雅思教育類大作文高分范文解密-智課教育出國(guó)考試.pdf

智 課 網(wǎng) 雅 思 備 考 資 料 雅思教育類大作文高分范文解密 智課教育出國(guó)考試 本文為大家?guī)?lái)的是雅思教育類大作文高分范文解密 希望考生朋 友們能夠通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)范文 掌握其中精華之處 并為之所用 一定能夠取 得高分 下面為大家講解的是劍橋雅思官方指南中Test 6 Tsk 2的范文 原題目為In the past when students did a university degree they tended to study in their own country Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development You should use your own ideas knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence 通過(guò)題目分析 我們得知此題為教育類題材 題目類型為觀點(diǎn)類 那么針對(duì)該題 我們應(yīng)該要如何進(jìn)行文章的寫作 文章的布局又該是怎 樣的呢 分析之后 我們可以這樣來(lái)寫本文 即把文章劃分為四段 首段可 以先引出背景 討論話題 然后第二段與第三段分別分析出國(guó)留學(xué)的好 處與壞處 最后再提出自己的觀點(diǎn) 寫作思路掌握之后 我們就開始來(lái)看文章的具體內(nèi)容吧 首段引出背景 討論題目 通過(guò)舉出一些例子來(lái)說(shuō)明很多文化都重視對(duì)于知識(shí)的追求 The pursuit of knowledge is a concept that is valued by most cultures In the 21st century we now have many more options regarding how and where to find that knowledge 具體例子 If you are a French national you can apply to do an economics degree in the USA and likewise an American citizen can take a course in linguistics in France Indeed most universities across the world now have a good proportion of foreign students enrolled in their programmes The pursuit of knowledge 對(duì)知識(shí)的追求 regarding 關(guān)于 likewise 同樣地 也 此處進(jìn)行了類比論證 邏輯銜接比較好 是 本段的一大亮點(diǎn) 考生可以借鑒學(xué)習(xí) apply to 應(yīng)用 take a course in 上 課 have a good proportion of 按比例 在21世紀(jì) 關(guān)于去哪里學(xué)習(xí) 怎樣學(xué)習(xí) 我們有了更多的選擇 如 果你是一個(gè)法國(guó)人 那么你可以申請(qǐng)美國(guó)的經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)位 同理 一個(gè)美國(guó) 人也可能在法國(guó)讀語(yǔ)言學(xué) 的確 很多大學(xué)都按比例招收來(lái)自世界各地 的留學(xué)生 第二段介紹異國(guó)留學(xué)的好處 Certainly there are numerous advantages of studying in a different country 舉例 1 許多學(xué)生這樣做是因?yàn)樗麄冎老袼固垢Ｉ虒W(xué)院那樣的大學(xué)有很 好的聲望 他們認(rèn)為從這些大學(xué)畢業(yè)后 回國(guó)會(huì)有更多機(jī)會(huì)找到穩(wěn)定工 作 Many students choose to do this because they know that a particular university 舉例 for instance Stanford Business School has an excellent reputation Graduating from here they believe will increase their chances of securing a decent position in a company back home decent 得體的 相當(dāng)好的 2 出國(guó)留字還有機(jī)會(huì)結(jié)交不同國(guó)籍的朋友 也能夠?qū)σ院蟮穆殬I(yè)社 會(huì)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展帶來(lái)很大的幫助 Students studying abroad also have the opportunity to form friendships with people of various nationalities in time these may develop into useful professional networks 3 遠(yuǎn)離家人和朋友還能使年輕人變得更獨(dú)立和自給自足 Furthermore living far from family and friends can enable young people to become more independent and self sufficient self sufficient 自給自足的 第三段主要寫的是出國(guó)留學(xué)的不好的地方 Unfortunately the experience of studying abroad is not always a positive one 1 研究顯示 有少部分人飽受煎熬去適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境以及遭受了強(qiáng)烈 的文化沖擊 Research suggests that a small percentage of young people struggle to adapt to their new environment and suffer from severe culture shock 如果學(xué)生不能很好處理 那么情況就會(huì)變得更加糟糕 Research suggests 運(yùn)用數(shù)據(jù)論證來(lái)支撐論述 adapt to 適應(yīng) culture shock 文化沖擊 The situation can become worse if the student is not mature enough to cope by themselves if 運(yùn)用假設(shè)論證證來(lái)支撐論述 2 對(duì)于一些學(xué)生而言 不同的教學(xué)方法也可能成為難以接受的打擊 Different approaches to teaching and learning may also come as an unwelcome surprise to some students 結(jié)尾段提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn) 即出國(guó)留學(xué)是個(gè)好機(jī)會(huì) 但是要想獲得良好 的體驗(yàn)是需要前提條件的 In essence the key to a good experience at a foreign university is an open mind If a student is presented with this opportunity they should certainly seize it In essence 本質(zhì)上 open mind 開放的思想 seize vt 抓住 is presented with 被提供 最后 小編將范文奉上 考生可以全面了解 The pursuit of knowledge is a concept that is valued by most cultures In the 21st century we now have many more options regarding how and where to find that knowledge If you are a French national you can apply to do an economics degree in the USA and likewise an American citizen can take a course in linguistics in France Indeed most universities across the world now have a good proportion of foreign students enrolled in their programmes Certainly there are numerous advantages of studying in a different country Many students choose to do this because they know that a particular university for instance Stanford Business School has an excellent reputation Graduating from here they believe will increase their chances of securing a decent position in a company back home Students studying abroad also have the opportunity to form friendships with people of various nationalities in time these may develop into useful professional networks Furthermore living far from family and friends can enable young people to become more independent and self sufficient Unfortunately the experience of studying abroad is not always a positive one Research suggests that a small percentage of young people struggle to adapt to their new environment and suffer from severe culture shock The situation can become worse if the student is not mature enough to cope by themselves Different 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