九年級上冊英語書面表達技巧(很有用)及練習題

1、九年級上冊英語書面表達技巧 （很有用 ）及練習題一、英語書面表達1書面表達假如你是 Amy，德國的交換生 Sara 下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中， 她詢問如下信息： 1你家情況； 2.有關餐桌禮儀； 3. 她要承擔的家務勞動； 4. 現(xiàn)在，你 就她提出的問題給她回信，也預祝她在你家過得開心！ 要求： 1. 文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息；3. 字數(shù)約 110 詞。Dear Sara，I ' m glad to hear from you yeesrtday.Love，Amy【答案】 Dear Sara，I '

2、; m glad to hear from you yesterday. Welcome to my family next week.I have a small family. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. And sometimes the Chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in

3、your bowl or plate. This is a sign of politeness. The appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. If you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say "thank you |"in politely and leave the food there. As for housework, I think it's our duty

4、 to help our parents do some housework. So you can help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.Of course, if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不

5、少，如be glad to，hear from ，unlike in the West ，on the table ，a sign of， help sb. do， do some housework ，wash the dishes， clean the room ， make the bed ， take care of， how to do 等。而復雜并列結(jié)構(gòu) In China, unlike in the West, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. 和 If you feel uncomfortable wi

6、th this, you can just say a polite thank you and leave the food there./ I hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, I will teach you how to cook delicious dishes. 等復雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的 亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達 更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】 書面表達題

7、既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分數(shù)。2書面表達假設你是某英文報紙 “Teenagers欄”目的編輯 Betty ，日前收到了 Lucy 的來信。她在信中訴 說了她的煩惱，請你根據(jù) Lucy的來信，用英語寫一封 90 詞左右的回信。要求內(nèi)容合理 ,信 的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Lucy,I ' m sorry to know that you aren' t

8、allowed to read eBooks.All the best!Betty【答案】 Dear Lucy,I ' m sorry to know that you aren' t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one th

9、ing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more ra

10、diation which is harmful to people's body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【詳解】 這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in recent

11、 years ，as a productof， live in ， more and more ， so that， for example ， do harm to，be harmful to ，in my opinion ， take the place of ， instead of 等。同時 For one thing, / For another,/ However, 等使短 文的敘述很有條理，而 It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read

12、them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body./ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over. 等復 雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學習中注意 總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富 有條理?！军c睛】 書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是

13、可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理 后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要 盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得 到較高的分數(shù)。3（題文） 書面表達 在中學生機器人大賽上，出現(xiàn)了一種專門照顧老人的新型家用智能機器人，它的主要功能 有：1. 定時做飯、洗衣服； 2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做運動；3. 處理緊急情況（如：撥打 120） 假如你是該機器人的發(fā)明者，請你介紹這個產(chǎn)品，并談談你的未來設想。 要求： 1. 意思連貫，語句通順；2. 詞數(shù) 80 詞左右；短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）3. 參考詞匯

14、： at a fixed time 定時 emergency 緊急情況 ccompany sb. 陪伴某人 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I' d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I' d like to introduce my new invention to all of

15、 you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What' s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, ifan ol

16、d man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I ' m sure my new invenotni will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】 亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如 thank you for doing

17、，I 'd like to d，ointroduce sb. to ，all of you ，at home ，do some washing ， at a fixed time ，have a chat， play chess， do exercise，deal with ，a great help ， in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the futur

18、e people will live a more comfortable life with the help ofnew robots. 等非謂語動詞和復雜從句的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的 最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容 經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要 點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu) 以便得到較高的分數(shù)。4書面表達（原創(chuàng)） 今年春節(jié)，很多人加入了搶紅包的游戲，但也有人表示擔憂。學校英語?？⒄Z天地 對此進行調(diào)查，假如你是

19、一名?？∮浾?，請你就此次調(diào)查的結(jié)果進行總結(jié)，并談談你自 己的觀點。Grabbing red packets on lineAgreement（75%）1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun2.bring people closer, make more friendsDisagreement（25%）spend too much time.not have enough communication with family members, feel lonelyYour opinion1.2.提示詞： We chat 微信 Grab

20、bing red packets on line 搶紅包注意：（ 1）詞數(shù) 80 左右，開頭 已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；（2）文章應包括題中所提的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；（3）文中請勿提及你的真實姓名、校名和其他真實信息;As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did th

21、e survey on the activity of“ Grabbing red packets ” among students.【答案】 As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of“ Grabbing red p

22、ackets” among students.About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has bee n part of people' s lives.t havAbout 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packe

23、ts. They don enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonely Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes,

24、 each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學校進行的關于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進行總結(jié)，并 談談自己對這件事情的看法。題目中給出了一個表格，里面包括

25、了支持搶紅包這個游戲的 人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由，只給了一些短語，我們需要組織語 言，將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。最后還要加上自 己的看法。因此文章的內(nèi)容應主要包括三部分：支持的人們的理由；反對者們的理由；自 己的看法，可以分成兩段或者三段來敘述，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，有層次。寫作時， 應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡單句為 主，穿插并列句和復合句。為提升文章檔次，還應注意使用高級句型和較復雜的句式。語 句之間使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整

26、、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。文章分為三段，第一段是題 目中已經(jīng)給出的，因此了文章的話題。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們 各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。其次短文中語言得體，句式準確，符合英 語的表達習慣。文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，特別注意了謂語動詞的正確形式，語法規(guī)范、 準確。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form ofentertainment, bring them more fun. 、 Grabbing red packets has been part of people、 's livesA

27、bout 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets 、 Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. 、 If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break

