九級英語作文

1、2 0 1 6 九 年 級 英 語 作 文 寫做的步驟：1、審：體裁； 2 )主要時態(tài) : 一般過去時： 主語 +動詞過去式； 一般將來時： will+V 原，be going to+ V 原；一般現(xiàn)在時：主三單，動 s;主三復(fù)，動原形3)人稱； 4 )要點。2、抓：中心或事件 3 、擴(kuò)：針對中心擴(kuò)充詞匯 (when, where, who, what, why, how)4、連：連詞成句，連句成段。5、改：檢查主謂是否一致、時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、單復(fù)數(shù)、人稱、格式是否 正確等。6、謄：整潔地謄抄在答題卷上。 (整潔不一定加分， 不整潔一定扣分！ ) 一如何做好“書面表達(dá)”(1) 認(rèn)真審題，確

2、定體裁，明確主題；(2) 正確使用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、標(biāo)點符號和字母的大小寫，注意主謂一致和單詞拼寫 的準(zhǔn)確性。(3) 力求做到內(nèi)容完整、語句通暢、書寫規(guī)范、層次清楚、卷面整潔。二審題 1 確定體裁：2. 主要時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，一般將來時(開頭或結(jié)尾)一般過去時(中間事例)3 人稱(I ,She/ He) 4段落:三段式三題型與特點中考“書面表達(dá)”常采用的題型有命題作文和提示 作文1. 命題作文，要求考生根據(jù)所命題目，發(fā)揮自己的想象力，緊扣主題，抓住與 題目有關(guān)內(nèi)容的要點、按英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣逐一表達(dá) .2. 提示作文 以“提示”的方式給出寫作意向，對寫作內(nèi)容、范圍等方面作了 比較具體的規(guī)定 , 不能任意發(fā)

3、揮，體裁常為記敘文和應(yīng)用文，如：書信。四云南省中考“書面表達(dá)”屬于開放性的主觀題，以命題作文為主，在命題 中體現(xiàn)了以下特點：題裁豐富，內(nèi)容廣泛，涉及日常生活和交際的多方面。選題貼近考 生生活和情感，具有交際性和適用性。幵放性的題目下有明確的情景提示和寫作要求， 不得隨意發(fā)揮；體裁以記敘文和應(yīng)用文（書信）為主；字?jǐn)?shù)的要求：60-80 字左右;要求書寫規(guī)范和卷面整潔； 五中考命題趨勢：關(guān)于愛，幫助，感謝，幸福。I.Love : Love for （自己給別人的愛）Love from （來自別人的愛）2 Help : 別人幫助你（老師幫助我通過考試及鼓勵我，媽媽帶我去醫(yī)院） 你幫助別人（幫助同學(xué)通過

4、考試，去老人之家，幫助饑餓的或丟失的小孩，送 媽媽去醫(yī)院。 ）生活中處處充滿陽光， 每個人都會得到同學(xué)的幫助， 朋友的支持，老師的關(guān) 心，親人的愛護(hù)，讓你感受到生活中的陽光和幸福。請寫一件你經(jīng)歷過的事情， 說明生活的美好。Sunshine in my lifeBeginning:(1) Everyone has different ideas about life. Some say life is happy, but others feel life isunhappy. In myopinion, life is beautiful and full of sunshine.(2)Our

5、 life is full of sunshine/love/help everywhere .Parents lovemake me grow up happily .Teacher s help makes me feel lucky.Ending :(1) The thing makes me realize life is beautiful. Help and love will be around us forever.(2) According to the thing, I realize life is beautiful. (If everyonegives more lo

6、ve, the world will be beautiful./ The more love everyone gives, the morebeautiful the world will be.)Mother s LoveBeginning:Our life is full of love all the same, but I think my mothers loveis the greatest in the world, it makes my life beautiful and colorful.Ending: Dear mother, thanks for your lov

7、e , I will study hard, and make your and myfather s lives better. I believe I can do it.Help/LoveBeginning :(1) Everyone needs help , helping others makes me happy and getting help from othersmakes me feel lucky ,so we should help others .colorful .dear mum , I feel I am the luckiest child in the wo

8、rld ,because I have you asmy mum .Ending :(1) Pass the thing , I realize helping others is helping ourselves .Ifwe give our love to each others ,the world will be more wonderful and nicer .(2)Dear mum , I love you all the time . I will become a person like you.3.Thanks : 媽媽，老師，朋友為你做的一件事(感恩) ，你為媽媽，朋友

9、做過 的一件事(行動上感謝) 。初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回 憶。請你給大家講一個最值得你回憶的故事。包括時間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事 后你的感想。Beginning: How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate( 畢業(yè)) from middle school in a month. I ameager( 渴 望 ) to sharemy happiness and sadness with you.Ending:(1)From that, I

