初中英語(yǔ)素材中考英語(yǔ)作文模板作文病句和錯(cuò)句修改

1、中考英語(yǔ)作文 模板 作文病句和錯(cuò)句修改 中考英語(yǔ)作文 英語(yǔ)作文模板：圖表作文的框架 as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthe table(graph/picture/pie/chart),_ 作文題目的議題 has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from in to in . From the sharp/mark

2、ed decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that . There are at least two good reasons accounting for . On the one hand, . On the other hand, is due to the fact that . In addition, is responsible for _.Maybe there are some other reasons to show . But it is generally believed that the above

3、 mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. 中考英語(yǔ)作文 英語(yǔ)作文模板：實(shí)用性寫作 ( 申請(qǐng)信 ) Your address Month, Date, year Receivers address Dear ., I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your adverti

4、sement for the position in And I would like to write a letter to tell you that./ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising. listed. On convenience. ./ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have the one hand, On the other hand, I am enclosing my resume

5、 for your kind consideration and reference. I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I amlooking forward to your replies at your earliest Best regards for your health and success.

6、Sincerely yours, X X X 中考英語(yǔ)作文 英語(yǔ)作文模板：現(xiàn)象說(shuō)明文 Recently ,what amazes us most is,it is ture that There are many reasons explaining.The main reason is. what is more.thirdly .As a result. Considering all there,.For one thing ,for another .In Conclusion. 一種事物或現(xiàn)象（負(fù)面意義傾向） 關(guān)于A的話題，早已引起了廣泛的社會(huì)關(guān)注。如今在電視、報(bào)紙、日常生活的很多角

7、落， 都有越來(lái)越多的關(guān)于 A的議論。 給 A 一個(gè)精確恒定的定義并非易事，因?yàn)樗母拍钌婕傲丝茖W(xué)、人性、思想、經(jīng)濟(jì)、社 會(huì)、自然等廣闊的領(lǐng)域。一般而言，我們可以這樣描述A A能成為公眾關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，主要是由于它對(duì)個(gè)人、集體乃至整個(gè)世界都有著不容忽視的 不良影響。 認(rèn)真分析后我們可以看到， A對(duì)社會(huì)/世界/健康的不利有很多。首先，從最直觀的角 度來(lái)看，A的出現(xiàn)直接損害了 （這里加入一句針對(duì)性的話， 如人類的身體健康和環(huán)境的平衡） 。 （舉例）。其次，從更深一層次上講，它為人類的精神文明蒙上了一層陰影。更可怕的是， 由于A所產(chǎn)生微小利益，卻促成了許多可悲的人們?yōu)槠渫跛?，破壞了人類生存的法則和 空

8、間。 事實(shí)上，A的出現(xiàn)是社會(huì)發(fā)展和人類進(jìn)步的產(chǎn)物，A所帶來(lái)的危害是人類進(jìn)化過(guò)程中付 出的代價(jià)。同時(shí)，A的產(chǎn)生來(lái)源于部分人們的自私和趨利性，他們看到的是膚淺和片面的利 益，而從未從整個(gè)全局和人類整體的利益出發(fā)去認(rèn)識(shí)和分析它。這使得A始終揮之不去。對(duì) 此，我奉勸他們，跳出狹小的角落，用長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)和全局的眼光去重新審視A。 而如今，我們已深受其害， 要想消除它的危害，我們必須從根源上杜絕它的產(chǎn)生， 我們 每一個(gè)人都應(yīng)給予 A高度的重視，用系統(tǒng)的和科學(xué)的方法去解決， 唯有這樣，避免它帶來(lái)更 多損失，我們?nèi)祟惽斑M(jìn)的腳步才會(huì)更加平穩(wěn)，更加歡快的邁向輝煌的明天。 初中英語(yǔ)作文病句和錯(cuò)句修改 下面的英語(yǔ)句子都是出自

9、 朗文國(guó)際 三冊(cè)和四冊(cè)的學(xué)生作文 ， 不是病句就是錯(cuò)句 . 讓 我們用銳利的眼睛 ， 一起來(lái)找茬吧 . 1. We have computer class one week a time. 2. Go into my school， you can see many flowers. 3. There have 100 books. 4. I study there very happy. 5. I usually swimming there. 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. 7. Several h

