如何寫出高水平的英語句子課件.ppt

HowtoenrichyourwritingParttwo:advancedsentences,詞匯,句型,語法多樣化,1.覆蓋了所有的要點2.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,要點全,連接詞,如何算是一篇好文章？,IdiomaticExpressions:,應(yīng)對挑戰(zhàn)/滿足需要/符合標(biāo)準(zhǔn)募捐趕時髦/做自己喜歡做的事我理解不了這個問題興趣愛好相同由于疏忽所至惡化請某人享受-有所作為或產(chǎn)生影響被罰款/卡住/被抓住消磨時間拿-當(dāng)急需-接電話當(dāng)心路滑按要求增進友誼增強體質(zhì)上下班的高峰期險勝蹩腳的英語破壞自然法則,FeaturesofGoodEnglishArticals:,Linkingwords,Diversesentences,Advancedsentences,有文采為妙,TrytoavoidChinglish,準(zhǔn)確為先,流暢為好,Comparethefollowingsentences,andpointoutwhichonedoyouthinkisanadvancedone.1.IlikeEnglishverymuch.Englishismyfavoritesubject.ImcrazyaboutEnglish.2.Weshouldtryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.Weshouldsparenoefforttoprotecttheenvironment.Weshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironment.3.Althoughthecoupleworkhard,theyarestillpoor.Althoughthecoupleworkhard,theyremainpoor.Hardasthecouplework,theystillcantmakeendsmeet.,Translatethefollowingandtrytodiversifyyousentences.,1.2008年5月12日汶川發(fā)生了一場可怕的地震.2.他英語說得太快了,我跟不上.3.他上班遲到了,因為他遇上了堵車.4.他經(jīng)常吃零食,這使他很容易長胖.5.直到你失去了你才會意識到健康的重要性.6.在英國住了十年之后,他已經(jīng)習(xí)慣了左邊駕駛.,高考書面表達經(jīng)典句型,(一)特殊句式類:1.強調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)itis/was-that-以及not-until強調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)2.倒裝句1)as引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句2)onlyinthisway/then或onlywhen從句放在句首3)notuntil、so+adj/adv放在句首3.感嘆句what/how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句4.祈使句+and/or并列句5.therebe結(jié)構(gòu),Translatethefollowingusingthepatternsabove:,1.使我感到慚愧的是,是這個男孩而不是那個年青人主動為老人讓座.(強調(diào))直到他的家人趕到醫(yī)院,我才離開.(強調(diào))是電腦把我們從疲勞的工作中解脫了出來.(強調(diào))2.只有用這種方法我們才能控制不斷增長的價格.(倒裝)盡管他很富有,但他從不向慈善機構(gòu)捐一分錢.(倒裝)他如此沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)以至于無法自拔.(倒裝),3.人們逐漸認(rèn)識到保護環(huán)境是多么重要啊.(含感嘆)星期天下午能在操場上踢踢足球?qū)⑹嵌嗝从腥ぐ?fun).4.相信自己,明年你就會成功.(祈使句+and并列句)不要開這么快,否則你會被罰款的.5.我們村子前流淌著一條清澈的河流.(therebe)我們學(xué)生沒必要擁有手機.,Suggestedanswers:,1.Tomyshame,itwasaboyratherthantheyoungmanthatofferedhisseattotheoldman.Itwasnotuntilhisfamilycametothehospitalthatlleft.Itisthecomputerthatfreesusfromthetiringwork.2.Onlyinthisway,canwecontroltheincreasingprice.Richasheis,heneverdonatesacenttothecharities.SoaddictedishetotheInternetthathecanttearhimselfawayfromit.,3.Peoplehavecometorealizehowimportantitistoprotecttheenvironment.WhatfunitwillbetoplayfootballontheplaygroundonSundayafternoon.4.Believeinyourselves,andyoullsucceednextyear.Dontdrivesofast,oryoullgetfined.5.Thererunsacleanriverinfrontofmyvillage.Thereisnoneedforusstudentstoownacellphone.,(二).it句型類：,Itis+adj+for/ofsbtodosthItissaid/reported/known/expectedetcthat-.Itsohappened/occurredtomethat-Itwillnotbelongbefore-Itwillbetenyearsbefore-Itishightimethat-Itisawasteofmoneytodo/doingsthItisnogood/nousedoingsth.sbfind/believeitimportant/necessarytodosthfeelitonesdutytodosthmakeitaruletodosth,Makesentencesusingitpatterns.,1.使她的第一本HarryPotter出版對于J.KRowling來說非常困難.