高三英語開放性寫作課件

1、2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供open-ending composition2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供開放性寫作出題方式：開放性寫作出題方式：1 根據(jù)結(jié)果，解釋原因根據(jù)結(jié)果，解釋原因 what happened?2根據(jù)事件，接續(xù)故事根據(jù)事件，接續(xù)故事 what happened next? what did you do with.? what should you do.? how will you introduce your school to them?3提出問題，給出建議提出問題，給出建議2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供寫作注意

2、原則：寫作注意原則：1、認真審題，即：審語境、審人稱、審時、認真審題，即：審語境、審人稱、審時 態(tài)態(tài)2、要緊扣主題，符合要求，首尾呼應(yīng)、要緊扣主題，符合要求，首尾呼應(yīng)3、注意寫作對象和語言風(fēng)格，要有讀者的、注意寫作對象和語言風(fēng)格，要有讀者的 意識意識4、要進行細致描寫，有細節(jié)的支撐、要進行細致描寫，有細節(jié)的支撐5、要有主次之分，、要有主次之分， 詳略得當(dāng)詳略得當(dāng)6、要力求內(nèi)容新穎，必須符合邏輯、要力求內(nèi)容新穎，必須符合邏輯7、要做到思想健康，積極向上、要做到思想健康，積極向上2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供海淀二模：海淀二模：when your mother comes hom

3、e from work., she finds the living room in a terrible mess. she asks you the reasons. you tell her what happened.審題：人稱審題：人稱- i, 時態(tài)時態(tài) - 過去時過去時 敘事敘事- 根據(jù)結(jié)果，解釋原根據(jù)結(jié)果，解釋原 因。因。2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供切記：切記：1 審題要準(zhǔn)；定位要清。審題要準(zhǔn)；定位要清。2 緊扣主題；首位呼應(yīng)。緊扣主題；首位呼應(yīng)。3 內(nèi)容充實；詳略得當(dāng)。內(nèi)容充實；詳略得當(dāng)。4 合情合理；邏輯清晰。合情合理；邏輯清晰。5 語言簡潔；交際得體。語

4、言簡潔；交際得體。2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供 說明文說明文2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供說明文出題形式：說明文出題形式：1。文字。文字+表格表格2。圖表。圖表3。圖畫。圖畫2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供說明文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)說明文的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)主題句主題句引出全文的話題引出全文的話題支持句支持句圍繞話題展開討論，用圍繞話題展開討論，用事實，理由，觀點等來進行解釋，事實，理由，觀點等來進行解釋，說明或論證。說明或論證。結(jié)束句結(jié)束句對話題進行概括，總結(jié)對話題進行概括，總結(jié)歸納歸納。2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供 說明文的寫作方法：說

5、明文的寫作方法：列舉法列舉法-用事例說明主題可用表示順用事例說明主題可用表示順序的示意詞來突出每個實例。如：序的示意詞來突出每個實例。如： first, second, third, first, secondly, finally, the first thing (point) is, the second thing (point) is, the third thing(point) is, first of all, also, finally, one, another, the last2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供以事物的重要性來排列順序，可使以事物的重要性來

6、排列順序，可使文章層次清楚，重點突出。文章層次清楚，重點突出。 如：如： for one thing, also, the worst thing is, first of all, apart from that, the most important is, for one thing, what is more, the most, one important, more importantly, the most important, 2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供one problem., another problem, the most serious prob

7、lem,2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供比較對比法：比較對比法： 比較通常是指對人或事物之間的相比較通常是指對人或事物之間的相同點進行分析。同點進行分析。對比通常是側(cè)重分析兩者之間的不同對比通常是側(cè)重分析兩者之間的不同點，利與弊。點，利與弊。 2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供寫作方法通常有：寫作方法通常有：1）相同點）相同點-不同點分析不同點分析a,a,a, b,b,b, 結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)2）a,b, a,b, a,b, 結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu) （如內(nèi)容較（如內(nèi)容較多，可逐點分析多，可逐點分析。）2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供topic sentence wheth

8、er an entrance fee should be charged for parkssupporting sentence 1 60% of the students are against the idea of the entrance fees.(a) to have a rest and enjoy themselves in the park(a) to become necessary to build gates and walls, (a) to do harm to the appearance of the city.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供

