?wù)撈毡閱栴}、現(xiàn)狀或日常習(xí)慣，就要用現(xiàn)在時，而不要用過去時。 e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me three hours. His father thought he is good at math. She started her new job last week. She liked it. We didnt go to the party. We arent invited.,took,was,likes,werent,Writing skills :,2.人稱一致 應(yīng)該保持全文人稱一致，這樣讀者才能跟隨一個邏輯思維順序。否則讀者會感到困惑。 e.g. Although you may fail the exam, he can still be useful to the country. It not only provides you with lots of knowledge but also develops his interests.,you,your,Writing skills :,3. 主謂一致/人稱一致,確保語法正確。 e.g. Things I hate to do is doing homework. What I hate to do is Every people start to learn English. Every person starts to learn English. The activities can relax ourselves. The activities can help us relax ourselves./We can relax ourselves by taking part in the activities.,Writing skills:,4. 詞序/語序 它能夠幫助準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)作者本意并并避免意義含糊不清。注意要讓句子盡量保持英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。 e.g. I already have had lunch. She with her mum traveled to Italy. I always be the winner of the piano contest. In China, he knew there were big floods. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.,have already,She traveled to Italy with her mum.,am always,He knew there were big floods in China.,I just wonder what my father likes and what I should do.,Dear sir: Im a middle school student. I very like your program And I like yours English song program best. I usually listen your program if I free. Im often busy study. When I tired, I turn on the radio listen English songs. I learn many word from those songs .I like “My Heart Will go On” the song best. I hope can get the words of the song.,like,studying,to,your,am/feel tired,words,listen to,to listen,hope to get 或hope I can get,the song “My Heart Will Go On”