2019_2020學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit4StageandscreenPeriod5Writing教學(xué)案外研版.docx

Period 5Writing讀后續(xù)寫電影影評技法指導(dǎo)本單元的寫作項目是讀后續(xù)寫，主題為電影影評。同學(xué)們在課余生活中，一定看過不少令你印象深刻的電影吧。無論是那些令你記憶猶新的劇情、精彩的對白或者是某個演員的精湛演技都給你帶來了令人愉快的視覺盛宴。在續(xù)寫電影影評時要注意以下幾點：1要明白故事的發(fā)展進程、前因后果、地理位置變化、人物特征和情感態(tài)度等。2要順著文章的思路，根據(jù)既有線索，發(fā)揮想象，對其后的情節(jié)進行合理預(yù)測，并用英語表達出來。3想象要合理簡單，不要過于復(fù)雜，中心主題一定要圍繞“真善美”等正向的價值觀積極地去展開。經(jīng)典句式1開頭常用句式Have you seen the latest Tarantino movie? 你看過塔倫蒂諾最新的電影嗎？The action takes place in France. 這個故事發(fā)生在法國。 I like films with plenty of action. 我喜歡情節(jié)曲折離奇的影片。 She has starred with many leading actors. 她曾與許多大牌演員一起擔任主角。2主體段落常用句式Julia Roberts is a famous Hollywood star. 茱莉婭羅伯茨是著名的好萊塢明星。The hotel is popular with movie stars. 這家酒店很受電影明星的喜愛。Other members of the cast include Johnny Depp and Danny DeVito. 劇組的其他成員包括約翰尼德普和丹尼德維托。The play will be performed by an allfemale company. 該劇將由一個女子劇團表演。3結(jié)尾常用句式The final episode will be shown next Sunday. 最后一集將于下周日播放。Shes not only a great dramatic actress but shes also very funny. 她不僅是一位偉大的女戲劇演員，而且也很幽默。She acts well but she hasnt got star quality . 她演得不錯，但缺少成為一個明星的素質(zhì)。She was the star of many popular television series. 她在許多受觀眾喜愛的電視連續(xù)劇中擔任過主角。典例演練閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Avatar (阿凡達) truly marks the coming age of 3D cinema with its pure technology,_special effects, beautiful finesse, aesthete, shock, fearfulness and eye for detail. The idea of James_Cameron to create a whole new world with creatures, flora and fauna flying across the screen is something that actually leaves the audiences in an awe of the bumping up creativity inside the computer.The directors vision inside the Pandora is a pure art that is made more beautiful with the tall and wide eyed people, lush greenery and the postmodern creatures. More than this, its the violence that has made Avatar a worth watch. Though, it is a simple story that is narrated in a complete straightened manner, the movies evergreen romance in between a human and an alien blended beautifully with the strong antiwar_statement is something that has given Avatar a heart.The story moves around the landing of the US army in Pandora,_an earthsized satellite in outer_space,_with an objective to extract the minerals from the Pandoras soil. But before their objective is established, the army should fight with the peaceloving inhabitants of the Pandora, for which they must destroy the alien world with their spies and bombs.Director and Screenwriter, James Cameron has no doubt created a burly and visually thrilling appeal to save the world, before its too late. Cinematography by Mauro Fiore is excellent and the special effects by Joe Letteri are truly mind blowing. Music given by James Hormer goes off smoothly with the flow of the movie. Both Zoe Saldana and Sam Worthington perform their roles excellently and have shaped up the warm love story of the Navi woman and the blue skinned human avatar perfectly.注意：1所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1：Avatar, an upcoming scifi action adventure film directed by James Cameron, will finally open to international audiences on December 18, 2009. Paragraph 2：The story is set in a distant moon Pandora. 精彩范文Paragraph 1: Avatar, an upcoming scifi action adventure film directed by James Cameron, will finally open to international audiences on December 18, 2009. ProducedDirected by the man who swept the box office and Oscars in 1997 with his Leonardo di Caprio starrer Titanic, James_Cameron will reinvent himself with the Avatar a 3D science fiction film made using the latest intuitive CGI technologies by WETA digital. WETA is well known in the animation and film industry for its work in movies like Lord of the Rings sequels and King Kong. Avatar is publicized to be the third most expensive film ever with a whopping budget of $237 million.Paragraph 2: The story is set in a distant moon Pandora. In there a paraplegic exmarine Jake Sully (Sam Worthington) finds himself plunged into an unfriendly alien world filled with magnificent looking humanoid creatures known as Navi. Jake unsuspectingly is set upon a mission to invade the jungles of Pandora for which he is transformed into an Avatar, an alien body with a human mind. As an Avatar he is able to walk again, but now he has to fight a double edged heroic battle for both his survival and that of the alien civilizationNavi.