9、supporting sentence 2 40% think that fees should be charged(b) need money to pay gardeners and other workers(b) to buy plants and young trees.(b) fees should be charged low.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供請根據(jù)以下圖表和提示寫一篇關(guān)于我國請根據(jù)以下圖表和提示寫一篇關(guān)于我國手機擁有量變化的報導(dǎo)。并闡述手機給手機擁有量變化的報導(dǎo)。并闡述手機給人們生活所帶來的利與弊。人們生活所帶來的利與弊。1.方便方便 2.隨時

10、，隨地聯(lián)系隨時，隨地聯(lián)系3.許多設(shè)置滿足不同要求許多設(shè)置滿足不同要求4.發(fā)短信，電話記錄發(fā)短信，電話記錄5.接到打錯的電話為之付費接到打錯的電話為之付費6.電磁污染電磁污染2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供宣武一模：宣武一模：請你根據(jù)下面圖表用英語寫一篇短請你根據(jù)下面圖表用英語寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容要包括以下兩方面：文，內(nèi)容要包括以下兩方面：1。概括說明中美大學(xué)生的主要收入。概括說明中美大學(xué)生的主要收入來源。來源。2。分析產(chǎn)生這種不同現(xiàn)象的可能原。分析產(chǎn)生這種不同現(xiàn)象的可能原因。因。2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供income * american *chineseso

11、urces *students *students-parents *50% *90%-part-timejobs * 35% *5%-scholarships *15% *5% 2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供the income of the american and the chinese students comes through almost the same channels:parents, part-time jobs and scholarships, but the percentage of each is quite different. half t

12、he american students income is from their parents, thirty-five percent from from part- time jobs, and fifteen from scholarships. chinese students, on the other hand, get ninety percent of their income from their parents.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供in my opinion, there are two main reasons for this. one

13、is that chinese parents care so much for their children that it is almost unthinkable for students to live on their own. the other is that chinese students have fewer chances to find part-time jobs.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供1。確定主題；理清結(jié)構(gòu)。確定主題；理清結(jié)構(gòu)。2。信息歸類；支撐論點。信息歸類；支撐論點。 （相同；不同）（相同；不同）3。上下連貫；邏輯清晰。上下連貫；邏輯

14、清晰。 （正確使用連接詞）（正確使用連接詞）4。首位呼應(yīng)；。首位呼應(yīng)； 緊扣扣題。緊扣扣題。2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供 wish you success2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供寫作常見錯誤：寫作常見錯誤：1 動詞與主語關(guān)系不清動詞與主語關(guān)系不清誤：誤：i saw an old man going out of city park and was about to cross park road. 正：正：i saw an old man going out of city park and he was about to cross park ro

15、ad.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供誤：誤：but the car ran off immediately instead of stopping to apologize to the man. 正：正：but the driver drove off immediately instead of stopping to apologize to the man. 2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供誤：誤：the park should charge the entrance fee.正：正：the entrance fee should be charged

16、 for parks.正：正：people should pay for the entrance fee if they go to the parks.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供2 句子之間的邏輯關(guān)系不清句子之間的邏輯關(guān)系不清 誤：誤：it hit the old man down but the driver, a woman, didnt stop her car. finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. the old man and i saw the c

17、ars number. its ac864. the old man couldnt move , i decided to help him. 2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供正：正：it hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didnt stop her car. finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. fortunately, i saw the cars number. its ac864. no

18、ticing the old man couldnt move, i decided to help him.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供3畫蛇添足畫蛇添足 、過多的長句使句子復(fù)雜、過多的長句使句子復(fù)雜化（語言不簡潔）化（語言不簡潔）修改前：修改前： a famous sportsman was giving a speech which was rather interesting.修改后：修改后：a famous sportsman was giving an interesting speech.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供修改前修改前 nowad

19、ays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. the air pollution is becoming more and more serious which is caused by buses and cars. whats more, so many rivers are polluted by dirty water which is from factory. in addition, sandstorm struck us now and then, from which we suffered

20、 a lot.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供修改后修改后 nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. as a result, people have to suffer sandstorms now and then. whats more, as buses and cars give off a lot of poisonous gases, the air is getting dirtier and dirtier. moreover, there are many r

21、ivers polluted by dirty water from factories. the situation is becoming more and more serious.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供修改前：修改前：as soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments. there were some students playing piano violin and so on .修改后：修改后： as soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beau

22、tiful music played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on.2021-11-14該課件由【語文公社】友情提供4 過于簡單的句子使文章缺少邏輯過于簡單的句子使文章缺少邏輯 性，可讀性。性，可讀性。修改前修改前yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. he stopped a car. the car was at the corner. it looked like a honda. there was a boy on the sidewalk. he was riding h