小女孩真勇敢當(dāng)眾阻止他偷竊.2.人們期望盡快采取措施降低CPI.眾所周知定期鍛煉對健康有益.3.我個人認(rèn)為整天上網(wǎng)是浪費時間.4.我突然想起我把鑰匙忘在辦公室里了.5.實驗后把東西放好,我們應(yīng)當(dāng)把這當(dāng)成一種習(xí)慣.6.我覺得為災(zāi)區(qū)(disaster-hitareas)募捐是我們的義務(wù).,Suggestedanswers:,1.ItwasverydifficultforJ.KRollingtogetherfirstHarryPotterpublished.Itwasbraveofthegirltostoptheyoungmanstealinginpublic.2.ItisexpectedthatsomethingshouldbedoneassoonaspossibletoreducetheCPI.Itisknownthattakingregularexercesecontributestooneshealth.(ordoesbenefitto)3.Personally,itisawasteoftimetosurftheInternetallday.4.ItocurredtomethatIhadleftmykeyintheoffice.,5.Weshouldmakeitaruletoputthingsinorderafterexperiments.6.Ifeelitourdutytoraisemoneyforthedisaster-hitareas.,(三).with的諸多含義以及with+O+Oc類,1)._(用手機發(fā)信息)seemsmorefashionablethanthetraditionalcommunicationways.2)._(隨著社會的發(fā)),thecomputerplaysamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.,Withtearsinhereyes,Sendingmessageswiththecellphone,Withthedevelopmentofsociety,3)._(在向?qū)У膸ьI(lǐng)下),wehadnodifficultyfindingthesecretcave.4)._(有許多工作要做),hecantattendyourbirthdayparty.5)._(因為完成了工作),hegladlyacceptedmyinvitation.6).Shesaidgood-byetohim_(眼含淚水).,Withtheguideleading,Withsomuchworktodo,Withtheworkdone,Withtearsinhereyes,Writeanarticle,usingstructurestoenrichyourarticle.假如你是李華,是一位高中生,請你有英語給某報社寫一封信,反映如下情況和你的想法:1.教室是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的地方,需要安靜.2.有些學(xué)生把手機帶進教室,在課堂上經(jīng)常聽見手機的鈴聲.3.有的同學(xué)還在課堂上發(fā)短信,浪費寶貴的學(xué)習(xí)時間.4.建議有手機的同學(xué)上課時應(yīng)把手機關(guān)掉,不要接聽電話或發(fā)短信,集中精力學(xué)習(xí).,Homework,Good-bye,Thankyouforattending,CorrectthefollowingChinglish.,1.IverylikeEnglish.2.Undertheteachershelp,Iworkedoutthedifficultproblem.3.Themandressesablackcoat.4.Shereceivedthefirstplaceinthesingingcompetition.5.Hereissuitabletogrowcashcrops.6.Chinaspopulationisthemostintheworld.7.Everywherecanseethekindoftree.8.Ourcountryhastakenplacegreatchanges.,vmuchery,suggestedanswers:,1.AterribleearthquakehappenedinWenchuanonMay12,2008.AterribleearthquakehitWenchuanonMay12,2008.May12,2008sawaterribleearthquakeinWenchuan.2.HespeaksEnglishtoofast,andIcantfollowhim.HespeaksEnglishtoofastformetofollow.HespeaksEnglishsofastthatIcantfollowhim.SofastdoeshespeakEnglishthatIcantfollowhim.HespeaksEnglishtoofast,whichmakesmefailtofollowhim.Hisfast-spokenEnglishisquitebeyondme.,3.1).Hewaslateforwork,forhehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjam.2).Hehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjam,whichmadehimlateforwork.3).Hehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjam;thatswhyhewaslateforwork.4).Havingbeencaughtinthetrafficjam,hewaslateforwork.5).Thathehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjammadehimlateforwork.6).Thereasonwhyhewaslateforworkwasthathehadbeencaughtinthetrafficjam.7).Itwasbecausehewascaughtinthetrafficjamthathewaslateforwork.,5.1).Youwontknowitsimportancebeforeyourhealthhasbeenlost.2).Youwontrealisetheimportanceofyourhealthuntilyouhavelostit.3).No