高三英語作文六步法教學(xué)

高考英語作文“六步法”教學(xué),Step1仔細(xì)審題Step2.理清要點(diǎn)Step3.譯寫單句Step4.連句成篇Step5.檢查潤色Step6.定稿謄寫,高考英語作文“六步法”教學(xué),范例1,題目：Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsforyears.OnemorningMr.SmithcalledatMr.Greens.Thefollowingistheirconversation.S:Goodmorning.G:Goodmorning.S:IhaventseenyoursonTomforalongtime.Hashemadegreatachievements?G:Oh,Idontknowifheissuccessful,butIknowthathehasdrawnthegovernmentsattentionandthepolicearesearchingforhim.,分析：題目不難，但要完成兩件事情：一是要把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，要傳神、達(dá)意；二是要把直接引語轉(zhuǎn)換成間接引語。,要求：1、用間接引語描述如上幽默故事。2、詞數(shù)為80100。,第一步：仔細(xì)審題,情景提供的方式是對(duì)話，題材是故事。內(nèi)容是兩個(gè)鄰居之間的一段幽默對(duì)話，涉及到的詞匯有：usedto，callon，hesitate，makeachievements，etc,涉及的句子有簡單句、并列句、和復(fù)合句。詞數(shù)為80100。,第二步：理清要點(diǎn),本文是一篇記序文，發(fā)生的時(shí)間是一天下午，地點(diǎn)是Mr.Green家,人物有Mr.Smith和Mr.Green，事件是談?wù)揗r.Green的兒子，故事以Mr.Green一段幽默的話結(jié)尾。所以，本文要點(diǎn)如下：1、Mr.Smith和Mr.Green是曾是多年的鄰居。2、一天上午，Mr.Smith去Mr.Green家拜訪。3、他們互致問候早上好。4、Mr.Smith說他已多年不見Mr.Green的兒子Tom了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。5、Mr.Smith躊躇了一會(huì)兒，說不知道兒子是否取得成就，但政府很重視他，警察也在全國各地找他。.,第三步：譯寫單句,1.Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.2.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.3.Theysaidgoodmorningtoeachother.4.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyears.Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements.5.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements.Hesaidheknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant.Thepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,第四步：連句成篇,Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.Theysaid“goodmorning”toeachother.ThenMr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyears.Heaskedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Hesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements.Hesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentsaidthathissonwasveryimportant,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,第五步：檢查潤色,Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother(said“goodmorning”toeachother),thentheytalkedaboutMr.Greensson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyearsandwondered(.Heasked)ifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthought(said)thathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,第六步：定稿謄寫,Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother,thentheytalkedaboutMr.Greensson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyearsandwonderedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthoughtthathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,第六步：定稿謄寫,Mr.SmithandMr.Greenusedtobeneighborsformanyyears.Onemorning,Mr.SmithcalledonMr.Greenathishouse.First,theygreetedeachother,thentheytalkedaboutMr.Greensson,Tom.Mr.SmithsaidthathehadnotseenMr.Greensson,Tomforseveralyearsandwonderedifhehadmadegreatachievements.Mr.Greenhesitatedforamoment.Thenhesaidhedidnotknowifmadeanyachievements,buthesaidheonlyknewthatthegovernmentthoughtthathissonwas“very”important,forthepolicewereafterhimeverywhereinthecountry.,范例2,題目：根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇介紹香港的短文，字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。香港位于中國的東南部，面積1045平方公里，人口600多萬，被稱為“東方明珠”。1842年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭后，當(dāng)時(shí)的中國政府被迫將香港割讓給英國。1997年她已回到祖國的懷抱，其前景會(huì)更美好。參考詞匯：明珠pearl，鴉片opium。,第一步：仔細(xì)審題本文屬說明性文章。,第二步：理清要點(diǎn)1、香港的地理位置、面積和人口。2、鴉片戰(zhàn)爭后香港的處境。3、1997年她回到祖國的懷抱。4、其前景會(huì)更美好。,第三步：譯寫單句,1.HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k.Herpopulationismorethan6million.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997,shereturnedtomotherland.4.Herfutureisverybeautiful.,第四步：連句成篇,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045kand(.Her)populationismorethan6million.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandand(.Her)futureisverybeautiful.,第五步：檢查潤色1,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof(Herareais)1,045kand(.Her)hasapopulationofmorethan6million(populationismorethan6million).Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.(.Her)futureisverybeautiful.,第五步：檢查潤色1之后的文章,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.,第五步：檢查潤色2,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionand(.She)iswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritain(ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernment)aftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot(livedahardlife).AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997(In1997,shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareand),thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhard(willbeworkinghard)tomakehermorebeautiful.,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot.AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997,thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful.,第五步：檢查潤色2之后的文章,第六步：定稿謄寫,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot.AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997,thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful.,第六步：定稿謄寫,HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045kandhasapopulationofmorethan6millionandiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritainaftertheOpiumWar,andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot.AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997,thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina,andtheywillworkhardtomakehermorebeautiful.,Homework:,請(qǐng)以記者的身份,根據(jù)案件登記卡所提供的情況，用英語寫一篇新聞報(bào)導(dǎo)稿。字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右。,Possibleversion:Yesterdayafternoon,arobberyhappenedinabankintheParkStreet.Accordingtothewitnessesstatements,itwasfiveminutesto5:00pm,justbeforetheclosingtimeofthebank.Anditwasrainingheavily,withlittletrafficontheroadoutside.Suddenly,twoyoungmenwithmasksrushedinandthreatenedtheclerkswithguns.Thentheyputthemoneyinbags,rushedoutanddrovedawaywithabout20,000dollars.Allthethingsla