托福作文中如何用數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行比較.docx

智課網(wǎng)TOEFL備考資料托福作文中如何用數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行比較 摘要: 托福作文中如何用數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行比較 無論是托福作文還是其他英語考試的寫作中，我們都喜歡利用一些數(shù)據(jù)比較來證明自己的觀點(diǎn)，這是非常好用的，那么針對(duì)這個(gè)方法我們要怎樣去熟練掌握呢 無論是托福作文還是其他英語考試的寫作中，我們都喜歡利用一些數(shù)據(jù)比較來證明自己的觀點(diǎn)，這是非常好用的，那么針對(duì)這個(gè)方法我們要怎樣去熟練掌握呢?下面的托福寫作輔導(dǎo)就為大家介紹一下關(guān)于使用數(shù)據(jù)的一些托福寫作模板以及要注意的地方。 使用權(quán)威數(shù)據(jù)來證明我們的觀點(diǎn)，很多同學(xué)會(huì)有疑問，覺得自己沒有閱讀過很多的數(shù)據(jù)類文獻(xiàn)，覺得自己的數(shù)據(jù)太不真實(shí)，所以不敢往上寫。首先，給大家打消這個(gè)疑慮，這個(gè)權(quán)威數(shù)據(jù)真的需要我們自己去讀學(xué)術(shù)類的期刊嗎，不需要。我們只需要學(xué)會(huì)合理編寫數(shù)據(jù)，就可以了。同學(xué)們會(huì)問了，編的數(shù)據(jù)可靠嗎，考官會(huì)去驗(yàn)證你數(shù)據(jù)的真實(shí)性嗎? 這個(gè)大家不要擔(dān)心，ETS的考官不會(huì)輕易懷疑大家所寫的數(shù)據(jù)，因?yàn)閰⒓油懈？荚嚨娜巳?，有我們這樣的科研小白，也有各個(gè)學(xué)科的大牛，所以只要你編寫的數(shù)據(jù)合理，ETS是不敢妄下判斷否定你論據(jù)的真實(shí)性的。 重點(diǎn)來到了，怎么去編寫數(shù)據(jù)例證呢? 首先我們要有托福寫作模板， 模板一： A 年份 survey/ report, conducted by 組織/機(jī)構(gòu)/xxx university, (after polling xxx 人群 aged x and x) proved that xx% a, xx% b, xx% c. 模板二： According to 年份 surveys, conducted by 組織/機(jī)構(gòu)， shows that 其次，我們要積累托福作文中編寫數(shù)據(jù)例證時(shí)常用的機(jī)構(gòu)/組織的名稱： 環(huán)保局Environmental protection agency 衛(wèi)生廳 department of public health 教育部Ministry of Education 人力資源部Human resource Department 交通局 Traffic department 數(shù)據(jù)類題目適用于哪類題目?托福寫作輔導(dǎo)提出最適用的題型是今昔對(duì)比類題目， 如下： Twenty years from now on, people will have more leisure time than they do now. Secondly, the working time of people has become much shorter, thus resulting in peoples preference for more leisure time. According to 1995 and 2005 surveys conducted by Human Resources Department, people worked 8 hours every day in 2005 while people in 1995 worked almost 9 hours each day. The shortened work time is caused by the wide use fo machines. 分析： 題目大意： 20年后，人們會(huì)有更多休閑時(shí)間。 人們休閑時(shí)間越來越多可以通過調(diào)查人們?cè)?995和2005工作時(shí)長的減少反映出來。 It was easier to identify what jobs or careers were secure and successful in the past than it is now. Additionally, a questionnaire about choosing an ideal job conducted by Career Service Center in China has surveyed two groups of people with the first at the age of 50 and above and the second aged from 20 to 30. 58.4%. According to the above survey, 32.5% of the first group respectively choose the option of civil servants and teachers. On the contrary, 72.4% of the second group circled the third option of other occupations such as singers, freelance writers and so on. The difference in the two groups of figures lies in the transition of peoples attitude of choosing a job . 題目大意： 現(xiàn)在更難以去判斷一項(xiàng)工作是否成功。 通過一項(xiàng)問卷調(diào)查來說明現(xiàn)在人們打破了以前鐵飯碗的觀念，開始從事其他類別的工作，從而證明人們對(duì)于成功工作的定義變得多樣化。 Nowadays it is easier to get educated than in the past. A 2012-report conducted by Beijing Human Resources Department: the female percentage in the occupations such as professors, doctors, layers. Engineers grew by 80.3% compared t