28、their cell phones. 等等。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤，總的來說，不影響整篇 文章的質(zhì)量。5環(huán)境保護人人有責， 如果我們每一個人都能珍愛美麗地球 保護自然資源，相信我們的 家園會越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以 “ Going Green為”主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇 短文投稿，談談我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期 望。提示詞語： pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題： What are the main environmental problems we h

29、ave? What can we do in ourdaily life? What ' s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems.【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on. I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to schoo

30、l by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can

31、make a big difference. Let' s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】 【詳解】 題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善 環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時態(tài)采用 的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述建議時，描寫具體，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語： save energy； brush our teeth ；put it into different bins ；take action ； make a

32、 big difference 。句型： When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins ； Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference 。 【點睛】 首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點 中可能要用到的表達，例如 save energy； brush our teeth ；put it into differe

33、nt bins ； take action ； make a big difference 。以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程 中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較 等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點 符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合要求等。6為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化 , 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事 , “程門立雪( Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng resp

34、ectfully ) ”是其中一個選題。請你 根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示 , 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內(nèi)容提示：1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2. 通過介紹這個故事 , 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求：1. 可以適當增加細節(jié) , 以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)： 100 左右.2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名。【答案】 Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher,Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng

35、 was sleeping in the room. He didn' t wake up the teacher. Sohe stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was

36、like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.【解析】【詳解】 這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事 , 程“門立雪( Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully ) ”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時， 靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要

37、包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或 者觀點。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如 :There was/ were.注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，具有條理性。7假設你是 Beth,前段時間曾向英語?？端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang 的短詩。近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。為此，編輯部策劃開“A Letter to MyTeacher 專”欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。短詩如下：My English Teacher Miss Zhang There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Wh

38、o is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of "why".We all respect and admire her.注意事項：1.稿件內(nèi)容須根據(jù)短詩展開合理想象，不得抄寫短詩原文： 2.要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境。3. 詞數(shù)在 70 個左右，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：4. 稿件必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上?！敬鸢浮?Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to recommend as T

39、he Most Popular Teacher She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher She is in her forties Her small round glasses make her look smart She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours She is kind and helpful ， too She always helps us with our study She loves jogging， so she looks

40、healthy To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001 She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular TeacherI hope tha

41、t you agree with me Yours sincerely， Beth, 【解析】【詳解】 本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher 專欄”，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細， 考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要 點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心 突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量 使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫

42、的單詞，確 保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c睛】 點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每 個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、 段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文 章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢 查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。8為了吸引外國游客，杭州旅游網(wǎng)希望對杭州茶文化進行宣傳。請你根據(jù)表格信息，用英 語為其寫一篇介

43、紹，詞數(shù) 80 左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?Good tasteWhat is it used for?Keep healthyHow is it produced?Grow on the sides of mountains .What ' s the best place to learn about it? Why?Hangzhou National Tea Museum .Longjing Tea【答案】 Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing

44、tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking longjing tea. Longjing tea grows mainly on the sides of mountains. People are very strict about the picking of Longjing tea

45、. Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. So Hangzhou National Tea Museum is the best place to learn about Hongjing tea.【解析】

46、【詳解】 這是一篇材料類介紹型作文，所以我們必須要結(jié)合所給材料再適當補充內(nèi)容。時態(tài)以一般 現(xiàn)在時為主。亮點詞匯短語： one of ， 之一； green tea 綠茶； be famous for ，因 而 出名； keep healthy 保持健康； be strict in sth 對嚴格； not only .but also ，不 僅而且。亮點句型：It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對人們保持健康有好 處。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （對某人來說）做

47、某事是怎樣的。Longjing is a famous tea in China, which is related not only to the climate and soil environment of Longjing, but also to the production technology of Longjing. 龍井是我國著名的茶葉，它不僅與 龍井的氣候、土壤環(huán)境有關，而且與龍井的生產(chǎn)工藝有關。 Which 引導的限定性定語從 句。Hangzhou is the resort where Longjing tea is produced. 杭州是龍井茶出產(chǎn)的勝地。 Whe

48、re 引導 的定語從句。9書面表達。 76.某英語教育網(wǎng)站正在開展主題為 “ How can a teenager have a successful life? 的”討論，為此你采訪了一些同學（結(jié)果見下表）。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討 論，并闡述你的觀點。同學主要觀點你的觀點努力學習 尊重父母 服務社會 計劃未來（至少兩條）注意：（ 1）短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)； （2）你的觀點至少兩條；（3）詞數(shù)： 80100；（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：尊重 respect 短文首句： I have recently done a survey about h

49、ow a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】 I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most st udents believe it' s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life.They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them

50、 every day. Besides,they ' re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it' s really meaningful. What' sthink each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.Also, we must be acti

51、ve and exercise more to keep healthy because it important to a succe'sssful life.【解析】 試題分析：英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為 “ How can a teenager have a successful life?的討論，”采 訪了一些同學參與討論，寫出他們的觀點及自己的觀點。因為是敘述同學的現(xiàn)在的觀點， 所以句子應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，敘述同學的觀點用第三人稱，敘述自己的觀點用第一人稱。 注意不要遺漏要點，所寫的句子應該符合英語語法，不能是漢語式的句子，要使用一些高 級詞匯及句式。寫作亮點：短文用了一些短語和句

52、式，如： do a survey about sth 關于某事做調(diào)查； respect their parents, 尊敬他們的父母； look after 照顧； make a good plan for sth 為某事做一個好的 計劃； make some good friends 交一些好朋友； keep healthy 保持健康。用了賓語從句， 如： Most students believe it' s necessary to study hard. What's more, they think each teenager issupposed to make a good plan for future. 用了 because 引導的原因狀語從句，如： Also, wes important增 to加 a successful life.must be a