2021屆高考英語讀后續(xù)寫講練結(jié)合九

1、2021高考英語讀后續(xù)寫講練結(jié)合（九）part one 小試身手讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。when i was ten i was suddenly very sad, for i had to move from the only home i had ever known. my whole life had been spent in that big old house which saw the laughter and tears of four generations. when the final day came, i ran to

2、the front of the house and sat alone, crying. suddenly i felt a hand rest on my shoulder. i looked up to see my grandfather. “it isnt easy, is it, billy? he said softly, sitting down on the steps beside me. “grandpa,” i replied how can i ever say goodbye to you and all my friends?” “goodbye is such

3、a sad word, he said. it seems too final, too cool, which has one thing in common: sadness.” he gently took my hand in his. “come with me, my friend,” he whispered. we walked, hand in hand, to his favorite place in the front yard, where there was a huge red rose bush his beloved rose bush. what do yo

4、u see here, billy?” he asked. i looked at the flowers, not knowing what to say, i see something beautiful, grandpa. “it isnt just the roses that are beautiful, billy. its that special place in your heart that makes them so.” his eyes met mine again. “billy, i planted these roses a long time agobefor

5、e your mother was even a dream. i put them into the soil the day my first son was born. it was my way of saying thank you to god. that boys name was billy. i used to watch him pick roses for his mother. i saw my grandfathers tears. i had never seen him cry before. his voice became hoarse(嘶啞的). one d

6、ay a terrible war came, and my son, like so many sons, went away to fight a great evil. he and i walked to the train station together. three months later a telegram came. my son had died in italy. all i could think of was that the last thing i say to him in his life was goodbye.注意:1. 所續(xù)寫短文的同數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右

7、;2. 至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4. 續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。paragraph 1:grandpa slowly stood up. _ paragraph 2:soon my grandfather became seriously ill. _ part two 知識及技巧分享1. 黎明在平靜的海面上放射出出閃閃發(fā)亮的光線，留下一條從海岸到地平線橫亙而過的金色道路。 2. 就在一小時前，還是完全黑暗，但現(xiàn)在那銀色的霧已經(jīng)可見了。在這樣的背景的映襯下，樹的輪廓仍然像油畫一樣，比烏鴉還黑。 3. 鳥鳴中迎來

8、了新的一天，悅耳動聽的合唱聲似乎從未重復(fù)過，從樹枝上傾瀉而下，跌入清脆的晨風(fēng)中，像一條流動的音樂之河流入周圍的鄉(xiāng)村。 4. 天空像是一億只純凈的眼睛拼接在一起，腳下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白晝已成為一個美麗的時刻。黎明已經(jīng)來臨。 5. 譯文：天空像夏天的桃子一樣發(fā)光，太陽在天空中像是純金的一樣。樹葉的顏色又變綠了，空氣也變暖到大約二十度左右。這是一個完美的黎明，一個值得被品味而不是被揮霍浪費的黎明。在這光芒四射的美景下，我可以看到已經(jīng)為一個有意義的一天而準(zhǔn)備好了的道路。 6. 太陽升起，像一個金色的天篷，在藍(lán)色的天空中閃閃發(fā)光，讓星星們休息。隨著黑暗的消退，每一種顏色都從木炭色變得充滿活力。 技法講

9、解：畫面感要想把景物寫生動、寫活，就要捕捉到該環(huán)境下特有的細(xì)節(jié)場景，營造出一種畫面感，讓讀者身臨其境，感同身受。就像第一個例句就有極強的畫面感，抓住了黎明太陽初升時金光閃閃的場景，不是泛泛地寫陽剛照耀，而是把光芒具象成a golden path from the shore to the horizon，這樣一來，畫面感就出來了。參考答案1. dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.2. only an hour ago the

10、blackness was absolute, but now the mist was visible, silvery. against this backdrop the trees were silhouettes, still as an oil painting and darker than the ravens.3. bird song welcomes in a new day, sweet melodious chorus of seemingly never repeated notes, cascading through the branches, tumbling

11、into the crisp morning air, flowing into the surrounding countryside like a great river of music.4. the sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. dawn had come.5. the sky glows like a summer peach and the sun is pu

12、re gold in the sky. the colors of the foliage return to green and the air warms to an ambient twenty or so. it is the perfect dawn, one to be savored instead of squandered. under this radiant beauty i can see the path ready for a meaningful day.6. the sun rises as a canopy of gold, bright amid the b

13、lue, bidding the stars to take their nightly rest. as darkness surrenders, every color changes from tinges of charcoal to the vibrancy.參考譯文paragraph 1: grandpa slowly stood up. he said, my friend, please never say, goodbye forever, and never give in to vour sadness and loneliness. instead life is un

14、certain, and only when you first said hello to a friend are your joy and happiness of those times worth cherishing. please leave that special hello in your heart.paragraph 2: soon my grandfather became seriously ill. three months later, doctors finally announced that his life was about to end. 4 his children took turns to take care of him and say goodbye. he asked his kids tomove his bed next to the window, through which he could see his beloved rose bush. eventually, i, as his oldest grandchild, was assigned to say goodbye to him.