近年高考英語(yǔ)科之作文題系列實(shí)戰(zhàn)篇集錦

1、近年高考英語(yǔ)科之作文題系列實(shí)戰(zhàn)篇集錦2016 年高考( 新課標(biāo)卷 ) 第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25 分）假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume） 。給外教 ms jenkins 寫(xiě)信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format ） 。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右 ; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮縟ear ms jenkins, i am li hua. i am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and i also w

2、ant you to do me a favor. in order to get some practical experience, i am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. i have already finished my job application and personal resume. but this is the first time that i have written an application and the personal resume, so i don t e

3、ven know if there are something to pay attention to. so, im writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. i will be very grateful if you can help me. looking forward to your reply. and id be really thankful.yours, li hua 【亮點(diǎn)】本文是一篇較為優(yōu)秀的范文。格式正確，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言通順流暢，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。在本文中開(kāi)頭提出寫(xiě)信的目的，然后具體講述自

4、己的困難，再提出請(qǐng)求，最后表達(dá)自己的感激之情。所以在內(nèi)容上邏輯性較強(qiáng)。此外， 作者還使用了不定式短語(yǔ)in order to get some practical experience, 現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)hoping you can give me some help, 賓語(yǔ)從句if there are something to pay attention to等。經(jīng)典句式this is the first time that i have written an application and the personal resume也是文章亮點(diǎn)所在。2017 年高考( 新課標(biāo)卷 ) 第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)（

5、滿分25 分）52. 假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教henry 一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。 請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2. 展覽內(nèi)容。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】 dear henry ，im very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on june 20 in our school lectu

6、re hall and last for a weekas is well-known to us all，chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and im sure you will be interested in it，so i plan to invite you to pay a close visitthe exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in chinaduring the activi

7、ty，i will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about chinese traditional culturewould you please have a look at the exhibition with me？id appreciate it if you could accept my invitationim looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as poss

8、ibleyours，li hua 【解析】這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文。【詳解】首先審題，這篇文章要求假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教henry 一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2. 展覽內(nèi)容。其次選用正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，用一般將來(lái)時(shí)、第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。然后寫(xiě)出單個(gè)句子，使用正確的連詞， 連句成段。 具體來(lái)說(shuō)， 寫(xiě)這篇文章時(shí)， 要注意文中給出的細(xì)節(jié)都要包括，不要遺漏。這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。 寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合

9、邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c(diǎn)睛】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的復(fù)合句。例如：使用了定語(yǔ)從句im very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on june 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week和賓語(yǔ)從句as is well-kno

10、wn to us all，chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and im sure you will be interested in it ， so i plan to invite you to pay a close vis 2018 年高考( 新課標(biāo)卷 ) 72. 假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友terry 將去中國(guó)朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：（1）到達(dá)時(shí)間；（2）合適的禮物；（3）餐桌禮儀。注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。【答案】 dear terry

11、, how are you doing? learning that you are about to pay a visit to a chinese friend and confused about the chinese customs, i am writing to inform you of some relevant details. firstly, i would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in chinese traditional culture. s

12、econdly, if i were you, i would bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. for example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice. hopefully

13、, these suggestions will be helpful for you. best wishes! yours, li hua 【解析】 本文是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。餐桌禮儀也是考生比較熟悉的話題。成文時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全1到達(dá)時(shí)間； 2合適的禮物；3餐桌禮儀。二、時(shí)態(tài)：主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)；三、人稱：二、三人稱。四、注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。點(diǎn)睛：本文雖然看起來(lái)比較容易，但學(xué)生真正動(dòng)起筆來(lái)，還是比較困惑的。原因?yàn)椋?. 看起來(lái)中國(guó)餐桌禮儀很熟悉，但內(nèi)容很多，一時(shí)間不知道該寫(xiě)什么

14、；2.100 單詞左右，寫(xiě)出到達(dá)時(shí)間；合適的禮物；餐桌禮儀三個(gè)內(nèi)容，信息量大，選擇有困難；應(yīng)對(duì)方法： 近年來(lái)高考寫(xiě)作的命題常用的思想就是高起點(diǎn)低落點(diǎn)。高起點(diǎn)題目很高，中國(guó)文化，中國(guó)故事，中國(guó)禮儀等等，但最終都把它們落在應(yīng)用文的框架里，這就是低落點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)這樣的作文， 一定要注意不能寫(xiě)過(guò)于具體的內(nèi)容，要找最重要的， 最熟悉的寫(xiě)， 不要面面俱到，中國(guó)餐桌禮儀內(nèi)容太多，100 單詞無(wú)法寫(xiě)。找重點(diǎn)，以點(diǎn)帶面。但選擇重要內(nèi)容本身就是一種能力。2019 年高考( 新課標(biāo)卷 ) 第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá) ( 滿分 25 分) 72. 假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國(guó)畫(huà)展覽。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)

15、容包括：1. 寫(xiě)信目的； 2. 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)； 3. 能做的事情。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。_ 【答案】 dear sir or madam, i m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the chinese painting exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. i think i am qualified for this job, because i have learned chinese painting si

16、nce childhood. besides, i am fluent in both chinese and english, which is beneficial for introducing chinese paintings. if i am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, i can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about chinese painting. i would be very grateful if you could off

17、er me the opportunity. im looking forward to your reply. yours, li hua 【解析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，屬于書(shū)信應(yīng)用文。1. 審題立意： 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2. 謀篇布局：書(shū)信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫(xiě)信的目的，中間段寫(xiě)個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事，最后一段總結(jié)。3. 關(guān)鍵詞和句子：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有： volunteer，a chinese painting exhibition，advanta

18、ges ，i am good at，i can help with./ill devote myself to。通過(guò)詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫(xiě)完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫(xiě)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過(guò)渡性的詞匯，如first of all，besides ，to begin with，moreover ，as for me ， last but not least等，使全文銜接自然，語(yǔ)義流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，表達(dá)了寫(xiě)信的目的；之后詳細(xì)介紹了個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事情，詳略得當(dāng)，內(nèi)容完整， 同時(shí)使用了高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子。高級(jí)詞匯： be qualified for ， be fluent in ， be beneficial for等；高