10、 learn that we should do our best to help people who need help .Ifeveryone helps others as much as possible, the world will become much morebeautiful!(2)According to the thing, I think I will try to help others when theyare in trouble, and it is a happy thing to help others.(2) Love is around us eve

11、ryonemother s love makes my life(3) Dear my teacher/mother, thanks for your love, I will study hard and become a usefulman who you wish.4. Happiness : 別人幫助你或你幫助別人 幸福是什么？幸福是父母為你營造的溫馨的家，幸福是老師望向你的贊許的目 光，幸福是孤獨時朋友送來的一杯奶茶，幸福是請以My happ in ess 為話題，寫一件曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的令你感到幸福的事情。Beginning:(1) Happiness is important and

12、simple in our life. In fact ,happinessis always around you if you put your heart into it.(2)Whats happiness ? Happiness is mothers love ; Happiness is teacher sencouragement; Happiness is other s help; In fact , happiness is around us.Ending :(1) I feel happy whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my

13、parents love.I want love. I want to be a good child for my parents.(2)From the thing ,I feel teacher s love ,it makes merealize happiness is around us allthe time. we should treasure it .Sayings: 1. Nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it .2.Failure is the mother of success

14、. 3. Where there is a will there is a way .4.Dont give up , believe in yourself, you will win .5. A good friend in need is a friend indeed. 6. Interest isthe best teacher .一般過去時：A Pleasant WeekendI had a pleasant weekend last week.On Saturday morning, I got up late and had breakfast slowly. After br

15、eakfast, I went tothe park with my father to play sports. Everyone knows that doing sports is good for ourhealth. Then I began to do my homework. It was a little difficult. So it took me about twohours to finish it. OnSaturday afternoon, I had fun playing computer games. While mymother was cooking d

16、inner, I cleaned the living room and did some washing.On Sunday morning, I played basketball with my classmates till 11:30. On Sundayafternoon, my family went to thr beach and enjoyed the bright sunshine. Next I listened topop music. It made me relaxed.What a pleasant weekend I had!An unforgettable

17、ThngI still remember the first time I traveled alone.Last summervacation, I went to the summercamp. At first, I was a little afraid because itwas the first time I had left homealone. But myparents encouraged me a lot. Then I met alot of children and we became good friends. We went to climb the mount

18、ain together. Wehelped each other on the way. At last, we got to the top of the mountain. We were veryexcited.I learned a lot from experience. I knew how to deal with them when I had problems.A. smile can make a big differenceSmiles are beautiful and important. A smile given to the right person at t

19、he right timecan light that persons day.I was once moved by a smile from my friend. Three years ago, when I madea speechon my first day of class, I was so nervous that I couldn t say a word. Tony, one of myclassmates, sitting in the front row, smiled at meand spoke in a low voic e, “Yes, youcan.” I

20、was greatly encouraged by his smile. His smile was important because it gavemeself-confidence.I will never forget my friends smile because I ve learned thatsomething simple can make a big difference.My Life Has Changed A LotIm in grade nine now. And my My life has changed a lot.My daily life is quit

21、e different. For example, I used to get up at 6:30 am., but now I haveto get up at six to read English. I used to go to bed at 9 pm., but I have to stay up until11:30 pm. to st udy. I can t spend much time watching TV or chatting with my friends asI did before.I used to play basketball after school,

22、 but now I have to go home right away and do myhomework. Even at the weekends Im not allowed to go out. Now I have littletime toplay. Everything I can do now is for my tests.I hope this kinds of life could be changed.一般現(xiàn)在時：My Free TimeI have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exer

23、cise after school. I likebasketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me keep healthy and study better. Ioften watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to music for a while.I find it a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at theweekends.

24、 I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a fieldtrip with my friends. I have a good time in my free time.My HometownMy hometown is a small village not far from the Changjiang River. It is in the south ofChina. A road runs through it, leading to the nearest market. You ca

25、n see houses behindgreen trees along both sides of the road.There are about 300 people in the village. All of them are very friendly. In busy seasons,most of them do farm work in the fields. The village is famous for its fruits. When summercomes, many businessmen drive here to buy them.My hometown i

26、s becoming more and more beautiful. I love my hometown verymuch.一般將來時：My dream job is to be a singerWhen I grow up, I m going to be a singer. I love music and I m good at singing. Iwant to be a singer like Lady Gaga. I can sing beautiful songs for people and make themhappy. And also I can make much

27、money. Then I can buy a beautiful house with agarden for my parents because they do so much for me.To re alize my dream, first, I m going to join the singing club andpractice singing as often as possible. Second, I m going to be a student at a musicschool. At last, Im going to take part in some sing

28、ingcompetitions to improve myself. I hope my dream can come true.This Time next yearLife is changeable, and thats why everyone longs for the future,which is full of challenge as well as hope.Perhaps I will achieve my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Iwill have fun learning all the subjects. I will make great prog