人教英語必修四新素養(yǎng)同步課件：Unit4Bodylanguage5SectionⅤWriting

1、Unit 4 Body languageSection VWriting找洼指號二住作賞樁慰問信寫作指導(dǎo)多文體感知1. 慰問信是向?qū)Ψ奖硎娟P(guān)懷和慰問的信函。它是以組織或個人 的名義向?qū)Ψ奖硎締柡蚝完P(guān)心的一種信函。2. 慰問信的格式和一般英文信件格式相同，要明確慰問信的對象。3. 明確文章結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭，表明寫慰問信的原因；主體，向?qū)Ψ降脑庥霰硎就椴⒐膭顚Ψ交虮磉_自己想幫助對方的愿望或具 體措施；結(jié)尾，表示寫信者的良好祝愿或同情之心。4. 語言要親切、生動，感情要充沛、真摯。H增分佳句1=1. I，m shocked/sorry to hear that you are worried about

2、 your figure/shape.聽說你在為你的體型而憂慮，我感到很驚訝加歉。2. I m writing to express my deep sympathy/care for you. 我給你寫信來表達我對你的同情/關(guān)心。3 I understand how you feel now./I know the way you feel very well now.我理解你現(xiàn)在的感受。H寫作模板Dear X X,I，m sorry to know that （問題）.The truth iseveryone will experience , so you don，t have towo

3、rry so much. Here are three useful tips.First （建議）.This is a good way of Second，（建議） .Last but not least，.I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.典題示例H寫作要求（2019大連高一檢測）假設(shè)你叫李華，是一家英文雜志社的心理咨詢師。某中學生小王給你寫信，提到自己偏胖，想節(jié)食減肥，征求你的意見。請你給她回一封信，談?wù)勀銓υ搯栴}的見解。內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 健康的重要性；2.學生的任務(wù)；3.合理的建議。 注意

4、：1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）; 參考詞匯：state of mind心態(tài)。H審題謀篇（明確體裁話題） : ,0 、確定時態(tài)人稱J7（布局文章框架J（列出核心要點 *一贏現(xiàn)石亦，結(jié)二人祐XJ倚陵審由篩藥百甬?中段：提出具體的建議/希望和祝愿門堿禹董麺1 2 學生的任務(wù)；:3合理的建議H詞匯推敲1. 減肥2. 多鍛煉3. 不健康的飲食習慣4. 影響你正常的生活5. 保持一個健康的心態(tài)6. 克服困難lose weightget/take more exerciseunhealthy eating habitsaffect/inf

5、luence your normal lifekeep a healthy state of mindovercome difficultiesB遣詞造句 1.完成句子 像你這個年齡的女孩希望看起來漂亮。這是很自然的。Young girlsnaturalat your agehope to look beautiful.It is 對一個學生來說，學習是最先考慮的而容貌是其次。whileFor a student, studying is竺蘭血隅 t。consider appearance is the second.It is a good idea 通過多鍛煉以及改變不健康的飲食習慣來減肥

6、是一個好主to do it by getting more exercise andchanging unhealthy eating habits. 最重要的是你要保持健康的心態(tài)，因為這有助于你的學習, 而且有助于你克服節(jié)食中的困難。The most important thingis that you keep a healthy stateof mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.2. 句式升級 合并句young girls at

7、your age hope to lookIt is natural thatbeautiful. 用非限制性定語從句改寫句The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state ofwhichmind，will help with your studies，and will also helpyou overcome difficulties in dieting.H妙筆成篇Dear Xiao Wang,I have received and read your letter in which you mentioned that

8、you wanted to lose weight by dieting.Yours,One possible versioii：Dear Xiao Wan,I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.It is natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. However, in my opinion，health is more important tha

9、n beauty. For a student，studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second. So do not let others，Li Huaopinions affect your normal life. However, if you do want to lose weight，it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits. The most impor

10、tant thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind，which will help with your studies，and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I m looking forward to your next letter.Yowrs,0實戰(zhàn)演練r假定你是李華，從報紙上得知你的美國筆友James的家鄉(xiāng)遭遇了颶風。請你用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，給予關(guān)心和安慰。注意：1.詞

11、數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）;2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear James,Yours sincerely,One possible version：Dear James,I was greatly shocked to learn that a hurricane took place in your hometown from today s newspaper. I am writing to extend my deepest sympathy.It broke my heart to see lots of homes had been destroyed in the tragic hurricane. I can imagine how difficult this time must be for you and your family. But where there s life there s hope. Some organisations in my country are launching various campaigns to call on people to donate money in the hope that you can go thr