總評本篇范文續(xù)寫部分對阿凡達電影內(nèi)容的介紹以及市場價值都進行了合理的描述，運用了高級的詞匯和句型；在合理的續(xù)寫的基礎(chǔ)上，對原文內(nèi)容進行了延伸，使讀者更加直觀的感受到阿凡達這部影片帶給觀眾的視覺體驗。亮點呈現(xiàn)(1)ProducedDirected by the man who swept . 使用定語從句，使句意表達清晰準確。(2)Avatar is publicized to be the third most expensive film ever with a whopping budget of $237 million. 使用具體數(shù)字，增強文章的可信度。跟蹤演練閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Mel Gibsons “Braveheart” is a fullthroated, redblooded battle epic about William Wallace, the legendary Scots warrior who led his nation into battle against the English in the years around 1300. Its an ambitious film, big on simple emotions like love, patriotism and treachery, and avoids the travelogue style of so many historical swashbucklers: Its locations look green, wet, vast, muddy and rugged.Not much is known about Wallace, known as Braveheart, except that according to an_old_epic_poem,_he unified the clans of Scotland and won famous battles against the English before being captured, tortured and executed as a traitor.Wallaces dying cry, as his body was stretched on the rack, was “freedom！” That isnt exactly based on fact (the concept of personal_freedom was a concept not much celebrated in 1300), but it doesnt stop Gibson from making it his dying cry. It fits in with the whole glorious sweep of “Braveheart，” which is an action epic with the spirit of the Hollywood swordplay classics and the grungy ferocity of “The_Road_Warrior.” What people are going to remember from the film are the battle scenes,_which are frequent, bloody and violent. Just from a technical_point_of_view,_“Braveheart” does a brilliant job of massing men and horses for largescale warfare on film. Gibson deploys what look like thousands of men on horseback, as well as foot soldiers, archers and dirty tricks specialists, and yet his battle sequences dont turn into confusing crowd scenes: We understand the strategy,_and we enjoy the tactics even while were doubting some of them (did 14th century Scots really set battlefields aflame？)注意：1所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1：In the film, Wallaces chief antagonist is King Edward I (“Longshanks”), played by Patrick McGoohan with sly cunning. Paragraph 2：And as Braveheart, Gibson plays his role with flamboyance, and cuts it with sly humor. 寫前導(dǎo)讀：本文是一篇影評。勇敢的心是以戰(zhàn)爭為核心，講述了主人公與統(tǒng)治階級不屈不撓斗爭的故事。精彩范文Paragraph 1：In the film, Wallaces chief antagonist is King Edward I (“Longshanks”), played by Patrick McGoohan with sly cunning. He is constantly giving his realpolitik interpretation of events, and thats all the more amusing since hes usually guessing wrong.Edwards son, the Prince of Wales (Peter Hanly), is an effete fop who marries a French woman only for political reasons. “I may have to conceive the child myself！” Longshanks says, and indeed, under the medieval concept of prima nocte, or “first night，” nobles were allowed a first chance to sleep with the wives of their lessers.Paragraph 2：And as Braveheart, Gibson plays his role with flamboyance, and cuts it with sly humor. He is an amazing battlefield strategist, inventing new strategies and weapons, outsmarting the English at every turn, leading his men into battle with his face painted blue, like a football fan. There is a scene where he is so pumped up with the scent of battle that his nostrils flare; not many actors could get away with that, but Gibson can.課外拓展閱讀中國優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化專題練閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個單詞)或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。Traditional Chinese WeddingTraditional Chinese wedding customs have been around for thousands of years. They may vary from place to place and time to time, but have been holding _1_ important position in the lives of Chinese people, _2_ (cause) farreaching (影響深遠的) effects on the way the Chinese lead their lives. A traditional Chinese marriage usually consists _3_ some necessary procedures, such as matchmaking, engagement, meeting the bride, and three bows. In addition, a typical Chinese wedding nowaday