10、ours after, he was surprised. 8. He had to asked the other one. 9. He thought he speak well. 10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing . 11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese. 12. This film is very good-looking . 13. It is very good to family look. 14. I think we can t live Internet. 15. People us

11、e the net to send the mails has the most people. 16. I have a future dream. 17. It can help me to walk on my life road. 18. I think everything must be change a lot. 19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do. 20. But I singing not very well. 21. Tom s mum didn t care him. 22. Al

12、most students use the computer not study. 23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net. 24. When I was very small. 初中英語(yǔ)作文病句和錯(cuò)句修改 怎么樣 , 找出錯(cuò)誤沒(méi)有啊 . 下面我們來(lái)看看要怎么改正吧 1. I have computer class once a week. 英語(yǔ)中表達(dá)頻率次數(shù)時(shí) : 一次 once, 兩次 twice 從三次開(kāi)始用 three times . 2. Going into my school, you can see many

13、flowers. 這里使用動(dòng)名詞 going 做主語(yǔ) , go 這個(gè)動(dòng)作由后面的 you 發(fā)出. 3. There are 100 books. 表示某個(gè)地方有什么 , 一般使用 There be 的存在句型 . 4. I study there very happily. Study 是個(gè)動(dòng)詞 , 表示動(dòng)作的程度要使用副詞 , 不可以用形容詞 happy. 5. I usually swim there. -ing 結(jié)尾的動(dòng)名詞不可以單獨(dú)做句子的謂語(yǔ) . 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. 這個(gè)句子的表達(dá)

14、和語(yǔ)法上都有問(wèn)題 . 如果單從中文意思來(lái)看 , 大家都明白他在說(shuō)什么 , 但是要是讓外教來(lái)批改 , 估計(jì)他會(huì)無(wú)盡的苦惱了 . 所以我們?cè)诓皇Ь渥釉獾幕A(chǔ)上 , 使用正 確的語(yǔ)法 . 該句子的表達(dá)應(yīng)該為 : By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall. 7. Several hours later, he was surprised. 使用 after 時(shí) ,不能放在時(shí)間表達(dá)語(yǔ)的后面 . 8. He had to ask the other one. “Have to do something ” 是固定用法 , 不定式后

15、用動(dòng)詞原形 . 9. He thought he spoke well. 這個(gè)句子屬于語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)的不一致 10. Mr. Li is from Beijing . 一個(gè)英語(yǔ)句子中不能有兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 . 11. He studies very hard. He likes studying Chinese. 首先要區(qū)分 hard 和 hardly. 雖然兩個(gè)都可以做副詞 ,但在意思上有很大的區(qū)別 . He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他幾乎不工作 . 這個(gè)兩個(gè)表達(dá)相差很大 其次 ,be 動(dòng)詞后面不能使用副詞 . 12. This film is

16、 very interesting. 這是一個(gè)完全中文式的英語(yǔ)句子 . good-looking一般用來(lái)形容人物的 . 13. It is fit for family to enjoy. 又是一個(gè)中文式的句子 , 14. I think we can t live Internet. 學(xué)生想要表達(dá)的是不要過(guò)分依賴因特網(wǎng) . 不改變?cè)獾幕A(chǔ)上 , 我們修改為 : I think we can t rely on Internet. 15. Most people use the net to send the mails. 這是一個(gè)要表達(dá)比例的英語(yǔ)句子 . 學(xué)生在這里做了一個(gè)中文句子的”強(qiáng)行

17、”翻譯. 16. I have a dream about future. Future 在這里不可以直接修飾 dream. 17. It can help me to walk on my life s journey. “人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含義，不可用“road ”來(lái)表達(dá)。 18. I think everything keeps on changing. 不細(xì)心看這個(gè)句子 ,我完全不了解他想表達(dá)什么 . 但從上下文來(lái)推測(cè) ,我想他想表達(dá)世事 在變化的意思 . 19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do. 賓語(yǔ)從句要使用正常語(yǔ)序 20. But I don t sing very well. 動(dòng)名詞不可以單獨(dú)做謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用 . 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的句子表否定 , 如果是實(shí)意動(dòng)詞需要有 do 來(lái)幫忙 . 21. Tom s mum didn t care about him. Care 是個(gè)不及物的動(dòng)詞，不可以直接加賓語(yǔ)。 22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study. 一個(gè)句子中間只能有一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。 23. Send mail is most of people like to do